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avneil ff: kyun main jaagoon (episode 4)

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This is my ff, hope you like it.

Finally I back with the chapter. Its a mahaepisode. Its long very long in comparison with my rest chapters. Bear with me, and sorry for so long one

The lines in black colour are for what Author is thinking and speaking, [ ]ones are for song and ‘ ‘ or( ) is for what Neel is saying.

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No one’s POV

The scene starts with all the khanna family members except neel sitting for breakfast at the dining table. Bheema comes with the newspaper, and hands it over to prakash. He sees the first page and his eyes widens and bebe notices his expression and snatches the newspaper, and sees the article whose title is, ‘new love birds in city, ACP neel khanna and rhea Mehta’. She reads the heading to everyone, all are equally shocked. The paper then passes to everyone, and they also see it.

Rhea comes and breaks the silence by saying “What’s up everyone, oh sandwiches my favourite”, she takes her hand near sandwich plate to take one sandwich but Bebe holds her hand and swings her hand away and then she stands up, watching bebe everyone stands up too.

“Kya hai ye”, bebe asks her showing the newspaper article. After reading the headline rhea says “I don’t know ki ye sab kya h, mene kuch nhi kiya h bebe, aap apne pute se kyo nhi puchti”.

Shweta roared “Oh u silly lilly shut ups, tumhari himmat bhi kaise hui mere tillu ke paas bhi bhatkane ki” shweta is now feeling disgust of her partner in crime.

“Aunty me sach bol rhi hu, trust me” Rhea pleaded, she only acts to plead, inside she is burning with rage that how can shweta leave her side.

“Shut ups” Shweta replied

“Trust me please” Rhea says

Neel makes his entry in the scene, he claps and says “wow” after a pause he continues “Rhea you think ki ye log tum par trust karenge, jinhone apni bahu par trust nhi kiya vo tum par kya karenge. Second thing, Ananya ke saath jab ye sab ho rha tha tab to tumhe bahut maza aa rha tha na, now also enjoy. And last thing rhea, tum kitne achche se jhoot bolti hu. Amazing I am impressed. Tumhari bhen to itne achche se sach bhi bol nhi paati jitney achche se tum jhoote bol leti hu”

“Ye ye kya bol rhe ho neel” rhea says

“Sach” neel smirks, and then he calls for DD

DD comes out of nowhere and goes towards the tv and connects it with a pen-drive.

“Ji sir, ho gaya” DD says

“good, now come on everyone, I have a little surprise” neel says as he walks

Everyone is thinking what is neel talking about.

When everyone reaches near the tv, the video starts to play. Neel is seen, perfectly normal; not drunk. On the centre table there is a bottle of alcohol, and a glass half filled with alcohol. He signs the camera, and after few seconds his doorbell rings. He stumbles towards the door, as if he is actually very very drunk. He opens the door, and says “Rhea” very innocently, and tries to keep his eyes open, like it is very difficult to keep it open.

“Oh neel ye kya halat ho gai h tumhari” rhea says with fake concern

Neel places his hand on the door, like he is using the door to support his weight, and asks rhea “Usne aise kyo kiya”

“Neel don’t worry sab theek ho jaega, chalo” rhea says while giving support to neel

Neel questions her “Kaise?” she makes him walk to the sofa and then makes him sit

“Me pani lati hu” she says innocently and goes towards the kitchen

Meanwhile neel acts to sleep

Rhea come back with a glass of water and says “Neel ye lo, neel,” she waves her hand over his face, “so gaya h lagta h chalo achcha hi h, ab plan b ki baari h, jisse ananya neel ki life se humesha humesha ke liye chali jaegi” rhea smirks.

( after listening to rhea I am feeling disgusted, how can she stoop so low. Kitna helpless feel kar rha ho me. Avni ki purity prove karne ke liye mujhe rhea ko bhi bear karna padhega. Man to kar rha h ki abhi isse maza chkhao but proof bhi to chahiye sabke liye) in anger he clenches his fist.

Her phone rings

“Ab ye shweta aunty kyo call kar rhi h, phir apni taarif karengi” rhea says and annoyance can clearly been seen on her face. She unwillingly picks the call. And turns so that now her back is facing neel

“Hello aunty, aapne kaise phone kiya” rhea says the words with extra sugar coating.

