ALIEN FEELINGS – Part-7

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“Doctor”-Shivaay Singh Oberoi shouted from hospital corridor for the staff and a stretcher for his unconscious wife. She need treatment very soon, the amnesia, her accident and his plan to get his wife soon took its troll over her to result in her this conditions.
“Nothing to worry Mr. Oberoi”- the elderly lady doctor smiled at his concern for the girl..,”She ..”.
“My wife”- Shivaay uttered with pride,”Is there any major problem”.
“Nothing to worry for now”- the doctor regretted for asking about her identity ,”Some times I need to watch news channel carefully”.
Shivaay Singh Oberoi smiled and wait for his Annika to regain sense.
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“He is dead for me..for us”- Omkara shouted as his mom and Buamma as they look at him with hopeful eyes,”I hate her for acting as Chulbul to earn my trust”.
“So you find it finally”-Jhanvi walk up to her son,”Yoi did a mistake by leaving her behind right after marriage in Bareilly and the poor girl”.
“She is not poor and very cunning enough to gain sympathy from others by fake tears”- Omkara tried to fit his observation and result about the experiment on Gouri in the mind of his mother and Buamma.
Shwetlana, the chudail came down , a paper in her hand neatly folded and flaunts in front of them all then demanded for her marriage with Omkara to be held soon.
“That girlish girl under the cover of a boy was best as compared to the burned old jalli jalani of your age with a look of disgusted facial expression of a lady giant with her large and thick lips”- Buamma slowly make a fun of the old women her favourite grand son is set to marry against the wish of all family members,”Gouri was the best..and this Jalli Jallani is the worst.
Omkara Singh Oberoi keenly observed and differentiate the character of the two cheap women he met ..
Gouri..a silent but cool breeze sending a positively thought and peace to mind and heart..the other side Shwetlana..a Gayle to destroy every soft material came her way for her aim of gaining property.
The prenuptial stamp in her hand..If they are alike then by now Gouri must have make a tend in front of his house and demand for a large amount of all I mony from him like his own mother is doing to terrify his money minded father..Mr. Oberoi.
“Some thing is there I misses out”- He said finally as the result of the long hard work his hair covered brain did,”Some thing more is there I missed”.
“Oye Omky Shomky”- Buamma used her elbow on his arm,”Missing something or some one.. may be Gouri”.
“Omkara Singh Oberoi give no shit to a girl like her”- He concluded and ran up to his room afraid may be his mom and buamma willbeable to change his idea about that particular girl from Bareilly…his wife by their situational marriage.
“I am trying to believe the truth of that Gouri,I am the single witness to the suicide of Jhanvi Thakur”- Om kept his hands near his heart,”This philosophy and looking things from a positive point is not helping me “.
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“Soumya”- Jhanvi find her younger daughter in law coming with a small bag , Rudra following keeping a distance,”Task at hand will be easy around Rudra and his presence gives a funny touch to problems and solutions”.
“This girl”- Buamma looked at her size and then at Soumya,”She seems familiar to my eyes..or I am getting old”.
“Soumya Rudra Singh Oberoi”- Jhanvi gave identity to her daughter in law,”Rudra’s wife”.
“Rudra got married”- Buamma gave unbelievable expression.
“He is married, Omky is married, Shivaay is married”- She sat dramatically,”For whom did I came long way from Canada as now all the handsome boy in Mumbai are married leaving me heart broken”.
“My sweet heart Darling Buamma”- Rudra hugged Buamma close by his arms,”I know you love O more then you love me and Shivaay bhaiyya..you should blame him in this case”.
“I will write a thesis on this semester about marriage”- Priyanka thought in her mind,”My home is a laboratory for that experiment ..Shivaay Bhaiyya married Annika bhabhi forcefully after black mailing on Saahil, Rudra bhaiyha and Soumya get married in hangover state ,Om Bhaiyya married some Gouri bhabhi from Bareilly and I am the most and worst example with a broken marriage with Ranveer Randhwa”.
“Huh!!!”- Soumya dragged Prinku away from that place,”come with me”.
Dadi and Buamma gave teasing glances to Rudra Singh Oberoi.
“Hello Bhaoyya”- Rudra’s mobile flashed with his brother’s name,”Yeah I picked her up from airport and we reached home few minutes back and your work is done”.
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“Annika….”- Shivaay caressed her hair as soon as she regain sense,”are you feeling weak “.
“A little..I got a shock there”-Annika mumbled, air with a thin layer came from her mouth.
“I was afraid at this”- Shivaay bugged her,”Don’t dare do that to me again”.
“Stay away you Billu”- Annika came out from his hug away,”Stay away..you are hazardous to health”.
“We should go home now”-Shivaay picked her up in his arm again like he brought her in,”You can hold me for support”.
“We are getting unnecessary attention in this public place Shivaay”- Annika hide her face deep in his neck that send shivers down his nerve and then up towards his heart .
“Stop wriggling in my arm.. I may drop you”- Shivaay tightened his hold on her waist,”You are too heavy..bilkul Moti ho tum”.
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“Annika she is “- Shivaay took Soumya in to their room.
“She is Soumya..You only told that she is coming here”- Annika mocked with confidence,”You have low memory”.
“Says who!!”- SSO show his tadi a little bit only then advised himself,”You have low memory..Insert lots of silicon and germanium micro SD card in your brain soon Shivaay”.
“We will talk a lot Annika Di..I will bring some snacks and ask Priyanka to join us here on pool side”.
“May be a movie can do with us”- Annika suggested after glaring at the single Billu in that room to throw him out indirectly,” A Reema Lagoo movie”.
“I agree di.. We will miss Reemaji so”-Soumya Tendulkar, the marathi girl leave to bring necessary things.
Annika sat on the edge of pool.. Shivaay leaned against the trunk of the tree.
The pool water and his eyes..Annika find no different in these two things… calm yet desire full… a thousand emotions playing hide and seek…perhaps alien to both of their heart.

