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Chakravartin Ashoka Samrat Fan Fiction

Ashoka The Great(Fan Fiction) Chapter 1

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Guys I want to make it clear Ashoka the Great is a Fanfic not the show Chakravartin Ashoka Samrat. So don’t get confused with the show.

PATLIPUTRA

Radhagupta’s POV
2 weeks have passed since the death of my guru, the one who established the mauryan empire, The hero of Magadh Acharya Chanakya but still Patliputra was in sorrow of losing Acharya Chanakya.

Death of Acharya Chanakya lead to turnaround in events. Rajkumar Ashoka was set to depart for takshshila instead of Rajkumar Sushim who found a way to escape from this mission which was to be his. All the rajkumars & warriors of Patliputra were training in the training ground. Ashok was training with Vasunandan and Subhao. They were his most diligent students at the Rajkiya Vidyale. Humble as well. Ashok has been a good influence on them. Subhao and Vasunandan were showing Ashok how to defend against spear and shield wielding warriors. Rajkumar Abhimanyu the son of samrat & Queen Kaveri who died while giving birth to him returned from his maternal home a week back & has shared a good bond with Ashoka & is set to depart with him to Takshshila.

FLASHBACK

RAJ SABHA

Abhimanyu: Pitaji Maharaj I will also depart to Takshshila with bhrata Ashoka to give him a backup.

Samrat : I can’t let you go Son you are too young for this.

Abhimanyu : Pitaji I didn’t ask for your permission I am informing you about my departure.

Everyone present there was stunned by this.

Sushim: Don’t you have manners to talk to your elders & that to with pitaji maharaj.

Abhimanyu : It would be good if you don’t teach me manners bhrata Sushim.

Sushim fumed in anger. Samrat Bindusara interrupted.

Samrat: If you have already decided who am I to stop you. But is Ashoka ready to take you with him(Looking towards Ashoka.)

Ashoka : I don’t have any problem pitaji.

FLASHBACK ENDS

Rajkumar Abhimanyu was angry at his father for keeping him away from the palace for these years.
Abhimanyu was sparring with some soldiers & he was actually good with the sword.

Maharani Charumitra was standing with Khallatak who was talking to Sushim near the edge of the ground. Indrajeet, Sushim’s sparring partner stood near them. Sushim wore an expression of smug arrogance as Khalnatak spoke excitedly. It was no secret that Khallatak was an avid supporter of Sushim. They seemed unperturbed by the grief that has overtaken Patliputra. This did not surprise Radhagupt. Charumitra and Khallatak could not stand Chanakya since he had on many occasions shown Sushim in a bad light in front of the Sabha.

Samrat Bindusar and the rest of the royal family stood under the canopy of the palace. Rani Dharma stood next to him. Her hands locked around his arms. He could see that both of them were grieving. Samrat’s dried tears in his eyes mirrored my own.

Rani Subrasi stood behind them holding Drupad. She gazed wistfully at the two of them. I didn’t dwell on that. As Rajmata Helena caught my eyes. Rajmata Helena seemed very happy. A rare sight. Her eyes could barely contain her joy. Radhagupt knew if anyone had reason to rejoice for Acharya Chanakya’s death, it was the Rajmata. Suddenly Rajmata’s expression changed. He followed her gaze towards a commotion.

An intense duel was going on. Siyamak was fighting fiercely against his sparring partner. His eyes were manic and desperate. Radhagupt could see the turmoil of emotions almost breaking out of the prince. Understandably so. Radhagupt knew what Siyamak had gone through the past few months. The young Prince had to live through the horrific shock of his mentor being a Rajdrohi. Then his grandfather. Then his mother. Not only did he lose his loved ones. They were all traitors to boot.

Siyamak’s sparring partner fell under the sheer force of the sword strikes. Siyamak was about strike him with his blade but Ashok stopped him in time. Siyamak angrily looked towards Ashok & jerked his hand & stormed off the ground.
Helena’s sudden concern for Siyamak in many ways, was a weird thing to see for me Acharya Chanakya discussed it with me. But in passing. Something had happened. And Acharya intended to find out what.

Episode ended on a confused & determined face of Radhagupta.

Guys this was all Radhagupta’s POV if by mistake his name is mentioned somewhere please forgive me.

Please comment guys I need your support to continue.

