Our baby an os by riya a gift to maro Di


hi guys this one is for maro Di I have been working on it for along time hope you like it please do comment

shravan and suman were sleeping soundly after a very long tiresome day. Although shravan’s snoring and suman’s soundly breathing was not bothering either one of them this night, someone else stirred in her sleep. With a light yawn she opened her doe like brown eyes, taking in her surrounding, looking up at the objects that were slightly twirling above her. She reached up with her tiny hands trying to touch the objects, when a loud snore startled her, and she began to wail. Her father’s snore scaring her again. shravan and suman both immediately opened their eyes, suman straining to keep them open, sighed and began to get up, when she felt two hands on her shoulder lightly pushing her back on the bed. “You sleep, I can take care of her” shravan said softly. “Are you sure, you’re really tired, I can do it” suman replied, with sleep lacing her words. shravan pecked her on the forehead and smiled, “Don’t worry sweetheart, go back to sleep.” “Ohh..ok, if you say so” suman mumbled and settled in the bed again. shravan removed their blanket off him self and got out of bed, and lightly padded across the room to the wailing sound. As he neared the crib and looked inside, the wailing stopped and his eyes met with a pair of teary brown eyes, the eyes were a striking replica of his wife’s. He couldn’t help but break out into a smile and a second later the once wailing baby began to giggle. She squinted her eyes, having a lone tear slip between the corner of her eye.

“Awww, ishu, baby what’s wrong? shravan cooed, caressing her face and removing the tear off her face. ishu just smiled sucking on her thumb and showing her toothless gums, making her daddy chuckle. “Did you just wake your mumma and I for us to talk to you” shravan asked her and immediately she shook her head and stretched out her hands, indicating shravan to pick her up. shravan without any hesitant picked her up from her crib and cradled her in his arms. ishu with her slobbery hands touched shravan’s, face which had him jokingly scold her. “ishu, eww you got spit on my face” he laughed, which made ishu giggle louder. “Shhh, we can’t wake your mumma, she’s asleep” shravan said quietly while giving her a peck on the cheek. ishu just giggled even more and made spit bubbles with her mouth. “You really are a mischievous girl, you know that right” shravan told her as if she knew what he was saying, while grabbing her bib. shravan came around with ishu and gently placed her on their bed and put her bib on, so she won’t get her clothes wet with all the spitting she was doing. “Now where were we,” shravan said while picking ishu up and sitting on the bed and leaning on the bed frame with ishu on his lap. “Oh right, where you get your mischievousness from,” he said and ishu pointed her tiny chubby fingers towards him, “Oh really, so it’s my fault huh princess” he said while tickling her tiny stomach.

She let out a scream and laughed, “Shhh ishu” shravan said while stifling a laugh himself. “Of course she gets it from you, how else could she be so mischievous if her father wasn’t?” suman said smirking and sitting up, leaning on the bed frame, resting her head on shravan’s shoulder. She pinched ishu’s cheeks. shravan smirked, “So I guess the queen and princess are against me now, huh?” suman laughed softly, reaching for ishu who gladly went to her mother’s outstretched arms and cradled in her warmth. “No, never against, we’re always going to be with you” suman replied looking into shravan’s eyes, “and besides I’m her mother aren’t I, so she gets a little from me too,” she smirked. “Oh really, is that so?” shravan smirked leaning closer to suman, putting his hands over her shoulder bringing her closer to him. “shravan, what are you doing?” suman said, hinting at ishu who was resting her head on her mother’s chest sucking her thumb and watching the tussle between her parents. shravan and suman both looked down at ishu, all three of them looking at each other when ishu broke into a fit of laughter making shravan and suman laugh along with her. After all the laughing was done, suman finally made ishu fall asleep by rocking her back and forth, while shravan sat there mesmerized by how his life depended on these two angels. suman got up from the bed and shravan got up along with her and they both put ishu back in her crib and softly tucked her in. shravan and suman both were entranced by what they created, a symbol of their unconditional love. shravan hugged suman from behind while gazing down at their princess, his love only amplifying each day for both of them. shravan tightened his hold on her as she leaned into him, “Thanks suman,” shravan whispered. “For what shravan?” she asked confused while turning to face him. “For loving me, giving me a new life, and giving me an irreplaceable gift of all” he said as love and happiness swelled his heart, “I’ll pray that your daughter grows up to be just like you, exactly like her mother, kind, generous, thoughtful.” suman tightly hugged shravan, resting her head on his chest as he encircled his arms around her, “shravan” she whispered, “huh” shravan asked. “Our daughter, not mine, but Our daughter, shravan and suman mahnotra’s daughter.” shravan’s smile widened as he hugged suman tighter knowing that he will never let her out of his embrace.

