BACHPAN KA PYAR – (Episode 9)

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Before going to story i want tell something.. I never give a name to tanus parents . so i decided to gave a name for them
Menon – tanus father..
Sharmila – tanus mother..
Here is the story…

Its Saturday..
In tanu’ s house..
Sharmila : wht the hell is going on? If its going like this our dreams get spoiled .
Menon : yaa…. The families closeness become more stronger..
Sharmila: my dream get spoiled by the arora family.. No I never allow them..my beti become bahu of mehra mansion.. n all property belong to us. .
Menon : bt how ? The friendship is become more stronger .. We can’t split them…
Sharmila : think with ur brain.. Why the friendship is stronger..
Menon : because prem n raghav is childhood friend n they love each other. .
Sharmila : that’s right.. In friendship love is not only reason.. Their is trust also. They trust each other. . if we destroy trust then its easy to handle them..
Menon: u r right.. Wht ‘ s ur plan..
They share a pln each other n smile …
In pragya’ s house ..
Raghav : saral… Where is my lunch bag..
Sarala : coming..
Sarala comes their n give a bag to him..
Raghav : I’m leaving now .. I will come tomorrow… I want to go pune for some official meetings..

( raghav is employ of prem mehra…)
Sarala : take care..
Raghav leaves from there..
In abhis house ..
Prem : amitha I’m going to my factory… If any one calls me.. Pls tell them call later or contact me in factory..
Amitha : okk.. Take care..
Prem also leave from there..
Raghav comes to office n search for prem… But he is not there.. So he called at m.m
Raghav : hello..prem…
Amitha : raghav ji.. He is not here.. He goes to factory..
Raghav : ok.. Pls inform him.. I’m leaving to pune for some official work… He knows that..
Amitha : ok raghav ji..
Raghav about to leaves from there with some official papers..
While menon comes there.. n talk to raghav.. While taking he changes the official paper.. After taking.. He leaves from there.. Menon laugh evily..
Raghav reach pune.. n attend a meeting..
Then he realize that original paper is not with him..
Raghav : oo god.. Wht is this.. How is this possible . I check the paper before leaving na.. Then how it change.. Now wht can I do ? This is a dream project of prem.. Because this he return to India.. n he give all the responsibility to me.. Now wht can I do ? They finalize the deal now.. Oo if I lost this deal? Then wht I tell to prem..
The deal get finalized. .. Mehra lost the deal.. Raghav gets really sad..
Raghav : now how I face prem ? Wht I tell to him? Aaa.. I can call one person he can help me…
Raghav called tanus father.(tanus father – he also part of mehra company )