“Ha me vahi hu” she replies

“Ab plan b ka time h, neel so gya h”

“Itni jaldi bhool gai aunty plan b”

“I know signature bhi lene the divorce paper pe, but agar hum photos send karenge papers ke saath to avni apne aap hi sign kardegi phir un signature ko dekh kar neel sign karde ga”

“Aakhir idea h kiska, mera ofcourse best to hoga hi, all the credit goes to me”

“Aunty aap bas bebe , maddy bua aur kareena ko le kar gai aur sahi time par lekar aai, aur jo aag mene lagai thi usme aapne bas ghee daalne ka kaam kiya h aur kuch nhi.”

(iska matlab mom aapne rhea ka saath diya, kaise mom, aapne kyo, I know you hate her but you also love your tillu, why did you try to snatch his happiness, his avni from him) after listening to rhea neel went numb.

“Bhuleye mat aunty ki vo davai mene hi avni ke banae soup me dali thi, jisse uski tabiyat bahut kharab ho gai thi, bechari, uske baad mene hi ali ko bola tha avni ke paas jane ke liye, mene hi police ko ghar par bulaya tha. Sabke saamne mene scene banaya tha ki ananya characterless h, aur aapne bas prove kiya. Bechari ne koi galati bhi nhi ki thi aur itna bura ho gaya uske saath. Sabko laga ki vo pregnant h jo ki vo nhi thi, uska aur ali ka affair chal rha h, jab ki aisa kuch nhi h, ki sab ki piche avni aur ali close aae the aisa bhi kuch nhi tha, hua ye tha ki avni phone uthane gai aur usse chakkar aa gaye and ali usse leta rha tha bas. Bechari fas gai humare plan me”

“Sab kaam mene kiya tha aur aap bol rhi h ki aapne kiya tha”

“vo to h, major kaam to aapki bahu ne kiya tha, meri jagha vo soup pi gai, aapke plan se to mene hi bemaar padhna tha, but u know na ki vo kitni achchi h, soup ki testing bebe ki saamne usne ki. Achcha h apne bol diya tha ki soup mene banaya h, agar sach pata chalta ki vo ananya ne banaya h to bebe bimaar padh jati. Mere soup me vo chance nhi lena chahti thi, isliye ananya ne testing ki”

“aap uski tension mat lo, vo jaldi hi is ghar se aur neel ki life se dur chali jaegi, then me aa jaongi, aur phir sab theek hoga”

“aap to bas party ki planning karo aunty, aur neel ko to me phasa hi longi, sahara to chahiye hi hoga, akhir uski so called wifey ne usse dhoka jo diya h” Rhea laughs at this sentence

“chalo aunty me rkhti hu, plan b bhi to pura karna h”

“ha aunty I know I know, bye”

Then she cuts the call and turn towards neel so that she is facing him. She goes near him and hugs him and clicks photos.

She says “ab ye photo kal subha me avni ko send karongi, phir avni gone and neel mera hoga”, then she smirks.

Rhea shakes neel to wake him up, but fails, then she sprinkles water on his face and says with lots of concern “neel utho, ghar jana h”. In this attempt she passes. Neel slowly opens his eyes, rhea makes him stand and gives him supports and takes him out of his apartment.

And the video ends.

Everyone is shocked after seeing the video, they are not able to digest that what happened yesterday was a plan of rhea and shweta. For rhea they can still digest but for shweta they just can’t.

Bebe just send shweta death glares because she is just too startle to say anything. It looks like she wants to scold her bahu but her voice is not obeying her, her words are trapped inside, like there is no way for them to escape her mouth. Prakash is feeling disgust of his own shweta ji, whom he trusted and loved and respected so much. For the first time in his life he felt that bebe is correct about shweta. Maddy and kareena too felt disgusted. Neel, he looked broken.

“Rhea tumhe zara si bhi sharam nhi aai apni bhen ke saath aisa karne me, kya bigaada tha usne tumhara” he says, and at this point tears starts to escape his eyes.

