Ban gaye ho tum meri khuda (intro)

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SANSKAR MAHESHWARI
top bussinesman in India… He is not just only famous in india…but also in other contries too..girls r ready to die for him…

SWARA GODODIA
a girl from middle class family… They lives at village… Where people does not recpect women…she have alot of dreams but not getting any chance…
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Sanskar p.o.v
hello.. M Sanskar Maheshwari… The great businessman in India.. U know i got 32 awards at the age of 24… Since I joined business I never missed any awards.. Girls dies on me to see my face once…hehehe…but she…that Swara..huh just try once… But no… I hate her….but she is awsome..n diffrent from other girls… I ever sow in my life………..

Swara’s p.o.v
namaste m Swara. The helpless girl from a village..where women r salve of men… They can’t even breath without their permission…leave it… I read till 12 stantard..only girl of village who read this much… Huh…. I wanna study more… I want to be journalist… But this is enough to get taunts from my family n everyone… But he is diffrent… He helped me in the most needed time… He is such a good person..but but khadus ka khadus The great businessman Mr khadus Maheshwari…..
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women r walking putting veil on their heads…. Men were working freely….
A girl was seeing this from window…
Tears were rolling down from her eyes…
“laksh go to shop n bring solt”
the girl comes back to sence…
“Swara did u cocked rice”
swara wipes her rears
swara:ha ma
mishti:dont raise ur voice…
Swara remains silent…..
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@mumbai
a boy comes out of car….
He stand infront of a building… Which has 30 floors…
‘MAHESHWARI INDRUSTRIES’
she smiles n enters in the bulding

“sanskar sir is coming”
every one starts to ran here n there….girls starts to check there make up in mirror
he was walking
every was wishing him…but he didnt even look…
Sanskar leaves to his cabin…..
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Hello friends…m no one…. No sry swasan mad fan….leave it… I want 25+ coments….30 is also good but not less than 25….plz coment this is my last idea…. If it also didnt work theeeennnnn…….

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18 Comments
  1. nice..bt continue ur other ffs..dont leave them in middle..

  2. Awesome nd continue plzz

  3. Good….. Continue plz

  4. Simi

    Nice

  5. Srusti

    Nice n Continue it dear……

  6. SRSL

    Awsm dear…

  7. Kakali

    Nice Samaira.. loved it.. continue soon..!! Thnk u.. ;-*

  8. nice continue

  9. Awesome dear

  10. Nice concept continue

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