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THE APARTMENT: (an ff on manmarziyan) Chapter 3

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THANK U SOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH GUYS……startz, jewel, aliya, brin, Jessie , s.v, neetz, jnana, subha, gauri, myra, sree-deeksha, sweetie, rossi …and all who read the ff..I mean silent readers….. u don’t know how much happy I am by seeing ur comments….bt sorry cudnt reply u individually.. i had my practical exams… and rossi …. yes m the same tara… who left the ff in half… lol.. bt m really happy that u remember me..
U can read my previous chapters here :

Previous chapters

CHAPTER 3: my sceptical wife!
I was leaning on radhika..when I noticed that outrageous thing….i couldn’t believe my eyes…. how can it be… My wife was not visible in the mirror!! Yes…. she was sitting right in front of me..I could see her ..feel her..bt just behind in the mirror..where I could see my face..my wife was not at all visible…. “Radhika…..” I shouted… as I woke up from the deep sleep… I saw everyone looking at me.. what?? am I in the office?? Was it a dream?? Few of my staff members suggested that m stressed and should leave… I decided to do the same…..
When I reached my apartment it was 7 already… I wondered what radhika was doing…. I rang the bell. After some time she opened. Our apartment looked beautiful..she had managed to decorate it with all household stuffs…radhika always aspired to become an Interior Designer….nd i could see the talent in her…

A: are u all right??
R: yeah…why??
A: no..just like that…
R: hmm…u tell howz ur day??
A: bakwas…
R: why??

I went close to her and whispered in her ears… “coz i badly missed u..” she smiled at first then pushed me saying,, “nautanki..” she went to the kitchen…
Yaar i don’t understand girls… if u tell them u haven’t miss them at all they get angry, insecure,,, and sometimes even jealous…bt the moment u say u miss them..they start behaving weird..I mean take radhika into consideration.. what’s nautanki in this if I tell her i missed her… women and their thoughts!! Unpredictable… really!!!
After dinner I was in my bedroom..working on my laptop…it was already 11:30… but where is radhika?? What is taking he so much time…in the kitchen… I thought to check once…and to my great surprise…she wasn’t there.. I looked here and there..bt it was of no use…it reminded me of my dream… suddenly i felt someone’s hand on my shoulder.. i was terror stricken… i turned back to see radhika… “ufff…” said i in a relief tone..

R: what happened??
A: nothing…where were u??
R: in the balcony…
A: so late?? Anyway..lets go to sleep…
R: u want to sleep??
A: yeah… y??

R: oh… I thought we would spent some time together…
I was touched by her words…but i had office the next day..so couldn’t help it… “radhika…we shall spent time on weekends..as i really have work..” i could understand the disappointment on her face..bt was helpless…. it was probably the first time she wanted something..nd m that unlucky husband who missed it… i knw she also wishes for something..nd we need to give our marriage a chance… although it was arranged marriage!!
She was sleeping when i was thinking about all this… a lot of time has passed since our marriage..but we never thought of consummating it…it was high time now..and our family was also expecting our kids… I thought …. !!

The next day:
I spoke to radhika about my feelings… “radhika…tum samajh rehi ho na…I mean.. humein humare rishte ko aage barahna hoga…u knw what i mean…….
“stop blabbering….m I a kid..that i wont understand??” said she.. I was shocked at her direct reply…

Few days passed..i guess both of us were waiting for the week ends… but I was little sceptical about radhika’s behaviour… one day she said she was going to the terrace…but when i went there she was no where to be found. When i returned to the apartment i saw her sitting there…. again one day I found her cutting veggies..she cut her hand by mistake.. but didn’t allow me to bandage he finger…i sort of ignored al this….
On Friday night when I returned from my office… i saw the apartment decorated in the same way..as I had dreamt… i was surprised…. radhika came out in the same night gown…she called me near her…i was a bit hesitant… she grabbed my shirt and pulled me…she pushed me down on the bed…i was again surprised by her wild behaviour…she slowly came over me…she began to unbutton my shirt… somehow I was not liking this… i got up…
R:what happened??

A: radhika…..
As i was going to tell her….I saw my image on the mirror..nd she was not visible there….I was horrified….i pinched myself..nd it was not a dream..!! i got up with a sudden jolt…. she was surprised… “what happened arjun…?? my love…” i stepped back… “no..no..dont come near me….don’t just…” she didn’t listen….she stepped forward… “arjun aaj toh humare Milan ki raat hain na…tum darr kyun rhe ho” I knew she wasn’t my radhika…I found a flower vase…nd as she came near..I banged it on her head…nd to my great surprise…the vase broke…bt she didn’t bled…. inow i knew she was….. “where is radhika??” I shouted…she smiled…. and then she disappeared…
SCREEN FREEZES

