ALIEN FEELINGS – Part-8

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“Annika bhabhi see this picture”- Soumya show photo of a guy with a choti on his centre of head,”Daksh Khurana”.
“Daksh Khurana.. Hamari ghar se kuch mat churana”- Annika sang acting funny,” This choti is looking like a yalneer tree”.
“Yal-neer!!”- Shivaay wondered the reason his Paanika is using the other words of paani..water,” what the wuck!!”.

“Its yalneer not any wuck!!”- Annika show her hand like a traffic police to stop his language attitude,” Coconut tree”.
“According to a survey cocos nucifera is famous in so many names all over the India like Yalneer, Narikela, kobbari, Thengai, Nariyal, Nadia, Narcole, Narlu, Naral, Gola, Narjeel “-Soumya took a long breath tired,” In foreign country it is also…”.
“I called you here to solve problem with Annika,neither to give a description on coconut nor to hit me with coconut on my brain”-Shivaay was highly irritated with this much details about the cheap choti of that Cheppada Daksh ,” I wish I could cut that choti from head of that specific psycho Khurana”.

“No violence.. Only peace”- Annika raised her palm again,” This is not good for health”.
“Khanna!!”- Rudra yelled like his elder brother,”bring a pair of scissor soon”.
“I am going from here”-Omkara pulled his jata a little to tight the long hairs,”Bhabhi will call me with some weird name now”.
“Kanji ankhen wala Pati parmeswar.. Pehelwan chhotey devarji…”- Rudra put index finger on his head,”Your name may be lambe baal wale bade devarji or Jatadhari hippi bade devarji”.
“Deewar not Dewar”-Shivaay muttered,” They are like wall in between this problem and its solution”.

“I think the..”-Omkara fell a gust of wind , the same name his wife Gouri gave him,”jata-dhari hippi!!”.
“Soumya may end up with a name of kumbala sized tomato chhoti devraaniji for Annika bhabhi”- Rudra jocked then bit his tongue,”oops!!sorry Sumo this was for fun”.
“What is this Kumbala now??”- Shivaay lost a little more self control over anger,” My head is going back to spinning mode”.
“Bade bhaiyya..according to a survey kumbala….”-Soumya started again all smiling.
“Stop now!!’-Shivaay scold his gang,”All out from here quick. This is my problem and I will solve this”.

“No way.. “-OmRu put hand on heart,” all for one… one for all”.
“Huh!!”- Shivaay saw from the corner of his eyes,”Soumya you have to make a list of all the name Lord Shiva have except for Shivaay, Omkara and Rudra, this is your punishment”.
“Shankarji…”-This name from Soumya have its effect on a man who know this name of Lord Shivaji too well.
“This evil and mad man”- Soumya explained about the nature of Daksh Khurana to Annika adding appropriate amount of drama.. from her side , all she know and find about that man.
Shivaay wanted to add more scene in this story but situation and presence of younger ones didn’t help him.

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Omkara Singh Oberoi won over evil-lana with the help of Gouri..his wife,Gouri Omkara Singh Oberoi finally.
“I will click a couple photo”- Buamma tab her mobile,” put your hand on her shoulder Omky”.
The loop holes in pre-nuptial agreement , Jhanvi’s hard work and wish to stop the marriage and the truth Omkara never left help them.
“Don’t build a dream palace in your mind”- Om gritted his teeth,” you have to leave soon from this house”.
” Ahem ahem!!”- Jhanvi disturbed,” you can have private discussion later inside your room”.
“Welcome home bhabhi”- Rumya hugged the newly arrived bride.
Dadi smiled and blessed them.

“I will call Bade bhaiyya and bhabhi”- Soumya ran again not to loss any weight.
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“Have a long happy married life together “- Annika wished OmRi. Shivaay stood unused to public display of affection in front of a new entry.
” I know you”- Shivaay remembered ,” I saw you the other day, you did some paun lagoo right”.
” Haan jethji”- Gouri felt shy and the elder brother of her husband more awkward.
” Er.. you should call me bade bhaiyya like Soumya does”- Shivaay accepted this girl in his way in the family.

” I will..”- Gouri bend down to take blessing from her new elder brother and then from his wife, Annika bhabhi,” Bhabhi is sounding weird to my ears.. I will call you Annika di always”.
“I never thought Chulbul is married to our Omkara”- Annika spill her bean,” not even in dream”.
“This is reality”- Shivaay snapped fingers forwards her eyes,” Accepting truth is not that easy task “.
“Who cares!!” -Annika left smiling with wives of her husband’s brother.
“I do ..I do”-Omkara from inside of Shivaay chanted.
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“Look at the progress report”- Shivaay unfold the magenta colour paper, Progress report of Saahil,” so poor performance in mathematics”.
” I will do that for Saahil”- Annika mocked him,” I will teach math to him from today”.
“I did but he is more then confused and unmindful “- Shivaay was not ready to take any blame,” I am confused about his problem”.

“This is a problem every orphan feels and go through”- Annika sighed with a heavy breath,” no one to take care and cuddle”.
” I am here for both of you” – Shivaay hugged his wife tight and ran his fingers through her long hairs,” Saahil is like OmRu for me”.
Realization stuck him. Annika remember Saahil…their argument over his study..may be him too,”Kalavathi Thakur”.