Seeing neel cry, even Shweta’s rock heart melts, she also starts to cry, now she is feeling ashamed of what she has done. In her selfishness she forgets to see his happiness. She ignored her tillu’s happiness. She snatched it, and because of her only her son is so broken. She felt disgusted. “kyo me itni selfishs ban gai ki me apne bete ki happiness nhi dekh pai, ki uski khushi avni ke saath h, ki juhi ke jane ke baad neel ko ab jo khusiya mile thi vo mene cheene ki koshish ki. Juhi ka jaane ke baad ab mene tillu ko itna tuta hua dekha h, maaf kardena mujhe tillu” she mutters it to herself.

“Kya bigaada tha usne, ye tum puch rhe ho neel” rhea says

“Bolna kya bigaada tha meri bahu ne” bebe shouted at rhea

“Usne mujhe se neel ko cheen liya” rhea answered

“Cheen liya??” bebe asks

“Vo meri shaadi me meri jagha baith gai thi, meri shaadi me” rhea shouts

“Sunny ye kya bol rhi h” bebe asks

“Batai na uncle” rhea smirks

“Bebe “ shweta starts to speak but bebe cuts her in between “Tu chup kar shweta mene tujhe kaha kuch bolne ko, aur jo tune kiya h uske baad mujhe teri na koi baat sunni h aur na tujhse koi baat karni h, sunny bol”

“Bebe vo, neel ki shaadi rhea se hone vali thi” prakash finally says the truth

“Phir ananya kaha se aai h” bebe asks

“Vo chupke se meri jagha baith gai, aur uski ma ne mujhe room me lock kar diya tha” rhea says

“Meri tillu ke shaadi dhoke se hui h” bebe perplexed

Maddy and kareena gasp when they hear rhea. Suddenly Amol comes in the scene with his luggage and interrupted “Di batana hi h to pura sach bataona” and then he smirks

“Amol chup” rhea mutteres

“Tu chup kar” bebe yelled at rhea

“Bebe, di ne shaadi ki neel jiju se but prakash uncle ko fraud se bachane ke liye, meri dadi yani dayawanti Mehta ye shaadi karwa kar paise lekar bhaag ne vali thi, aur rhea tum to khud hi shaadi se bhaag gai thi” amol says

“Ye kya ho rha h sunny tune mujhe bataya kyo ni” bebe shouts

“Bebe me batane vala tha but kuch na kuch hua ki ye baat slip ho gai” prakash tries to convince her

Bebe was still trying to gulp what she has just heard. Suddenly something came in Prakash’s mind and he breaks the silence by saying “Puttar ye news to ab tak pure shehar ne dekhli hogi, kya sochegi ananya aur uski family”

“Nhi dad, ye article bas humare ghar ke liye hi print hua tha, mera ek friend h newpaper company me, usne bas mere liye front page ye vala print kiya h, bheema didi newspaper lana aaj ka”

Bheema comes with the newspaper.

**FLASHBACK**

Bheema was going to the front door to get the newspaper but she stops and turns when she hears her name. It was DD who calls her name.

DD gives her the paper and says “ye le jie aur ja kar prakash uncle ko de di jie, jab neel sir bolae to aaj ka asli vala paper ja kar honhe de dena, theek h”

Bheema nodes and takes the paper with her.

** END OF FLASHBACK**

“Dad agar me aisa karta to mujhe me aur rhea me kya fark rhe jata, aur me ek sacha mard ho, aurato ki izzat kaise karte h ye mujhe aata h” Neel said

Prakash says “I am proud of you neel” , Neel smiles and turns towards bebe

Neel asks “bebe aap to badi h phir aapne aisa kyo kiya?” his eyes are still moist.

Bebe replents “Galti ho gai thi mujhse ki mene ananya ki baat nhi suni aur shweta ki baat sun kar uska saath de diya tha” bebe starts to cry too. Seeing her cry neel says “Ab to aap ko pata chal gaya hoga ki av-ananya ki koi galti nhi thi”

“Ha puttar, humari galti h, hume aisa nhi karna chahie tha, maaf karde hume” bebe then folds her hands infront of neel. He holds her hands and says “Maafi aap ananya se mange”

Bebe says “Ha puttar me uski gunehgaar ho, me usse maafi mangogi”

Bebe shouts “Ananya”

Neel shouts “Ananya”

Prakash says “Bebe” but he stops as he sees Neel going towards staircase

Prakash asks “Neel kaha ja rha h”

Neel says while he continue to walk “Ananya ko lene”

Prakash says “vo ja chuki h neel” everyone gasps

Neel abruptly stops and turns towards his father and asks in a hope that what he heard seconds ago was wrong “Ja chuki h?”

