Awww…(OS) by Jerry

“Saumya listen to me, saumya !!” Rudra shouted till saumya banged the door on his pretty face that has the capacity to make thousands drool over him. “Offo ! Now what to do ? Let me ask Shivaay bhaiya for tips, he has been married for quite a long time now, and its my first experience. He must be an expert at this.” Rudra walked up to the poolside to see his bhaiya shouting at someone over the phone. “Gosh !” Rudra muttered as the phone lost its life. He went over and said “Bhaiya saumya is upset with me. What shall I do now. Girls are always like this. I mean I just said to her that you are fat, only little haan and she..” Rudra narrated the story. “Rudra you are such a duffer. You know na that you should never tell a girl that she is fat.” Shivaay scolded. “But she is my wife. Bhabhi please tell bhaiya !” Rudra said to Anika who was listening to their conversation. “What do bhaiya do, when you get angry with him ?” He questioned his bhabhi. Anika blushed thinking how naughty shivaay becomes at that time. “Rudra you are a duffer” shivaay once again chided. Now rudra was very much angry. He was in a problem and his bhaiya was calling him a duffer. “Bhaiya so you can do everything properly ?” He asked mischievously. “Yes, I am Shivaay Singh Oberoi.” Shivaay praised himself. “Okay so I have a challenge for you. After a week there’ll be a fitness competition between you and me. It can be anything. Its a surprise for you. Let’s see who wins !” Rudra spoke. “Shivaay Singh Oberoi never loses in a challenge.” Shivaay spoke in his usual tadi doing his signature step.

“Anika how much more ?” Shivaay said exhausted. “Aare you toh only have said that you’ll win in the challenge. Now can’t you do some pushups ?” Anika said sitting over his back while he struggled to do push ups. “Shivaay Singh Oberoi can do anything” Anika reminded him. With that he again started doing. After 2 minutes he was lying on the floor with a thud. “Aww…” Anika said admiring him. “You look so cute when you are exhausted.

“Anika you have said that we will enjoy in this park, but I think only you are enjoying.” He said frustratingly. “Awww….See I said we’ll enjoy but you have to practice also for the competition. I don’t want my husband to loose.” She pulled his cheeks. “And yes, why have you stopped, continue na.” She said. With that shivaay once again started pushing the swing for the umpteenth times where Anika was sitting enjoying herself in the cool breeze singing and should like a maniac and whereas shivaay was sweating.

“Shivaay now I will climb on your back and you will take minimum 100 rounds. Okay ?” Anika said all giggling. “What ! Oh no !” He said defeated. “Anika you are a little heavy.” Shivaay said struggling. “Wait ! What ? You are saying that I am moti, I am fat ?” She said showing anger. She started tickling him and both fell on the garden. They both laughed till their stomachs ached.

“So now, the time has came for which we all were desperate for. The face off ” Om spoke in a referee tone. Rudra decided to do hand wrestling. Every family member were cheering for both of them.The match was going to start when Rudra spoke “I need my protein shake first.” And Shivaay spoke “I need my Anika first.” The belongings were send to respective partners. “All the best Shivaay, you can do it.” Anika spoke smiling.

Both the brothers were not less. Sometimes it seemed that Rudra will win or the other time Shivaay. Rudra though of an idea, being a naughty one. He went closer and said “Bhaiya bhabhi is giving you flying kiss. See, everybody is seeing her. It’s a public place na.” Shivaay turned embarrassed and realised that it was a prank and he was defeated. “This is cheating” shivaay screamed. “Bhaiya what have I done ?” Rudra said making a innocent face. “You…” Shivaay found it difficult to speak. “So now your punishment is today you have to do all the house chores.” Rudra spoke smiling ear to ear.

The great business man Shivaay Singh Oberoi was there sweeping the floor all flushed and embarrassed. Everyone was enjoying it except two. Both Anika and Pinky were feeling bad for him. “Awww…” Pinky said seeing her heera beta’s condition. “Rudra this is not done.” She spoke again. “Anika” Shivaay called. “You have told mom also about that awww..thing ?” He questioned. “Yess ” anika said laughing. “God !!” Shivaay exclaimed.

