i am back with my zid Epi-17

hi everyone this is anah..
finally I’m back with “my zid”..thank u so much for ur comments.. and thank u for ur concern…I’m overwhelmed by ur beintehaa pyaar…
let’s start..,
Epi-16
diwali morning…,
all r getting ready their respective rooms…
anika see all rooms…
ani:all room busy….i also get ready on time….
in shivaay room..,
ansh&anshi getting ready by shivaay….
shiv:ok finish u go downstairs….
ansh stay here,bathroom door repair,i am going to take shower.
anshi goes from there…..

ani:maybe bagad billa room only free….
anshi see anika….
anshi:mam u didn’t get ready yet.
ani:haan sub room busy hai…
anshi thought something…
anshi:papa room free hai….u can go there…
ani:pakka…
ansh comes ,
ansh:pakka ,no one is there ,i also come from papa room..
ani:thanks…
she about to go…
ansh:and one more thing bathroom door lock repair..
ani:ok i will see
anika goes shivaay room and lock inside….
ansh&anshi give hifi….

anika enter bathroom…she didn’t notice shivaay taking shower..shivaay also didn’t notice her presence…
she slowly close the door just then ,he sees anika and shout…she suddenly close the door…
shiv:u…what r doing here..where is ansh…?
he hide behind the curtain and wear shirt….anika close her eyes and turn….
ani:ansh!!!????
shiv:yes i said him stay here,I’m gonna take shower…bathroom room repair….
ani:one minute…
anika recall ansh….
ani:wo..now i get it..ur son also like u besharam…
shi:wo hello u come here while i am taking shower now u called me besharam..and what’s wrong with my son..?
ani:he only tell me no one is here that’s why iam come to take bath..
shiv:my son is more brilliant like me he know what his papa want ?
he smile naughtily ..
ani:u r smiling..? but why..?

shiv:well ,i already taking shower..u also want take bath..then why we take shower together…
he come close and on the shower
ani:r u gone mad..?don’t come close..and stop the shower..
shiv:don’t be shy…after all i’m ur husband….
ani:sach main tu pagal hai..
she turn and open the door but door get jam…she try hard to open but vain….
ishana meet ansh&ansh on corridor…
they greet ishana…
ishana sees ansh kind of smile ,
ish:mujhe aise kyun lagraha hai u kuch saitani karkar aagaya hai…ansh….
ansh:not really…..
ish:accha…!!!! where is ur mom?
ansh:she taking shower…..
ish:ok…..
oberoi elders done all work…..
dadi:pooja will be start in few hours where Ian our childrens?
janvi:mummyJi i will check them?
shivaay room…..,

anika trying to open door…..
shi:what happened….?
ani:door get struck……
shiv:whatttt??????
ani:its all bcoz of u and ur saitani son…..pooja will be start in few hours….but i didn’t get ready…
shiv:ok chill….i will call om…door can unlock from outside….
he about to call om…
ani:no benefit…..
shi:what do u mean….?
ani:ansh said bathroom door is repair so…….
shi:so….?????
ani:so…..i lock the room door inside…….
shivaay get shocked……..
shiv:r mad…….? how did we go?
he throw the phone……..
in hall….,
all r there except shivika….
dadi:where is shivika….?
its time for pooja…..we missed this time then we will do evening time only……
janvi come shivaay room and see the room locked from outside……(ansh&anshi did this)
janvi come to dadi…..
Jan:mummyji…,they did’t here ,i checked whole mansion even their room……
taj:then how we do pooja without our childrens…..
dadi:we will postpone pooja evening…..
all leaves……..

