Ashoka Devi ( ASVI ) (Episode 5)

Hi friends, I am back after my exams!!!!!
I hope u all r fine….. Hope all of ur exams r finished…….
This is the fifth episode…… Sorry for the delay……. Now I will try to update it as fast as possible……. Hope u all love it……..

Recap: Devi comes to know about her extraordinary power and about her past. Ashoka tells about DHRUV to Acharya RG.

Devi and Dhani are getting ready for visiting the rishi and knowing what her feelings indicated…..
Devi: Pitaji, I am ready…..lets go….. hope my feelings indicated something good…..
Dhani: Yes my child.
They both set off for the rishi’s place…..

Ashoka and Acharya RG are in the same market, hiding their identity. Everything is normal there…. Ashoka finds the same man who warned him before about DHRUV…..
Ashoka: Hey u! I am new here will u pls tell me that why are all afraid of DHRUV……
Man: Oh u r that man know who didn’t knew about DHRUV????
Ashoka: yes pls tell me about him…..
Man: Yah sure! DRUV kidnaps and tortures all those who come in his path while he passes and it is heard that he tortures him very badly but keep them alive. The man or woman who is tortured stays in a state that he or she can neither be able to live nor die…. That’s why when we get to know that he is going to pass, everyone hides……
Ashoka (to himself): I will not leave this DHRUV…. He has not only attacked my motherland but also scared the common people of my motherland…..
Man: What happened? What r u thinking?
Ashoka: Nothing…. Hmmmm… Do u know where do he lives?
Man: Why r u asking this??
Ashoka: So that I don’t go mistakenly to his living place and be caught….
Man: Yah then u should know that he lives in a cave near that forest (he points and shows)
Ashoka: Thank u for the help…..

The rishi’s house is in the path of DHRUV’s cave’s path. Dhani is scared for this reason…..They hear footsteps of some horses…. Dhani understands that its DHRUV and his men……
They rush towards the forest beside the road. Meanwhile Devi’s locket which was given by her mother fell down on the road but she didn’t notice it.
They hide behind the bushes inside the forest.
Dhani: Uhhhhh….. Thank god we r safe.
Devi: Oh no!!!
Dhani: What happened my child??
Devi: My locket which my mother gifted me has fallen somewhere…. (She cries)
Dhani: Pls don’t cry……I will find it for u….. Now pls stop crying……
DHRUV and his men pass…..

Ashoka and Acharya RG are on their way to find DHRUV’s house. Meanwhile they see DHRUV passing…..
Ashoka: Acharya! That’s DHRUV….. We should follow him, but…….
Acharya RG: What happened Ashoka???? Why did u stop saying?????
Ashoka: I don’t know but I am feeling as if someone who is close to my heart (Devi) is sad and in pain…
Acharya RG: But who can be in pain and is close to u???
Ashoka: I don’t know….. I can’t understand…..
They follow DHRUV……
On the path Ashoka finds Devi’s locket fallen and thinks it to be of DHRUV or of his men and wears it and follows….. But during wearing the necklace a part of his earring falls down…..
Devi and Dhani come out of the jungle and resume for their journey….. After walking for some time she gets Ashoka’s earring piece……
Devi: Who’s it can be, father??? It’s so beautiful, but…… What’s happening to me???? Why my heart is feeling that it is of that close person of my heart????
Dhani: Don’t worry…. Keep it with u….. We will show it to rishi….. I think he will be able to identify everything…..
Devi: Yes father…..
They go towards the rishi’s house…..

Precap: Ashoka reaches DHRUV’s cave and they have fight.DHRUV surrenders while Ashoka has too many cuts on his body.

If there is any spelling or grammatical mistake then please forgive me……….Pls leave a comment and pls don’t use slangs……..If u don’t like it then write clearly but pls don’t use slangs……
Hope u all love it!!!


  1. Varshini

    |Registered Member

    It was Very nice dear . Hope asvi meet soon . Wow nice precap ,finally this druv will surrender ,that’s great . Update next epi soon

  2. Vanshika

    |Registered Member

    Hey Tiya cutie hw were ur exams.. My exams NT yet ended .. So ill start my season 2 of asvi ff aftr dusshera.. Wen ll asvi meet.. M waiting eagerly fr their meet.. OMG ashoka has sooo many cuts on his body ☹ wow the jewel exchange was best part n update soon..

    • Tiyasa


      Thanks for loving my ff so much cutie……
      Vanshu Asvi will meet in epi7 mostprobably……
      Wait until that sweetie and thanks once again for loving my ff….

      I will be waiting for ur ff and my exams were nice cutie…

  3. Trixy

    hey please dont feel offended. But i think this jewellry exchange was quite lame. Since kvki gifted ahsoka a necklace it somehow feels to stupid to se asok and devi doing that. Please please please dont feel bad. U know there is a picture in our mind of ashok wearing the necklace given by kaurwaki so it feels quite tough to imagine devi in that position. I hope u understand. What i sought to do is only improve your writing skills . But keep going. And once again dont feel bad or take anything to your heart, for i only wanr to improve u. Hope u u

    • Tiyasa


      1st of all, in my ff Ashoka is not wearing any necklace of Devi, its a chain with a locket….
      2nd is that thanks for reading it….
      And 3rd, if u want that I should improve my writing skills then pls suggest me something how I can improve…..

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