“How are you Mr Mehra. Hope you do not seek any difficulty to find our home.” Shakti spoke making sure that they all are seated comfortably. Khanna was standing there in casuals stealing glances from the girl who was seated in the sofa. “Khanna is a very nice guy. You know we have known him from quite a long time.” Jhanvi said praising the upcoming Dulha. “Take na, these snacks.” Pinky offered. “Where is Shivaay” Mrs mehra asked the dulha aka khanna. “He is in the kitchen wash….” Rudra was not able to complete as Om stamped his foot over Rudra. “Ouch !” Rudra spoke. “Raita phail gaya” Anika said.

The trio rushed to stop Mrs mehra to stop her going to kitchen. “Rudra you stop her somehow. We will till then hide Shivaay.” Omkara said. “Mrs Mehra !” Rudra called out as om and anika slipped into the kitchen. “Yess rudra.” She said. “Bhaiya is not there in the kitchen. ” he spoke as a matter of fact. “But rudra sir you toh only said that Shivaay sir is in the kitchen.” Khanna spoke. Rudra took Khanaa in a corner and said “Ahaahaha khanna till now your marriage is not done with Meera and you have changed your party.” Rudra scolded. “Its not like that Rudra sir…” Khanna spoke all flushed. And there Mrs mehra had gone to the kitchen.

Om and Anika were hiding Shivaay when Mrs Mehra entered. They stood in front of him when she came. All thanks to his height that they were able to hide him. But wait….the tap was still running. Shivaay had not closed it while washing the dishes. Mrs khanna make the duo aside and saw that Shivaay’s one hand was engulfed with the detergent while the other hand was holding an uncleaned plate. “Awww….” Mrs khanna said. “In this world many less people are there who do these household chores himself. I mean I never thought that Shivaay Singh Oberoi the great business man himself will wash the dishes. Khanna I am impressed with your sir. ” She spoke all awed and went away from there. Shivaay was all embarrassed and looked towards the trio and just closed his fists. The trio looked the either sides not knowing what to do.

Shivaay came to his room after being exhausted the whole day by doing lots of work at night. There Anika was playing Subway Surfers and screaming things like “yes, I can do it. Hmm, I will take the skateboard. I will be alive. Yess, a khidkitod idea anika.” As soon as Shivaay sat in the bed all tired she looked at him all cutely. “Awww…” She spoke. “You are looking so cute.” She said. “Anika here I am all tired and you are doing this awww…” He said angrily. Suddenly care replaced Anika’s admiration. This whole week his husband has done so much that he would not have done in entire life. He is so sweet. She took both his palms one by one and kissed them softly. She then caressed his palms and said “I am sorry Shivaay.” Shivaay instantly melted listening to those words from his wife. She always has that magic that shivaay can forget everything to listen to her voice and this time this puppy voice. “Its okay.” He said and hugged her tightly. Anika kissed his forehead before cuddling to him and slept.

Next morning when Shivaay opened his eyes he kissed Anika’s cheek and said ” I love you” Anika. He covered her with the blanket and went ahead to freshen up when he noticed a letter swiped through the door. He opened the letter and read :

Dear bhaiya
Hope you are fine after this one week exercise. Actually I am sorry, I know I did cheating that day but sumo has said to me that I can never win from you. And yes, that is absolutely true as no one is more good that you in the world. You know you are best. I am really sorry for cheating that day. I asked Anika bhabhi what do you do when she gets angry with you, to which she told me a little. You are very naught….okay, I have something for you. We all have gone to temple at Kashi and will return tomorrow so for you both we have the tickets to Maldives for your honeymoon. The flight will be at night only. Start packing and preparing.Hope you enjoyed our gift.
Love Rudra

Shivaay smiled reading the letter and glanced at Anika who was busy hugging the pillow shaked his head a little at her childlessness. I mean he never thought that she will anika will tell rudra something like that. He went over to her and kissed her eyes and said “Good morning Anika.” She opened her eyes slowly and greeted him back. “Anika are you ready to go on a trip with me….alone. Our first ever honeymoon.” He said smiling. “First ever…” She questioned. “Aare there will be many more na, this is toh first one. ” Hmm” she replied all red.


Heya cuties !! I am back gain with an Os. I hope you all liked it. And I will love to hear your views about it. Do comment everyone along with silent readers. And those who are waiting for my ff My destination : Cafe Coffee Day, I will try to update it soon too. Thank you for reading❤

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  1. Kanfi

    So sweeeet jerrry,,,,,just loved it….
    Full with awwwweee mmnts….
    U just nailed it….

