i am back with my zid Epi-19

hi everyone….
thanks for reading and commenting my ff…..
let’s start ,

janvi:i always used to fight with her u only going to birth Shivaay wife only then what about my child.. then we throw her out while she is seven month…..but what she told she did it…..
all sees Shivaay and Anika…..
Om:but bua give birth to Ranveer naa…..
ran:no we r twins….
all r surprised…..

all goes their respective rooms,
all r slip their own thoughts..
they r one family…
i can’t believe this.,he remains Anika dark phobia and her dream..
fb;Om:Sach ek luxury nahi choice hai..inshan sacha aur joota..its decide by upbringing…
ish:this idealism talks only work for peoples like u not ours we want one fake identity to live..
fb ends,
Ranveer enters,
ran:Om what r u thinking ?
Om:nothing just like that waise ishu…y they put ishu in mental asylum…

ran:yes only truth that one u hate always..that time we have no power…they r did favor and stand for money..we told her to tell lie…she is not that mature and also shocked so she didn’t understand that situation also what we trying to say….
Ranveer goes Om again slip deep thoughts….
elders room..,
dadi:i can’t believe!!! roop killed her own sister….
Tej:i am shame on her….
sakti:she stoop that low i didn’t expected….

Som enters…
Som:anu Di said hotel works almost finish so we can fix opening ceremony date…
janvi:wow that’s great news
pinky:mummyji Kal ansh ka birth day so….
Shivaay enters…
Shi:then date fixed….tomorrow night at 8pm with birth day party.
rest of OM members joined them..
ani:but its too early….how we finish all arrangements in short time…
Om:yeah..its have point..
Shi:but i always trust mine….
u can do it..
Anika gives irritating look…

morning ,hotel…
all arrangement going on…
Rudr:all r listen! what is party theme we didn’t select till now..
all r give their suggestion….
they finalize mask theme party…
Anika on the call,
ani:wow that’s such an amazing…
k bye..love u too…
Shi:what’s going on!!??
ani:that’s none of ur business Mr oberoi…

she give what wala look..
Rudr:surprise!!! i know all ur surprise always favor to me , iam very happy…
sharp at 8pm….
Ansh&Anshi cut the ribbon and open new hotel….
then they cut Ansh&Anshi birth day cake….party starts……
they all put the mask one their face.and dance well…
Song plays,
Ranveer parts….
Dance dance everybody

Getting hotter in the party
Common common start feeling
Dance dance everybody
Bhangre di queen mein taan 
Kudi so haseen mein taan
Meri hai gazab gal baat

Figure hega kaint mera
Thumka excellent mera
Groovy groovy hoja mere saath
Nachaangeh saari raat, soni o ve
Nachaangeh saari raat, soni o ve
Kar lo thoda sa pyaar, soni o ve
Kar lo thoda sa pyaar

Hai Jhanjhara da sound
Te hilda ground
Main cham cham nachdi fira
Ankh mein tight
Jaun mein left right
Te mundiya toh bachdi fira 
Shivaay …..
Munda hoga woh toh lucky
Jiske liye tune rakhi
Apne yeh aankhon ki sharab
Dil mera thik hainda
ishq vich weak hainda
Karde tu isko kharab

Na zidd very much kari
Mujhko na touch kari
Karle control jazbaat
Phir bhi jo na maane dil
Karta jaaye tujhko kill
Thaam le aake mera haath
We can stay up all night soniyo ve
Karlo thoda sa pyaar soniyo ve
Karlo thoda sa pyaar…..
Then all couples romantic dance..

Shivika …..
Teri meri, meri teri prem kahani hai mushkil Do lafzon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye…
Ik ladka, ik ladki ki yeh kahani hai nayi Do lafzon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye Teri meri, meri teri prem kahani hai mushkil Do lafzon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye Ik dooje se hue judaa, jab ik dooje ke liye bane…

Tumse dil jo lagaya, toh jahaan maine paaya Kabhi socha na tha yun, meelon door hoga saaya Kyun khuda tune mujhe aisa khwaab dikhaya Jab haqeeqat mein usse todna tha Aa .. Ik dooje se hue judaa, jab ik dooje ke liye bane Teri meri, meri teri prem kahani hai mushkil Do lafzon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye…
Om signs Rudr..,
Rudr take on ring and goto sumo to propose her….

Just now one masked man neeldown and kiss Soumya hand..
Rudr stunned…and take off his mask,
2nd mask person runs towards ishu and lift her air and spin..
Now Om also super shocked.
One girl hug Ranveer and left prinku shocked..
Omruprinku:what’s going on..
Shiv:accha hua mere liye koi villain nahi aayi…

4th person :main aagaya!!!!
Soumya&samar feeding eachother…Rudr fumes anger,
Shivika nok-jok
Sorry for grammatical mistakes,plz drop ur thoughts…and its request from me don’t discourage any writers…if u didn’t like it then give ur suggestion..or don’t comment better u don’t read..,u know what all writers want motivation from ur comments,don’t make them to think their 3or4 hrs work is meaningless..it was fiction so see that style only sorry for hurting u guys iam very happy for i have few commenters only but good commenters, also silent readers they didn’t give any comments for my ff even bad also..
Kush karo aur Kush raho….

