bani main teri radha (kanchi os) part 2 by niyaaa

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Hi guys thanks for ur appreciation it means a lot to me… Lets start
Recap- Kabir save Sanchi
now here it goes…
Kabir put downs sanchi
Sanchi relucantly- tysm
K- maine tumhari liye ye sab nahi kiya tum yahan mar jati to tuhmari aatma fatakti rehti allready u r a chudail sabko katne ko dodti ho god know what happened after ur death nd btw god not need u he can’ handle a tornado
sanchi pouts nd show fake anger but finally smile
S- so friends
k- no wayy… yes but on one condition
S- what
k- plz katna mat warna kayi injection lagwane padenge
S- u donkey.. Nd run after him
so finally they patch up nd made frnd
kabir guides all the gang shown tajmahal tell d history of agra blah blah blah
they spend gud times with each other n kanchi came close more day by day
finally theday came
show 1 day… Krishna birth drama part then krishna leela and finally the seperation scene of krishna and radha
(Kabir play role of krishna and sanchi obviously radha(the scene is that krishna have to go mathura for kill kansh nd radha crying to know that then krishna console her nd marry radha in all gods presence )
so sanchi (radha)- krishan when u came back
kabir as krishan(k)-radhe u don’t worry i will came back soon
R(S)- how can i live without u if u notcame back if u loved someone else i will die
K- radhe main hamesha tumhara hi rahunga chahe jo hon mera naam sada tumhare sath rahega jase suraj shanj diya aur bati
R- i know mere pass koi wajah ho jiske liye tumhara intezar karu
K- held radha’s nd goes on a place nd marry her (all god from sky throws petal on both nd gave blessing)
k- come close to radha bhale hi duniya hamare ristey ko kuch bhi naam de priyashi kuch bhi per hmari ruh judi h or har janam tum hi hogi meri sangini
(QUICK NOTE- sorry guys i don’t know much about krishna radha lovv story actually i forget i have seen since many years ago so pardon me for faltu strecting scene i just tried my best to portaryed it sry again)

sanchi got lost in his deep passionate eyes… both forget all the world
BG play o jaana…
(kanchi marriage happened but as krishna and radha again sry)
finally the act part ended everyone clapping for their performance both came back in sense..
Kanchi aparted nd feels embarass so both try to away awkwardness said – so lets go for shopping whats u think about it
both smiles
sure and all gang including ishgaya and rest all of goes..

@market..
All buying lots of thing earing, doorbell nd etc etc
finally shopping ended everyone got tired
S-lets go its already to late raat hone wali h we have to dinner
all goes but kabir stop sanchi
S looked at him confused- now what kabir ab kya rah gaya or kahan gumane le jaoge m already too tired i can’t walk anymore
K put his finger on her lips-ssshhh a special spot
S- whr
K- if i tell u then what the surprise kabir blindfold sanchi’s eyes nd pick in her arm in bridal way
S- kabir plzz atleat give some hint
K- u trust me
S – yaa nd said in low tone wo bhi khud se jyada sanchi realised what she said nd bite tongue
nd someone smile listening all this but ignored it
K opened sanchi’s eyes
sanchi- wow sunset this is so beautiful nd jump in excitement
kabie mesmerized to see her nd said not more than u but sanchi did’t notice it due to enjoying sunset..
sanchi in excitement huggeg kabir nd kabir also hugged him back
aftersome time they realised nd parted away
S-kabir tysm u gave me world’s best gift these seven days i spend with u i never ever forget u aur tum
K- no wayy tumhe kaun yaad karega
S GOT TEARYEYED ND stand up but kabir held her hand
K-sorry m just kidding
sanchi beat him
S-btw kabir u have any gf
K stop 4 a while changed the topic they spend a quality time with each other nd left for resort

scene shifted
mr malhotra(sanchi’s dad) on phn- u findout my daughter
other side unknown men-yess but i can’t force her to came back if i did she knew my identity nd ran away
Mr Mal-ok alright just one day for u meri beti mujhe ghar chahiye after two days is her b’day allri8 nd send some pic of my angel then i will be sure she’s all ri8
ok and cut the phn the unknown men send sanchi pic
Kabir in the resord corridor… he listen someone convo nd shocked
S- jumped happily and hug ishgya
u know guys i m in love
isha- sanchi kahin wo to nahi tu maregi or sath me hamein bhi marvayegi if uncle knows then he will surely kill us or married u with sanjay in nxt month
S get sad nd said i know guys but u know naa dad loves me a lot nd m 100% sure i convinced him
pragya-abeo ye sab thik h per jiske k liye ye raita faila rahi ho usko btaya kya
S- no but after finishing our act i confessed kabir how much i lovv him
trio hugg nd slept
K in mind sorry sanchi m chahakar bhi tumse pyar nahi kar sakta we r not made for each other

Precap- kabir hugged a girl payal…meets my gf.. A gunshot

regards niyaa
sorry guys i know i disappointed u but i promise i will update nxt tmrrw itself nd that is last part surely
thanks for all of ur support
give ur valuable commnt
tc bye

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29 Comments
  1. Trisha139

    Om kya kru khidkitod likhti hoji… subah subahse badam piye the kya hehe πŸ˜‚ just kidding sweetie ! This was FAB ! You nailed the whole episode and really don’t worry whatever I did was totally praiseworthy ! Just can’t wait for next episode !

