Ashoka The Great(Fan Fiction) Chapter 1

Guys I want to make it clear Ashoka the Great is a Fanfic not the show Chakravartin Ashoka Samrat. So don’t get confused with the show.


Radhagupta’s POV
2 weeks have passed since the death of my guru, the one who established the mauryan empire, The hero of Magadh Acharya Chanakya but still Patliputra was in sorrow of losing Acharya Chanakya.

Death of Acharya Chanakya lead to turnaround in events. Rajkumar Ashoka was set to depart for takshshila instead of Rajkumar Sushim who found a way to escape from this mission which was to be his. All the rajkumars & warriors of Patliputra were training in the training ground. Ashok was training with Vasunandan and Subhao. They were his most diligent students at the Rajkiya Vidyale. Humble as well. Ashok has been a good influence on them. Subhao and Vasunandan were showing Ashok how to defend against spear and shield wielding warriors. Rajkumar Abhimanyu the son of samrat & Queen Kaveri who died while giving birth to him returned from his maternal home a week back & has shared a good bond with Ashoka & is set to depart with him to Takshshila.



Abhimanyu: Pitaji Maharaj I will also depart to Takshshila with bhrata Ashoka to give him a backup.

Samrat : I can’t let you go Son you are too young for this.

Abhimanyu : Pitaji I didn’t ask for your permission I am informing you about my departure.

Everyone present there was stunned by this.

Sushim: Don’t you have manners to talk to your elders & that to with pitaji maharaj.

Abhimanyu : It would be good if you don’t teach me manners bhrata Sushim.

Sushim fumed in anger. Samrat Bindusara interrupted.

Samrat: If you have already decided who am I to stop you. But is Ashoka ready to take you with him(Looking towards Ashoka.)

Ashoka : I don’t have any problem pitaji.


Rajkumar Abhimanyu was angry at his father for keeping him away from the palace for these years.
Abhimanyu was sparring with some soldiers & he was actually good with the sword.

Maharani Charumitra was standing with Khallatak who was talking to Sushim near the edge of the ground. Indrajeet, Sushim’s sparring partner stood near them. Sushim wore an expression of smug arrogance as Khalnatak spoke excitedly. It was no secret that Khallatak was an avid supporter of Sushim. They seemed unperturbed by the grief that has overtaken Patliputra. This did not surprise Radhagupt. Charumitra and Khallatak could not stand Chanakya since he had on many occasions shown Sushim in a bad light in front of the Sabha.

Samrat Bindusar and the rest of the royal family stood under the canopy of the palace. Rani Dharma stood next to him. Her hands locked around his arms. He could see that both of them were grieving. Samrat’s dried tears in his eyes mirrored my own.

Rani Subrasi stood behind them holding Drupad. She gazed wistfully at the two of them. I didn’t dwell on that. As Rajmata Helena caught my eyes. Rajmata Helena seemed very happy. A rare sight. Her eyes could barely contain her joy. Radhagupt knew if anyone had reason to rejoice for Acharya Chanakya’s death, it was the Rajmata. Suddenly Rajmata’s expression changed. He followed her gaze towards a commotion.

An intense duel was going on. Siyamak was fighting fiercely against his sparring partner. His eyes were manic and desperate. Radhagupt could see the turmoil of emotions almost breaking out of the prince. Understandably so. Radhagupt knew what Siyamak had gone through the past few months. The young Prince had to live through the horrific shock of his mentor being a Rajdrohi. Then his grandfather. Then his mother. Not only did he lose his loved ones. They were all traitors to boot.

Siyamak’s sparring partner fell under the sheer force of the sword strikes. Siyamak was about strike him with his blade but Ashok stopped him in time. Siyamak angrily looked towards Ashok & jerked his hand & stormed off the ground.
Helena’s sudden concern for Siyamak in many ways, was a weird thing to see for me Acharya Chanakya discussed it with me. But in passing. Something had happened. And Acharya intended to find out what.