omru walk near shivaay room….,
rudr try shivaay phone…..,
phone ring on the table inside room…..shivika hear from bathroom…..
omru also hear ringing sound…..
om:maybe shivaay left his phone,
shivika hear omru voice and call..
shivika:om…….rudr……
just then they leave…..
on the way om see ishana and goes behind her……
in ishana room…..,
ish:oh god….
ishana blouse back lace opened…
she try to tie it…..she is tired and stuck between lace and hair..
om see her….suddenly her blouse hook also open ishkara shocked and om close his eyes and turn other side…..
om :when people adjust their dress they should lock room door
ishana hear om voice….she shocked and suddenly turn…
ish:tum!!!!?? what r u doing here?
om turns
om:well.,someone need help..help karoon kya…?
ish:thanks but no thanks..leave..
om:aise kaise….
he come close to ishana and caresses her face….ishu close her eyes…..om move her hair, tie the lace also close the hook, ishana hug om tightly…he whispers her ear
om:i think someone need me desperately….
ishana come her sense…and brake the hug…
ish:i…need…u???? my foot….
om:when i said u need me..i said someone…..
ish:haan…haan…,.she leaves
in shivaay room..,
shiv:i have an idea….
ani:what?
shiv:why we r wasting time like this…i think we should think about next level….
he move closer…anika stop him..
ani:don’t come near me…i know what r u thinking….cheapster…
shivaay now super close to her..she could sense her warm breath, she close her eyes….he take her hair pin and unlock the door.
shiv:i think u r in romantic mood if u want i also join u.she open her eyes hear the sound…..
ani:my foot…
shiv:i have one thing u did’t have.
ani:i know tadibaazi right…..
shiv:brain…..
ani:what?? u have no brain…..ur good time u stuck with me….Nahi tho u didn’t out from here.
shiv:ya I’m glad i stuck with ur hair pin…

precap:pooja done….

ishana remember some incidents and get panic…..

sorry for grammatical mistakes..
plz leave ur valuable comments here…..

54 comments

  1. Christina

    Happy to hear that u r fine now.todays epi was awesome n i love ur ff.
    N i want to say something plz dont mind it ::::we make memories bt memories bt memories dont make us so forget ur past n live ur present n if u cant forget then think only abt good moments n think urself lucky for having those memories and 1 mire thing………
    Its difficult to move in in life bt its not impossible
    I jst told u the things that i did to move on in life n i also have been through much pain…… the past gives us pain so plz live ur present
    Take care n dont mind my word plz

    • anah

      thank u crish …..
      i am fine….and ya kusra hua Kal Ko wahi chodna chahiye….nahi tho aane wala Kal barbaath ho jaygi…..thanks again…..

  2. NAKHRU

    NAKHRU

    |Registered Member

    hey,
    nice one.so you got well annah.glad to know thisbut must say you have an adorable sis.in the last episode she did a good job.
    khayal rakho apna .
    take care.
    areee you didn’t told about that dairy??

  3. swati

    Wow di suprb romance overloaded tha what a come back totaly amused to read it nd ya i was just imagining how it really looks like nd it’s woderful but ya what hpnd to sahil priveer nd also write about rumaya’s part too

  4. Shivika22kapoor

    Shivika22kapoor

    |Registered Member

    Awesome, amazing, superb, spectacular, naughty, super duper hit and definitely paisa vasool epi. I loved the entire epi it was splendid. Ansh & Anshi stole the spotlight today. Kya kaam kiya hai dono bachoon nai shabaash.
    Naughty Singh Oberoi was awwwwwww too cute to handle today.
    And his last dialogue : I have what you don’t – BrainπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ lol.

    Well now coming to my lovely lady how are you madam?
    Missed you alot dear.
    I hope so now you are fine.
    Keep smiling 😊 always dear because that’s the thing which suits you the most 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊
    God bless 😊 you
    &
    Take care
    &
    Catch you soon 😊😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊
    😊 😊 😊 😊 😊😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

    • anah

      thank u sweety……
      now i notice ur post dr…
      but i didn’t read it……
      surely i will read and comment dr…maybe i didn’t comment regularly iam sorry

  5. Bshama1239

    Bshama1239

    |Registered Member

    Happy to know that your back dear and what an episode dear just loved it to the coreπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š

  6. saba

    akka she is my friend….
    anu…..u know her ,i only told to read ur ff…..i know now only …sorry for confusion akka
    its bcoz of me only…..

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