Bani main teri radha (kanchi os) last part by niyaaa

Recap-sanchi decided to confess Janmasthmi act finished..
Sanchi’s sees kabir hugged a girl
Kabir- hi sanchi meet my gf payal and payal she’s sanchi
sanchi get shocked
K-whr r u lost sanchi
S- nowhere

P- hi sanchi nd forwarded hand
sanchi(forcibly smiled) hi nd shaked hand
P-kabir baby sry but i hav to go now u know na my appointment nd all busy schdule
K-aww yaa baby.. I miss u bye
P- bye sanchi nice to meet u bye kabir
S nd K -bye tc
S- kabir i have to say something..
Before sanchi said kabir take out the gun pointout at sanchi and shot dishkayaun..
sanchi screams and closed her eyes
after a min. She opened nd found a men died behind her..
S-kabir u killed that men why?
K-just shut up nd came with me
S- no tell me ist who r u
suddenly a chopper landed nd a man came out
men- well done acp kabir kapoor
the face revealed d men is Mr. Malhotra sanchi’s dad
K salute him- its my duty sir , nd i think apko apni beti mil gayi i have to go now gud bye sir and mam
sanchi is in shock and look at mr. Mal
Mr M-yes sanchi beta kabir is a police officer nd i send him for ur security everything ur meetng fights everything is pre planned by kabir
Mr. M- kabir i have need a favour from u
K- sir aap mujhe sarminda kar rahe just gave me an order
Mr.M-kabir u know after 2 days sanchi’s b’day nd i decided sanchi’s engagement with my friend son sanjay so i want u handle all security arrangement i can ‘t take any risk for my daughter again after all this
K got tearyeyed – why not sir mujhe khushi hogi m aapke kisi kaam aaya afterall u did a lot for my family
Mal- well done my boy tumse yahi umeed thi lets go
after 2 days

@malhotra mension all prepartion r going on( b’day cum engagement party)
sanchi in the room with ishgya
I- sanchi plzzz atlest talk to him
P- abeo sanchi ro mat yaar tum jante ho hum tumhari ankhon me anshu nahi dekh sakte agar tum nahi kar skti to hum apne tarike se usse samjhate h
S- plz guys koi fayda nhi he lov someone else
ishgya- what?
Sanchi tell everything but to shocked Mr mal listen everything
beta this is ur life if u don’t want to marry sanjay its ok i talk to him nd m sure he can understand btw who r the luckyone
koi nahi baad me bta dena jab mann kare ab khush
sanchi – tysm dad u r the best
i know ab chale party me sab intezar kar rahe h
but someone also listen their convo none other then sanjay
nd goes angrily
Mr mal- hello everyone welcome to d party today is my princess b’day nd was engagement party but m sorry to say ab aisa nahi hone wala my daughter want some tm to think about it nd i respect her decision i hope all of u understand…. so lets celebrate the party
sanchi cut the cake
everyone claps nd gave wishes
from a lill bit away
someone point a gun towards sanchi(obviously sanjay) sanchi agar tum meri nahi ho skti to kisi or ki bhi nahi and press the trigger
kabir ran nd hug sanchi
sanchi awstruck with kabir sudden gesture
Everyone shocked including kanchi
K- i lov u sanchi nd fall unconsious
kabir get shot
sanchi shout kabir

S- dr. Plz save my kabir
A doctor came in mask
dr.-kabir kya hua ise ye goli kaise lagi sanchi ye sab kaise hua
Sanchi- payal u r… doctor
Nurse- Dr trisha came fast patient condition r critical
sanchi looked payal – payal whats all this..u r trisha then why u lying to me
trisha – sorry sanchi ye sab baad me pehle kabir ko meri jarurat h
after 2 hrs operation done successful
sanchi asked trisha -how is kabir now
Dr trisha- don’t worry sanchi he is fine now nd out of danger after 6 hour he will be came in senses
trisha tell her everything(trisha nd kabir r bff from childhood) how kabir asked for help nd they did all drama sanchi thanks trisha for saving kabir life
In every 30min sanchi checked kabir condition
After 3 hr sanchi again goes to meet kabir nd shocked
kabir is missing
sanchi nd all other sees kabir but not found
S- trisha kabir is missing u know whr he can go
Trisha- sorry sanchi i don’t know kabir jab bhi dukhi hota h wo apne special spot per jata h jo koi nahi janta including me
S thought nd said i know whr he can go
Trisha-but sanchi
trisha in mind m dua karungi ki tum dono hmesha sath khush raho
Sanchi slaped kabir – how dare u how can u leave me alone smajhte kya ho nd hugged him tightly but kabir pushed her back nd goes
sanchi chases kabir plzz atleast listen to me but kabir ingore her after few min they reach at a dark place
suddenly lights on

