Hello everybody. …i am writing…this for the first time…all The Ashokians…i hope u willl enjoy it…..plz like..and my work

“It has been ten days since ashoka had left for takshila …i am worried about him ” – said Bindusar while he was at the lunch with his beloved wife Rani Dharma… “Ashoka is our son….” continued with a very proud feel in his heart .”He is Aacharya Chankya’s student….and also the Warrior of Magadh. I am quite sure about him. .he was born. deafeating death you don’ t have to worry” “ are right….” -Bindusar with a bit of relief on his face..” i must not much….but he is only 15 years old….how could i forget that …a 15 year old child is going to takhshila that too secretly to find out and defeat AAKROSH ..a 40 years old person who is much stronger than him…much sharper , much cruel than him…..whose terror had been reported so badly by the takshila people…hiw could i forget ..Dharma” . Dharmahold his hand and said_-“Yes…Ashoka is only 15 but he has the strength and power of a 40 years old person….he has great potential…and you must not doubt that”…..And Finnally Bindhusaar was relaxed and convinced. ..He then. Comments with a taunty expression. .”if He is 40 …then why don’t you do his marriage. ?”….”Idon’t know weather a women ither that me can handle a person like him…….i just hope god had made someone for him….”
And the conversation ended with both laughing badly like anything.

On the other hand Ashoka had reached takshilla and was roaming around the market …He was standing at the sweet shop. Whoose Laddoo’s smell atracted him baldy. And then his eyes fall on the snall mirror kept. On the desk of jewellers shop qhich was beside sweet shop. The mirror reflected two beautiful eyes fascinated with kajal…on the up was a beautiful head bearing a maaangteeka who had no values infront of the glittering eyes..Ashoka was staring at the mirror continuously with bothering about anything…he was trying his level best but was faled to took his eyes from the mirror… Who knewed that these two eyes will change the life of the young warrior …forever…!!!!!!!!

He was slowly moving toards the. Mirror when……..

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  1. Tiyasa

    Pls write about asvi not about aswaki…….. And u have copied from the episodes and written in a different way………

    1. RIMJHIM_rao

      And plz..hav patience for 2-3 epi. Then u will find the story on a completly different track….. Ok tiyasa?

    2. RIMJHIM_rao

      Hey Tiyasa …i have submitted the epi.2 but forgot to upload pic .. So plz…forgive and read ,like and comment as soon as it is uploaded… t may benow u. Will besatisfied …… So enjoy reading !?

      1. Tiyasa

        Its OK……. But make stories on ASVI also…… I just wanted to say this and u all r meaning anything else……..

    3. Angelk1

      Let her write what she wants to write. The title obviously says ashwaki, why are you hating so much on kaurwaki. Matter fact why read it, when it’s not about Devi

    4. Angelk1

      Keep writing girl, I like your story already. Don’t let others put you down, their just being mean. Do you, and show us how creative you can be.

      1. Tiyasa

        U too r being mean…….. 1st understand what I want to tell then tell others mean…….

    5. Angelk1

      How am i being mean, I’m just telling like it is. The story clearly says ashwaki, but you dont want her to write the story about them but instead devi and ashok. Why dont you write one about devi instead.

      1. Tiyasa

        U r being mean as u r telling others mean………and I just wanted Rimjhim to write an article on Asvi also ………

    6. Angelk1

      I wouldnt have said that if you had worded your comment differently. Instead of please write about asvi instead of ashwaki, you should have said ” hey love your story, can you write about asvi next, i would love that. Thats less mean, but the way you word it seem like you hate ashwaki.

      1. Tiyasa

        What’s ur problem if I hate aswaki or love ?????? I love ASVI so what’s ur problem , we all have our rights to express our thoughts……..

      2. Angelk1

        Obviously your not understanding what my point is so i will leave you to your opinion.

  2. Well done rimjhim it’s good to read and continue to write

  3. Astra

    Nice….thanks for writing asoka ff….

  4. ashoka samrat

    Beautiful rijhim. Thx. Continue writing.

  5. Nice..continue writing

  6. RIMJHIM_rao

    Thnq..everyone. ..will continue writing. .for u all

  7. And you made me remember sid… great going. Keep it going

  8. Wow continue..
    Loving it..

  9. RIMJHIM_rao

    Guys…i have submitted the epi.2 but forgot to upload pic .. So plz…forgive and read ,like and comment as soon as it is uploaded…..

  10. Devi

    sorry for being negative…but now not only do we have the director making a love story mess out of the real show…we have more aswaki nonsense stories. Now on Monday, instead of seeing the actual written update, ur love fanfiction will show up instead. Sorry again for being rude…just telling truth.

    1. RIMJHIM_rao

      Devi..i don’t know why r u so upset with h this…but it is a ff…it is not compulsury to read…..i am just writing it so that i can entertain people..not to huelrt anyone…

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