Episode ended on a confused & determined face of Radhagupta.

Guys this was all Radhagupta’s POV if by mistake his name is mentioned somewhere please forgive me.

Please comment guys I need your support to continue.

I have dropped the idea of Sushim’s Sister.

Abhimanyu Maurya is played by devish ahuja

Credit to: Abhinav


  1. fan

    why u guys are so excited with the fan fiction and all i just don’t get it if u guys hav so much free time then pls do a favour to update the episodes on time…

  2. great

    has evry1 bcum nuts???
    how cn u chng de actual history n make a fan fiction out of it???
    is it some kind of a joke?!!
    ohkk..make another fan fiction of ramayan in which ram has been made to marry surpnakha!!! 😀
    or make akbar a prisoner.. or let india enslave britishers!!!!!
    lol!!! u people r sooooo funny

  3. Ansh

    At least plzz update us wid the story which happened in the episode.. I thought the reason to u update the stories is bcz u want to help those who missed the shw due to some reasons.. But u r writing a fanfic.. Plzz don’t do this.. U were my last hope cz I m not able to see the episodes cz of my studies..

  4. sai

    Excuse me….I think everyone has the right to imagine things.It does not change the history.And I think it is a way of showing respect to the great people.I fully support you Abhinav.

  5. Shobha

    I was glad that atleast there werent any fan fiction series in Ashoka!!
    There you go, spaming the main page of telly updates!!
    Why dont you guys rename the page from telly updates to fanfiction updates?
    If you miss a day’s episode, one has to scan in between so much to be updated!!! So annoying!

    • Hersheys

      What’s ur problem?

      Like Sai said everyone has the right to imagine things. How about u go and yell at the CAS page as well bcz it’s not like their showing u real history. And like I said what’s going to happen if u miss one episode? There are so many other ways that U can get info of the epi. And if u can’t then just miss the f***ing episode. U won’t die if u miss one epi will u ?

  6. Hi

    Don’t do a fanfic?
    Have u lost ur mind? I’m not sure about you, but to me it seems disrespectful to make a fiction thing out of something historical. You could have done something else! Thank god you are not writing a fanfic about Ramayana or Mahabharata! Tht would have been beyond excusable!

    Where is today’s epi? Is it not here because of this epi? Can you plz not continue, no one needs fanfiction to become history!!!

  7. Abhinav

    Hey it’s not because of me the writer didn’t upload is it my fault i uploaded this on sunday don’t blame me.

  8. sai

    Hey that’s very rude of u ppl. If want to see only the updates related to episodes,press only episodes option.Don’t blame the fanfiction.

  9. Abhinav

    You all are reacting like Chakravartin Ashoka Samrat is showing you real history.

    It’s also a fiction.Stop blaming me .

    • Hersheys

      Dear Poonam/asdf

      2 u think we don’t know that Poonam and asdf are the SAME person. Don’t try 2 get yourself backup bcz u don’t have any cuz ur a LONER.

  10. Abhinav

    Hey all of you listen I am not liable to update CAS it’s pooja’s job & she might have been busy.

    Why are you guys blaming me I am not a tellyupdate writer I am just a fan.

  11. Abhinav

    Are you all mad is it my fault Pooja has not uploaded stay in your limits or it won’t be good for you all.

  12. Abhinav

    Take Sai’s advice if you have so much problem don’t comment here comment on 22nd April’s episode.

  13. ashoka fan

    ekyo tumlog bekar ki chijo me pade ho… Vaise he es serial me rahu – ketu laga he aur aab kyo esko sani grha lagva rhe ho khane ka matlab ye he ki ak to youtube par nhi deta he aab kam se kam written bhi nhi dega to socho kya hoga…..

  14. sai

    People have totally gone mad.They are killing the young talent. Do you think that the show is 100% true?Its only 5% correct.So what is your problem guys?
    If you did not get the update written is it his problem?No,you are just mean guys who are just being mean.Shame!

