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Archi OS : Teri Meri Kahani By Fenu (ERSK)

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Hello Everyone.Most warmed welcome in my OS.

Teri Meri Kahani.
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“Archi, I know you are missing your dad. But he too needs rest. After all he was with us since the last 2 days and he didn’t even had a sound sleep. But don’t worry today we are going home. That’s why he has gone to the store to bring necessary things for us.” Sanchi said to a little baby girl who was in her arms.

The baby was looking at her wide eyed as she didn’t even get a single word that her mumma was speaking. The three days old baby had the same features as her dad, Aryan Sethia except for the doe-eyes that she took from her mother, Sanchi Aryan Sethia.

Archi had her thumb and her forefinger inside her mouth and was sucking onto it. She looked at her mother as she continued on speaking something that was still not understood by her.

“You know about three years ago, I met your dad in bike race in mid night but at that time we didn’t saw each other face then we met in Jaisalmer first time in our common friend, Shital’s wedding; we both goes to each other room for taking first jalak by hiding face with duppata and we caught by each other parents befor his room No.302 and my Room.No.201.” Sanchi spoke looking into a distance as she tried to recollect her memories.

“When we both meet each other our first impression in each other mind like “Behenji type” & “Bhundu Ram” ;60th ki heroine and kaisa boaring sa suit aur Baal (hair)toh dekho
“Chiku” “Na koi style and na koi attitude”and “JI” wali type” Sanchi said blushing a little at the memories.

Flashback Start :

“Ji Namste” Sanchi said while folding hands.

“Ji Namste” Aryan replied in same way.

“Ji Aapka naam?” Aryan ask to start conversation.

“Ji Sanchi-Sanchi Mittal aur aapka ?” Sanchi answered for the same and question.

“Ji Aryan-Aryan Sethiya.” Aryan replied with smile.

“Ji aapki gradation puri ho gayi(Is your gradation complete) ?” Aryan asked.

“Ji Haan…aur aap kya karte ho ji papa ke sath business !!” Sanchi asked.

“Ji haan” Aryan replied.

“Aap chai lenge(would you like to take tea) ?” Aryan ask while continue convo.

“Ji mein chai nahi piti( I don’t drink tea)…Aap longe (will you take)?” sanchi replied with another question

“Hanji”Aryan replied.

“Chini(Sugar)?” Sanchi ask while preparing tea for Aryan.

“Ji do chamch (yeah,Two spoon)” Aryan repled.

“Ji lijiye ji” Sanchi said and gives tea cup.

“Ji Thank you Ji “ Aryan said and took cup.

(Both think Boar Maha boar jaisi shakal waisi baat)

“Kis pareshani mein phas gayi yar (In which problem you stuck)”sanchi thinks.

“Sab kuch toh pooch liya ab kya poochu”Aryan thinks.

“Hobby ,Films” suggest by Another Aryan (which is original shade of Aryan) to Aryan. Aryan waves his hand to say Original Aryan to go away.

“Ji makkhi hain kya(is there any flies)?” Sanchi asked as she notice him.

“Ji nahi…aap films dekhi ho ?” Aryan ask.

“nahi ji…waise Jay Santoshi Maa jaise films dekh leti hoon”Sanchi said.

“Chal jhooti…aisi koi action movie hain jo tune chodi ho”Said by Sanchi(original shade) to sanchi.

“Aur aap?” Sanchi asked.

“Nahi ji…kaam se fursat nahi milti (I have no time as business)” Aryan said.

“Last month mene mere mitro ke sath Deepika ji ki film dekhi thi(Last month I watched Deepika’s movie with friends)” Aryan said as original Aryan speaks with him.

“Deepika ji ..woh kaun hain ji” Sanchi said.

“Padokone hain sayad”Aryan replied.

“Tu iss se shadi karega jo DEEPIKA PADUKONE ko nahi janti “ Original Aryan spoke.

“Ji cricket dekhte ho..Virat Kohli ji kaise lagte hain” Sanchi placed next question.

“virat Kohli ji…ji woh kaun hain ji ?” Aryan asked.

“Tu iss se shadi karengi jo VIRAT KOHLI kaun hain woh nahi janta pls yarr” original sanchi spoke.

“Ji TV pe kya dekhna pasand karte hoo ( which type of show do you watch on TV)”Aryan ask.

“Satsang”Original Aryan said in middle.

“Bike race bol abhi bhag jayenga” Original Sanchi suggest to Sanchi.

“Ji cookery show and aap” Sanchi said.

“Jo dekhta hain woh bol de sidha pani mein chalang mar dengi” Original Aryan said.

“Ji sirf news…khel kood to chalta rahenga paise kamane ki umar hain (Sports etc will go on this is age where we can earn money)” Aryan said.

“Oh God kis jamane ka prani hain (Oh God from which century he belongs)” Original sanchi said to sanchi.

“Cookary Bhajan ke baad iski akkal khatam ho jati hain (After cookry and bhajan her brain stops working)”Aryan thinks.

“Khandani tijori bharne ke alwa kuch nahi sochta(He is not thinking instead of collect money)” Sanchi thinks.