Raghav : hello sir..
Menon : how was the metting ? All fine na? We get the deal na? U know its a dream project of prem ..
Raghav cry badly..
Menon : wht happend raghav.. Is all ok? Why r u crying.. ?
Raghav : wo.. The deal gets final.. Bt we did not get the deal..
Menon : wht? Omg.. If prem get know about this.. R u inform prem
Raghav : no sir …. I can’t do that .. Because I called u..
. Menon : ok .. But how we lost the deal? We confirm all na…n prem is really happy that we surely get the deal..
Raghav : yes .. Bt I don’t know the real paper is missing from me.. I don’t know how this happens..
Menon : don’t worry.. I will talk to prem first. Then I will inform u..
Raghav : ok Sir.. I m coming there as soon as possible..
Menon : don’t get hyper.. If u talk to prem . I don’t know how he react.. It will cause on ur friend ship.. First I will talk to him.. Better u stay there for this night.. I will talk him tommorow morning.. n comes after my call..
Raghav : ok .. Sir..
Menon laugh evily after end the call..
Sharmila : our pln is working..
Menon : u r so genius..
Sharmila .: now go to prem n do wht we plned.
Menon : raghu tomorrow is bad day for u.. Come let’s sleep peace fully. Tommorow our dream come true..
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Its Sunday..
Tanu n her family comes to mehra mansion… Tanu goes to abhi ‘ s room.. There abhi is restless…
Tanu : hiii… Abhi..
Abhi : u? Here? Chashmish ?
Tanu : she doesn’t come here..
Abhi gets sad ..
Tanu : don’t get sad…u can tell her everything tomorrow…
Abhi : I’m so nervous.. If she reject me.. I can’t .. n l also loose her friendship.. If I didn’t talk to her… I can’t even think about that..
Tanu : abhii…. U r over thinking.. Doesn’t happens like this.. Pls think as positive.. n by the way how u going to propose pragya …?
Abhi sit in sofa with confusion..
Abhi : I didn’t think about this ..
Tanu : whtttttt? Wht is this abhi.. I’m cheering up u for proposing her.. U never think about how u going to propose. . bad boy..
Abhi sits thinking..
Tanu : good ideaaa.. Shall we ply a game .
Abhi stare at tanu..
Abhi : now u say me bad n scold me for not thinking about my chashmish.. U r saying that ply game….
Tanu : offfo abhi.. I m also thinking idea for u.
Abhi : I did nt understand..
Tanu : ok listen me… Think as me as pragya..
Abhi : wht? U? n laugh..
Tanu stare at him angrily…
Abhi : ok tell me.. U r so nervous na .. Because I tell this idea… If u doesn’t like it we won’t ply..
Abhi : ohh! My sweet laddu.. Don’t be upset.. Tell me wht I can do in this game..
Tanu : first of all u didn’t call me like this…
Abhi : ok I didn’t call u laddu no more. Is that ok laddu..
Tanu stare at him.
Abhi : ok . tell me about the game..
Tanu. : listen.. Consider me as pragya.. U can tell me u r going to tell pragya.. Its help u from nervousness..
Abhi : that’s a good idea.. U ply role of chashmish .. ok let’s start ..
While pragya n bulbul enters to the mehra mansion..amitha n aliya welcomes them..
Aliya : come bulbul , we can ply now.n they leave from there..
Pragya : aunty where is abhi n purab..?
Amitha : purab goes to temple..n abhi n tanu r in his room..
Pragya : tanu also here.. I’m going to his room aunty.
Amitha : ok beta..
Pragya leaves from there..
She reached near abhi s room
Pragya : ( in mind) I missed him yester day .. I can’t wait.. If didn’t say to me.. I will surely say to him .
n smiles .
She opens the door n ready to speek… But she stopped hearing their talking.. The door is slightly opened.. Abhi n tanu didn’t notice that..
Tanu : abhi why r u call me here like this alone?
Abhi : wo mein…
Tanu : wht happens to u tell me na.? U didn’t tell can I leave..
Tanu stand n about to leave abhi stop her..
Abhi : wait I will tell..
He take a breath..
Abhi : I want to tell u a important think.. Shall we start?
Tanu stare at abhi..
Abhi :,ok. I will tell..
” WHEN I ENTERED TO OUR SKL FIRST I NOTICED U.. I’ M NOT JUST NOTICED U.. I FORGOT THE WORLD WHEN I SEE UR EYES.. THEIR IS SOMETHING IN UR EYE .. IT ATTRACT ME TOWARDS U.. ITS REALLY MAGIC.. I RELLY FEEL SPECIAL FOR U.. MY EYES ALWAYS WANT TO SEE UR CUTE FACE .. BUT THAT DAY I CANT TALK TO U… BUT I REALIZE THAT WE R IN SAME CLS.. I’ M REALLY HAPPY.. & ALSO KNOW ABOUT THAT U R MY FAMILY FRIEND..MY HOPE DEVELOP MORE.. N ON SUDDEN MOVE U BECOME MY BEST FRIEND.. AT THAT TIME I KNOW THAT U R SPECIAL FOR ME.. BUT I KNOW ABOUT THAT U R CONFUSED ABOUT ANOTHER GUY.. ITS REALLY HURT ME.. BUT U REJECTED HIM NA .. N UR TALK ABOUT HIM IN FRONT OF ME THAT REALIZS MY LOVE TOWWARDS U .. & TODAY I CONFESSING MY LOVE BEFORE U BEACUSE I WONT LOOSE U AT ANY COST.. I REALLY WANT U.. I WANT U WITH ME FOR EVER… DONT TELL THIS AS ATTRACTION.. I KNOW THIS IS NOT LIKE THAT.. I REALLY FEEL FOR U.. U R NOT WITH ME.. I REALLY MISS U BADLY..ALWAYS MY EYES SEARCH FOR U.. MY HEART ALSO NEED U..
I REALLY REALLY LOVE U….
I LOVE U… I LOVE U .. I LOVE U..
Tanu really impressed hearing these from him n hug him.
Tanu : I love u too abhi.. I also wanted with u.. I also miss u when u not with me.. I really love u..

Tears r rolled down through the cheek of pragya.. She ran away from there..
Abhi break the hug..
Abhi : wht r u doing.. n wht u say.. U love me.. I say this for my chashmish..
Tanu : offo abhi.. Don’t over think.. I said this from pragya s side.. I know she will reply u like this..
Abhi : really?
Tanu : yaaa.. She can’t reject u.. U r such brilliant.. Kya lines? Just amazing..

