ALIEN FEELINGS – Part-6

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“Your mobile is here “- Annika looked at the smart phone on ground of garden and then at the golden haired security guard who dropped it,” he left in hurry”.
“No password..just swipe the screen to right.. Weird and careless man”- She thought.
“Shivaay is paying a huge amount to these black men every month”- She thought ,”Let me check with his mobile once”.
“Break all the glass on my car..come home and break every glass window and doors..break every piece of glass after coming home with me”- She was breaking the window panel of his car and this kanji eyed man is encouraging her in the video,” Very weird thing. But when did she broke his car and why did she broke it with a cricket bat at the first place??”….
The pool side scene came to the scene in the next video .. their hug inside the water..wet pool and the effect of fruit punch.. sleeping in each others embrace .
The next scene took her breath away.. She in an wedding outfit and Shivaay in one cream and white kurta and black pearls dragging her..misbehaving her..chasing her and a car blast followed.
She ran directly to his room. He was there drinking Americano.
“Shivaay this video”- Annika show him the reality of their marriage,his arrogant nature and her helplessness,”When did we both perform on a play. We won the prize I think”.
Shivaay Singh Oberoi keenly observed his prize and her innocent nature..He won the prize to lost it midway… she is the prize of all his misdeed in past..Lucky or unlucky. He don’t know either..
“Will you believe me Annika??”- He took a deep and long breath ,”It is real yaar.. not a drama or any play”.
“That I forced you ..blackmailed you and tortured you for real”- Shivaay accepted his all mistake without any fear on his heart,”That I married you forcefully”.
“I don’t believe you this time”- Annika declined..,”you are too good to behave that way with any girl..and I am your best friend”.
Shivaay stood in front of the mirror to have a clear view of his personality..the tadibaaz Shivaay Singh Oberoi he was once before few months and now..he is Shivaay, she had changed him so much and left him in the middle of life.

