I am back with my zid (Epi-16)

hello i am anah back with my zid.
thank u for reading my ff ……
let’start….
episode:16…,
Anika comes downstairs…..
Pinky call her…..
pin:anika beta,diwali comings so go with youngsters and buy new dresses to all…..,
Ani:me..????
Pin:aur kon….? Kamal hai… Jaao,shivaay also come with u guys….
Ani:ansh…..
Pin:no worries ,i am here naaa….
Ani:ji mom…..

And other hand,
Rudr and soumya goes that room and unlock it…..
In side very dirty and dust….
Rudr:oh my god!! Its just like horror movie set….
Spider web…,dust….,full if darkness…..,
Som:Rudr just shut up!!!! Torch on karo…..
Rudr:i have no torch….
Som:duffer flash on karo….
rudr on the flash and see around,
Rudr:sumo ,i think this room locked in 25 years….
Som:so…..
Rudr:so… i heard one spider life maybe 2-5 years…..dangerous spiders only live above 10 yrs…
Som:so…..
Rudr:i think this spider age is 25 hoga…then if it pite anyone then what happen to him….
Som:how do u think this spider age is 25?????
Rudr:pagli….think room locked 25 yrs….no one come inside before…then this spider age also same hena…..
he did his logic sign…..
Som:one minute…. which spider we r talking about..???? and where it is…???
rudr:arre wahi…. Jo tumari sar pe beti hui hai…..
soumya shock and her get big sized …she about to shout…..but rudr cupped her mouth….and pick the spider from her head and says….
Rudr:sumo deko….isski size kya hai aur tumari size kya hai….
bechari….if u shout then its ear must tron…..
Som:rudr …..pagal….throw it away……
Rudr throw the spider away and see one cupboard…..
in the mean time….,

Om about to complete his statue,
ishana come here silently…..
Om sense someone is here….
he turn and she but ishana hide herself behind the shelf….
Om didn’t find any one and continue his work…..
he mix glay……
ishana see lizard near the shelf…
and she shout and run blindly that time Om take glay tray and turn…they pumping in to eachother and fell down…..glay fall on Om and ishana ….especially ishana face…..
Om stands and see her conditions and lough like mad…
ishana stares Om angrily….
ish:i didn’t leave u….
Om:great that’s only i want from.u…….

he try to control his lough but vain….
ishana about to stand but slip again…..
Om give his hand but ishana ignore….some how she stand……
and go from there angrily…..
in that room….,

ishana cross that room and here Rudr voice and go inside….
rumya didn’t not notice her…..ish behind them…and keep her hand on Rudr shoulder…..
Rudr see ishana……
ishana till didn’t clean glay….
He get fear and call soumya….
Rudr:ssss…..suuuuu……sumooooo………
Soumya busy in her search…..
Som:Rudr don’t distrub me…..
And turn….see ishana……rumya shout……..

Rumya:bhooooothhh!!!!!!!!!!!
Dadi hears and coming towards that room…….
Ish:guys its me ishana…….
Plz stop it…….
Rudr:ishu di…..what r u doing here…?
ish:same to u……..
just the they see dadi on opposite way and they hurriedly leave the room without lock….
dadi comes and see open room…
suddenly she locked and take key along with her……
Rudr:oh god….we didn’t get any thing….why did u shout moti….
Som:u shout first….
Rudr:no u….
they fight….
ish:guys….guys…..ok….relax….what going on….????
rumya tell everything…..
Som:but we didn’t get anything…

ish:i got this from there…..
she show one book….
Som:what is this…?
Rudr take that from ishu hand…
Rudr:this is like album…..
They go soumya room……,
Ish:u guys carry on I’m going to clean this……(glay…..)
Rumya nodes…….
They open that album……
That was family album rudr tell about everyone of his family…..
Rudr:sumo he is my dadu….
And she is my grany my dadu sister also my mom’s mother…,
Som:what!!!!!! They r bro&sis……
Rudr:haan….wo bhi twins…….like me and prinku..
Som:accha!!!!! Like Ranveer and…

Rudr:kya????? Ranveer twin?????
Som:ya Ranveer bhaiya and anika Di twins…….
Then they see all other photos….
Sumo:Rudr who is she….???
She point one pic which was not clear…….
Rudr:i don’t know….?
Just then anika enters……,
Soumya hide album inside the bed…..
Ani:guys diwali purchase…..get ready…….
Rumya:ok di……
Then they getting ready……
In shivaay room…..,
Anika come and stop standing near the door……
Shiv:come in……
Ani:shopping jaana hai…all r waiting for u only……
Shiv:ok I’m coming…….

In mall…..,
Rudr:sumo plz come ,help me….
Som:okay……
Ish:Om i want to go another floor so plz…..
She sign Om……
Om:oh okay come……
Anika busy in choose dresses ,she didn’t notice all r goes except shivaay….she pick some dresses…..
Ani:ishu plz hold it and come to trial room……
She does not see shivaay and goes inside trial room…..
She wear one dresse but it didn’t suit her……she pit open door and strike her hand only and ask another dress……
Shivaay give them…..

In Om side…….
Ishana try some dress but she didn’t like any thing……
Om see one lehanga and give her,
Om: try this……
Ish:okay…..
In rudr side….,
Soumya search something new…
But they didn’t fit her……
Mall owner:what problem sir…??!
Rudr:size problem….
Soumya stares rudr……

Rudy:why r u looking like this…?? Go and try this……
He trag her towards trail room….
Anika try one lehanga…….
She struggle with back lace….try to tight but vain…..
Anika:ishu plz help me yaar…I’m fed up with this lace……
She open the door…..
Ani:come inside…..
Shivaay is confused….go or not??
Anika didn’t see him and hold her hand pull inside……
Ani:itna kya soch rahi ho ,just tie it…..
She looks down and correct her dress…..
Slowly shivaay hold lace and about to tie, his hand touch her back……suddenly anika see him through the mirror and shock….