“Ji ab chale Aryanji” Sanchi said.

“Ji Sanchi ji” “yeh pehli akkal wali baat kahi hain isne”Aryan thinks.

Both cursing God for making meet this unique model to each other.

Flashback End :

“Then we again meet and locked in store room again we start our Ji wali talks and again cursed each other” Sanchi said further.

“we got to know about our original shade when we discussed about dance and Shital scolds us and told us to came in original form; we dance together on “Tumhi Ho Bandhu” ” Sanchi continued with her story thinking about the crazy times.

“We then meet in camel ride and again we meet new Aryan & Sanchi.and I gave his cap to him as Thank you Gift.” Sanchi said smiling at Archi who was still looking at her with zero expressions on her face.

“We again came together in Sajjan gudh ki rasam and some ladkewale ne Churma khane in revenge for loosing in dance and we goes to get Churma on bike and I ride bike and our sajhedari won in that case also and we saved ladkiwalo ki respect after all our Shital’s respect also attached with it. ” Sanchi continued with a smile on her face and a happy expression.

“The we got engaged , our wedding functions start and we finally got married with sad faces.” Sanchi stated further.

“Our family has no good talks because of that loan matters” Sanchi added with sad face.

“Guess what Archi ,In Goa trip we managed to clear our misunderstanding and we confessed our love for each other and we spend some beautiful moments .” Sanchi said happily whereas Archi just watching her mom.

“Then in our life Nikita came and she change everything but our sajhedari won against her also.” Sanchi said as disappointment dripped in her voice.

“Then we got world best happiness of our life I got to know I m expecting with you.” Sanchi said as a slow smile crept on her face.

It had been a years since we had been in a relationship and he was such a gentleman and the perfect guy for me.

we got re-married happily and now we are blessed with a cute angel like you.

Sanchi finished with her story and looked at Archi who was beaming at her. Sanchi smiled and kissed her baby girl on her forehead. She looked up to see Aryan standing at the doorstep of the hospital room.

“What were u doing till now ?!!” asked a curious Aryan as he entered the room.

“Telling our love story to Archi.” replied Sanchi goofily.

“You really love telling it to Everyone, right ?!!” He asked her with a smirk.

“Well yeah, its the best love story after all.” Sanchi replied.

Then they both burst out laughing. Archi also smiled cutely looking at her parents. Sanchi kissed her daughter’s nose, while Aryan caressed her forehead.
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Hello peeps. Hope all of you are good, healthy and happy. First of all I am Fenil naam toh suna hi honga.

My first ever One shot on our ARCHI. Hope you all liked it.

This OS I would love to dedicate to my MEHKU. Mehku I finished my promise woh baat alag hain ki mein bhi kab se plan kar raha tha Archi pe kuch likhne ke liye aaj likh bhi diya.

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44 Comments
  1. Though I never watched ek rishta
    But reading ur name I read it
    And it was awesome😘😘

    1. Fenil

      You always make me smile dear Polly.
      Can’t able to thank you for your sweet gesture.
      Glad that u liked it and found it as awesome.

  2. Aadya

    Amazing one Bhaiya I didn’t knew that you are an Archi fan as well. I was missing Archi so much and today I saw your Os It is really a amazing one.

    1. Fenil

      Hello lol sissy.
      I m big Architecture fan.
      Gald to know that u r also architecture fan.
      Thank you so much.
      Glad that you found it Amazing.
      Me too miss them badly. SharMan also.

      1. Aadya

        Bhaiya architecture??
        I think you wanted to type Archi. And even I miss them.

    2. Fenil

      Yeah its Archi…this Spell replacer and Auto correction will kill me one day.

      Thank you Aadya sissy….i love Archi.

  3. It was awesome Fenil, I absolutely loved the story.💕 Your writing is on fire🔥, and the flashback was too cute😉

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much Shreyu…
      glad that u liked it.
      Bas bas itni bhi tariff mat Karo…mein itna bhi khas Nahi Jun.

  4. Christie123

    Bhaiyuuuuuuuuuu!!!!!!!!!!!!! It’s mind blowing… Thank you thank u thank u for listening to my request and writing ARCHI os I am soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo happy.. psl write more on ARCHI 😍😘

    1. Fenil

      Love you Mehku.
      Glad that you loved it,
      will try for more.

      1. Christie123

        Sirf try kehne SE Kuch nhi hone Wala . Sach mein archi ko lekar article likha hei

    2. Fenil

      Oky i will writr for sure.
      You know i expected big comment from you.but its fine now.
      Will write another for sure.

      1. Christie123

        Sorry bhaiyuuuuuuuuuu for short comment. Actually I read the OS in a very short time . Situation was like we were going out at one my papa_s friend house for lunch. I got ready Forster and was waiting for mumma just then I opened ersk page and I got this at the time I was reading mumma was ready so in haste I wrote a small comment… So sorry 😅😅 anyways,
        It was just “WOW”😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
        SRSLY the ki Wala talk apka is parne ke bad the talking was just banging in my mind and in whole road,the their house I was smiling like stupids and everyone was just staring however it was really embarrassing,😛.. ithe first think what I did after coming back home was I saw that epi and srsly I was just laughing continuesly 😂😂😂 Sach mein apne TOH mujhe woh din yaad dilwadiya.thanks for that and this Amazing os. I was really overwhelmed when I read u wrote by name in the OS and dedicated this to me. Love u a ton 😘😘😘

    3. Fenil

      Oky understand…Thank you so much.

