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Asya and Huyaan : A delicate relation (Episode 23)

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So guys I am back, with the 23rd episode of my FF “Asya and Huyaan:A delicate relation” I hope you all are doing well…Guys I am slightly disappointed with the decreasing comments, but I am not ending this FF because I am writing it for those who like to read my FF. Where are you guys, Maya, Milly, Nahiii, Mahira, Cutie pie, Sam, Barkat imam, I hope you guys are reading my FF….

Before starting I would like if you guys read the FFs of my friends, written beautifully;

1)Sanam aur aahil – Eh kahani hai 2 lafzon ki (by Sunehri)
2)Love starts in Airlines (swasan,raglak,asya,Arshi) (by Sunehri)

3)Destiny vs Love (Thahaan…Tiran…Taharth…Pyaar…Ki) (by Nuszz)
4)Qubool Hai because we love each like Beintehaa (by Nuszz)

5)Mujhe Mohabbat mein sab Qubool Hai (by Sarah)

6)Pyaar mein Sab Qubool Hai (by Patakha Princess)

7)My layered demeanour (by Saya)
8)My Life’s Miracle (by Rina Sivaguru)

9)Beintehaa…Qubool Hai (by Halima)

10)One more chance – Once Again (by Fatarajo)

Pardon me if I am forgetting any name….

*In today’s episode a new entry will be seen (in FB) of my friend Fatarajo who will be performing a negative role (she will be part of my FF I guess after 40 – 45 episodes)

Recap: All play Love Test….

Episode 23:

The scene begins at Najma’s room where she is weeping at a corner and repeating, “I hate you Imraan , I hate you!”

A FB is shown….
Najma and Imraan are college-mates…they were in love, and all was going well, when one day Najma sees Imraan with a girl, who was hugging him…Najma rushes and pushes that girl away from him..

Girl: Who the hell!!
Najma: How dare you even touch him!
Girl: Why can’t I touch him…and who are you to question me?
Najma: Imraan , who is this girl , and what are you doing with her?!?
Imraan: Voh…
Girl: Hi, I am Filza , Filza Adeeb (played by my awesome friend Fatarajo) and can’t you see we are GF and BF!
Najma: Ohhhh…Just shut up! And for your kind information I am talking to Imraan not to you!!
Filza: Imraan , I am bearing too much of insult just throw this girl out!
Najma: Yes, he will indeed throw out but not me , you!
Filza: How dare you!!
Imraan: Just shut up both of you! Filza you leave I’ll catch you up later…I have to talk to her!
Filza: Ok I am leaving, Love you Jaan!! (She leaves giving a flying kiss while Najma looks on in disgust)
Najma: Now will you please tell me what was going on here!
Imraan: Look Najma , Filza and I are in relationship and you heard it right she is my girlfriend!
Najma: WHAT!?!?!!!! But you loved me Imraan, Imraan just say once that this all is a lie, I will accept it as a nightmare! We will begin a fresh start! How can you forget our love!
Imraan: Look Najma , sometimes spending time with each other we feel as we love the one but it is not necessary that it is love always! I never loved you, it was just, INFATUATION!!
Najma: How can you do this to me! You know what; I was going to talk to Bhaijaan and Ammi about our marriag! And you!!
Imraan:WHAT!!!!????!!! Are you out of your mind…How can you even think about it…Look I didn’t want to say but I never loved you instead I was passing time with you, and you!! Look it’s all over, it’s done!! (He moves ahead, but turns and says..) And never ever show me your stupid face again! You bl**dy, idiot!

He leaves; as he leaves Filza comes to Najma and makes her fun…

Filza: Ohhhhhh……Someone ditched you… You know what dear fellow I am feeling pity for you…But Imraan is a guy who only knows how to use girls…And when he is done with one, he throws that poor girl as a trash…he takes girls as tissue paper, and girls like you fall in his trap and thinks to make him as your “Sartaj” (Husband)

Najma without saying a single word leaves from there in tears….

FB Ends…

Najma continues crying…..

The scene shifts at Imraan’s room where he is seen roaming here and there…He says to himself, “I know Najma what I did with you was wrong but I have repented for it, I have understand that I love you only!! It has been 3 years since you have left my life but by god not a single day of mine passes without your thoughts…My each dream, each day, each moment is incomplete without you…Please come back in my life!!”

*Next day…..

All are assembled for breakfast; Najma comes and sits beside Zoya. She seems to be lost which Zoya notices…

Zoya: Najma, you okay??

No reply….Zoya places a hand on Najma’s shoulder and she comes back to senses…

Zoya: What happened Najma??
Najma(nervously):Nothing…Nothing
Zoya: Okay…Please pass me the Achaar (Pickle)

Najma passes her salad….