She turn and make some distance between them…..
Ani:what r u doing here…????
Shiv:meri wife ki help karrahi hoon….
Ani:i don’t want ur help … Stay away from me……
Shiv:why..???
Ani:iam stay with u only for our child……
Shiv:right…..we r stay together only for our child…I’m try that only……
He smirks……
Anika understand what he is say..
Ani:chi…..plz go from here……
Shiv :if i didn’t go then……
Ani:then……
Shiv:shout…..
Ani:what???!!!!
Shiv:yahi bolne wali thi naa…..
Shivaay come more close and hold her waist pull her close…..
She try to free herself……but can’t…..
Shivaay hug her and place his head on her shoulder and tie her lace….. She also lose herself in his warm hug…..she close her eyes…….Shivaay see her shivering lips and about to kiss her……
Om side…..
Ishana show off her dress to Om she didn’t wear perfectly…..
Om:nice……
Ish:sirf nice??????
Om move forward to her……

Ish:why r u come close to me?
Om didn’t answer and move….
Now Ishana stuck between Om and mirror…..
He adjust her dress …. And his touch make her nervous…..she hold Om shirt tightly also close her eyes…..
Om about to kiss her……
someone knock anish trail room door…..suddenly they four come to senses…..
rudr stand in shivika trail room…
and Soumya in ishkara side…..
rudr:Anika babhi plz open…..
shivika look shocked…they see eachother face…..
Ani:rudr I’m trying dresses till now plz go another room….
rudr goes…..
Shivaay smile and try to kiss her but she pushed him out and close the door….
Shiv:rudr ki bacche i didn’t leave u…..
Soumya:di plz open the door…..

Ishana and Om shocked…..
ish:somu plz go somewhere naa..
som:plz Di i didn’t get any trail room…..plz open the door…..
no other way Ishana open….Soumya about to enter…Om come outside…..
he didn’t face her and hurriedly goes……Ishana shut the door…
ish:just one minute somu….
Soumya cups her mouth….
Ishana come out after change her dress…..

Precap:
i really don’t know…..

sorry for grammatical mistakes…
plz drop ur valuable comments here…..

I’m saba……
i post this…..actually Di didn’t complete it so i don’t know about Precap…..and i only add romantic scenes…..bcoz

26 comments

    • saba

      i really don’t know guys how last part was missing so here last part……
      I’m saba……
      i post this…..actually Di didn’t complete it so i don’t know about Precap…..and i only add romantic scenes…..bcoz Di is weak in romantic subject….but i am very super…..i wish to write full of romantic scenes…..but can’t, once she know then no one can save me from her…..
      one day she asked me…..
      saba plz tell some decent romantic scenes……like seriously… romance main kya decent ,indecent yaar…..
      then i tell he move close her and kiss her cheek ,she write that scene for rumya…..i never aware about it…i know 2 days before only I’m hell shocked…
      and i read some writer ff also u all guys r so romantic yaar like me….if u didn’t like my romantic touch then skip that…take di style only, the deep plasent eye lock only….
      and song plays…
      And thank u very much for ur response for Di ff….
      Now she is fine….taking rest maybe she will be discharge in 2 or 3 days….. Thank u so much….

  1. Christina

    Thnks saba 4 the update and anah sis plz get well soon missing u
    Saba take care of urself and of anah
    Miss u anah sisπŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡

  2. swati

    Hey saba di how was anah di now she came from hospital or not hope she will get soon nd ya episode was suprb nd ya r u and anah di on fb plz reply nd what is ur age to make sure call u di or not nd u r good as well nd i luv da episode plz r reply

  3. Bshama1239

    |Registered Member

    Saba thanks dear ur really a good sissy hopefully some ray of hope we could get if you keep us updating about anah seriously we all want her to fine asap so plz if ur posting in the end note do inform us about anah condition hopefully she recovers soon and be back ….. The episode was khidki toot as usual …. Romance on swing….
    Convey these all replies by her friends to her maybe she 😊 that one smile would at least be her first step ……

  4. Gayathri.visu

    Hello, Saba. I’m silent reader here. I read many ff’s , but not post
    comment about the ff’s. I just love your di’s ff. It’s awesome…… I wish your di recovers so soon. Take care her and urself also……..Sweet dreams.

  5. Shivika22kapoor

    |Registered Member

    Hi πŸ™‹ Saba dear you are an amazing writer just like your sister. How is she? I hope so that she would fine. Dear take care of her and yourself.
    May God bless 😊 her.
    Dear don’t loose hope your sister will be absolutely fine and that too soon.
    Stay blessed dear😊

    • Shivika22kapoor

      |Registered Member

      And thanks alot for posting the ff on behalf of your sister and you wrote all the scenes beautifully. And thanks for the link as well.
      Dear both you and your sister are really sweet and amazing people May God bless you guys.
      With lots of love ❀ to both of you.

  6. NAKHRU

    |Registered Member

    hey sabba,
    I am totally new to al this actually I signed just because of anna .actually I loved her ff very much I found it more interesting than that is shown on screen .and in some last episode she just stated of her quiting it I got shocked all though uptill now I had been a silent reader type but her thos statement made me talk so plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz just cure anna as soon as possible and give her my regards
    GUYS I LOVE YOUR FF……………………………………..and surely many silent readers like I was are waiting for it so plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz…………………………..NEVER QUIT IT.

    and ha plz state what happened of that dairy

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