    • U agree with Sai guys it’s true that latest epi of ‘ashoka’ is not updated but what happened to u all? Why r u blaming Abhinav.. Abhinav is not responsible for this if you don’t know the whole thing you can’t blame anyone even fans can update their fan fiction by writing their chapter n posting to telly update site they are then posted by the telly update writers…just B’coz the epi isn’t posted n Abhinav posted the fan fiction on that very day it doesn’t make it Abhinav’s mistake

  15. fan

    see we all visit this site because we are unable to watch the episodes on tv.. Now if u all have enough and plenty of time then pls pls at least for our sake give the updates of episode and then do whatevev fanfic and etc etc what ever comes to ur mind.

  16. samratashok

    This is all bullshit. Most of here like to read the written updates of CAS and then discuss a particular episode.

  17. tunisha

    U are deleting those comments which are against u !!!!
    Wah bhai wah !!!
    U are disgusting !!!!!!!!!!!!!

    • Hersheys

      It’s good that he deleted it. Anyway’s what’s your problem if he deleted it?. Or r u jealous that u can’t right a fanfic as good as him. I completely agree with Sai and cherry and I fully support abhinav. And abhinav can u plz explain to these ppl in baby language that it’s not ur fault Pooja di didn’t update because all of them are sooooooooooooo dumb that they can’t understand proper English. But in case these dumb ppl get even dumber even after u explain to them in baby language then I think u should change the picture bcz it’s the same as the updating one. And Tunisha about the disgusting thing I’m sorry bt ur face is disgusting. Why don’t u ppl stop commenting on this ff if u don’t want to read it. And if u think abhinav is responsible for the fact that the epi wasn’t updated then u shud take a walk back to preschool where they teach u COMMON SENSE which u absolutely DON’T have. And what will happen if u miss one epi? Will u die? I hope so.
      Sorry if u are one of those ppl who wasn’t posting bad comments this wasn’t meant for u, but the ppl who posted bad stuff u deserve MUCH more than this.

  18. appu

    good episode abhinav.u just write your thoughts .its really good .accept good comments and advise to improve .and rest of the part just ignore it.ireally liked your ff.plz continue

  19. Priya

    Guys we know that Pooja isn’t here for updating episodes. Maybe she’s busy with some work. Please stop fighting with each other. Someone updated 26 April episode please read it.

  20. saya

    it wasn’t abhinav who was involved in removing those comments. It was me who was behind all this. I was the one who reported to TU and they removed them. You need to stop morons.

  21. saya

    Does anyone know the actual history of THE GREAT ASHOK. Why are some of you bashing abhinav? The way you are bashing him- he is not freaking nuts. In fact you all are. Do you believe that the writers of Ashok are showing correct history. In fact they have also taken creative liberties and too much of it. Don’t you get this simple thing? The actual episodes show you so much negativity. Do you believe that samrat bindusar was such a king? He could have never been so. I have never read your episodes Abhinav but if some people are trying to write a fan fiction with positivity, they are surely doing a better job. Even the writers have made a mockery out of history. There is only one LINE for you all- go get a life.

  22. saya

    And it’s not that by writing a fan fiction, we are making a mockery out of it. We are not disrespecting Ashok the great. We are just highlighting him in a positive way. When it’s clearly mentioned that it has nothing to do with history, then you all also have a problem. Stop bashing him and anyone else.

  23. Abhinav

    Listen guys i am thinking of shifting this ff at fb or they will uneccasirly bash me so what do you guys think.


  24. appu

    i dont think so abhinav .u han all right to write here so there is no need to shift your ff to facebook

  25. tahoora

    no Abhinav I request you not to shift this ff overlook all the comments which are stopping u to do so plllzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz don’t stop this ff plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz………………
    many of us enjoy ur ff………

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