every one clap for both including ishgya mr.mal and all other
sanchi shocked-dad,mom,ishgya what r u doing here
ishgya shouts today is our besties wedding so we all r here
sanchi turns nd see kabir came on white horse
K bends down on kneel- sanchi i knw u r mumtaj can u gave me a chance to became ur shahjahan
will u marry me..Will u made my betterhalf
S in attitude yes but at one condition
K- ab kya
S- tumhe mere liye taj bnana pdega
K-jo hukum mere aaka
everyone laugh
the end
(sorry trisha kuch jyada ho gaya acc. To Ur age)

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  1. Khamoshi

    Fabulous Niyaaaa… amazing article.. loved the way u describe the story.. it was just perfect .. but a bit metro speed..fir bhi maza aa gaya.. hope this is not ur last episode…no precap and all.. plz don’t give a happy ending to this episode..i want to read more from u.. how after marriage life goes of Kanchi.. plz don’t stop writing..i love this ff series dear.
    Lots of Love and respect to u dear.

    1. Niyaaa

      Awww thank u so much mitu actually main os ko jyada lamba nahi khichna chahti like as show then ye bhi pakau ho jata or sweety os h to jyada khichna achcha nahi laga thats why… m isse lengthy krti kya kru pc kharab pada h or phn me jitna type kar skti thi limits ke acc. Utna kar payi kya kare majboori ka naam gandhi…hehehe.. Just kidding bura mat manna gandhi k naam ka actually ye frnd circle ka fav. dialogue h… Lovv u too nd m sochungi aage isse contue kru yaa nahi kyunki mere is chotu se bheje me koi idea nikla to hi… Tc nd respect to u too

  2. Amazing

    1. Niyaaa

      Tysm dear glad u like it

  3. Niyati

    Hahaa…..didu it’s supar se upar . Kabir is a acp ……aww….loved the end ……Trishu di done great job in your os…..hehe. Come back with another one didu.

    1. Niyati

      Ya,i too want more part & want to read their marriage life . Continue that soon.

      1. Niyaaa

        Thanks choti for ur compliment actually main trisha ko kanchi se milana chahati thi to socha kabir ki best frnd hi bana dalu…hehehe.. Glad u like it mujhe laga ki aaj to jaise bullet train per sawar hokar nikali hun kya pta kisi station per train rukegi yaa nahi.. Sorry for a bullet speed epi .. Nd contonue it i think about it but no promise.. Lovvv u tc

  4. Trisha139

    Ohk no sorry sweetie infact I loved my role in this os hehe ? I loved more to be a dr instead of kabeers bff ????so don’t worry chillax I loved the episode what a dhamakedar ending nd I was imagining Kabeer on white horse but failed ??
    Hehe ? don’t worry I have gone crazy reading your story but whatever that was it was amazing superb fabulous ! Pls do come up with some ff we would love to read more from you !
    Loads of love

    1. Niyaaa

      Hey trisha glad u like it maine post karne k baad socha ki impress karne k chakkar mein kahin depress na kar dun.. Hehehe but luckily tukke se tumhe achcha laga yahi mere liye sabse badi baat h tysm again nd again.lovvv u nd tc

  5. Mind blowing epsd.. Want 2 see more twist 4m u.. Update soon…

  6. Ya,,wanted 2 see their romance &married life.. Epsd was amazing..

    1. Niyaaa

      Thanks dear if new idea strike in my mind then i will definately continue it but not a promise thanks a lot for ur support nd contiue lovv … Lovv u too tc

  7. Negisanyukta

    Fabulous.I just loved it to the core.????
    Dr.Kabeer as ACP Kabeer Kapoor unique concept haan.
    I want to read more part of this os.
    Keep writing dear.???

