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ALIEN FEELINGS – Part-1

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Annika came out from her hospital room to face a dangerous man with Kanji green eyes . Next to that man was a long haired smiling creature on his right and another duffer dumbbell stupid smiling bodybuilder on his left side.
“Oh bete ki!!”- Annika used the famous words,”Security is very tight in this hospital. Three body guard for only one patient”.
“Are you alright Annika bhabhi”- The body builder came to hug her,”I was crying for these few hours after getting the unknown call from hospital about your accident”.
“Bhabhi”- The long haired creature also came to her,”You almost gave a heart attack to us. Shivaay was like a body with out soul”.
“Stop your stupid bakwas”- Annika shouted closing her own ears,”Why will Lord Shivaay be like a body with out soul because of my accident”.
“Bhabhi,Shivaay bhaiyya”- The dumbbell repeated his words,”your husband”.
“You guys are really mad I think”- Annika gave the instant reply,”I am not married still”.
“You are married bhabhi”- Om made her sit on the near by chair,” You are Shivaay’s wife”.
“Oye!! modern Tarzan..Have you ever seen your face on mirror”-Annika pierced her fiery gaze at Om,”I am so Khidkitod beautiful. I can never marry any mythological Shivaay who doesn’t wear clothes ever,wears snakes around his neck and spends his life like a hermit”.
“Not Lord Shivji”- Rudra scratch his logically tired brain,”but to modern Shivaay, bhabhi”.
“I am Annika”- She knew her name ,”I am a Salman Khan fan”.
“I know that already”- The dumbbell replied,”we used to watch his movies together”.
“This is the point Duffer. I never thought about marrying Salmanji keeping his age as a border between our love”- Annika borrowed some logic from Rudra,”How can I marry the modern Shivaay Ajay Devgonji like that?”
The long haired creature pulled his own shining hairs in a tight fist. Then looked at the Kanji eyed man.
“We know you are Annika”- Om hold Annika by her hand,” He is Shivaay,your husband”.
” He is Shivaay,no way!!”- Annika closed her own eyes tightly,”I could have believed if you have told me that he is Edward,his green eyes resembles a vampire”.
“Om, Rudra”- Shivaay finally opened his mouth,” leave Kalavathi Thakur”.
His lean finger pointed at Annika. The other two left her side and went near that lean kanji eyed man.
“Oye, Amnesia patient”- Annika too went near him,”Its Parvathi not Kalavathi”.
“Shivji is married to Parvathi maatha”- Annika went on bashing the three security guard,”you did a mistake by calling devi maatha by weird name”.
“I am calling my wife “- Shivaay also fought like a child,”my wife..I can call by any name I want ..stay away from my matter”.
“You are sounding very arrogant”- Annika looked at him with her round wide eyes,” I think they appointed you mistakenly as a security guard at this hospital. The other two are fine but you are not fit for this job. Your body is not like that of a security guard”.
“Thank you”- Shivaay looked at sky for the Almighty,” That you didn’t forgot to give some sense in her brain”.
“I am not going to say Welcome”- Annika tried to return inside her room in hospital,”You three are very irritating”.
“Bhabhi stop this and lets go home now”- Rudra blocked her way,” I am not going back home with out you”.
” Annika is my name..not bhabhi”- She took the knife from the fruit basket beside her bed,” I am not going any where”.
” Bhaiyya,O!!”- Rudra shouted,” please ask bhabhi to return home with us”.
“Bhaiyya!!.you three are brothers!”- Annika was surprised.
“Shivaay, Omkara and Rudra”- The duffer introduced.
” Again a lie”- Annika narrowed her black eyes,” The first two are the names of Ajay Devgon movie.. I don’t know if he is making any movie in the name Rudra”.
” No Annika didi”- Rudra protested “bhaiyya said these names are inspired from the various names of Shankar Bhagwanji not from Ajay Devgon movies”.
“Oh!!”- She sighed,”he kept all your name?”
“Dadi kept all our names”- Rudra introduced a new member,”We have a very sweet and loving darling Dadi”.
“She take care of you three”- Annika concluded on her own.
“That kanji eyed man is Shivaay bhaiyya and the long haired creature is Om”- Rudra introduced his brothers.
” He looks like an angry Billu and the other one very funny with his pony tail”- Annika remarked,” How came all three brother is working in a same hospital?”
” We are not hospital security”- Rudra’s protein shake consuming brain came to their rescue,” you are our friend”.
” I got a doubt as you guys are not wearing any uniform”- Annika eyed the three piece business suit of Billu then at the samurai costume of Om and back to Rudra and his sport track pant,” I am sorry for misunderstanding you guys as kidnapper at first sight”.
” I am happy Rudra”- Annika smiled,” I have three more friends other than Chanda”.
“Your bracelet is your friend”- Rudra thought to clear his doubt,” the chand bracelet”.
” Er.. no a girl who lives next door to me”- Annika said,” I am friends with living things only not with non- living”.
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“Bhaiyya”- Rudra hugged Shivaay,” my head is spinning”.
” My head is spinning at a very high speed”- Om also joined head spinning club.
“Shivaay how are you feeling”- Om turned not finding him with them.
“Bhaiyya!”- They find him sitting on the ground . His hand on head with his kanji eye closed.
“Me head is spinning at a rate to beat the moving tyres of formula one car”-Shivaay whispered to his bending brothers…as they also sat on the floor beside him.
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This is part-1 of my upcoming story on May.
I will continue after ending undeniable desire. Hope all your love will be with me in this journey of Ishqbaazi like before… love you my Ishquise.
– Astha Reddy

43 Comments
  1. Nithu

    soo nice………….

