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AVNEIL-Hamesha saath saath -Episode 2 & 3

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2001.A school reopening day.One school.Reopening was celebrating there.1st standard.Children are smiling & playing.A mother took her son to the class.Teacher take him inside.He started to cry.Teacher make him sit on a chair.Near of him a girl was sitting.There was no other seat on the class.

Girl:Why are you crying?

But he didn’t stop his cry.

Girl:See.Why are you crying?Look at me.How happy I’am.Are boys wil cry?Yaar,stop crying.

His tears became low a bit.

Girl:Don’t cry like this.Good children never cry?You are a good boy.Wright?
Boy:Yes.
Girl:So don’t cry.Ok?
Boy:Ok.

Teacher asked everyones name.The chance came to them.

Girl:I’am Avni Mehta.
Teacher:Ok.You?
Boy:Neil Khanna.

Teacher went for next.

Avni:Hello.I’am Avni.
Neil:Neil Khanna.
Avni:Now you are a good boy.Friends?
Neil:Ok.Friends.

They shaked hands.

Avni:If you felt to cry.Come near of me.I’ll make you fine.
Neil:Ok.

In that evening.Avni’s home.

Ashish:How was your first day Avni?
Avni:It was good Papa.
Ashish:Ok.Asha,where is Aman?
Asha:He went for playing.
Ashish:Ok.So..did you get friends?
Avni:Yes Papa.I got a friend.It is boy.He was…
Ashish:Avni,Hear what I’am saying.
Avni:Yes Papa.
Ashish:You are a girl.Isn’t it?
Avni:Yes.
Ashish:So girls must make friendship with girls not with boys.
Asha:If a girl made friendship with boy people would think bad.
Avni:So you both?
Asha:We are elder.Wright?When you become big.At that time we’ll gave you a good friend.At that time people will never think bad.
Avni:Ok.But Bhai?
Ashish:Avni,Aman is your brother not friend.So don’t try to talk with that boy from tomorrow.
Avni:Ok Maa-Papa

They gave a kiss to her cheeks.
At that time Neil’s home.

Neil:Papa,I got a friend.When I was crying my friend take care of me.
Prakash:You got a friend fastly?
Shwetha:That one take care of our son & make him fine.That boy did a great job.
Neil:Mom…
Prakash:You can make friends as you like but only with boys.
Neil:Why?
Shwetha:Because you are a boy.Boys make friendship with boys & girls with girls.

Neelima came inside.

Neelima:Oh!Neil.Hai..
Neil:Hai di..
Prakash:Is your friend is a girl?
Neil:No Papa never.
Shwetha:Stay away from girls & don’t try to make friendship with them.Ok?
Neil:Ok Mom.
Neelima:What is this Mom?He is a child.
Shwetha:So?We must take care from now.

Nextday.Neil entered at class.He came near the next which yesterday he sat.Avni stood up from there.They looked eo.Teacher entered at class.

Children:Good morning teacher.
Teacher:Good morning.Sit.

Children sat avoidind Avneil.

Teacher:What happened?Sit.
Avni:Teacher,I didn’t want to sit near him.
Neil:Me too.
Teacher:But why?
Avni:My parents prevent me to make friendship with a boy and stays near him.
Neil:Mine too.
Teacher:God..in this age?Do onething.Now sit together.There is no balance seat.At interval come near me.Ok?
Avneil:Ok.

Interval time.Outside under a tree teacher & Avneil.

Teacher:Ok.Now first Avni.You say.What did said your parents?
Avni:They said that girls only make friendship with girls & boys with boys.If I did friendship with boys people will think wrong about me.
Teacher:And you Neil?
Neil:My parents also told like this.
Avni:They also said to me when I become big they’ll found a boy for me for friendship.At that time people will never think wrong.
Teacher:God!What was said to this children in this age?Oh!
Neil:Teacher,I want an other seat.
Avni:Me too.Otherwise they become angry.
Teacher:Listen.Are you both have any difference between you?
Neil:Means?
Teacher:Would you like to make friendship?
Avni:Teacher……
Teacher:Leave about your parents.Listen to your heart then say.Would you like to become parted?
Neil:No.
Teacher:See children.There is no problem between a girl-boy friendsip as like your parents said.People never think bad about them.If they make more relation than a friendship at that time people will felt bad.
Neil:Whats that teacher?
Teacher:You can’t know about it now.When you both become big you’ll get to know about it.At that time remember my words.Ok?
Avni:Ok.
Teacher:Very good.Now shake your hands.

They shaked hands.

Avni:Teacher,but parents?
Teacher:There was a way for that.
Neil:What?
Teacher:Don’t talk eo infront of parents.Behave like strangers.If they ask you told to them that you met eo but never talk as like they said.
Avneil:Ok.
Teacher:From now you are sincere friends.You both are not Avni & Neil.You are AVNEIL.Friendship & also near always.

After some days.Parents meetting.

Asha:Avni,You scored good marks.Continue like this.
Avni:Yes Maa..

They met Shwetha & Neil.

Asha:Hai Shwetha ji.
Shwetha:Hai Asha ji.Your daughter.
Asha:Yes Avni & you..?
Shwetha:My son Neil.
Asha:So your children?
Shwetha:A daughter Neelima studying in 5th standard.2nd one son Neelesh studying in 2nd standard.Neil in 1st .
Asha:My son Aman also in 5th.Avni un 1st.
Shwetha:So ok.Bye.
Asha:Bye.

They parted to two way.

Asha:You didn’t know him?
Avni:I saw him.But you said it.

This time Neil & Shwetha.

Shwetha:What?
Neil:No friendship with girls.So don’t know.
Shwetha:Good boy.

After parents left Avneil came near teacher.

Teacher:What an acting?
Neil:We will do anything to save our friendship teacher.
Avni:Whats wrong in this?
Teacher:Nothing.Stay like this.

Teacher leaved.Avneil hugged.
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Precap:-After 15 years.Avneil’s entry.
……………………………………………………………………… Sorry guys.I know its a long episode.I want to end the childhood track.So I updated long.So sorry.If did any mistake please forgive me.
Thanks to all those who commented in my first episode.Keep reading,keep commenting,keep loving.

16 Comments
  1. Awesome. Update soon!

    1. Ahk26barbie

      Sure.Thank you.

    2. Namekaran

  2. Fatimak18

    It’s awesome πŸ‘
    Loved it so much
    Update soon
    Can’t wait for avneil πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

    1. Ahk26barbie

      Thank you.I ‘ll try to update daily.

  3. thank you for such a nice ff that you are writing. keep on good work.

    1. Ahk26barbie

      Thanks for such a sweet comment.

  4. Plz update soon

  5. Zaina

    Dear…. we like long episodes… so u dont worry… luved the epi …. superbly fantasticoooooo….

  6. Ahk26barbie

    Thank you soooooo much

  7. Sweetgirl7

    This was the best ff i ever read till now . Waiting for 2000 chapter from your side. Lovely episodes . And good to see you mad ea leap in teir story. Awesome writing. Keep continuing this very long . Hi dear . My name is Samiksha. Nicely written. Good luck. And i promise that i would always comment on your ff and other works . And do keep reading and commenting on my ff too dear

    1. Ahk26barbie

      Thank dear.The first coment I read so intresting.Thank you so much.I send private msg in your account.Go and see

      1. Sweetgirl7

        I saw it dear

  8. damn good writing art….KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK DEAR πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ˜€ :*

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