AVNEIL-Hamesha saath saath – Episode 34

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I would like to dedicate today’s episode to someone.It was a girl.Today is her birthday.I got her from TU.One of my sweet friend is you.So I want to wish you..HAPPY BIRTHDAY MY SAMI..Many many happy returns of the day.

Recap:Neil was appointed as Avnith’s PS.

Episode:34:-

Next day.Neil becomes ready to office.But he reached 10:15 at office because of traffic jam.

Neil:May I come in?
Avnith:Yes.

He went inside.

Avnith:Who is this?Sharp 10:15.Mr.I told you..
Neil:Traffic block.
Avnith:I don’t want any explanation.Sharp 10 means sharp 10.What a punctuality.Do one thing leave today & come tomorrow at 10 am in my home.
Neil:Avnith..
Avnith:I said leave.

Neil left.

Neil:Khadoos..

Inside cabin.

Avnith:I knew that Neil you’ll be late.Because you are that same Neil who was on before 6 years.

Next day.Neil reached at office at 9:45.

Receptionist:You are early today.
Neil,:Yes.Avnith?
Receptionist:Time is up but not arrived.

After sometime.

Neil:Yesterday I was late & today..
Receptionist:Sir,are you sure that Avnith told you to come here or home?

Neil thought.

FB:-

Avnith:Leave today & cone tomorrow at 10 am on my home.

FB ends.

Neil:Oh!No..

Neil ran from there.Avnith’s home.

Avnith:Up to this no..

She heard calling bell.

Avnith:Maaji,opened the door.
Servant:Yes child.

She opened the door.Neil came inside taking deep breath.

Avnith:Sharp time.But what you made your condition?You never take bath?
Neil:I forgot that you said me to come here.
Avnith:Is a cheater,no punctuality,no freshness,no memory only one thing had irresponsibility.
Neil:Sorry Avnith.
Avnith:Every time sorry.How much time I want to hear?If you didn’t need this job.Just leave it.
Neil:I’ll never give a chance to angry after this.
Avnith(in mind):Why not Neil?You are going to work with me.
Neil:Can I join?
Avnith:Yes.You had job from Mon- Fri on time 10am-9 pm.Sat & Sun leave.
Neil:Why?
Avnith:If you want to come & you come then work alone.You only do what I said.

Neil reached home.

Neil:What personality yaar?What did he thought about himself?Every time angryness.I’am tired.

After two days.

Avnith:Where is the programme today?
Neil:Pattyala at 6 pm.
Avnith:OK.You can leave.

Neil went outside.

Neil:I can see Avni today.

Evening.Neil saw Avni singing.Reina was with him.Neil become teared.After song Neil went backstage to saw Avni.But he saw she was lefting in a car.Neil followed the car.He overtakes it.Neil can’t saw who was inside car.He picked the hand of the person inside & take him out.

That person:Who are you?What you want?

Neil turned.Its Avnith.They both become shocked.

Avnith:You?How dare you?
Neil:Avni..Avnibus in the car.
Avnith:Who?Are you mad?How dare you to take me here on road?
Neil:Avnith I thought Avni..
Avnith:Shut up just shut up.Avni..Avni..Avni..I told you one time that I never can give the details of the members on my troup.So you chooses this way.You thought that you can get Avni’s details if you become my PS & being with me.Wow!So Mr.Neil Khanna hear perfectly.You are fired just get lost.
Neil:Avnith,nothing like that.Don’t make me fire.
Avnith:I never take my words back & also you never get Avni’s details.

Avnith left.Neil become teared.Avnith met Laksh on Godown.

Avnith:Laksh,you know I made Neil dismissed.
Lakah:Nice.But you thought that he was failed?
Avnith:No.But there is no way now in front of him.He can never get Avni’s details.Because Avni Mehta was not alone.She was dead before 6 years.

Next day.Neil went to Avnith’s cabin.He opened the door.Avni was standing inside of it.They both become shocked.

Receptionist:Neil Sir,..

Neil turned.

Receptionist:You leave from here Sir..Avnith told us to not let you come inside.

Neil looked inside.There was none inside the cabin.

Neil:Avni..There is a girl here.
Receptionist:Noone was there Sir..You go out.

Securities came & they took him out.They make him fall down.He fell in front of Avnith’s legs.Everyone surrounded.Neil stood up.

Avnith:Stop it.What’s going on here?You?What are you doing here?
Neil:Avnith,I to you..
Avnith:Shut up.I dismissed you right?So why?Get lost.
Neil:Give me one chance to explain.
Avnith:No never.
Neil:I didn’t done anything.
Avnith:Nothing?Everybody please listen.This is Neil Khanna.He cheated his own wife & take her upto the stage of suicide.She was dead.Now he saw another girl on my group.So he want to know about her.So he became my PS.When I caught.He was saying that he did nothing.So everyone say what I want to do?So its better Neil leave.

Avnith left.Everyone looked at Neil.He felt shame.He become teared.He left.Avnith came on balcony.His face become red because of angryness.His blue eyes flowed.

Avnith:Did you felt pain?You are exposed in front of everyone.You must to know Neil.Before 6 years how much pain was afford by that girl.I’ll make you feel it.
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Precap:Avnith fell on pool.He can’t swim.Neil saw that.He make Avnith save.He was unconscious.

Neil:Avnith..Avnith..

Neil took Avnith’s cap.His vigg fell down.Her hair fell down.At a moment Avnith became Avni.Neil become shocked.

Neil:Avni..

No words can describe his happiness.
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Hope you all enjoyed the episode.Sorry for the small update.Thanks to all those who read,commented & supported my previous episode.Sorry for the mistakes.Keep reading,keep commenting,keep loving.

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16 Comments
  1. It’s awesome.keep updating

    1. Ahk26barbie

      Thank you Khyathi.

  2. Today episode is very good yaar.I like it.keep writting.

    1. Ahk26barbie

      Thank you Irem.

  3. Laddo

    The way you kept Neil’s emotions in the ff it is really heart touching… I just loved your ff by core … Please update next part as soon as possible…. Please read my ff too named I’m incomplete without you 😍😍

    1. Ahk26barbie

      Thank you Laddo.I’ll try to read your ff.

  4. Finally neil found out his avni…. Wow…. Luv u….. Sanjuuuuu keep rocking

    1. Ahk26barbie

      Thank you Fasy.Love you a lot.

  5. Wow. this is too good to interesting. I just love it the way you think to explain all the situation with proper emotions. But it’s still sad to see the condition of neil. At the end portion means precap which is going really interesting to read. All the best sister.

    1. Ahk26barbie

      Thank you Bhai.

  6. Can’t wait for the next update post poon

    1. Ahk26barbie

      I’ll try to update soon Aisha.

  7. I don’t have words to say.well I love to read fan fictions of avneil alot but my favourite one is this one.
    And about the epi i just love angry avni/avnith😈 and his/her attitude😡 precap increased my interest more n more.

    Plzz update daily.
    Lots of love by Ridhima

    1. Ahk26barbie

      Thank you Ridhi.So lovely comment.Happy to hear it.

  8. Chechi… Super!!! Enikku othiri eshatapettu… Engane chechiku ethrem nallathayi ezhuthan kazhiyunnu??? I loved it alot… Keep updating chechi.. Love u loads!!! This is me pavi… Sry for commenting as an unregistered member…. Update soon

    1. Ahk26barbie

      Thank you Muthe Pavi.I wrote this much beautifully because of you everyone’s support.Love you a lot Muthe.

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