Zoya:Najma, I asked for Achaar not for salad!
Najma (tensely): Ohhh…Ss…Sorry!
Zoya:It’s okay, Nuszz, you pass me the Achaar..
Nuszat:Yeah sure, dear!!

Najma’s phone rings and the name, “Imraan” flashes…She gets more tensed…and place it on silent…

Zoya:Najma, why aren’t you picking up the phone?
Najma:No..Nothing important!!
Zoya:Okay!(yet she is not convinced)

Zoya eyes Asad tensely, while he asks her to relax….

Najma receives a message by Imraan saying, “Meet me at the coffee shop where we used to meet!”

Najma excuses herself….

Later….
Zoya is walking in the hall, re-mincing all the past incidents related to Najma…Asad comes and pats her on her waist by his left hand as he descends…
Asad: Zoya, my blue tie is not in my wardrobe, do you know where it is?
Zoya (lost): Yeah…
Asad(by waving his hand): Zoya, where are you lost?
Zoya: Nothing Mr.Khan, voh….
Asad(shouts):YESSSS!!!!!!!!
Zoya: What happened, why are you shoting!!
Asad: I won, you lost!!
Zoya: WHAT?!?
Asad: The challenge!
Zoya: Which challenge?
Asad: Zoya, you forgot, we challenged each other that we will not call one another, Ms.Farooqui or Mr.Khan!
Zoya(Shouts):ALLAH MIYA! WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU!?! I am so much tensed here for Najma and you … RIDICULOUS!!!
Asad: Okay! I am sorry Ms.Farooqui! Now please will you get my tie!
Zoya:Yes, I will bring it!

Zoya goes….and brings the tie….

Asad:Thanks….
And holds the tie and was about to leave..
Zoya:Mr.Khan, you are not wearing it so why did you ask for it!
Asad:I will wear it in the office!
Zoya:Wait!!

She takes the tie from Asad’s hand and starts making him wear…

Zoya:You should look perfect, top-to-bottom!
Asad:And if I not, so! (And starts moving towards Zoya, while she moves backwards, nervously!)
Zoya (She is still fixing the tie):Mr.Khan..what are you doing! If anyone sees us like this, then?
Asad:Then what?
Zoya:Mr.Asad Ahmed Khan, please go you are getting late!
Asad:I don’t think so! (And pins her to the wall)
Zoya:Mr.Khan…..Please leave me!!
Asad:Am I forgetting something?
Zoya:Your laptop?
Asad:No…
Zoya:Your file?
Asad:No…
Zoya:Okay…so your mobile?
Asad:No…
Zoya:Then what??
Asad:Ohhh…You didn’t get it.??

Zoya nods in a “NO”…

Asad:MY MORNING KSS!!!!!!!

Zoya is left shocked … (funny tune plays)

Asad comes more close to her, they were very close to a kiss when Zoya shouts, “NUSZZZZ!!!”
Asad turns back and Zoya flees….Zoya ascends the stairs and says, “Go, go, you are getting late!!”

Asad leaves with a pout face, while Zoya laughs!!

Scene 2: Coffee shop

Imraan is seen waiting for Najma; After a while Najma comes there.

Imraan:Najma, please, come and sit!
Najma:No, I’m Okay!
Imraan: I was not expecting you’ll come!
Najma:First you texted me to come and then you are saying that you weren’t expecting you to come! Why have you called me here?
Imraan: Look Najma, I am sorry for whatever I did, I know sorry is nothing in front of the pain which I have given to you, but please can you give me a second chance!
Najma: I have forgiven you time-back, but I can’t accept you once again…What about you, you may find a better girl than me tomorrow and leave me once again!
Imraan: No, Najma, I have understood that you are the one whom I love! Najma please come back in my life! I promise you I will keep you happy my entire life! Please Najma, PLEASE!!
Najma: Simple is that, when I needed you, you didn’t need me, and when you need me, I don’t need you!

And she leaves from there!

Imraan thinks, “I know Najma you are upset, and you should be, but I know you still love me! I will make you accept my love!

Scene 3: Police Station
Zoya comes inside Tanveer’s cell…Tanveer is sitting in a head-down position, so she is unaware of Zoya’s presence…

Zoya:Tanveer..

Tanveer moves her head up…Tanveer was left seeing Zoya….

Tanveer:Zoya….

Screen freezes on Tanveer’s face….

Precap: Zoya convinces Asad to bail Tanveer out…Tanveer is bailed… Tanveer reaches home…All are shocked to see her…Dilshad slaps Zoya leaving all shocked!!!