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41 Comments
  1. Alekhika20

    Nice update

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thanks Alekhika dear

  2. Awesome di.

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thankd dwet ,keep loving dear.

  3. Dhar

    Fantastic episode ?? plzz post the next update ASAP

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thanks yaar Dhar. keep feeling alien feelings in your heart.

  4. Awesome….
    Caring husband Shivaay…?
    Rumya scene was cute….
    Waiting fr d nxt…. ?

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Shivika…thank you yaar…
      I will try to post soon.

  5. Navz

    Last lines r perfect describing their situation??.asusual super duper funny and lovable episode aastha dear..hope u update the next part soon.gn dear.

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Navya…Thank you . Sweet Shivikaful dream dear.
      I will try to post soon yaar.

  6. Arthi

    Superb dr………. As always….

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thanks Arthi dear… keep feeling alien feelings.

  7. Mehakchalag

    Amazing di…Loved it.So today we get omri and rumya scenes in your ff.Awesome.I love this dialogue ‘jallel janani’ and when buama says that is sune par suhaga type.

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thanks Mehak. Hmm.. finally some scenes for OmRi and Rumya. I too love the word “Jalli Jallani” very much.

  8. Superbb!!!!! di…. As always u increase my alien feeling…. ab tho pakka ma mars janabali hun… Hahaha…..

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Bunny…Mars may be better then this earth during summer , at least we can expect some more hot there but here it is very dangerous in summer.
      Thanks yaar

  9. khitkithod ff astha di
    ??

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thanks Maggi. Keep storing alien feelings in your heart.

  10. Super fantabulous

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Feel all the alien feelings friend.

  11. Surbhi Sharma

    Di , khidkitod. Mast . Jaka jak . Jhakkas. Once again u nailed it .
    ???????????

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Surbhi..Thanks yaar chhoti.

  12. Awesome… I didn’t remember if I commented before or not I’m sorry if I haven’t..post next one soon di

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Madhu… this was your first time with my story. Keep restoring alien feelings.
      Thank you dear and I will try to post soon.

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Sweety Darling Niriha.Aww… my grade and certificate I think “A”.
      Jocking yaar.

  13. Niriha

    Awesome part

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thanks yaar Niriha.

  14. Nila

    Amazing part Astha along with Rumya scenes Wow

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thanks Nila. keep enjoying this alien feelings.

  15. Khidkitod. …tum late thi..but back with bang…yes.you added reema lagoo ji..nice..
    Last part was awesome. …
    Ha ha both Sdo and didi ko kuch kuch hone laga he…??

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Arpita Darling..I always came with bang after short leave.
      Felt sad at the demise of Reemaji..I am watching “Naamkaran” from last few dayss as it is being aired after our DBO @12 PM..
      Will surely miss Mrs. Dayabanthi Mehta… may God give that pure soul a place in heaven..
      Do read the OS “The best Anniversary gift”.. too . Its confusing and funny too.
      Happy weekend.

  16. Tanz

    Amazing Di you included all the pairs in this part. It was superb .And the best part was that you remembered Reema Ma’am.She was a really good actor .may her soul rest in peace…?

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Tanz… Surely we will miss Reema Lagoo. She was always amazing and no one can take her place as a mother in old Hindi movies and as Dayabanthi Mehta too.
      There were not all the pairs..Gouri is absent still but nothing to worry when family is playing Cupid .
      Thanks and all the alien feelings may reach the extreme string of your heart.
      Happy weekend.

  17. Jerry_36

    Hey Aastha di !! Really sorry for commenting late. But the episode as usual was fantastic. Awesomeness overloaded. Do post the next soon❤

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Jerry…thanks dear . I will try to post soon. Check the OS “The best Anniversary gift”.

  18. Hi…i have not commented on any of ur this ff..nd i have missed some parts also..but this one is awesome..ur writing style is very unique..i thought that I’ll read all the parts…I’m reading ffs on TU when i have my exam tomorrow… I’m very much addicted to TU..(people get addicted to fb nd insta nd here we r…)my younger sis is scolding me to prepare for exams… but for a refreshment of my mind I always came here…now coming on ur ff it is awesome..i have just read ur OS nd commented there too..it was indeed awesome… best wishes…

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Zaveesha.. first thing I want to day is All the best for your examination . I am confused to scold you or thank you. Love you dear ..just finish this war( exam is like war only)and come back soon.

      1. Thanks a lot for ur wishes…well scolding will be more appropriate… don’t know why i don’t take so tension for my exams..well it’s a good thing..but sometimes thodi tension chahiye tbhi padhai hoti hai…love u too…nd the war will end on 4th june…nd i can’t wait for long for reading wonderful ffs here…
        Nd 1 question.. if u don’t mind i want to know ur age(if u r willing to tell) so that i will know that how to address u…btw if u wanna know mine I’ll be 19 on 23rd…

    2. Aastha_Reddy

      Zaveesha..well in that case you can call me as Astha di. I am elder then you. you can check my details on my profile. I also always remains calm before and during exam and my friends are like hitting me with hammer directly on my cerebrum. Hakuna matata(means no worry),all will be more then well . Exam are like our mom are ready to fight against the universe for our good result. Hey advance happy birth day as I don’t know we will meet after this or not.

      1. Ohk Astha di…
        Nd thanks a lot for the birthday wishes…(first wisher…)

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