I have dropped the idea of Sushim’s Sister.

Abhimanyu Maurya is played by devish ahuja
https://www.facebook.com/devish.ahuja

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67 Comments

  1. Farheen on April 25, 2016 10:43 am

    it was a nice episode …..please continue

    • Abhinav on April 25, 2016 5:11 pm

      Thanks

  2. shvetanshu verma on April 25, 2016 2:47 pm

    very nice explanation is written here … too good (chapter 1)

    • Abhinav on April 25, 2016 7:36 pm

      Thanks

    • asdf on April 26, 2016 1:24 pm

      What happen to you guys. We want written episodes here only.

    • Hersheys on April 27, 2016 3:05 pm

      U do

      Some other ppl like this ff so go away.

  3. sai on April 25, 2016 4:44 pm

    Fantastic

    • Abhinav on April 25, 2016 7:36 pm

      Thanks

  4. IDK on April 25, 2016 5:37 pm

    soooooo nice

    bt y dropped the idea of sushim sister?????

  5. Abhinav on April 25, 2016 7:37 pm

    Thanks.I will bring her after some episodes.

    • asdf on April 26, 2016 1:22 pm

      This comment is deleted.

      Reason: Inappropriate language towards other users.

    • Abhinav on April 26, 2016 3:08 pm

      Asdf telling you for the last time be in your limits or it will be harmful for you.

    • Hersheys on April 27, 2016 3:06 pm

      Hershey’s and IDK are the same person btw.

  6. Abhinav on April 25, 2016 7:38 pm

    Are you all satisfied with casting of abhimanyu ?

  7. tahoora on April 25, 2016 9:41 pm

    awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!! episode…………… I wish u continue writing

  8. Pari on April 25, 2016 9:44 pm

    Awesome one Abhinav..
    And who is Abhimanyu????

    • Abhinav on April 26, 2016 1:21 pm

      Read the prologue pari

  9. fan on April 25, 2016 10:13 pm

    why u guys are so excited with the fan fiction and all i just don’t get it if u guys hav so much free time then pls do a favour to update the episodes on time…

  10. great on April 25, 2016 10:27 pm

    has evry1 bcum nuts???
    how cn u chng de actual history n make a fan fiction out of it???
    is it some kind of a joke?!!
    ohkk..make another fan fiction of ramayan in which ram has been made to marry surpnakha!!! 😀
    or make akbar a prisoner.. or let india enslave britishers!!!!!
    lol!!! u people r sooooo funny

  11. sumit on April 26, 2016 12:56 am

    pls request he yar is serial ki wat mat lagao phle jaise hi aane do updates.

  12. Ansh on April 26, 2016 2:20 am

    At least plzz update us wid the story which happened in the episode.. I thought the reason to u update the stories is bcz u want to help those who missed the shw due to some reasons.. But u r writing a fanfic.. Plzz don’t do this.. U were my last hope cz I m not able to see the episodes cz of my studies..

  13. sai on April 26, 2016 2:54 am

    Excuse me….I think everyone has the right to imagine things.It does not change the history.And I think it is a way of showing respect to the great people.I fully support you Abhinav.

  14. Shobha on April 26, 2016 5:12 am

    I was glad that atleast there werent any fan fiction series in Ashoka!!
    There you go, spaming the main page of telly updates!!
    Why dont you guys rename the page from telly updates to fanfiction updates?
    If you miss a day’s episode, one has to scan in between so much to be updated!!! So annoying!

    • Hersheys on April 27, 2016 3:04 pm

      What’s ur problem?

      Like Sai said everyone has the right to imagine things. How about u go and yell at the CAS page as well bcz it’s not like their showing u real history. And like I said what’s going to happen if u miss one episode? There are so many other ways that U can get info of the epi. And if u can’t then just miss the f***ing episode. U won’t die if u miss one epi will u ?

  15. Hi on April 26, 2016 5:41 am

    Don’t do a fanfic?
    Have u lost ur mind? I’m not sure about you, but to me it seems disrespectful to make a fiction thing out of something historical. You could have done something else! Thank god you are not writing a fanfic about Ramayana or Mahabharata! Tht would have been beyond excusable!

    Where is today’s epi? Is it not here because of this epi? Can you plz not continue, no one needs fanfiction to become history!!!