So here the episode ends, I hope you enjoyed the episode, do tell me via comments…This time I tried to write a long one and this episode is of about more than 1550 words, as I was not posting since long so……

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52 Comments

  1. kriya on June 2, 2016 9:24 pm

    Wlcm back…..missed u……awsm epi……shocking precap y did dilshad slaps zoya?????

    • Zuha (SuNusZuRah Rocks >3) on June 3, 2016 10:42 am

      Missed you 2!!! I am happy you enjoyed the episode?And yes to get the answer of your question you have to wait for Episode 24?

    • kriya on June 3, 2016 12:31 pm

      Hey zuha u r in g+…..i am adding u in my frnds list but my name is diff in g+ bcoz its my real name…..

    • Zuha (SuNusZuRah Rocks >3) on June 3, 2016 12:48 pm

      What is your name dear??

    • kriya on June 3, 2016 12:57 pm

      My name is anjali saboo….hope u find my name…..

    • Zuha Fatima on June 3, 2016 2:15 pm

      Yeah i found anjali saboo but there are 4 to 5 maybe you have your DP wearing jeans and shirt and open hair , I was confused so didn’t add you…..

    • kriya on June 3, 2016 3:11 pm

      In my profile pic there is a girl n some quotes wriiten on it….i hope now it is easier to find…..

    • kriya on June 3, 2016 3:23 pm

      I hv added u….u can check in ur followers list…..may ne u hv got a notification that i hv added u

    • kriya on June 3, 2016 5:12 pm

      Hey zuha i couldnt find u on hangouts…..can u send a text to me…..

    • Zuha (SuNusZuRah Rocks >3) on June 3, 2016 5:45 pm

      Kriya dear I am not using hangouts, plz can you help me how to make an ID on hangout?That will be so sweet of u?

    • kriya on June 3, 2016 6:39 pm

      Open hangouts n sign up with ur gmail id that u r using in g+ ……i hope ur confusion is clear…..

    • kriya on June 3, 2016 12:36 pm

      R u using hangouts if yes i hv send u a text…..

  2. Sarah kahn on June 2, 2016 10:38 pm

    Hahahhhah missed you love you dear?? and what a funny ep zoya shouts nusz hey am i getting my role i mean when its my entry? I want to be funny and maybe i was the cousin of zoya right???? anyways awesome ep

    • Zuha (SuNusZuRah Rocks >3) on June 3, 2016 10:48 am

      Missed you 2??I am happy you enjoyed the episode?And yes indeed you are getting the role, like by 35-40 episodes you will be the part of my FF, because the reason is that I have written down this FF in my dairy amd it is completed, in March. So like I have written till Asya marriage but I have decided to continue, so you guys will be entring after Asya marriage!! I hope you can understand? And yes you are Zoya’s cousin?And Love you 2 darling?

  3. Priya tripathi on June 2, 2016 11:14 pm

    Awesome n welcome back

    • Zuha (SuNusZuRah Rocks >3) on June 3, 2016 10:49 am

      Thanks Priya Tripathi

  4. Patakha Princess on June 2, 2016 11:20 pm

    Why did dil slap zoya….why zoya want to bail tanveer out….??…so mny questions are popping out of my mind……bt the epi was awsum…??

    • Zuha (SuNusZuRah Rocks >3) on June 3, 2016 10:50 am

      Thanks Patakha Princess? But for all these questions you have to read Episode 24?

    • kriya on June 3, 2016 12:29 pm

      When u r updating ur ff.???????

    • Zuha (SuNusZuRah Rocks >3) on June 3, 2016 2:23 pm

      Yeah you have not updated since long!!

  5. Halima on June 3, 2016 12:32 am

    Awesome, you nailed it, can’t wait for the next episode, loved Asad and Zoya scene…

    • Zuha (SuNusZuRah Rocks >3) on June 3, 2016 10:51 am

      Thanks Halima? And I will try to update ASAP!!

  6. Nuszat (T!B!H!) (~Nusz) (SuNusZuRah) You need to rock the world!! on June 3, 2016 2:02 am

    Hey my bestie!!! I am so happy you’re back with this episode :)) I really missed this Fan-Fiction!! I loved this episode too!!!
    I wish you have a great Ramadan month!!! Also keep smiling like always!!!
    Also do you use hotmail or something?? So I can chat with you, Sarah and Sunehri??? If you do, please let me know :)) Love you Hun~Nusz

    • Zuha (SuNusZuRah Rocks >3) on June 3, 2016 10:56 am

      I also missed you guys?I am happy that you loved the episode. And Happy Ramadan to you as well as? Yeah indeed I use gmail account, but I can’t give you publicly, like I trust you but some (bad ppl) may misuse it??I hope you can understand, but are you on ”Google+” if yes then you can connect me there, my ID is on my name, “Zuha Fatima” and the DP is also mine, with my siblings, but I will change it right away and place mine, and yeah I wear scarf , so the picture will be in Scarf ??

