ALIEN FEELINGS – Part-4

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Shivaay came to Prinku’s room early in the morning.
“Annika..Annika”-He knocked the glass door to gain attention from a sleeping beauty,” I got the keys”.
“Chor chor chor!!”- Annika Shouted loud that Priyanka wake up from her deep slumber.
“Not chor!!”-Priyanka confirmed,”Its Shivaay bhaiyya”.
“Open the door”-Annika went inside wash room to clean her face,”the Bhagad Billa is now enemy to my sleep also”.

“Annika… sister of Kumbhakaran”- He teased her like before,”lets go to your Srilanka”.
“I want to see your room Shivaay”- She gave hope against hope,”My mirror is not working properly perhaps..I am so khidkitod beautiful and you are comparing me with ugly Surpanakha!!”…
” What ‘Nakha’..??”- Shivaay felt difficult to utter the word.
“Surpanakha..the only sister of Kumbhakaran”-She described,” Like Priyanka is only sister for you three brother”….

“Excuse me!!”- Priyanka threw the pillow at her bhabhi,”now you are comparing me with that ugly lady of Srilanka”.
“Chup kar meri Maa”-Shivaay folded his hands in front of his wife,”we are going some where come soon”.
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” Do you remember anything here”-Shivaay opened the locked house.. a weird smell filled both their nostril,”Here hold this glass of water and throw at my face”.
“You asked me to get ready and forget to wash your own face”- She kept the glass back that contains water Shivaay brought from the kitchen,”I will clean your face by this water”..
” You always welcomes me here with a glass of water from the door”- He encouraged,”at my face”.

“Always!!a full glass of water at you!!”-She got surprised,”Hey Bhagwan I always misbehave with you..So sorry”.
“Its normal thing for us”- Shivaay picked the same glass of water,”I always enjoy the feel of water from you”.

“Hold this”- He show her a doll,almost a scary one,”Kuch yaad aaya”.
“Its eyes..”- She reminded him of the cheap trick Daksh did by putting a hidden camera in a Doll’s eye to track on her every activity,”They are too ugly. I hate it like I love your Kanji Green eyes”.
“You love my eyes”- Shivaay felt immense happiness deep in his heart,”you love my kanji green eyes”.

“Who wouldn’t love your eyes..”-She questioned back,”they are lovely”.
“Only eyes..not the owner”- He locked the door back,” I thought you will not believe me If I say you left working after staying with us..”.
He remember the threat he gave to workers to remove all the material from her house the previous day..the things that will lead her away from him.
“Shit!! the car broke down here”- He kicked the tyre,”We got struck in the middle of a deserted road”.

“This is car..not a football”-She said like last time when they both perform the same activity on their way to Panchghani factory,”ask help from home”.
“Yaa..this time I have my mobile with me”-Shivaay dialed Rudra to pick them up from that particularly place,”last time you forget yours at home and mine was destroyed by the car blasting”.
“We both murdered a car and burnt it before few days”-Annika felt very sad at the demise of his car,”we are crazy”.
“We are crazy”- He agreed ,”Rudra is here”…

They are struck with a car in the middle of a road just like that day..She has no memory of it ..but he still have the memory of all the weird thing they both did .. the stupid fight in the middle of road,the wild blue berry,their dance..their fight against Amar and Prem in forest..the guest house in middle of jungle..their Tajmahal…

“Hum tum ek Kamre mein band ho…”- He sang like that to test her ,”Aur chabi kho jaaye”.
“This is not any kamra..this is car”-Rudra knew nothing about it.
“Andar se koi bahar naa jaa sake”- Shivaay sang this time,”bahar se koi andar naa aasake ”
“My ears are paining from your hoarse voice”-Annika closed ears with her index finger.
“Fruitless… effort”-He sat silently then till they reach Oberoi Mansion.
The golden haired Khanna stood at the middle of garden with his innocent face. This person.. a ray of hope in his dark failure leading towards success….

“Go inside”- He sent Annika and Rudra inside and went to meet Khanna.
“Today evening”- Shivaay ordered,”Arrange every thing soon”…
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“Shivaay are you facing any loss in business??”- Annika asked as soon as she saw the painted Buffalo with him,” Milk business is not that bad”.
“Kaw..”- Rudra spell .

“Cow..but it is Buffalo”- Dadi did some Bhangra at the repeat telecast of the same scene,”Billu again a buffalo”.
“You did this milk business before too”- Annika laughed loud her heart out,”you are looking so funny with this…”.
“Hamma…hamma”- The buffalo missed its friends. Shake his tail in a wild way to tackle the men holding his rope.