  16. Abhinav on April 26, 2016 7:59 am

    Hey it’s not because of me the writer didn’t upload is it my fault i uploaded this on sunday don’t blame me.

  17. sai on April 26, 2016 9:54 am

    Hey that’s very rude of u ppl. If want to see only the updates related to episodes,press only episodes option.Don’t blame the fanfiction.

  18. Abhinav on April 26, 2016 10:12 am

    Thanks Sai I don’t know why they people are blaming me.

    • asdf on April 26, 2016 1:21 pm

      This comment is deleted.

      Reason: Inappropriate language towards other users.

    • sai on April 26, 2016 2:22 pm

      Shame on you for using such language!

  19. Abhinav on April 26, 2016 10:14 am

    You all are reacting like Chakravartin Ashoka Samrat is showing you real history.

    It’s also a fiction.Stop blaming me .

    • Chirag on April 26, 2016 2:54 pm

      Abhinav…. its good.. in fact better then the current telecasted story

  20. asdf on April 26, 2016 1:14 pm

    This comment is deleted.

    Reason: Inappropriate language towards other users.

    • sai on April 26, 2016 2:41 pm

      If you don’t have time don’t read it.We wont lose anything.Stop it already!

  21. poonam on April 26, 2016 1:15 pm

    This comment is deleted.

    Reason: Inappropriate language towards other users.

    • sai on April 26, 2016 5:41 pm

      Total shame.Look what they have done to you.

    • Hersheys on April 27, 2016 2:59 pm

      Dear Poonam/asdf

      2 u think we don’t know that Poonam and asdf are the SAME person. Don’t try 2 get yourself backup bcz u don’t have any cuz ur a LONER.

  22. asdf on April 26, 2016 1:16 pm

    Where are you POOJA – Please save us.

  23. Abhinav on April 26, 2016 1:23 pm

    Hey all of you listen I am not liable to update CAS it’s pooja’s job & she might have been busy.

    Why are you guys blaming me I am not a tellyupdate writer I am just a fan.

  24. Abhinav on April 26, 2016 1:52 pm

    Are you all mad is it my fault Pooja has not uploaded stay in your limits or it won’t be good for you all.

  25. Abhinav on April 26, 2016 1:54 pm

    Take Sai’s advice if you have so much problem don’t comment here comment on 22nd April’s episode.

  26. tunisha on April 26, 2016 2:14 pm

    This comment is deleted.

    Reason: Inappropriate language towards other users.

  27. ashoka fan on April 26, 2016 2:19 pm

    ekyo tumlog bekar ki chijo me pade ho… Vaise he es serial me rahu – ketu laga he aur aab kyo esko sani grha lagva rhe ho khane ka matlab ye he ki ak to youtube par nhi deta he aab kam se kam written bhi nhi dega to socho kya hoga…..

  28. ashoka fan on April 26, 2016 2:27 pm

    gussa mat ho abhinav ham tum pe blame nhi laga rhe….

  29. sai on April 26, 2016 2:29 pm

    People have totally gone mad.They are killing the young talent. Do you think that the show is 100% true?Its only 5% correct.So what is your problem guys?
    If you did not get the update written is it his problem?No,you are just mean guys who are just being mean.Shame!

    • ?Cherry? on April 26, 2016 4:23 pm

      U agree with Sai guys it’s true that latest epi of ‘ashoka’ is not updated but what happened to u all? Why r u blaming Abhinav.. Abhinav is not responsible for this if you don’t know the whole thing you can’t blame anyone even fans can update their fan fiction by writing their chapter n posting to telly update site they are then posted by the telly update writers…just B’coz the epi isn’t posted n Abhinav posted the fan fiction on that very day it doesn’t make it Abhinav’s mistake

    • Abhinav on April 26, 2016 7:59 pm

      Thanks Cherry.

  30. fan on April 26, 2016 2:30 pm

    This comment is deleted.

    Reason: Inappropriate language towards other users.

  31. fan on April 26, 2016 2:38 pm

    see we all visit this site because we are unable to watch the episodes on tv.. Now if u all have enough and plenty of time then pls pls at least for our sake give the updates of episode and then do whatevev fanfic and etc etc what ever comes to ur mind.

    • Hersheys on April 27, 2016 2:52 pm

      I don’t think any SENSIBLE person here would care about your stupid needs and wants.