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Nithu Thank you..I couldn’t make you laugh !!…

      1. Nithu

        ofc u made me laugh dr….as my xams are going on….im not giving big comments………

  2. Awesome…
    Anika is gonna give Shivaay a very hard time….
    Three piece suit wala & samurai costume wala hospital ka security guard….it was hilarious….
    Waiting fr d nxt… πŸ™‚

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Shivika..definitely Shivaay is going to suffer like living in hell..but his heaven is also with him as Annika…It is just to destroy his NKK fort…

  3. πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ asthababy are you decided that you will kill me????? I am laughing like a mad.
    Fabulous fantastic superb.yarr post next part.

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Arpita ..I have decided to give justice to Annika..your sweet Didi.. along with Maahi..

  4. very funny & nice

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Keep in touch Ritu..with Alien feelings…thank you dear…

  5. Surbhi Sharma

    Di , aap kya apni chotI si , nanhi si , pyari si , behen ko hassa hassa ke marna chate ho .πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ . Huhh .
    Lol … Waise , shivomru can I also join head spinning club ha .
    Di as usual u rocked it . Muahhhh 😘😘😘😘😘😘

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Wel come to head spinning club Surbhi dear..
      I have planned to show reality to Shivaay Singh Oberoi…

  6. Oh my goddddddddd…. U r such an fab writer and wow am laughing like mad now………… Pl pl pl pl do post this also simultaneously pl…….. I knw am expecting tooo much but pl do post pl……..

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx Arthi dear. Your wait will be over soon….
      keep laughing dear…

  7. Gayathri.visu

    You know what di, I can’t control my laughter…..still laughing like a mad! FANTASTIC DI….. Now I am also joining head spinning club with Shivomru and Surbhi!!

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Keep laughing like this Gayathri…always..
      Thank you and welcome to head spinning club.

  8. Pooja26

    lol ….. hahaha πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
    damn awsm part….

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thank you Pooja.
      I actually thought to repeat Kalavathi drama once again where Shivaay should suffer a lot.

  9. Astha di ii. .
    U know.. seeing the title itself Iknew it was my aawesome Asthadii.
    Then reading the first sentence it was confirmed.U r so unique Ican recognizer your work anywhere!
    Yaar aap apne chotu
    Se sis ko hasa hasa ke rulaana chahte ho kya?
    Ihave half a mind to fly to aAgra and enroll myself in the asylum, wwaha pe dDaksh se bhi to mil lungi πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
    Pls start this as soon as u can. But Iddon’t want undeniable desire to end😡😡😡😒😒😒😒😒
    L but alien feelings will compensate for this…….
    I luv u soonmuch. Poor shivaay…ani is gonna give him a hard time
    And like surbhi dear asked…can Ijoin the head spinning club too ?
    lots of loveπŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Vivikhta…I am glad that my friends and sister are identifying my story in the huge crowd just by its name and not by my name( author).. No NKK for my stories…
      Welcome to head spinning club.
      Love you too dear with a capital….”L”..

  10. What an update dear….just amazing…loved it…..

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thank you Lilly…keep loving ..

  11. Omg… Astha dii.. Is that you…. Unbelievable dii… I am laughing like a mad person…
    This update is super se bhi uper…..
    Eagerly waiting for the next update…. with lots of love and care dii…

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      This is Astha Reddy only.. your sweet di my Nikku…
      Laughter therapy for you is still on mode…
      Love you too…

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Alekhika.. thnx. I am waiting for a long comment from you on one fine day…

  12. Omg! Omg! another ff….I’m really excited… Cant wait…
    Superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb start!
    Loved it a lot!!

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Bhavana.. thnx. dear.. another laughing therapy before the struck of a storm…
      Hope next time If I gave any mobile number you will try that too.. ha ha….
      My Bhavana is really excited for the next ff “ALIEN FEELINGS”…

  13. Awesome…very funnyπŸ˜ƒ

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Niriha…Thnx. dear

  14. OMG!!!!!! dii it was too funny… i’m laughing like a made girl…… Eagerly waiting 2 feel d ALIEN FEELINGS………

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. Banita.. this alien feelings in Shivaay’s life is love .. Ishqbaazi…

  15. Omg aasthu gaaru!! Rofl!!!! πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
    I can’t stop laughing… I know I cud just imagine this convo u know.. annika body language.. ru’s cry baby face.. omi’s expression.. shivaays irritation!!
    It was such a treat!! Still can’t stop laughingπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Anu.. keep laughing like this always.
      I made all laugh because Bhaiyya is gonna cry more in this..

  16. Tanz

    This is cheating Astha Di…I never knew you were starting another ff……You should have told before…..Very bad…..
    But this was so so so good . I was literally laughing while reading this . I think Annika has lost her memory in the accident . And who is this Chanda now ? She remembers her own name , she remembers her favourite actor , she remembers Chanda, only u and God knows who she is but she doesn’t remember anyone from OF . I really loved the way you described the Obros ….
    I’m very eagerly waiting for it’s next part and undeniable desire’s next part too.

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Tanz… You find it that is a matter. I forget to inform you all about this story…
      It was unplanned still I posted its link on TU main page…
      Serioisly I have not planned the memory loss part 2as real or fake till now.

  17. As tanz as said this is too much i dont know u have started a new ff…😒😒😒.this one is too good.waiting for this and next part of ur undeniable desire also. Hope i get to know about ur writings as i am waiting to read those.πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      I will try to post the link on TU main page regularly…
      That is for the month of May…but it seems I have to manage both parallel for three days..

  18. Superb update..

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. Ankita dear

  19. Misbah

    Was awesome..

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      thank you Misbah…

  20. It’s was awesome starting dear. I’m waiting for your next episode.

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thanks Ahsana dear

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