“From where did you brought it Khanna”-Shivaay felt angry at the wild nature of this new Buffalo..last one was very good and peace loving..

“From a theater”- Khanna answered with a polite voice,”they are showing a mythological drama and this one buffalo is to be used by the Yamraj”.

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54 Comments
  1. OMG!!!! That was awesome. I am laughing like anything , ☺☺☺ Looking forward to next part…

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Friend(I will call you like this as I don’t know your name and Fffan is not gonna work for me any more)…
      What am I doing here??..Jahan tears hona chahiye wahan smile and laugh spread kiya hai…
      This should be sad and pathetic and I am spreading Laughing Raita here..am laughing myself now..Astha kya kar rahi ho..serious condition ka mazaak udarahi ho…lol..
      Thank You yaar…

  2. OH MY GOD
    asthababy. .i can’t stop laughing. ..whole episode was amazing and last line is most hilarious. ..
    Buffalo used by yamaraj….. i am laughing like mad ???????? plz plz post next part ASAP.

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Arpita darling..Enjoy and laugh the fun I have made out of a serious condition…keep laughing like this always..

  3. Thedreamsoul

    This is so funny Astha di , Shivaye is trying really hard ! Haha , Shivaye is singing to gain her memory ! Loved it and update soon di 🙂

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Saana… This will be retrograde mode of all the incidents they crossed..Mazaa ayega.
      Thank You yaar…

  4. OMG !!! That was laughing riot. Loved it. Looking forward to next part

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Friend..keep laughing always..
      Thank you..

  5. Meenuu

    This part was lovely
    But again you didnt reveal annika had memory loss or not

    Ok let me wait

    But make that pinky sit on yamaraj buffalo and send her to marry yamaraj

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Meenuu..Thank You first.
      Pinky Doesn’t deserve Yamraj totally…She should be fried in hot oil..her eyes should be dissolve in HCl..I will bash her more in future..

      1. Meenuu

        Astha di
        Yor ff has two special things which we all have waited

        1.shivaays possessive nature for annika

        And pinkys insult

        Waiting to read next parts. Pls post it soon

  6. Ab main humesha kya bolu meri di toh humesha khidkitode lekhti hain…… start se end tak SUPERB FUNNY tha…. End main khanna yamraj ki buffalo meri bhaiya ka liya la aya….. Hahaha…. Di din per din meri alian feeling badti ja raha hain…

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Bunny…I am also having alien feelings here..
      Love you and let them suffer. You just enjoy and keep smiling..Trust me I am not willing to torture Shivaay Bhaiyya in an emotional way..I just can’t so am making fun out of his situation..

  7. Mehakchalag

    Wow di.Too good.Even i love shivaay’s kanji ankhen.Shivaay is doing lots of effort to get back anika memory.Sweet singh oberoi.U refresh my mood.I m upset with today’s IB.

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Mehak..don’t get upset with IB just feel the essence of love and life…
      I think most of us here loves his Kanji eyes a lot.
      Thank you and keep laughing like crazy to reach Agra soon..ha ha ha…like I am laughing now..

  8. Navz

    The one which shld be used by yamraj was brought to shivay.???.
    As always, funny and lovable update aastha.
    Plz reveal whether anika really lost her memory or not!! Atleast for me in personal..hehe???jz kidding….i will be waiting for the revelation.

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Navya…Kaan paas lao ,I will tell you..ruko I can tell you and no one can know the truth…ha ha..
      Thank you yaar..

  9. Kanfi

    Hey astha,,,it was dammm goood’,,,,it soo funnny toooo…

    Waiting to know,,,,is annika’s mmry loss real or not,,,,ur writing skills r just fab..
    Post next partttt siooonnn

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Kanfi..wait for the revelation..kya fark padta hai yaar memory loss real ho ya fake as long as they are together. They are creating new memories for them.
      Thanks yaar..keep laughing always.

      1. Kanfi

        Yaaa,,ye b shi h,,,,these mmries r also amazinggg…
        U alsoo stay alwayss happy

  10. Awesome….
    It was hilarious….
    Buffalo used by Yamraj & Milk business…. So funny…
    waiting fr d nxt… 🙂

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Shivika..thank you and keep enjoy the fun to get gift of laughter always and forever..

  11. Dhar

    It’s was completely hilarious, shivaay really sang to bring​back her memory, oh my maata , it was a darwaaza todh episode ???

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Dhar..thank you..ab dil ka kamra band hai toh darwaja toh todna banta hai na….ha ha ha..