    • Sanju on June 3, 2016 9:45 pm

      Zuha!!ur profile pic in g+…u luk choo cuteeee!!??

    • Zuha Fatima on June 3, 2016 10:11 pm

      Thanks dear 🙂 😉

    • Nusz (T!B!H) (~Nusz) (SuNusZuRah) you need to rock the world!!! on June 3, 2016 7:14 pm

      Nah it’s fine, I was only asking for your email address.~Nusz

    • Sunehri on June 3, 2016 10:02 pm

      Nusz what’s ur id ?

    • kriya on June 3, 2016 11:11 pm

      I also wanted to know

    • Nuszat (T!B!H!) (~Nusz) (SuNusZuRah) (Halima's Bestie) You need to rock the world!! on June 4, 2016 12:20 pm

      Guys when I mean email address (is something like this) [email protected] or something like that, if you do let me know aha~Nusz

    • Nuszat (T!B!H!) (~Nusz) (SuNusZuRah) (Halima's Bestie) You need to rock the world!! on June 4, 2016 12:27 pm

      Wait add who~Nusz

    • Zuha (SuNusZuRah Rocks >3) on June 4, 2016 1:34 pm

      Yeah, they are talking about, +google, if you have do let us know!

    • Zuha (SuNusZuRah Rocks >3) on June 4, 2016 1:35 pm

      Love u and Tc guys!!

  7. Sunehri on June 3, 2016 2:36 pm

    Happy Ramadan to u all my best sis ….. And the episode super ….. And I’m happy as I was born on the ramdan month ….. And yeah I’m in g+ and hangouts …… Love u

    Sunehri Mehta (SuNuZuRah) ❤️❤️❤️

    • kriya on June 3, 2016 2:41 pm

      I m also in g+ n hangouts…..whats ur name in g+ so that i can add u

    • Sanju on June 3, 2016 7:30 pm

      Yeahh me too..even i wanna add u?

    • Zuha (SuNusZuRah Rocks >3) on June 3, 2016 2:48 pm

      Thanks dear? And what is your name on g+ so I can add you?

  8. Sanju on June 3, 2016 3:15 pm

    Ohhh woww wat a superrbb episode!!??awwww Asya!!!??ohhmg dilu slappin zoya!!?mzybe cuz she brought tanu back home ??take care luvvyaa??ohh yes ur there in g+ ryt?? Same name rite?? Zuha Fatima

    • kriya on June 3, 2016 3:22 pm

      R u using g+ if yes then tell ur id

    • Sanju on June 3, 2016 7:23 pm

      Heyy kriya!! My name in g+ is Sanjana Menon…profile pic is Surbhi’ pic??

    • Sanju on June 3, 2016 7:30 pm

      Heyy i hv started following u n zuha??

    • Zuha (SuNusZuRah Rocks >3) on June 3, 2016 9:07 pm

      Ohhh??That is gr8

    • kriya on June 3, 2016 9:17 pm

      Sanju i m also following u…..can we chat on hangouts

    • Sunehri on June 3, 2016 10:01 pm

      Just put Sunehri Mehta and u will see 2 birds in a shape of heart

    • kriya on June 3, 2016 11:10 pm

      Hey sunehri i m following u

    • Zuha (SuNusZuRah Rocks >3) on June 3, 2016 3:54 pm

      Thanks dear Sanju, and let’s see the reason behind the slap??And yes my name is same on G+ “Zuha Fatima” It is my picture in scarf? And you also take care, Luv u 2❤

  9. shifa on June 3, 2016 5:32 pm

    I am a silent reader I have read your all episode in 1 hour and it was awesome …..thanks for writing this ff….

    • Zuha (SuNusZuRah Rocks >3) on June 3, 2016 5:46 pm

      Thanks shifa for commenting and I happy you enjoyed my FF. Please do read and comment always?

  10. Nahiiiii on June 3, 2016 10:07 pm

    I love this hehe cutiepie!!!

    • Zuha (SuNusZuRah Rocks >3) on June 3, 2016 10:39 pm

      Thanks sissy?

  11. Shifa on June 8, 2016 10:08 pm

    Hey zuha when you are uploading next episode? eagerly waiting for next episode

    • Zuha (SuNusZuRah Rocks >3) (Halima Api Rocks☺) on June 10, 2016 4:00 pm

      have updated it dear?

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