AvNeil Drabble: Goodbye (Part 2)

Technically Not a drabble coz it exceeds the word limit but a concluding part of this story..
How is it

Neel cries seeing avni’s condition. Even the elders eyes gets moist and neela is controlling her tears. He goes to her and checks her nerves. He lifts her to go to the doctor.
Neel says “i wouldnt let you die you will stay with me”

Avni says “ofcourse i will. you cant get rid of me this easily.” And she laughs

These words that escape her mouth shocked everyone.
Neel looks at her blankly and then smiles. He twirls.
And says “i am so happy. I should be angry on you for doing this prank but still i am more happy seeing you alive”

Avni says “this was your test and punishment”

Neel says “please don’t do this again. I would  die”
She places finger on his mouth and makes him quiet.
Avni says “don’t say that”
Neel says “i am sorry for today and i will never leave you forever”
Avni says “i love you”
Neel says “i love you too”.
And he kisses her forehead and their family admires their love and pray for their togetherness.

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  1. Oh! Thanks a ton for this! I should be angry too, but I’m so happy for this sweet ending that I think I can gloss over it ?☺️

    1. Mehak

      Thank you so much dear.. i am glad that you like this 🙂

  2. This is really good I thought you would not finish it but very good why don’t you write an ff. well done post soon

    1. Mehak

      Thank you so much dear… will try.. time makes me helpless sometimes.. will post something soon 🙂

  3. Wow. This is short but wonderful. Within few sentences you clarify your concept in a lovely manner. truly speaking that your beautiful storyline’s concept touches my heart. Even I can able feel & realize the emotions of avneil just because of your splendid concept. Best of luck Mehak.

    1. Mehak

      Thank you so much … Thank you very much for such words of appreciation..
      Thank you 🙂

  4. mehak where is other ffs.. kismat n kyu main jaagoon..i am waiting for that

    1. Mehak

      Sorry dear for not updating them.. but i promise you will find both kyun main jaagoon and kismat updates by sunday..
      Actually i am very busy these days.. also have so much writing works ongoing simultaneously. So sorry for updating it late

    1. Mehak

      Thank you so much dear 🙂

  5. Aarti32

    Dat was cute

    1. Mehak

      Thank you so much dear.. 🙂

  6. Vibhu

    perfect ending
    loved it

    1. Mehak

      thank you so much dear 🙂

    1. Mehak

      thank you so much dear 🙂

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