Ajnabee Part 15

Ajnabee by Shazi Part 15:

Previous Part: http://www.tellyupdates.com/ajnabee-part-14/

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Sanskar: Swara! How is this possible you were…
Person thinks: this is the right way of entering the house (finally the mystery unfolds this is Swara’s look alike and I will call her Swara to not confuse the readers but the real Swara was dead)
Swara: who are you?
Sanskar: please don’t be angry at me I want to apologise
Swara: well I…
Sanskar: Laksh and Ragini have started a new life I think that we should give our life a try
Swara (thinks what the hell why is he after me is he the guy I made drunk to be with swara? Yah it must be him) : umm I don’t think that we are meant to be
Sanskar: the thing is as you know Ragini and Laksh were meant to be and you might not know but I regret a lot we can start fresh
Swara: take me to mama’s house
Sanskar: mama? U used to call her Mom
Swara: things change
Sanskar: where were you all this time?
Swara: why are u asking me so many questions?
Sanskar: I still love u
Swara feels strange: taking me home or shall I go myself?
Sankar: come

They reach the house and Janki opens the door… as soon as she sees Swara she hugs her tight but does’t feel any connection!
Janki: what how is this possible?
Swara: what do u mean mom?
Janki: we saw you dead I mean this is impossible
Swara: what kind of a mother are you? Not happy to see your own daughter
Janki: no swara this is not what I meant
Swara: mom I need to see my daughter what is her name
Janki: Ragini named it after u he name is Swasna come
Sanskar looks at Janki and she gives him a confused look. Even sanskar is unsure of her identity…

Swara goes in her room and tells Janki to call RagLak! While they confusingly call RagLak but they are unreachable…

Swara: finally, I will get Laksh! I have been watching him since the says he was in the library! He didn’t notice me actually no one ever did because of my thick glasses, my braces and ugh I don’t want to remember those days. Now Laksh will be mine!

Janki: what are you blabbering?
Swara: are they coming? Or else I will take the child and run away
Janki: how could you be so selfish
Someone knocks on the door and Sanskar goes to open the door and sees RagLak holding hands
Sanskar: hi guys you here?
Ragini: we came to give a news to ma where is she?
Sanskar: come in guys
Janki comes out and hugs Ragini and blesses Laksh
Laksh: ma we have a news for u
Janki: tell me?
Ragini: ma you are going to become a grand-mother!
Sanskar: are you guys serious?
He hugs Laksh and is genuinely very happy
Swara comes out and claps: wow brilliant! I went away for some time but you all didn’t get bored. My sister married my husband and had a lot of fun that now she is pregnant…
Janki: enough Swara! They are married and your marriage with Laksh broke
Swara: what about our daughter then? What do u mean ma?
Sanskar: Swasna is yours and my daughter and you know it very well
Janki isn’t surprised: how could you be willing to destroy Ragini’s life
Swara: she isn’t my sister she is my enemy she took Laksh! My Laksh!
Ragini has tears in her eyes
Laksh: I haven’t said anything this whole time but I can’t see my Ragini in tears. You know that we were just friends u never even stayed in the same room as me! The baby was yours and Sanskar’s and you told me yourself!
Swara: how can you support her
Sanskar: what are you trying to do?
Swara: she got pregnant with Laksh this is insane
Sanskar holds her shoulders and Swara feels current in her body: they love each other they have all the rights to show their love
Swara: fine I want my daughter
Ragini: how could u do that I have considered her more than my daughter
Laksh holds Ragini’s hand: it’s their child Ragini we have no rights to take it away from them this is probably why god gave us our own child.
Ragini: but Laksh
Sanskar: please Ragini
Ragini has teary eyes and agrees… seeing this Swara fumes…
Sanskar kneels down: I want to marry you please we can raise our daughter together
Swara (the imposter one) thinks that he truly loves her: I need to think

In the evening, Swara decided to start a new life with Sanskar and Swasna. They begin their life and Sanskar finds out the entire truth but decides to forgive her because he has done a lot of sins too.

After a few years, there is a family reunion. Ragini is expecting her second child with Laksh and their love has been increasing… Swasan were also very happy when two kids come.
Raksha: Swasna didi we have to catch papa
Swasna: fine you go the other way I will go this way to catch chotey papa he is hiding
Laksh hides in the wardrobe and finds Ragini next to him.
Laksh: what are you doing here?
Ragini: this is my place to hide
Laksh: why don’t u say it clearly that u want to romance?
Ragini: Laksh! You are going to be the father of another child behave!
He comes closer to her: if I would have behaved then we wouldn’t have had our children…
Ragini: Laksh…
He is going to kiss her and they both have their eyes closed when Raksha and Swasna open the wardrobe
Swasna: Shame shame choti maa
Ragini blushes
Laksh: you devils
Raksha and Swasna give each other a high five and laugh

And it ends here… sorry guys I had to have a sudden end but these days I was very busy and some issues going on so I couldn’t really update but hope u enjoyed the fanfic and maybe I will come back with another fanfic 🙂 Thanks to all the readers and those who commented! Even to the silent readers u guys took your time to read it means a lot <3


  1. Dafsi

    |Registered Member

    It was nice ff Shazi and loved it and Im really sad you are wraping it up but hoping to see you with another ff in fb or telly update 🙂 🙂

  2. Fats

    Awww it was a really nice FF. Laksh and Ragini were so cute. Im happy Sanskar got some happiness in his life too.

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