“Lets go and meet some one then”- Shivaay hold her hand with care,his warm palm covered her sweating fingers in a clasp,”Lets go now”.
“Bhaiyya where are you going?”- Rudra met his brother and sister-in-law midway in the garden,”shall we join with you for emergency case”.
“Do another favour on me “- Shivaay threw the order,”Call Soumya back home soon from her holiday trip”.
“I will call her now”- Rudra dialed his wife and asked to come from her friends place as soon as possible.
“Who is this Soumya?”- Annika threw her dragger aiming at his disturbed mind.
“My sister.. your sister”- He focussed on the road looking ahead but taking a slight side glance of her face.
“But Priyanka is our sister right”- She argued back,”You have two sister!!”.
“Priyanka is all our sister..Mine
OmRu and Yours too”- Shivaay stopped the car at the red traffic signal,” But Soumya is our sister..that is yours mine and Om, not Rudra’s sister but his wife”.
“Rudra is married!!”- She felt from seventh heaven of her trust on Oberoi brothers,”No one told me before about this. The younger brother is married when his two elder and one sister is still bachelor”.
“I am married Annika to you and.. Rudra and Soumya got married accidentally in a state of hangover”- He revealed the truth,”If not you then I am ready to accept Kalavathi Thakur as my wife”.
“Huh!! I know that you are jocking with me. The other day in hospital too you mentioned about Kalavathi”- Shivaay opened her side door,”get down, we reached the destination”.
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“Whom are you waiting for here Ru”- Dadi saw her khotiyya childish grandson standing in the entrance, near the golden statue of Lord Shankarji,” your friends are coming home today’.
“Soumya is coming back from her holiday trip”- Rudra murmured interestingly
,”Shivaay Bhaiyya asked me to call her home soon”.
“Another good job he did today. A girl’s real home is in laws place after marriage”- Dadi wished to hug her elder grandson for his work,” where is Shivaay and Annika then??”…
“He went out with his wife”- Rudra informed the scene his eye captured,” they went together Dadi”.
Pinky looked on to them with her round, big and ugly eyes.. like a real Dayan from the corner of the huge door of Oberoi Mansion.
She tried to keep her son tied to her and family and lost him in the universe of true love from the universe of her care and possession.
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“For the sake of Universe Tia, Please knock some sense in to the little pea sized brain of this girl”- Shivaay sipped the Expresso his ex- fiance gave ,”You know how perfect she is in the field of acting when problems comes at me and my life”.
“She is Tia!! I thought her to be Soumya”- Annika roam her black orbs around the whole living room to notice a marriage photo and wished the girl,” Congratulation on your marriage”.
“All thanks to you Annika”- Tia felt gratitude to Kalavathi ,”I am happy just because of you today”.
“And My baby is with its father Dushyant today only because of you”- She kept hands on her belly near her child in womb,”I am happy here far away from every problem”.
“We are friends right .. no sorry and thank you”- Annika kept her hand above the baby bump ,” Hey little one.. this is Annika aunty here”.
She dragged Shivaay near to her and tried to keep his hands with her on the Baby of Tia Kapoor. Shivaay hesitate and kept his hands down.
“Shivaay.. Sorry for the previous encounter and trouble I caused you with this baby”- The pregnant women felt very low then said in her Hinglish,”When it grows up. I will ask to call both of you as uncle and aunty..Mamu- mami you see”.
“I am coming soon”- Shivaay left both the ladies inside at the first ring of his mobile ,” Important call from Rudra”.
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“Annika..I don’t know your problem is but don’t deny to accept your marriage with him”-Tia sat on the couch holding her child securely,” universe is a witness to both your love story”.
Tia explained her the situations, her trap , their revenge,her way to kill Annika and then failure the Kalavathi drama,their friendship, the return of her phoenix amid the marriage drama..and Annika’s role in all this from the start to the end and exit of the problem named as Tia from their life happily.
Annika sat panting. This is unbelievable .This universe is very complex to live in with it or may be she is too simple to live here.
“I am ..”-She stated to stop midway..
“I flew from the wedding venue at the last moment with Robin and he married you during the second wedding time, the proper one when whole family were happy,” It was because I was married before to some one else”.
“He married me forcefully.. how can you break his heart Tia”- Annika shouted,” How can you betray some one after giving hope ??”…
“How can I break his heart that was with you in this long journey all along??”- Tia asked her in reply unable to reply with an answer,” I was just a passing cloud..you are the moon, the reflection of his love and trust..and he, your sun”.
“Stop this drama of acting as Kalavathi and memory loss now for Shivaay. you both together can solve every problem on way and life”- Tia requested,” Don’t take the name I gave you..You are not any Kalavathi..you are Annika..Annika Shivaay Singh Oberoi and I am the most happiest witness to your union and support”.
Annika fell down from her place at this words..
“Dushyant.. Shivaay!!”- Tia shouted real loud to gain attention,” Annika fell unconscious”.
“Any clue Tia”- Shivaay picked his wife in his arm close to his heart,” She is acting of memory loss is all I thought about her this drama”.
“May be this is reality not any drama”- Tia lamented on her deeds,” I was the only problem in between.. and is no more”.
“Thanks for the help”- Shivaay tied his seatbelt and then Annika’s,” Have a happy life ahead”.

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45 Comments
  1. Alekhika20

    Nice update,cont soon

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thanks Alekhika..I will try soon.

  2. Mehakchalag

    Awesome di…Loved it.So suspense khulna abhi bhi baaki h.I feel really strong alien feeling after reading this episode.Anika di ki yaadash gyi h ya nhi really excited for upcoming parts of your ff.Love u…Keep writing.

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Mehak…Thanks yaar. keep enjoying the alien feelings.
      I want to post but summer in south is not supporting.
      Suspense continued.

  3. Kanfi

    Again a khidki tod episodee…
    Jist loved it,…
    I loved that u bring tia in the scene…!!

    Post next part soon,,

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Kanfi….
      Thanks.. Tia ko bhi apan raita sametna chahiye na..so only brought her in the story as a cameo character.

  4. Haridhra

    Awsm Astha di…?

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thanks Haridhra…

  5. Awesome asthababy. .
    Waiting for next update..

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Arpita Darling… Wait a little..summer is taking its revenge on us so it is becoming hard to update. Thanks yaar.

  6. Tanz

    I’m not late today… How’s that???
    Khannaji is so careless, ek pattern lock lagane ka bhi time nahi tha, He won’t be that much poor that he can’t buy a phone with fingerprint sensor, itni exclusive videos lekar ghumte hain….kuch toh security honi chahiye na…?
    I have the feeling that Annika had a real memory loss, She is thinking of Shivaay as a good man, her bestfriend….that is not possible normally….atleast she won’t say this in front of him.
    Good work Tia(that you do rarely) that you told everything to Annika CORRECTLY .But I’m guessing why Shivaay called Saumya?? Woh bhi pata chal hi jayega….
    Waiting for the next part.Till then take care ?