Pragya goes to guest room n locked it.. She goes to washroom n cries badly.. She can’t control her tears..
” GOD WHY U MAKE FEELINGS FOR HIM… HE NEVER LOVES ME.. I’M FOOL… I NEVER THOUGHT HE DIDNT LOVE ME.. HE CONSIDER ME ONLY AS A FRIEND.. .. N HE LOVES TANU… N SHE ALSO LOVE HIM… BUT THANK GOD , I DIDNT TELL THEM ABOUT MY FEELINGS.. IF I TELL THEM I LOOSE THEIR FRIENDSHIP ALSO.. I ALSO MADE HITLER IN MY CLS.. I ALSO LIKE THAT N I ALSO THINK TO MADE LIKE THAT.. WHY U CHANGED MY DESCISON GOD TELL ME.. WHY U CREATED FEELINGS ON ME.. I NEVER WANTED THAT.. U GIVE ME THAT , IT CREATE ME VERY HURT.. I HATE MYSELF… BUT I LOVE HIM VERY MUCH.. BUT FROM THIS MOMENT ITS ONLY KEEP IN MY MIND.. I NEVER TOLD THIS TO ANY ONE.. THIS FEELING START FROM ME N END WITH ME.. HE IS ONLY TANU’ S .. I NEVER COMES IN B/W THEM.. HE WAS MY FRIEND .. NOW HE IS ONLY MY FRIEND ” ..
she cry badly…atlast she wash her face n goes to aliya n bulbul n sit with them…
While tanu n abhi have a talk about pragya ..
Abhi : I want to see chashmish right now.. n tell about my feelings..
Call her na…
While amitha enters to the room with 3 glass juice n gave them
Amitha : beta.. Where is pragya ?
Abhi ( surprisingly ) chashmish? She doesn’t come here.
Is she come s to our home?
Amitha : haa beta.. She come s home half an hour before.. n leaves from the hall telling that going to ur room
Tanu : no aunty ..we r here.. More than 1 hour na..
Abhi : maaa.. I think she is with aliya n bulbul go n check there..
They r about to leave.. Purab comes there n give prasad to amitha..
Purab : now we can leave to near by park na? Maa aap muje vaada kiya hei na?
Amitha : haaaa.. Beta.. U all go to park n enjoy.. Take aliya bulbul n also pragya .

Abhi : ok maaa..
Abhi ( mind) : today is nice day.. I can’t wait tommorow , its a nice chance to tell my feelings to chashmish..
Abhi hug amitha n tell ” love u maa”
Amitha : ooo meri beta ko ithini pyar aarahi hei?
Abhi : today I’m really happy..
They all leaves to aliya’s room…
In aliya’ s room ..
Bulbul n aliya plying .. Pragya is thinking ..
While amitha n trio enters to the room..
Abhi gets happy while seeing pragya..
Pragya doesn’t notice them..
Amitha : pragya beta.. R u here.
Pragya comes to sense.. She get sad while seeing abhi..
Amitha give juice to her.
Pragya : no thanks.. I dindnt want. .
Amitha : ok beta . aliya u want to go park na … Go with ur bayi…
Aliya gets gappy n hug amitha..
Amitha : u can also go ..
Bulbul gets happy..
Amitha : pragya beta.. Wht happens to u . ? U r not happy.. Whts the matter..
Pragya : no aunty.. No problem..
n give a fake smile..
Amitha : then go with them..
Pragya : where.?
Amitha : park .. Don’t u hear?
Pragya : wo.. No aunty.. I won’t go..
Amitha : wht happen beta.. All r going.. U can go..
Pragya : no aunty.. I didn’t feel well. So I won’t go..
Amitha goes to pragya n check the forehead..
Pragya : aunty.. I didn’t have fever.. I’m not going because I have no mood ..
Abhi gets sad .
Abhi : wht is this chashmish.. Come na ..moode will come soon..
N blinks at tanu…
Tanu goes near abhi n abhi ki haath pakadliya..
Tanu : come on pragya.. For us come on..
Pragya gets more sad..
Pragya : I’m not coming that’s final..
Amitha leaves from there .. Because she is not able to their fighting..
Abhi comes to pragya n drag her to go park..
Pragya gets angry
Pragya : abhishek , leave my hand.. I won’t come ..that’s final..
Abhi : u must come . .
Pragya push him away..
Pragya : choti u can go to park..n leaving to home..
n leaves from there .
Abhi : chashmish…
Abhi goes back her..but stopped by aliya…
Aliya : come on bhai its getting late..
Abhi gets upset n goes with them..
Abhi ( in mind) : why she behaved like this.. If she have any prblm.. She is so worried. .. Any way I will talk to her tomorrow.. n clear all the confusion..
While pragya thinks about the abhi.. She cried..
Pragya : why he do like this to me.. Why he comes near me . n make me
helpless.. His concerned for me make weak.. she wipe her tears..
Never .. He doesn’t become my weakness.. I never do happend this..
The episode end with crying face of pragya n smiling face of abhi..
..hope u all like this…

Next episode will be reveal the truth that get away two family..

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Credit to: karthu

22 comments

  1. Varsha

    OMG!!Family revelation is soooo gr8……its awesome,cool,rocking,fabulous…n many more

    • karthu

      Thanku dear… But I can’t upload reg because I’m busy with my studies… There is only 2 days more to reopen my clg. But I upload when I’m free…

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