“Ha vo kal raat hi ghar chod kar ja chuki h” prakash says

Bebe asks “Tune use roka kyo nhi sunny”

Prakash says “Kis mu se rokta me usse bebe, ki yaha ruk ja jaha uski itni insult hui h, agar humari beti hoti aur uske saath aisa hua hota to kya hum usse vaha rokne ke liye bolte, nhi na”

Bebe looks at the floor, she can’t face her own son after all what she has done was pathetic. Her son was saying the truth, of which she was ashamed.

“Jiju di ne kaha tha ki vo kuch same akele rhna chati h” Amol tells

Neel asks him with a huge smile in a hope that avni might have told her location and he will go and get her back to him “Amol teri baat hui h ananya se”

“Jiju subha di ka phone aaya tha, unhone jyada kuch nhi bataya ” amol says , and neel’s smile vanishes

Neela shouts “Neel”

“Neela ma” neel says and runs towards her and hugs her. The way a lost child hugs her mother when he finally meets her.

“Vo chali gai ma” neel cries.

“Neel kya h ye, kaha h meri bachhi” neela asks

Neel tells “Vo ye ghar chod kar chali gai h”

“Pata h mujhe , message kiya tha usne , par kyo” at this she pushes neel a bit to break the hug, it pricked her heart when she does it but, she just want to stop neel from crying, he was crying like a baby. She wipes off his tears.

She sits on the sofa and neel sits on the floor hugging neela and putting his head in her lap. Still crying. Neela was creasing his hair. Everyone too is sitting on sofa except rhea and amol.

Amol tells her everything. Neela is highly shocked of what has happened when she was away. But she is proud of her neel, that he stood with her bachha. But she was sad too that her bachha had gone.

After listening Neela yells at rhea “Aur tum yaha kya kar rhi ho abhi bhi, just get lost”

Bebe says “Ja yaha se, nhi to dhakke mar ke nikalongi, aur phir kabhi mat aaio yaha”

Rhea says “Ja rhi hu me” and she walks out of the gate

Neela prays “He bhagwan, kahi kuch galat na karle meri bachhi”

Neel finally says something “Neela ma vo strong h vo kuch galat nhi kregi”

Neela says“Neel mujhe lagta h ki avni ye shehra chod kar jane ka sochegi”

Neel agrees “DD pata karo ki uske naam par konsi ticket book hui h”

Bebe says”He bhagwaan meri bahu mil jae” even shweta prays for avni’s well being.

( NEEL’s POV

‘Jis cheez ka dar tha vahi hua, chali gai tum mujhe chod kar. ‘Kyo chali gai tum avni’ neel screams mentally ‘kyo’.Dar lag rha tha ki kahi tumhe innocent prove karne ke chakkar me me tumhe kho to nhi dunda. Aur vahi hua. Kho diya h mene tumhe. Me nhi kho sakta tumhe avni. I love you avni. Vapis aajao. Please. Aur Maaf kardena mujhe.’

[Mujhe yunhi karke khwaabon se judaa
Jaane kahan chup ke baitha hai khuda
Jaanu na main kab hua khud se gumshuda
Kaise jiyun rooh bhi mujhse hai judaa ]

‘Kya galat kiya tha mene, jo tumne aisa kiya. Kyo ek baar bhi mujhe par vishvas nhi kiya. Ki me tumhara vahi neel ho, jisne Har baar saath diya tumhara, dayawanti Mehta se bhi lad gaya me tumhare liye, tumhe insaaf dilane ke liye, sach ke liye. Phir aaj kyo tumhe laga ki me tumhe akela chod dunga. ‘ he crying continuously

Neela’s saree is wet because of the tears, and still neel is continuously crying. Now his mothers both neela and shweta’s eyes are bloodshot red due to crying. Neel’s eyes were closed.