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Tanz.. Ha ha ha..you are never late yaar.
      Think positive always about Alien feelings.. May be Khannaji (wink wink smart move).
      You too take care from this hot sun. I am already suffering from its troll.

      1. Tanz

        Haan Di bahut garmi hai but I’m too lazy to get out of the house ….So till now I’m safe from the sun??

  7. Navz

    Awesome aastha..tia baby became soo nice..soo cool.
    Waiting for next part dear.

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Navya..Its too hot yaar not cool. Pata nahi aage humara kya hoga iss summer mein.
      Thanks yaar Navya.

  8. Excellent epi di…. Din per din meri alien feeling badhti hi ja rahi hain…. I just hope ya badhta badhta kanhi apka ya chotu sa behan khud alien na banjaya…. Hahaha…….

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Bunny.. tum alien banoge toh poora Mars planet tumhare naam kardungi. ek cadburry dairy milk send karti hoon.. dance karte karte khalena like alien in the advertisement. Ha ha ..always keep your heart flatter at the alien feelings…

  9. hi astha di fabulous ff
    love u nd ur ff???

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Maggi…love you too and keep enjoying this alien feelings in your heart content.

  10. Nice episode. Tia is back with good intension. She helped annika to remember everything.

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Poonguzhali… Tia is a passing cloud so came and left in a single episode.Raita usne phelaya toh sametna toh banta hai na. Thanks and keep storing the alien feelings in your heart.

  11. Surbhi Sharma

    Wow fi !! Fantasticuly fabulous. Loved it .
    Ab toh mujhe bhi lag rha hai , that this memory loss is real . Huhh .
    Anyways di , post soon .??

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Surbhi…thanks yaar chhoti .. will try to update soon.
      you have to wait for further revelation on the story.

  12. AnuluvsIB

    Nice one Astha.. Tia’s part was good today..
    And khannaji doesn’t lock his phone properly? Arey! Security head of OM!! But fayda tho hua.. so it’s ok..

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Anu.. Khanna did that purposely after getting order from Shivaay Singh Oberoi… Warna Khannaji and irresponsibility are never meant to meet.
      I wanted Tia to collect her sin Raita and she did that. Having the side effect of summer hence no humour is coming out from my head. Iss seriousness se kaam chalalo kuch din..

  13. Astha diiii!!! This was amazing epi..
    Thanku for bringing tia, I was missing her,Uss sasumaa ka chehra roz roz dekar mera matha karab hove che!!
    Eagerly waiting for the nxt.. Update soon!

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Oh!! that blue and yellow chudail is it!!.Ha ha I too want to fry her in this hot summer with some sands from our Visakhapatnam beach..but am really tired of that killing things..
      Kharap howe che.. hey Bhavana..this is Gujrati or Bengali??

      1. Gujrati che!!??

  14. Fabulous update di.

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thanks dwet dear..

  15. Awesome….So much of Suspense…
    Khanna ke mobile ka bara fayda huya…
    Tia’s scene was good….
    waiting fr d nxt… 🙂

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Shivika…Thanks yaar and suspense continued. I want to post soon but this summer and bla bla!!

  16. Jerry_36

    Awesomeness overloaded. Loved it….❤

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thanks jerry… hope falls come soon with endless rain but it is a dream for now.

  17. Niriha

    Awesome…fabulous part

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Niriha…your dp baagungi chala…
      Thanks yaar Sweety darling( your dp name from my end)..

  18. Gayathri.visu

    Superb di!!! But no alien feelings..
    Khannaji, how can be he so careless? Lady baba’s guest appearance…wow di! Eagerly waiting for next part di…

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Gayathri…When she faced the reality and he was determined to disclose her the Truth with the help of Khanna and Tia.. the alien feeling of truthfulness was there.. For Tia when she decided that Shivika will be mamu- mami to her unborn child and for Khanna when he happily left his mobile just to help .. this is alien feeling coming out for them..
      Thanks yaar will try to post soon.

  19. Superb

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thanks friend..

  20. Superb update…

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Ankita..thanks yaar.

  21. Nila

    Hai Astha No di bcoz I just now see ur profile u r one year younger than me that’s y and this part was really amazing video part was superb .

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      I will not call you Nila Di.. its sounding weird..for me its only Nila OK. I never called any one here in TU page as Di..
      Thanks yaar Nila.

  22. Nila

    Ya It’s OK astha I too think same just one year only na

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