    1. Jerry_36

      Hey Kanfi. Thank you so much for commenting. I am glad and surprised to know that you read my updates?

      1. Kanfi

        Yaa i do…it was OS so i read instantly….ur e cafe coffee day,,i m reading now from beginning,,will commnt when read all parts

      2. Jerry_36

        That’s great. Do tell me your views Kanfi?

  2. Sagithya

    It was so cute

    1. Jerry_36

      Sagithya, thank you for commenting?

  3. Madhuani


    1. Jerry_36

      Thank you Madhu?

  4. “Awww”-dorable Os jerry ?? …
    The Garden part was really funny yet cute….??…
    Khanna ji ke liye OM main rishta aaya hai ??…
    The kitchen scene was hillarious….
    Loved it ???…

    1. Jerry_36

      Thank you so much Sophia. I am glad that you liked the struggling Shivaay? Yes, khanna ji is becoming dulhe raja. I am glad that you loved it❤

  5. Shivika4eva

    Awww ?
    Really waiting for ccd ff

    1. Jerry_36

      Thank you dear. I will try to update it soon?

  6. Niriha

    Awwww??????? fabulous os lovely I loved it to the core

    1. Jerry_36

      Thank you so much Niriha. I am happy that you liked the update❤

  7. Mehakchalag

    Aww aww and aww.Aww toh banta h for this lovely os.Sooo sweet.Sweet singh oberoi i loved it this version of sso.Keep writing lovely os’s.

    1. Jerry_36

      Thank you so much Mehak. That was so sweet of you just like Shivaay? I am glad that you loved it. And you know I have written previously 4 os too. Do check them out too, if you want and yess, your profile picture is really cute❤

      1. Mehakchalag

        thank u i already read all of your os and ff’s loved them a lot.u r khidkitod writer.

      2. Jerry_36

        Thank you so much Mehak. And yeah once again you have changed your profile picture ! But its amazing too?

  8. VHM

    Awwwwwwwww…this is such an awesome OS…i was smiling all the way while reading the OS…bingo you again did it Vedika…so so so so so happy for you…you can by reading my comment understand how happy i am…thank you so much dear for the wonderful write up

    1. Jerry_36

      Hey Harika di. Thank you so much for the sweetest comment. I am glad that my OS brought a smile to your face. Yes, I understood that you are very happy and I am also very happy by knowing that you are happy. #happy repetition? Love yaa❤


    1. Jerry_36

      Thank you so much uf for commenting and all the pretty words. Really appreciate that?

  10. Nilash

    Hmmmmm now again this is not done. You know I am the biggest fan of your write ups and see you again compelled me to use the same adjectives. I won’t use that old adjectives so let me think for a while for some new ones. Ok just 5 mins…………………………………??????
    Tough time thinking wait got one it was an admirable and an adroit work. You have used every character very nicely. Hmmm got some more words the OS was really gratifying and a splendid one. Ok this much for today or else if I add every nice words over here then what will I use later right??? But seriously it was awesome.
    Now a bad news for you my dear after today for 1 month or so I will be absent from TU page for my studies so maybe I won’t be able to comment on your next parts of your ff. So dear very sorry but you never forget to send the links to me. Whenever I will come back I will post a loooooonnnnngggg comment admiring all the parts.
    Love you dear. Will miss you loads. ?????????

    1. Jerry_36

      Hey Nilash di. How are you ? First of all thank you for this awww..some comment. I am really very happy. What ! You are my fan…you must be kidding right ! I am in cloud nine now. Gosh !!??
      Oh my god, so many adjectives, from where do you get them ? They are really beautifully, thank you so much.
      Haww di…this is so wrong. You gonna go for your studies. Then I have a second bad news..I might be not available from the next month onwards as I will be having my exams. I am very upset now. Will miss you too very much. Love you❤

  11. That was so cute…

    1. Jerry_36

      Thank you so much dear?

  12. Nila

    Aww superb,cute, naughty, Amazing ,etcccccc kitchen works lol but so sweetSO and thank u jerryyyyyy cute lil sissss for giving super duper OS after long time

    1. Jerry_36

      Thank you so much Nila. I am glad that you liked it dear and that kitchen scene. Your welcome big sisoo?