[ Kyun meri raahein, mujhse pooche ghar kahan hai
Kyun mujhse aake, dastak pooche dar kahan hai
Raahein aisi jinki manzil hi nahin
Dhoondho mujhe ab main rehta hoon wahin
Dil hai kahin aur dhadkan hai kahin
Saansein hai magar kyun zinda main nahin]

‘mana mene ki humara rishta normal nhi tha but kya vo itna kamzoor h ki tum usse ek hi pal me tut do avni. We had a great bond, so deep connection, mana mene ki confession nhi kiya tha mene apne pyar ka but kya tumhe laga nhi ki me tumse kitna pyar karta hua. Sab ko dekhta h avni, ki how much I love you. Phir tum mujhe aur mere dil ko kyo tod kar chali gai’

[ Rait bani haathon se yun beh gayi
Takdeer meri bikhri har jagah
Kaise likhun phir se nayi daastan
Gham ki siyahi dikhti hai kahan
Aahein jo chuni hain meri thi raza
Rehta hoon kyun phir khud se hi khafa
Aisi bhi hui thi mujhse kya khata
Tune jo mujhe di jeenay ki saza ]

‘mene hi kaha tha na ki me kabhi tumhara saath nahi chodoga to aaj bhi mene apna promise pura kiya h avni, nhi choda h tumhe aakela. Kya Galati h meri, bhagwan kyo mere saath aisa hota h ki jinse bhi me pyaar karta hu vo mujhe akele chod dete h. Pehle aapne mujhse juhi ko le liya. Mene kuch nhi kaha jyada. ab avni chali gai meri life se. Avni ke bina ye zindagi zindagi nhi lagti h. Usne mujhe vapis jina sikhaya tha. Ab aap mujhe please meri zindagi vapis de dijiye bhagwan’

[ Banday tere maathe pe hain jo kheenchay
Bas chand lakeeron jitna hai jahaan
Aansu mere mujhko mita te hain rahe
Rab ko hukm na mit ta hai yahan
Raahein aisi jinki manzil hi nahin
Dhoondho mujhe ab main rehta hoon wahin
Dil hai kahin aur dhadkan hai kahin
Saansien hai magar kyun zinda main nahin ]

‘Kyo bhagwan kyo kar rhe aap aise mere saath. kyun meri kismet me pyar nhi’ and he cried more loudly

[ Kyun main jaagoon, aur woh sapne bo raha hai
Kyun mera rab yun, aankhien khole so raha hai
Kyun main jaagoon ]

now his breathe is not normal he starts hyperventilating. And seeing his condition both of his mothers panicked.

“Bachha sab theek ho jaega” neela tries to console him

Shweta runs to him and says“ vo nhi jaegi tujhe chod kar, aa gaegi” and hugs neel

“Sach??” neil asks

Both of his mother says”ha”

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“Sir avni neel khanna ke naam se Mumbai to Delhi ki train ki ticket h and delhi to new York ki plane ki, 8 baje ki train h” DD tells

“Neel time kam h, jaldi chalo” Neela says

Everyone runs to the cars and sit. Neel races the car on the road. __________________________________________________________________________________

This is my avneil ff. Hope you guys like this, don’t forget to add and comment down below please. As for the silent readers, please please please I beg comment.

Sorry for any grammatical error or any other error.

Thank you for reading

Love you all

Mehak

14 Comments
  1. awesome mind blowing .
    i was very happy when i read ur msg that it gonna be long .
    yrr try to be regular .I always wait for ur update.
    and yaaa plzz make their confession soon or show some cute moment .
    pllzzz be regular .

    1. Mehak

      Thank you so much…. i will try to regular but my schedule is very busy… but i will try.. wait for the next one… maybe your one of the wish come true

  2. nice n exciting ff .. but same story as naamkaran 🙁 ..

    1. Mehak

      Thank you so much… yeah a bit same because i like this track… but it will have some different angle

  3. Please can you write in English as it’s difficult for some of us to read.BTW loving your story💜

    1. Mehak

      Thank you so much…. i will try to write next one with English translation

  4. Yeah plz write in English ..it will easy to read..nd waiting for d next episode

    1. Mehak

      I will try to write in English in next episode… will try to update asap

  5. Namekaran

    1. Mehak

      Sorry but i didn’t get what you wanna say

  6. please write in english

    1. Mehak

      I will try in the next episode

  7. awesome..mind blowing…. superb…..
    NYC thinking….. please update regularly…. very excited for next one

    1. Mehak

      Thank you so much…. i will try to update asap

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