Avneil Hate/Love (Chapter 13)

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IN ALI’s HOUSE

Nano looks at Avni

Nano- Why does she look so familiar to me.

Nano caress Avni’s face

Nano- This dayavanthi Mehta is a Devil. She can do anything with anyone. poor girl

Avni starts to get consciousness

Nano looks on

Avni opens her eyes

Avni- Uhhh… My head

Avni gets shocked seeing Nano in front of her

Nano- Are u alright Beta?

Avni- Nano….

Nano- Do U know me

Avni- Yes Ur Ali’s Grandma right . I know U.

Nano- Oh…

Avni gets up tensed

Avni- How did I come here.

Nano- Neil brought U here

Avni- NEIL!!!

Nano- Yes U had drunk bhaang

Avni- Bhaang I dint have bhaang…

Nano- Someone had given U bhaang in that Mehta house. He got U here as he dint know Ur Address

Avni whisper’s- Who could have given me that…

Nano- Beta do U want some coffee

Avni- No nano I have to leave

Nano- But…

Avni gets out of the house

Avni- Where the hell is my phone? What will I do now

Avni gets in the house

Avni- Nano

Nano- Yes

Avni- Can I get Ur phone for a minute

Nano gives her phone to Avni

Avni dials her no and call’s she see’s her’s and Aisha’s photo hanging on the wall and gets teary eyes

Avni- Shit no one is picking the call.

Avni gives her phone back to Nano.

Avni- Thank U nano

And Avni leaves from there

Nano- Why is she so tensed to talk to me.

Avni comes to the main road

Avni- Taxi…

IN MEHTA HOUSE

Neil comes in the house

Swetha- Where did U go Tillu

Neil- I had a Important work mom

Swetha- What work it is holi U should enjoy

Neil- Mom please…

Riya- Neil Where were U I was waiting for U?

Daya- Now leave that he would have got an Important work.By the way all the guests left.

Swetha- I know even fathima left fast!

Neil- Where are Ali and DD?

Swetha- DD was here somewhere and Ali….I don’t know

DD- We are here

DD and Ali enter

DD- We went out

Ali- Yes.

DD- I went searching for Ali he was near the gate so I took him with me.

Neil- Okay.

Swetha- Riya where is Ur friend Ah.

Riya worried- I don’t know she is not even picking my calls. I don’t know where she went

Neil’s POV
I don’t even know if she got up. I left her in some unknown place and came. She will kill me if she gets up. GOD I’m not ready for that.

Avni enters the house

Avni- I’m here Riya

Everyone turn to look at Avni

Avni looks at Neil

Riya- Where the hell did U go?

Avni- Me I had an Important work.

Diksha- And what was that.

Neil- Why do U want that Diksha buha

Daya glares at Diksha- Shut Up Diksha.

Diksha keeps quite

Ali looks at Avni tensed

Avni- Uh… Do U know where my phone is riya

Riya- No babe where did U keep it

Avni holds her head- that’s what I’m not able to remember.

Riya- Do U want water?

Avni- No

Ali- Here is Ur phone

Riya glares at Ali

Neil looks on

Neil- Where did U get her phone

Riya snatches Avni’s phone from Ali’s hand

Riya- How dare u touch her phone…

Avni- Riya…

Riya- Wait Ananya….

Daya goes to Riya

Daya- Now stop it Riya. Khanna family is here

Riya looks at swetha staring at Riya

Riya keeps quite

Avni- Thank U Ali

Ali smiles

Avni takes her phone from Riya’s hand

Avni- Fine then I have to leave now

Daya- Why Ananya U can stay here

Avni- No I have to go my mum will be worried

Riya hugs Avni

Riya- Bye Ananya

Avni- Bye

They break the hug

Avni- Fine everyone Bye.

Avni leaves from there

Ali- Wait…

Ali goes to Avni

Ali- U forgot ur car keys

Avni- Oh.. Thank u so much

Avni smiles at Ali and leaves

Swetha- Okay ji even we have to leave

Daya smiles

Prakash- Bye riya

Riya waves

Everyone leave from there.

Avni comes near her car

Avni- Why don’t I remember something.

Neil- Because U had Bhaang

Avni turns to see Neil standing behind her

Avni- But who gave me that

Neil- I don’t know.

Avni- U took me to Nano’s house

Neil- Nano!!! U know her

Avni gets tensed

Avni- Actually she told me to call her Nano

Neil- Oh..

Avni- Wait how did I come with U

Neil- Long story. wanna listen lil ananya

Avni- Just tell me what happened Tillu

Neil tells her everything except the kissing part

Avni- I did all that

Neil- Yes

Avni- And U even took me to Ice cream parlor because I insisted

Neil nods

Avni- I really don’t wanna say this but Thank U and Sorry

Neil looks on stunned

Neil- Pardon what did U say

Avni- I don’t repeat

Neil- Sorry is for troubling me right

Avni nods

Neil- And what about thank U

Avni- For taking me outta here.

Neil- Taking U outta here

Avni- Yes If I would have acted stupid in front of everyone then people would have laughed at me

Avni gets teary eyes

Neil looks on

Avni- So thank U Neil.