“Its Parvathi”- Annika correct for the second time.
” You are correct ANNIKA”- SSO on mission,” it is Parvathi always till the end of time,” not any Kalavathi”.

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33 Comments
  1. Wow di!!! As always khikitode nahi nahi darwajatode funny epi… yalneer tree part was just SUPERB…. Bichara sivaay bhaiya ki toh OMM ho gaya hain….

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Bunny…Bechare Shivaay Bhaiyya.

  2. Awesome di. Loved it. ?

  3. Astha diii!! So I’m still confused,did annika really lose her memory???
    Badeyaaaa epi!!! Loved the ending as usual…Update nxt one soon…

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Bhavana…why will she!! we don’t know lol. I will try to post soon.

  4. As usual khidkitod. …….?? asthababy wow coconut ke baare main itna saara gyan….nice ..i like it… (fuil on your bhaiya style..but but but not romantic?????wink wink)

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Darling Arpita ko romance chahiye aww… I will try to be romantic here after.

  5. Niriha

    Fabulous part….loved it

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Sweety darling Niriha.. thanks yaar

  6. Mehakchalag

    Awesome di..The best thing of your ff u make shivaay bhaiya so cute.He is doing very hardwork to get back anika’s memory which is the biggggg suspense of your ff.Whether she lost memory or she is just pretending.Keep writing and waiting for next.

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Mehak…Sweet Singh Oberoi is Shivaay bhaiyya always in my stories. I am writing ..you stay waiting ha ha ha…

  7. Navz

    Yalneer…hahha and sumo giving description abt everything .funny and awesome like shivika.

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thanks Navya dear..Sumo and her research lol.

  8. Nita D

    Hey Astha….what a concept….Anika ka real memory loss….I m loving how the story is progressing….The confusion of ShivOmRu with Lord Shiva in the first episode was hilarious and so was when Anika asks if she stays as a paying guest and all those Shivika convo….good going Astha baby….

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Nita…Kya good going yaar.. itna bada accident oops!!incident hogaya hai Annika bhabhi ke saath aur usse bhi chhota chhota incidents horahe hain Shivaay Bhaiyya ke saath… This story is not progressing.. it is revolving only . I will progress it soon.

      1. Nita D

        I read it from starting na, all the parts together, so mere liye the story has progressed

  9. Gayathri.visu

    Khidkithod part di… SSO is so cute n caring. Sumo’s research, my head is spinning! OMG!! So many names for Thengaai… How did u know this? Om’s expressions n Rudy’s new name for OmYa….lol! But I can’t still understand di, Anika’s memory loss is real or fake?? Waiting for next part di.

    Sorry di, I can’t able to comment on prev part.

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Gayayhri…Thanks yaar.
      Kobbari .. Google chachi was there to help me in few languages few I knew earlier.
      Sumo and her research and Their new peaceful names..ha ha ha…
      Koi baat nahi about not writing a comment before this.

  10. Nila

    superb part ASTHA with full of SSO and Yal-neer(first I get confused and thanks for giving different names I know only ILA(I)-neer in Tamil) LOL

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Nila…a lots of Yalneer for you like they hit on Chingam sir in motu- patlu…ha ha ha

  11. Surbhi Sharma

    Aiyyo !! Di , my head is also spinning like Shivu . Ani ki memory hai ya nhi ye sochte sochte.
    Di , as usual khidkitod epi .
    Post soon . ??????

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Surbhi.. don’t think much. just keep going with the flow.
      Aiyyo.. head spining like Shivaay Bhaiyya. take care kobbari queen.

  12. Superb astha di…
    Sumo n her research aarrgghhh…..my head is spinning.
    By god u provided so many names for coconut btw tnq for additional information.
    Shivaay’s confusion for yalneer was good n till kumbala he got fed up ha ha…
    Also the convo about sahil’s report card was funny.
    Update next soon..

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Madhu… thanks yaar. Gangaram of Shivaay bhaiyya happened here.

  13. Awesome episode astha di…seriously I’m feeling sad for our shivaay bhaiyya..he is so confused nd tensed about his wife..i like the way u define the situations…keep going..

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Zaveesha dear..he was tensed but the last of this part he was sure of his next move. Thanks yaar.

  14. Alekhika20

    superb updt

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thanks Alekhika dear.

  15. Tanz

    khidkitod part Astha di 🙂
    mujhe aisa kyu lag raha hai it was all fake memory loss drama….She remembers Chulbul, she remembers Saahil is an orphan……kuch gadbad hai…
    Saumya dear where did you go, you have come back with wikipedia stored in your mind…
    coconut ke itne saare naam…I only know 2or 3 out of them and I seriously have no clue what is Kumbaya…..Astha Di you always manage to spin our head …
    and SSO is on mission—-this sounds too good…but what is this Parvathi…I really don’t remember ..

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Tanz…cool Darling cool. Kumbala is a large round oval big vegetable used in curry. I don’t know its other name yaar. referring you to the next part.. itne saare coconut the iss part mein toh head- spin is a must like Chungam sir from Motu-Patlu

  16. Jerry_36

    Hey Aastha di !! The episode was mind blowing. I never thought that the topic of Daksh’s pony will be so interesting??
    And the way Anika called everyone, is too awesome. Enjoyed it a lot?

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Jerry…
      keep enjoying alien feelings dear.

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