  13. Sam-99

    Awwwww moment really enjoyed while reading Jerry ……….I’m waiting for ur ff dr plz soon post it ……..I’m really appreciating ur writing skill drr ur fabulous. ….keep writing drrrrr

    1. Jerry_36

      Sumitha, thank you so much. I am glad that you enjoyed it. Yes, I will try to post my ff soon. Thanks again?Love yaa..<3

  14. Dhar

    Jerry u always nail it yaar , such an adorable os , u can make the crowd go awwwww , like title like story ?plzzzz do come back with another one

    1. Jerry_36

      Dhar, thank you so much dear. I am happy that you loved it. Awww, I will surely try to come with another one❤

  15. Aww so cute.?

    1. Jerry_36

      Thank you so much Dwet?

  16. Pooja26

    awwwwwww so chweet os dear 😉 😉
    loved it !!!!!!
    jerry jerry jerry !!!!! love u !!!!!!! 😉 😉
    post ff asap…..
    bubye !!!!!!!

    1. Jerry_36

      Thank you so much Pooja di.
      I am glad that you loved it.
      Love you too❤
      I will try to post the ff soon too.
      Bye, take care?

  17. Ahaana

    Awwww… so cute jerry… ek dum khidkitodh… beintihaaa khoobsurat …
    waiting for ur ff..???

    1. Jerry_36

      Thank you very much Ahaana di. Itne khoobsoorat words, I am blushing?
      I will try to post it soon too.

  18. Awww….its so cute…lovely one jerry…..

    1. Jerry_36

      Thank you so much Lilly. I am happy that you liked it?

  19. Navz

    Awwwwwwwwesome jerry..ummahhh.loved it.

    1. Jerry_36

      Thank you so much Navz. Love you❤

  20. Haridhra

    Jaise title Vaise comments… So a big
    Awwwwwwwwwwweeeeeeeeeee…. I knw knw it’s sounding a lil nonooo super cheesy so I hope u don’t throw chameli at me 4 this (hehheeee)…

    N dr u r really Awsm u r one of the most best n finest OS writers dr.. N the end was really so cute n awsm ???..U made me numb not able to find any more words..

    With Love
    Hari ??

    1. Jerry_36

      Thank you so much Haridhra. No its not sounding cheesy its sounding cute. Aare nahi chameli nahi phool fekungi??
      Babe, thanks a lot for the compliment. And I am really happy that you loved the ending part, no super happy?
      Take care, love yaa…

  21. Nita D

    All I have to say is Awwwwwwwwww…..
    Such a sweet os right from the beginning…from Rumya to RuShiv to Finally Shivika (Something written by Jerry had to include shivika na) all the scenes were so sweet….loved it….and not to forget the Khanna khandan….

    1. Jerry_36

      Nita, thank you so very much. I am delighted that you liked the OS. And yeah, you are absolutely correct that something written by me has to include Shivika, I am their biggest fan. Thanks again❤

    1. Jerry_36

      Thank you Alekhika for commenting?

  22. Aawwwwwwwwwww that was sooooo cuteeeeeeee loved it…….

    1. Jerry_36

      Tahura, thank you so much. I am happy that you found it cute?

  23. Awesome….
    This was truly awwww….
    Shivika r adorable….
    The Sweet Singh Oberoi is too cute…. 🙂

    1. Jerry_36

      Thank you so much Shivika. I am glad that you found the update awww..??
      Shivika always are adorbs, no. And yeah he is cute?

  24. Aryaraju

    Awesome.. So sweet…. Anika wala Awww… ?

    1. Jerry_36

      Thank you so much Arya. I am overjoyed that you found it sweet?

  25. Thedreamsoul

    All I have to tell you is Aww…this is so cute Jerry ! You included everything and I loved it . Khanna part was hilarious and how sweet of Rudra to give him a gift . This is awesome jerry .
    You are absolutely talented and yay I m happy to have you as my friend . You never fail to surprise me . Keep writing more and love you Jerry , take care ???