    1. Niyaaa

      Thank u so much sweety m really glad u like it

  8. Anuradha123

    Yaar niyaa… Killer episode tha… Full paisa wasool… U r just amazing… Super se bhi bohot bohot upar…. Trisha ka role as a doctor was marvelous… Maar dala Allah, maar daala… U rocked it…

    1. Niyaaa

      Hey anu after read ur commnt dil mein baji guitar… Tysm anu dear ur constant support it really means a lot to me… Lovv u nd tc of ur health

  9. Neha7873

    *speechless* and spellbound

    1. Niyaaa

      Thank u neha praises from a gud writter like u is just dreams came true m on cloud 9 lovv u dear

  10. RuCh23

    Wow Niyaaa ??? fabulous dear…!!! I’m so sorry for not commenting on your previous parts dear ??? I had an exam and it was like ??? for me. And yaar this os is one of the best I read ??? please come up with another amazing idea ok? Luv u loads ???

    1. Niyaaa

      Oh its ok sweety.. U commntd now is the big thing for me… Well ur exam is over how they gone.. Hope u did very well nd plzzz start a new ff… I really miss u ruwani post asap dear … Love u tc

  11. Riyarocks

    Niyaa Niyaa Niyaa…………dear, tumhare iss plot ko padhkar, mera dil garden garden hogaya…………ek dum jhakaas, full on paisa vasool entertainment plot…………….& dear, I don’t want this to end so soon………….so, I want another os from u………………a big waala jaadu ki jhappi for u & luv u a lot sweetieeeeeeee………….

    1. Niyaaa

      Hey prinku u know what m jab bhi tumhara commnt dekhti hun dil balle balle krne lagta h sachchi muchchi so cute nd sweet commnt hota h tumhara commnt ki tumhare ff ki kami uri kar deta h iska matlab ye nahi ki tum wapis na aao try to came back with a new ff… Till then 2c stay safe nd gud ni8

      1. Riyarocks

        really!!!!!!!! omg……….koi sambhaalo mujhe……….kahin main khushi ke maare paagal na hojaun……. itne appreciation, that too from an amazing writer…….means a lot to me………sachiiiiiiii….. luv u dherrrrrr saara………

  12. Fabulous fantastic mind blowing ni yaar so nice

    1. Niyaaa

      Tysm divya yaar gud ni8 tc

  13. Nice episode

    1. Niyaaa

      Thanks sweety

  14. Dhruti

    niyaa i loved this os and ending was damakedar, superb…comeback with new one soon………..till then bye and tc…..

    1. Niyaaa

      Tysm dhruti… m glad u like it.. it really means a lot to me nd i will try my best to post nxt one os as soon possible… Lovv u nd tc god bless u

  15. Abhilasha

    Wowwww dear I love it a lot……..was waiting for it especially ……wanna say more but doctors won’t allow me use phone in hospital that much!! Love uh!!

    1. Niyaaa

      Awww tysm abhi nd don’t worry about it u just take rest nd get well soon yahi mere liye sabse bada gift h apna khyal rakho m dua karungi tum jaldi thik ho jao…. We really miss u lovvv u my sweet sis tc gud ni8 don’t take much tension nahi to pta h naa m katti kar lungi no phn son aankhon per stress padta h i know ye kahogi ki phn nahi dekha to msg kaise milega mil jaye tab to phn band kar dena thik hone k baad jitna marzi utna use karo… Or ye request nahi mera order h as a frnd nd a medical student… Ok bye tc no morw chit chat

  16. Nice…. Enjoyed it

    1. Niyaaa

      Tysm dear

  17. Jessicca

    Niyaaaaaa…. Loved it yaar… Seriously it was marvelous… Fantastic… Brilliant… Outstanding…

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