Alluringly Dangerous ( INTRO )

Jezz was standing amidst her friends in a well lit room which should’ve been the living room. Everything about the room was perfect but yet something felt out of place . All a sudden she heard faint whisper of voices beckoning her towards a narrow dim lit room , where she saw someone standing with his back turned towards her . As soon as he turned she gasped “Ro” . He smiled genuinely at her & she felt cold running down her spine . He slowly beckoned her towards the only window present over there, through which she could see a house surrounded by some tall trees . It seemed familiar enough but damn! she cursed herself for not being able to register anything quick enough. Thats when she noticed those faded leaf green curtains along with those hangings and her cot. Is it her room and that house her home but how! She quickly turned to find none and herself in a completly dark surrounding coz of which she got scared , not that she is afraid of dark but this one somehow seemed grave………

AM NEW TO THIS FAMILY AND I HOPE YOU’LL ACCEPT ME. I DNT KNOW IF YOU’LL LIKE MY PLOT . IF YES THEN PLZ LET ME KNOW .

Credit to: Anandha

7 comments

  1. This was sooooo short 🙁 just had started and didnt knew when it ended… Well, with this I feel you write beautifully. Plzz update the next asap and long one plzz

  2. aastha

    Anandha its really spooky………you have got a great talent………plzz update the next one sooon…..is this based on any serial ???????

  3. Advaita

    It was really good. Plz continue and try to give longer updates.
    Hope to see you soon. Tc.

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