    1. Jerry_36

      Thank you so much Sana. I am glad that you found it cute. Khanna part, yeah it was really hilarious.
      Hey you are also very talented and I am glad that ‘we’ are friends. Yess I will write more. Love you too, take care❤

  26. Nikita_jai29

    It is awesome dear… Super duper cuteeeeeee…. Love you dear…

    1. Jerry_36

      Nikita di, I am glad that you loved it. Thank you for commenting. Love you too?

  27. Anagha can you write sooooooooooooo overwhelmingly good?… love ya and your writings. Sorry for the late comment. And can you take class for me to write like this?..????

    1. Jerry_36

      Anagha, thank you so much for commenting. Babe, it means a lot? Love you too and yeah I am waiting for your write ups too. Post soon. Okay ? And yaa about the classes you are extremely talented. You don’t need them❤

      1. Anagha

        Thanks dude. .nd yea.i may post a OS today…do read and express your views

      2. Jerry_36

        Yeah ! I will surely express my views regarding it. And about your ff ??

  28. Tanz

    Awww…..cuteness overloaded. i just loved it. everything was just superb. I have just one small,tiny request…Can you please send me the link for the next part of your ff?
    (Sorry for being late…Yesterday i got my board results(class 10th) so was busy all day)

    1. Jerry_36

      Thank you so much Tanz. I am happy that you loved it. Yess your request my command, I will send you the links. And its totally fine.
      P.S I know I may sound like a relative, but still how was your result ??

      1. Tanz

        Don’t worry Jerry, you sound more like a friend than a relative(I am tired attending their calls). I had a good result-97.2% and I topped my School.

      2. Jerry_36

        Wow Tanz. Happy for you. You have a long way to go. Love you loads?

  29. Gayathri.visu

    Oh my maata!! What a writing style dear…. LOVED IT!!
    Its really AWWW! OS dear. Beautiful….. Khannaji’s new family……hmm very good idea Jerry! And their scenes are hilarious…. Rudra cheated, THE GREAT SSO! And his gift…..sooo sweet. Loved Shivika scene. Sorry for very late commenting dear.

    1. Jerry_36

      Gayathri di, thank you so much. Yeah Khanna ji is becoming a dulha. I am glad that you loved this hilariousness loaded OS. Yeah Rudra know how to surprise his superman? Its okay di. Love yaa❤

  30. Sanskriti120

    ha ha ha the first thing what caught my attention was shivaay doing house chores hahahaha it was damn funny yaar. like once imagine him sweeping him floor ,washing clothes and many more was funny………
    and all exclaiming ”AWWW” was really cute,
    and you know as always your writing is khidkithod i was just laughing like maniac
    and the os description in one word is
    ”AWWW……..” and that W continues

    1. Jerry_36

      Hey Sanskriti
      Yeah ! I agree with with you. He would have looked damn funny? hmm, all the chores would look hilarious on Mr SSO.
      Thank you so much for commenting dear. I am happy that you liked it. Ohh ! Thanks again sweetie❤

  31. Amazing OS… loved it…

    1. Jerry_36

      Thank you Ankita. I am delighted that you loved it?

  32. Somya_17

    It was amazing dude!! Nd sorry for my late review….love u loads..??

    1. Jerry_36

      Thank you so much Rutuja. Its totally okay. Love you too❤

  33. Somya_17

    It was amazing dude!! I loved it alott.. Nd sorry for my late review….love u loads..??

    1. Jerry_36

      Thanks again☺

  34. Somya_17

    Oh..sorry it got posted two times..

    1. Jerry_36

      It’s okay.

  35. Lovely! Come up with more Os’ like this! And one more with the honeymoon romance XP. I know I am being so…..(you know what I mean). This was fantastically awesome! Loved it! And sorry for commenting late.

    1. Jerry_36

      Zainab, thank you so much. I will surely try to come up with more. Dude, I can’t write these things, I am not good at it but I will make sure whatever I write, you enjoy. Thanks again, I am happy that you loved it. Its okay❤❤

  36. Neha_Pheonix

    In admiration of Jerry’s writing. I am totally speechless you managed writing it so perfectly.
    All the great words combined. This is spectacular!!
    I am late but I am glad, I didn’t miss thisss
    Love ya !

    1. Jerry_36

      Thank you so much Neha di. I am happy that you loved it?? Really appreciate your energy booster words. Ohh its perfectly fine, hmm that’s good?
      Love you too❤

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