Words r too sharp and strong..
So handle it carefully…
Many time its hurt others self
Some time its hurt ur self

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  1. Mukta

    Haha….. ending was awesome!!!!! Amazing!!!

    1. Anah

      tq mukta

  2. Nice 🙂

    1. Anah

      tq jaya

  3. post asap

    1. Anah

      tq safaq

  4. it was nice plz post soon

  5. Barbieannie

    Hey ur ff is just amazing… There are some lines which are hard to understand… Due to some reason… But we all do these kinds of mistake so nvr mind ? keep it up ..

    1. Anah

      tq barbie girl i know bcoz i am not that much perfect in English but i try my best

      1. Barbieannie

        Hehe sane here me to not best in eng ? So just best of luck and update next one soon

  6. Nithu

    Lovely ending….

    1. Anah

      tq nithu

  7. Puvi

    its nice dear waiting for next part

    1. Anah

      tq puvi

  8. ???Superb!!

    1. Anah

      tq hirah

  9. Ishqkum

    Wow Dr twist wala ending awesome dr

    1. Anah

      tq kavin

  10. Akansha

    Omg loved it…. Plz post d next one soon.. Can’t wait to read it…

    1. Anah

      tq akansha

  11. Well said in the ending dear …I agree with you sabhdo ke ghaw talwar ke war se bhi zyaada gehre hote hai jaldi nahi bharte …
    Coming to the episode I guess I missed that room mystery or something that’s why in the beginning I was slightly confused.. Ranveer ka twin roop ka twin …ishana in mental asylum… But the ” Punjabi song was cheery on top” and moreover the icing of suspense seriously ??

    Isko bol te hai super se bahut uper wala fiction…

    1. Anah

      tq shama di i think u missed earlier part also previous part that’s why u r confused about twins my ff’s special twins concept

      1. OK I will check it on ur wall THQ for info sweetheart

  12. Awesome sis n today u nailed it n plz update next one soon

    1. Anah

      tq crish

  13. kya hua ???????????
    mood off hai kya.
    mujhe nahi pata kisne tumhe hurt kiya haibut I know you can handle that and surely koi agar bad comment kisine kiya bhi hoga toh just to impove you so don’t feel bad.
    aur aaj ka episode mast mast tha.
    be happy

    1. Anah

      yeah kind of….
      anyways tq nakru dr….

  14. Nice episode Ana and precap is good eager to see jealous dumbell Oberoi and ShivIka’s nok-jok so come up with next part soon dear…

    1. Anah

      tq priyu dr

  15. SairaBarkat

    last part was like..
    “shivay: achha hua mere liye koi villian nehi aya.
    4th person: abbey chup baith, tadibaaz.. meri anika yaha par ho aur main kahi aur.. aisa kaisa ho sakta hain??”
    shivomrupri shocked, villians rocked.. no no..anah rocked. u just rocked it, anah. loved it. upload next one asap.

    1. Anah

      tq saira dr

  16. Superb update… shivay:achha hua mere liye koi villain nahi aya..?? damm funny… Waiting for the next update…

    1. Anah

      tq ankita

  17. Kavya347

    Wow… It was so great… I loved it.. upload the next one soon

    1. Anah

      tq kavya

  18. Diyaa

    Nice Anah. I really enjoyed reading this. Your concepts are so interesting. I love so many ffs on IB page that sometimes I want to read some but it just keeps getting postponed due to work and other duties. But I am very glad I read this. Keep writing.?

  19. Anah

    tq diya iam very glad u like it

  20. U rocked anah episode was mindblowing

  21. Nice…waiting for nxt part

  22. NICE episode ????

    1. Anah

      thank u liara

  23. Shivika22kapoor

    Amazing epi dear and the last shayari was mind blowing and well said. Keep it up dear and don’t be disheartened by anyone’s words just believe in yourself.
    Keep smiling ? and take care ?

    1. Shivika22kapoor

      The song ? was amazing ????.
      Good choice dear??

  24. Amazing… Poor heroes.

  25. Mrunal

    hey anah superb epi dear….
    i am so sorry for commenting so late…
    i know u always provided me ur ff’s links… but i was so busy hence i was on reading mode only…
    i hope u will try to understand me….

    coming back to ur epi… i liked it to the core….
    songs part was tooo good…
    I’ll love to watch jealous oberoi siblings….

    and i totally agree with u yaar sometimes it hurts a lot when u take this much effort & people simply give such bad review or comment…

    i hope people will try to understand the efforts we author’s r taking…
    they can give suggestion instead of negative comments…

    once again i am soooo sorry for not commenting on previous episodes..

    but trust me this is one of my fav ff..
    and even i didn’t comment i read it’s each & every part….

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