Ashoka The Great (Fan Fiction) Chapter 4

Hi guys I am continuing my FanFiction on Ashoka The Great.


Chapter 1 :

Chapter 2 :

Chapter 3 :

Chapter 4 is here guys

Ashoka & Abhimanyu boarded the Ship for Takshshila.

As soon as they both stepped inside the Ship the captain of the ship stopped them.

Captain : You will have to pay for travelling in this ship.

Ashoka took a red pouch out of his bag(Jolla) & gave some to the Captain.

Captain : This is not enough boy I need more.

Abhimanyu got angry listening to him.

Abhimanyu(angry) : Do you know who we are ?

Captain : Whoever you are rules are same for everyone.

Ashoka : Abhimanyu keep your anger in control.

Abhimanyu : But Bhrata he is charging more than it is sufficient.

Ashoka : Captain we have this much only but we will pay you on our way back from Takshshila.

Captain : OK you look like a good lad to me that’s why I am leaving you but keep your brother in control or I will throw him out.

Abhimanyu got angry but controlled himself.

Ashoka : You will get no complaints about him I promise.

Ashoka & Abhimanyu settled themselves on the Ship.


Royal Palace

Amatya Rakshas was standing on the gates of Royal Palace.

The guards stopped him from entering.

Rakshas : Tell Mahanayak Keechak Amatya Rakshas is here to meet him.

The Sabha

Keechak was sitting on his throne & was in deep conversation with Selucus Nicator & Meer Khurasan.

The guard entered the Sabha and addressed Keechak.

Guard : Mahanayak a man named Amatya Rakshas is here to meet you.

Selucus : Rakshas here last time I heard of him he was in Magadha in Chanakya’s Prison.

Keechak : He is the same Amatya who ia the biggest enemy of Chanakya & Mauryan Empire.

Selucus : He is the same one but why is he here.

Meer : Who the hell is Amatya Rakshas ?

Keechak(Laughing) : He was Magadha’s prisoner & you don’t know him ?

Meer : No I don’t know him.

Keechak : This moron was supposed to be Senapati of Magadha

Keechak : Call him in.

After a few minutes Rakshas entered the Sabha.

Rakshas : Mahanayak Keechak ko Amatya Rakshas ka Namskar.

Keechak : What do you want Rakshas ?

Rakshas : The letter you received from Sushim was written by me it was only his royal stamp I have come here to help you.

Keechak : You have come to help me or Sushim.

Rakshas : Sushim is a stupid Prince you can kill him once you have killed Ashoka & Bindusara you will be the Samrat of Magadha.

Keechak : So this is your plan

Rakshas : Yes. But I want to be Mahamtya of Magadha once you become the Samrat

Keechak: You are in Rakshas. Now is the time for spies report. Agnibahu where are your spies ?

Agnibahu : Swami mere They must be here any time soon.

Some people entered the Sabha

Agnibahu : They ate here Swami

Keechak : Which port Ashoka has left last ?

Spy 1 : Mahanayak there is no ship coming towards Takshshila with a Mauryan Flag

Meer : Ashoka is too smart he might not be raising the flag.

Spy 2 : Mahanayak there is no ship coming with a Army.

Selucus : What is the meaning of this ?

Rakshas : The meaning is simple Ashoka is coming through Land Route.

Everyone present there was shocked.

Keechak : But you only said he is coming by sea route in Sushim’s letter.

Rakshas : Yes I did but he has changed the plan at last moment.

Keechak : Find out where is Mauryan Army at the moment.

Keechak(Monologue) : Ashoka is smarter than I thought him to be.


Ishwari entered Ahankara’s Chamber where Ahankara was making her little brother sleep

Ishwari : The time has come Rajkumari to meet Senapati Rudra Acharya is waiting for you come with me.

Ahankara : But what about my brother ?

Ishwari : Don’t worry Kasturi will take care of him you come with me.

Outskirts of PATLIPUTRA.

Ahankara & Ishwari reached the place where Radhagupta was already waiting for them.

Ahankara : Pranam Acharya.

Radhagupta : Kalyan Namastu. Senapati Rudra will be here in a few minutes.

Some horsemen came towards them after a few minutes.

A man in his late 30s unmounted from his horse & walked towards Radhagupta & Ahankara.He is Senapati Rudra

Rudra : Pranam Acharya.

Radhagupta : Kalyan Namastu.

Rudra : Pranam Maharani.

Ahankara : Pranam Senapati Rudra.

Rudra : Why have you called me here Acharya ?

Radhagupta : Rajkumar Ashoka has helped your Maharani Ahankara a lot now she wants to repay that help so you will have to join Ashoka I’m Takshshila Abhiyan.

Rudra : Do you want the same Maharani?

Ahankara : Yes want the same protect Ashoka & help him in this difficult Abhiyan.

Rudra : As you wish Maharani.

Radhagupta : You will ready your army & leave for Takshshila as soon as possible. I will send a message to Ashoka regarding your inclusion in plan

Chapter ends here.

Guys I am back but please don’t bash me like the last time.

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  1. We wont, promise

  2. Astra

    Very nice and interesting story….. Just read all the epis today. Liked it so much. Please update nxt part soon…..

  3. Tiyasa

    Good writing skills, Pls if u are writing a fanfic then pls focus on the topic….ur topic is Ashoka the great so then u pls write it on historical facts pls don’t make it fictional……..Pls write on historical facts pls don’t take CAS director’s bakwas story…..

  4. Nice work but improvement can be made abhinav

  5. Nice and do continue

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