To be continued

Okay so most of u might have understood…what has happened… bt yet many mysteries are unsolved…so i guess..it will be 2-3 shots more..so bear me till then. don’t forget to comment..best wishes

38 Comments
  1. Sree_deeksha

    Awsome. One yaar Tara…where is radhika …??? Im really tensed post the next one asap please… I’m gonna die out of suspense…

    1. Tara

      thanks dear..
      no no plzz dont die..
      haha
      i will post soon

  2. Geeth

    super plot tara i enjoyed to the core iam a very big fan of manmarziyan….very intresting to read a thriller story…i luv to read thriller stories keep going waiting for next epi:)

    1. Tara

      thanks a lot geeth
      yeah m also a great fan of mmz…and mostly ardhika..
      love the couple.. hehe

  3. Spooky episode tara. Hope Arjun finds Radhika soon

    1. Tara

      thanks aliya..

  4. Tara tara taraaaa it was awsomeeeee 🙂 post sooon

    1. Tara

      thanks a lot neetz

  5. Really can’t wait buddy it was awesome yaar …….loved it

    1. Tara

      thanks shreya..
      i saw ur cmmnt in that abhigya ff.. and replied there

  6. Sweetie

    Scary one Tara.. 🙂 You have written an FF earlier??What is the name??Please post next one soon..Love you loads and take care.. 🙂

    1. Tara

      yes.. it was called manmarziyaan: roots of friendship and love
      bt i suggest dont read that.. its boring..
      anyways thanks a lot for cmmntng…

  7. Starz

    Really wanted to know what will happen….please update next one soon ….. Awesome episode…. loads of love and take care….

    1. Tara

      thanks startz…
      really happy to knw that..
      love u too

  8. tooo spookey…i had good bumps…poor thing what happen to radhika…???

    1. Tara

      haha… time will tell that..
      thanks for reading and cmntng

  9. Jewel

    what happened to radhika?? is she dead?? i can’t wait tara, please post the next

    1. Tara

      yeah yeah jewel.. i will post it tmrw..
      dnt worry..
      thanks for reading

  10. Sammy

    tara ..are you the riya d cruz ..who is writing the ff named Apartment kumkum bhagaya ..actually i found the same plot with very small changes ….but i loved and this was so awesomme

    1. Tara

      no she copied my ff.. i had written it for twinj.. the sad part is she didnt inform me before posting.. -_-
      actually i dnt mind.. bt i didnt waanted my ff to be a abhigya one… specially this one.. it was dear to me..
      anyways thanks sammy

  11. Rossy

    Superb….superb Tara…still I have Goosebumps…what happened to radhika…poor rads…horror thrill…it chilled…n if u have time continue with ur previous ff…I remember that when trio went to movie they bumped into Arjun n had a little word exchanged…lol…m crazy to remember many things…sorry if m wrong about ur story

    1. Tara

      o rossy.. u have a wonderful memory.. even i had forgotten.. 😛 lol
      btw thanks a lot…
      nd yeah i read ur story,, its too good.. plzz update soon.. cant wait

  12. Jessie

    Awesome Tara.. hope Neil knew abt d ghost.. scared Arjun!!loved. Reading it.. curious 4 nxt chappy.. will Arjun find Radz..

    1. Tara

      thanks jessie,,
      umm btw there is no neil in my ff..
      i had mentioned earlier
      anyways… lets see what is in wait

  13. Brin

    Ooohhhhh this is good, where could Radhika be, eagerly waiting for the next update. 🙂

    1. Tara

      haha..
      thankew so much brin..
      well i could say just have patience and wait

  14. Jnana

    Awesome dear…… Where is radz….. Full of suspense….. If she is not radz, then where is she??? Eagerly waiting for the next…
    .

    1. Tara

      next chapters will reveal…
      haha
      thanks btw

  15. Gauri

    Awesome Tara 🙂 waiting for the next 🙂 love u

    1. Tara

      thanks gauri..
      love u too dear

  16. S.v

    tara what is this yaar watching a ghost movie feel gosh im gulping for 2 days i will not see the mirror lol but lovely what will happen next first time reading a horror genre ff and it is seriously mind blowing lovely update tara next part soon

    1. Tara

      thanks sv..
      it really means a lot to me…
      🙂

  17. hmm . so u also write ff on manmarziyan . good . nice epi . waiting for the next

    1. Tara

      thanks chandra..
      yes.. i have started..
      btw u didnt read this??
      i posted this as twinj ff earlier

  18. Awesome story just read all 3 episodes at once and I just have one word AMAZING

    1. Tara

      thanks a lot gianna…
      loved ur dp.. sho cute

  19. Awesome. ..but where did rads go???…plz don’t seperate ardhika. ….loving this story very much. ..keep it up honeyyy. ..love you loads

  20. _Ritu

    Its thrilling Tara 🙂 m really loving d mystery…will read d nxt and den comment…loads of love 🙂

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