  5. TuttiFrutti

    Totally Loved it.
    Missing ERSK aND Archi.
    Awesome OS.

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much Shirali.
      Glad that you loved it.
      Gald that you too Archi’s fan.

  6. Chanya

    Its the first time that I am reading archi os..I must say bhai its superb..keep writing …

    1. Fenil

      Ohhh.
      Thanks a lot Doll….i think its ur first comment.Happy to hear ftom you that it superb.
      Will write.

  7. ReihanaThamiz

    Awesome 👍👍👍👍👍

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much.

  8. Sachu

    Hey Fenuuuu Iam extremely sorry for being late to comment. Although Iam not familiar with the characters I thoroughly enjoyed the story just like baby Archi who was hearing it for the 1st time. Ji wala romance was awesome. Keep writing n keep spreading happiness all around bro…..

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much Dii
      Glad that you liked it.
      No need to say sorry.

  9. Hello fenu bhaiya, This is the first time I’m reading an OS of you!! I got to know about this OS from chanya di <3 . I think I'm late to comment. But nothing to do because I didn't know that you wrote an OS. I don't know who Archi is. But I read it.

    My views :-

    1. Your grammar is perfect. I'm very happy because of it. I love perfect grammar in stories.

    2. Your story idea looks perfect too. You have presented it in a new way. It has made this story interesting!

    3. I like your descriptive style of writing. It's not too long nor too short.

    4. Thank you for translating that Hindi sentences into English . It was a great help for me.

    5. You have written this in a direct straight way . I love it .

    6. Ji wala conversation is a super idea ! It's awesome.

    7. What's the meaning of 'Theri Meri Kahani'? I didn't understand the title but I read the story without hesitance.

    8. At the beginning, your presentation of the dialogues are great.

    That's all I have to say. I'm happy to see you writing OSes. You write very well bhaiya.

    Keep writing .
    Good Luck.
    Love you bhaiya.

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much priyu
      Glad that u liked it.
      Teri Meri Kahani means My and Yours story

  10. Hello bhaiya.. I dont watch this show but just read as I was bored…I must say it’s mind blowing bhaiya..

    Ji wala talks toh bahut acha tha..Laughed a lot…kitne Formal act kar rahe the a dono..Infact they aren’t like that but just acts formal..Hai na bhaiya?

    Archi…Cute baby…Just looking at her mumma with zero expression as she Don’t know what her mumma is telling to her but gave a beautiful smile at the end….

    Finally at the end u told na k fenil Naam toh suna hi hoga? Haha…Aap itne famous ho na TU pe toh sab ne suna hoga bhaiya…after all u r a familiar writer bro..

    U know what, I haven’t even read the updates Of YRKKH properly but came here to read ua OS…when I’ll get time I’ll read that…

    U have written very well bhaiya..The way they act formal was just hilarious bro..Liked that part…

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much Raf Sissy.
      Glad that u liked it.
      aap na bahut tarif karte ho.

      1. Yeah..coz u deserve that bhaiya…Understood? Waise aapko itne ache ideas aate kahan se bhaiya? Ok..i guess, U have learnt from me only na bro?😂😂😂😂

  11. Bhaiya, aaj Mahima ka birthday hai na?? Mujhe properly nahi pata..But I think so today is her birthday!!! Do u know bro?Let’s see whether today is her birthday or not bhaiya..i wished her..agar aaj birthday nahi tha toh?? 😂😂

    1. Fenil

      i too wished her as u comment hahahha

      1. Still my comment is waiting for moderation?🙁

      2. Oh..Lol…😂

  12. Vivian20

    Mast mast!!!

    1. Fenil

      Thank you Bhai ….Happy Ganesh Chaturthi and Michhami Dukkadam

  13. Awesome
    just loved it to the core

    1. Fenil

      Thanks a lot dear Nakul
      glad that you loved it.

  14. Awesome
    I m loving with your writing.
    So lovely
    Thanks for write on ARCHI

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much Dear Nishi.
      Glad that you loved it.
      Thanks for the all appreciation.

  15. Loved it.
    Nice OS
    Archi was so cute.
    missing ERSK and Archi

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much Dear Nakul

  16. Soumya85

    Awwww it was sooo cute
    The little archi she was not understanding anything 😂
    I loved it

    1. Soumya85

      And the ji wala talk was amazing 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂lol

    2. Fenil

      Thank you so much bhootni.

  17. Aarti32

    Kitta cute OS tha Bhai..aajkal aap dhadadhad ek pe ek fantastic is likhte ja rhe ho..good job

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much Aaru.
      Glad dthat you liked it.
      Yaa FF Nahi Likha.

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