Neil- U called me Neil

Avni rolls her eyes

Avni- Wait did U laugh at me

Neil- Maybe I did

Avni- What…How dare U laugh at me

Neil- A person has right to laugh at his/her friend right

Neil smiles at Avni

Avni- So real friends from today

Neil- Pakka

Avni- Kaccha!!!

Both laugh

Avni- Fine I’m getting late I’ll leave meet U next time friend

Neil- Same here

Avni gets in the car and leaves

Neil smiles

DD comes over there

DD- Sir!

Neil- Come lets go home

DD- what were U talking with Ananya

Neil- We decided to become friends

DD- Oh…

Neil- What Oh?

Neil lifts his eyebrows

DD- From where did U learn that sir u used to never do that before

Neil remember’s how Avni lifted her eyebrows at him when she got the coffee mustache

Neil smiles- From My New friend

Neil and DD leave

IN AVNI’S House

Neela- How was Ur day

Avni- Good

Neela- Hmm Okay

Avni- Tomorrow I’m going out with Riya

Neela- But where?

Avni- We planned to go for camping for 3 days

Neela- Only U two

Avni- I don’t know properly maybe her friends will come

Neela- Accha then go take some rest now

Avni nods and leaves to her room

IN AVNI’S Room

Avni- Packed all the things.

Avni lays on her bed and drifts to sleep

IN NEIL’s House

Neil- Packed everything. Don’t know why Riya is insisting so much. I would have not gone

Neil lays on his bed

Neil- Even Ali will come tomorrow hope Riya will not fume and one thing I came to know

Neil sits on the bed

Neil- Diksha buha gave Ananya bhaang so that people could make fun of her. But Ananya is not that Bad I guess.

Neil falls asleep

THE NEXT MORNING

Riya is waiting near the Jeep

Riya- Seriously we hired this Jeep for three days. The jeep is here, I’m hear but others aren’t here

Riya kicks the jeep wheel

Neil comes there with DD

Riya-Thank god U came

Ali comes over there

Riya- What is he doing over here

Neil- Riya please….

Riya gets Annoyed

DD- So why wait here come lets leave

Riya- No still one more person should be here

Ali- And who is that?

Riya- None of Ur business dude

Neil- Guys please stop it

DD- So tell who is that?

Avni comes there

Avni- Of’course me

Riya smiles

Ali- Ananya..

Avni smiles at Ali

DD- Oh U Ananya

Avni- Yes me

DD- Where is your BF

Ali looks on shocked

Avni- Yaar I told u…

Riya- Stop it we are getting late

Riya sits in the front seat. Ali and DD sit after her

Avni smiles at Neil

Neil- Hello friend Neil welcomes U here

Avni- Thank U

Both laugh and get in

Neil sits in the driver seat

Avni sits behind with DD and Ali.

They leave in the car

Precap- Avni is lost in the forest. Neil search’s for her.

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32 Comments
  1. Yeah…i want these type of twist over here….well done….and again very very nice chapter

  2. Loved it❤️❤️❤️

  3. Nice

  4. It was awesome I loved it now Neil and Avni are friends wow waiting for the nxt update…..

  5. Manasvi

    Awesome..
    Btw may I know what is your age and where are you from??
    And plzz post soon..
    I m loving it..

    1. Rockingangels

      I’m 18 yrs old now and I’m from Bangalore

      1. Manasvi

        Then, you are my dii..
        So, will you accept me as your young baby sis..
        Btw I m 14 yrs old..

      2. Rockingangels

        Of’course Silly. Btw not really 18… But have completed my 12th. Joined one year early… Don’t wanna say I’m 17 and completed my 12th so fast bcz some of my friends also read this and will call me baby. But I’m your Di my lil Manasvi keep it in mind. I’m 3
        YEARS BIGGER THAN UUUU…. : P

      3. Manasvi

        Well, we both are same..
        I m in 10th and I also joined one year early, coz everyone in my class is one year elder than me!!?
        Happy to get one more elder sis here!!??
        Love you dii..
        Take care??

      4. Rockingangels

        Love U too lil sis..

  6. DramaQueen1004

    Awsum… pls post soon…
    Love u

    1. Rockingangels

      Love U 2 dramaqueen1004

  7. Riyasmiles

    di..it was super fab..
    love uuuu
    keep doing gud work

    1. Rockingangels

      Thanks Riya and Keep smiling always…

  8. Super…..waiting for next episode…… love u……great job…

  9. Sreenandana.suresh

    awesome dear….plz i have a request…make avneil confess their love soon….plz…its a request….ur ff z awesome…no wordzz 2 desribe it…

    1. Rockingangels

      Thank U and sure da

      1. Sreenandana.suresh

        u r welcome….

  10. Hi baby girl.

    1. Rockingangels

      Just shut it janvi.

  11. No. Are U seriously 17 yrs U are still 16 bae.

    1. Rockingangels

      Oh stop it dude.. Only days are left for ma b’day. then I’ll be 17 right…

  12. Ummm niceeeee but I want avni to know about their kiss ????????

  13. It’s fantastic
    I am very glad to know u will be able to post regularly

  14. Ovb

    OMG superb yaar. This is so beautiful hope there are some romantic scenes tommorow!!!!

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