  32. Abhinav on April 26, 2016 2:55 pm

    Mr. Fan i am not pooja i am not liable to update you comment on 22nd april 2016 episode.

  33. samratashok on April 27, 2016 10:57 am

    This is all bullshit. Most of here like to read the written updates of CAS and then discuss a particular episode.

  34. tunisha on April 27, 2016 2:08 pm

    U are deleting those comments which are against u !!!!
    Wah bhai wah !!!
    U are disgusting !!!!!!!!!!!!!

    • Hersheys on April 27, 2016 2:50 pm

      It’s good that he deleted it. Anyway’s what’s your problem if he deleted it?. Or r u jealous that u can’t right a fanfic as good as him. I completely agree with Sai and cherry and I fully support abhinav. And abhinav can u plz explain to these ppl in baby language that it’s not ur fault Pooja di didn’t update because all of them are sooooooooooooo dumb that they can’t understand proper English. But in case these dumb ppl get even dumber even after u explain to them in baby language then I think u should change the picture bcz it’s the same as the updating one. And Tunisha about the disgusting thing I’m sorry bt ur face is disgusting. Why don’t u ppl stop commenting on this ff if u don’t want to read it. And if u think abhinav is responsible for the fact that the epi wasn’t updated then u shud take a walk back to preschool where they teach u COMMON SENSE which u absolutely DON’T have. And what will happen if u miss one epi? Will u die? I hope so.
      Sorry if u are one of those ppl who wasn’t posting bad comments this wasn’t meant for u, but the ppl who posted bad stuff u deserve MUCH more than this.

    • Abhinav on April 27, 2016 7:36 pm

      Why are you saying sorry ?

      It’s ok yaar.

    • Abhinav on April 27, 2016 4:17 pm

      I didn’t delete any comment tellyupdates editor might have.

    • Hersheys on April 27, 2016 5:25 pm

      Oh ok… Sorry

  35. appu on April 27, 2016 3:27 pm

    good episode abhinav.u just write your thoughts .its really good .accept good comments and advise to improve .and rest of the part just ignore it.ireally liked your ff.plz continue

  36. Priya on April 27, 2016 3:45 pm

    Guys we know that Pooja isn’t here for updating episodes. Maybe she’s busy with some work. Please stop fighting with each other. Someone updated 26 April episode please read it.

  37. tahoora on April 27, 2016 9:20 pm

    when are u gonna update the next part???

  38. saya on April 28, 2016 12:59 pm

    it wasn’t abhinav who was involved in removing those comments. It was me who was behind all this. I was the one who reported to TU and they removed them. You need to stop morons.

  39. saya on April 28, 2016 1:02 pm

    Does anyone know the actual history of THE GREAT ASHOK. Why are some of you bashing abhinav? The way you are bashing him- he is not freaking nuts. In fact you all are. Do you believe that the writers of Ashok are showing correct history. In fact they have also taken creative liberties and too much of it. Don’t you get this simple thing? The actual episodes show you so much negativity. Do you believe that samrat bindusar was such a king? He could have never been so. I have never read your episodes Abhinav but if some people are trying to write a fan fiction with positivity, they are surely doing a better job. Even the writers have made a mockery out of history. There is only one LINE for you all- go get a life.

  40. saya on April 28, 2016 1:03 pm

    And it’s not that by writing a fan fiction, we are making a mockery out of it. We are not disrespecting Ashok the great. We are just highlighting him in a positive way. When it’s clearly mentioned that it has nothing to do with history, then you all also have a problem. Stop bashing him and anyone else.

  41. Abhinav on April 28, 2016 8:38 pm

    Listen guys i am thinking of shifting this ff at fb or they will uneccasirly bash me so what do you guys think.

    ONLY FOR THOSE WHO WANT TO READ THIS FF.

  42. appu on April 28, 2016 10:07 pm

    i dont think so abhinav .u han all right to write here so there is no need to shift your ff to facebook

  43. tahoora on April 30, 2016 8:20 pm

    no Abhinav I request you not to shift this ff overlook all the comments which are stopping u to do so plllzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz don’t stop this ff plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz………………
    many of us enjoy ur ff………

  44. tahoora on April 30, 2016 8:27 pm

    I request you to update ur next episode soon!!!!!!!!!!!

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