    1. Niyaaa

      Tysm trishu… U r younger than me but in experience m ur student give me some tips so i can improve my writting skills and again thanks.. Abhi bahut kuch sikhna h mujhe tumse.. Lovv u dherr sara

  2. Khamoshi

    Amazing Niyaaa….. it was excellent dear.. lived to see kabir and sanchi as in form of Krishnaji and Radhaji. Precap really a sad part..Payal entry… gunshot…dekhne hai tum kaunsa naya dhamaka karogi πŸ˜‰πŸ˜„ …amazjng article dear love u so much

    1. Niyaaa

      Awwww thank u so much mitu glad u like it… Or rahi dhamake ki baat wo to pta nahi per tumhari kano tak pahuch jayein wahi mere liye kafi h… Thanks for ur support lovv u 22222 tc stay safe be happy

  3. Amazing

    1. Niyaaa

      Tysm alia dear tc lovv u

  4. Anonymousaa

    It was awesome.I am feeling bad for Kanchi the more for Kabir. Bechara chahkar vi pyaar nhi kar sakta.
    Now who is this Payal??? I suppose the bullet is meant for one among Kanchi. Just a mere guess. Eagerly waiting for next shot.

    1. Niyaaa

      Tysm anonymousaa dear glad u like it and ya ur tukka/guess is ri8… I will Post nxt part asap as i can.. Tc have a nice day

  5. Abhilasha

    Niyaa it was darwazatod….superbbbbbbbbbb…….osssmmmm…jhakkkkaaaasssss……..dil garden garden ho gya!! Loved it!!

    1. Niyaaa

      Awww tysm abhi epi ka toh pta nahi per tumhare pyare se commnt lo padh kar dil me baji guitar… Lovvv u too dherr dhrr sara

    2. Abhilasha di where iz ur next epi of Mahi ve…i m just missing u

    1. Niyaaa

      Tysm sweety

  6. Riyarocks

    omg Niyu dear………….ek dum jhakaas, khidkitod, superb, amazing, osm, too too tooooooooooooo good……………..kya kahun yaar, tumne toh meri bolti band kar di……………..a big jaadu ki jhappi to u & liv u a lot……………………………….

    1. Niyaaa

      Aww thank u so much prinku bolti to tumhara comment hamesha meri kar deta h… Oye belle belle nd a tight bone break wali jadu ki jhappi for u darna mat sach me haddiyaan nahi todungi hehehe… Lovv u too tc gud ni8

  7. Awesome super fabulous fantastic mind blowing episode lovely update soon can’t wait for next

    1. Niyaaa

      Tysm divya nd m already submit nxt epi nd last too gud ni8

  8. Dhruti

    super,mind blowing niya…. and what about gunshot i think kanchi will be shot by bullet? it was just my guess….. update next one soon…

    1. Niyaaa

      Tysm dhruti nd yaa ur guess is correct nd i submitted nxt chap hope u like it tc

    1. Niyaaa

      Tysm sweety

  9. Anuradha123

    Sorry niyaa thodi si late Ho… Majaa aa gaya dear…. Tumhari stories mujhe pagal karke chodegi… Pehle batao kya khati ho? Yeh sawal Maine riya ko bhi pucha tha.. I know Tum jarur kuch hatke khati ho jisske tum itna wonderful, magical, wonderful story likhti Ho… Love u sweetheart…

    1. Niyaaa

      Not a problem dear mere liye ye hi mayne rakhta h ki tumne isse pasand kiya or apna view share kiya actually ab mujhe jyada darr lag raha h i submitted my last epi of os or mujhe nahi lagta ki usme m expectation per khari utarungi… ur commnt always made my day.. I m on cloud9 but deapress bhi ab mera kya hoga the nxt epi just like a hell sweety u can understand after read that… Bye tc gud ni8 last nd not least u all r my inspiration without u all i m nothing

      1. Anuradha123

        Yaar… Kyu itna depress ho rahi ho? I know tum bohot hi accha likhogi aur hum sabko chokka dogi… Tum hi se mujhe bohot prerna milti hai… I’m 200percent sure… Tum impossible ko bhi possible bana dogi… Accha isse pehle kal mujhe mom se daant pare main so jaati hu… Kal subah students aayenge.. Roz toh der se uthti hu.. Kal uthi toh maa mujhe maar maar k bharta bana degi phir tumhari stories kaise padhungi… OK bye gn n Tc…

  10. Niya di…it was awesome…i just love ur writing….ur silent reader…

    1. Niyaaa

      Awww thanks dhruvi thank u so much sis it really means a lot to me or someone else a silent reader commnted on ur ff just dreams came true wali feeling aa rahi h…lovv u tc

  11. Excellent epsd.. Waiting 4 next one…

    1. Niyaaa

      Thanks dear nd i already submit nxt chap hope so u like .. Tc

  12. Jessicca

    Outstanding … Super se upar wala epi … Loved it… Keep going sweetie❀😘

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