so how was it hope u liked it please do comment and happy birthday maro di

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  1. Ariana

    It was soooooooo cute. I loved it from the core of my heart. The part “Our baby” melted my heart. Make more Os. Love u

    1. Sharmansangel

      Thanks Ariana I was working on it for a long time and I am happy that you liked it

  2. Awww so cute
    Luved the father daughter duo
    Their sweet litle giggles made me smile
    I was smiling like stupid throughout the story
    Superb yr
    Loved it from the core of my heart
    Still smiling
    Thnx for this ria…
    Hope we get more such stories from uh!!
    Love uh

    1. Sharmansangel

      Thanks anamika and yaa I am really happy that you loved it

  3. Nikita

    Aww.. This was too sweet and cutE
    I’m sure marie di would be teary eyed reading thiss
    Cause I’m teary eyed right noww
    Aishu’s so cute man !!
    Loved it
    Write more os

    1. Sharmansangel

      Di don’t be teary eyed I can’t expect that from u

  4. WeirdSister

    Really…it was sooo sooo sooo cute riya…!!!
    It was…cuteness overloaded…!!???
    Loved it so so much…
    Maria would be very happy..after reading this…!
    Luv u…!!??

    1. Sharmansangel

      Thanks sis. Love u too

  5. pretty preeti

    My sweet sis riyo maro will love it so much what a gift
    I was really very happy that my smaller sis wrote is
    It was so nice I was really very excited to read it
    U write marvellous
    I loved it very much like I love u
    Post os more and more
    U r a fab writer
    Love u
    Maro jaise
    Love u
    Take care

    1. Sharmansangel

      Thanks Di and I am more happy to get a big sisso like you love you too and u too take care

  6. Marie

    Hey riya darling……..!!
    M speechless after reading this…..really totally speechless……..!!
    U r just amazinggggggg…..!!! The way that u explained the mother-daughter
    Father-daughter bonding was just outstanding yr……..!! N when I read d title that it’s a birthday gift for me……I was like……on cloud 9!! U love me too much yr….!! I m really really really lucky to have a younger sisooo like u…….!!!

    This is d best ever gift…..!! N I thank u telly updates fr making me meet with u all…….!!!
    Really u r sweetheart …….!! My sweetheart…..!! My special n most beloved siso…….!!!

    Thank u so SO so much yr…..!! I don’t like this gift…..
    Array Pali I loved this gift…..!! Frm d depth of my heart……!!
    Thank u so much sweeto……!!!
    Love u uncountable……se bhi bht bht bht ziada…..!!!
    Take care….! God bless u darling!!

    1. Sharmansangel

      Appi you called me sisso and then ur saying thanks this is not correct and even I am very lucky to have you and sky me jitne stars hain main aapko usse bhi zyda pyaar karti hoon love u too and you too take care

  7. Neeti

    Riyu di me phirse tapak pari…
    awww so cute a little baby also understand romance of hr parents ?
    luv it…
    Maro di toh kush kush ho jayegi
    luv u – Neeti

    1. Sharmansangel

      Tu kahan se tapki tapakte wo hain Jo bin bulaye note hain aur tera to main hamesha wait karti hoon aur tere os ka bhi and luv u too

  8. RANdomfANCreationz

    Awww so cute and happy birthday Marie :)and loved the cute Father-Daughter bond Ishu cho cute 🙂

    1. Sharmansangel

      Thanks fatarajo and why don’t you write more os on beintehaa I just loved the last one

      1. RANdomfANCreationz

        U also beintehaa fan? You know I love beintehaa so much so much i miss that show very badly after beintehaa i didnt get such a nice show in colors except for one or two but those shows became worse later on and i would have stopped watching hindi serials by now only thanks to sony and ishqbaaz still watching them
        and once i get a new story will definately write

      2. Sharmansangel

        Even I am a die heart fan of beintehaa u know their story was so nice and especially their nok-jhock and then zain Aliya ko manata it was really good and even I watch ishqbaaz

  9. Ufaaq

    RIya that was sooooo Nic I loved it thoroughly
    Take care

    1. Sharmansangel

      Thanks uffi appi and u too take care

  10. This was written so well! I was just wondering if you could add more parts to this fan fix?

    1. Sharmansangel

      Actually this was an os means one shot

  11. Sorry



    i,m late how can i be late at that much amazing os

    riyaaaaaaa i just loved it i hv never ever read anything cute thn it it it was cutest……

    Now i,m lacking words to praise it soooo simple it was beyond imagination…….

    Loved it from core of my heart

    stay blessed lov u bye bye

    1. Sharmansangel

      Apology accepted and thanks

  12. Fatimagulesarfraz

    Hey riya !!!! Arey yr this one was sooooooo cute … luved it ..
    Nd sholly for being late .. ??
    Take care ..

    1. Sharmansangel

      Apology accepted and thanks

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