  12. Hahaha…wow astha di …it was awesome meri hasee rukhne ki naam he nahi hai ..aise he mujhe hasaathe rehna …okkk…really loved it …post the next part as soon as possible

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Anikaa..keep laughing always..
      Not fair loved the story but not Astha di..aww…

  13. Arthi

    This one was superb and Shivay in dilemma whether she has lost memory for real or not and all his efforts are superb and I jus loved it……..????

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Keep loving his efforts Arthi..Bechara Shivaay Bhaiyya..

  14. That was totally hillarious ???????…
    Anika as kumbhkaran’s sis ??..

    Does SSO have a milk business too?! ???????..
    Totally khidkitod episode !
    Post soon ??…

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Sofiya..Its not Annika as Kumbhakaran’s sister ..its Priyanka…
      I don’t think Shivaay Bhaiyya have milk business..ha ha ha..
      Thank you…

  15. Nikita_jai29

    Ashu dii (can I call you na)… It is awesome… Yaamraj ji gussa ho jaaenge…. Unki fav buffalo ko aapne sso ko de diya…

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Nikku..you can call me Ashu Di..I love this one as mom call me by this name.
      Yay!! meri Shivaay Bhaiyya ko Yamraj ka buffalo milgaya..ha ha..

  16. Niriha

    O my god astha amazing one dear really milk business and buffalo used by yamraj was so funny ???? awesome update next part soon

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Keep laughing unlimited Niriha…
      Bechara Shivaay bhaiyya and his fruitless attempts all resulted in aww…

  17. Pushpa

    om my astha…how u do this …im just laughing away….. my off staffs r looking at me yaar…..u crazy girl…im also crazy for SSO….whn this will be continued…owsm dear luv it totally

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Pushpa … in the office you are reading my story!!!aww…
      Soon yaar very soon.. keep laughing always.
      Same pinch..back pinch we all are here crazy for that one and only Shivaay Singh Oberoi may be in different way….

  18. Hey astha diiii…Its the third time I’m posting my cmmnt, I just hope it gets posted…
    Firstly really sorry for not cmmnting on the previous parts astha di…was really busy…
    Nd this one is just ‘FILLED’ with humor…Laughed really hard… Loved it!!!!
    Eagerly waiting for the nxt…Update soon!!

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Bhavana…It is posted on third attempt…
      Thank you and keep laughing like crazy always..haan Agra math Chali jaana..ha ha.

  19. Anu16

    Wow… awesome episode… I was laughing hard….post soon…

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Anu..Keep laughing like this always. Thank you.

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thanks Alekhika.

  20. Gayathri.visu

    HILARIOUS…… di!!!!! I m still laughing like a mad di….. ‘what nakha?’, milk business, yamraj’s buffalo…….FASTASTIC…….
    Waiting for next head spinning part di….

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Gayathri…Always keep laughing. I am glad you loved the funny part Nakha- Milkman-Yamraj part..

  21. Surbhi Sharma

    Di , it was just ????????????

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Surbhi..Ha ha..??????

  22. Tanz

    Khannaji in sab cheezo Ko kitna interest lekar karte….. buffalo from yamraj…great work….
    Poor Shivaay and his fruitless attempts….
    I can’t believe Annika said sorry for misbehavior ? sahi me kuch gadbad hai…..
    Shivaay wasn’t singing that ‘Oye Oye’ that bad….’phoolon ka taaron ka ‘me to puri izzat hi utaar Di thi bechare ki…..but I didn’t know Shivaay listens to hindi songs too or is it just he remembered the main lines???
    (I know I’m late? but comment to karna hi tha na)

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Tanz..Haan Comment toh karna hi tha mere yahan..nahi toh tumhari Gangaram pakka..
      I too never thought Shivaay Bhaiyya listen to Hindi Songs… may be he is hell bend to surprise us…

  23. Astha di it was jst amazzzzzzzzing… I was laughing hard… pls update ASAP

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Akansha..thank you and wishing you for the best performance o your band on next concert..

  24. Amayaa

    It was again a superb upload
    Thank u for sharing links once again
    I know I m too late
    So sorry
    At first i thought not to comment
    I was so late
    But AMAYAA ka comment Aastha di ke ff pe na ho
    IMPOSSIBLE

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Ek din Main tujhe patak dungi niche. Ammu..be in this AIR mode always..teri bak bak band toh meri link share karna band.
      Teri asar hua hai jo dil pe buk buk ke bina achcha nahi lagta aaj kal..lol

  25. Fabulous…

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thanks Ankita dear..
      Happy weekend.

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