Aisi Nafrat Toh Kaisa Ishq (episode-1)

Hello everyone..Eva here…my 9th ff….i’m so happy….so thanks to u all…u all appreciated me,,encouraged me to write more……that’s why i’m here…..
Scene:Mount College
First day of the first year students…..in the college
Some boys r seen playing basket ball…….and girls r cheering for them…..but only one name could be heard……LUCKY………..yes its Mr Laksh Maheshwari….the captain of the basket ball team…..3rd year student…he is quite famous…smart and talented….he is an obedient son…and loves his family the most….he is not a flirt but someone who respects girls……in all…he is something we call a good human being….
Laksh was about to put the ball in the basket…when he was stopped by another handsome man……he snatches the ball while playing and puts it in the basket…..he in none other than our Sanskar….Sanskar Mehra…another excellent player…..2nd year student…
The bell rings…they r going…..just then Sanskar comes and blocks Laksh’s way….
Sanky:Today i just snatched the ball……wait and see how i snatch your position too….
Laksh:U r junior to me……i won’t say anything bad to u…..or else their won’t be any difference left between us…
Just then Rishi,Sanskar’s bestie comes there…
Rishi:Sanky lets go…see…..some freshers…..ragging toh bantiii hiii hai boss…
Sanky smiles evilly and leaves with Rishi…
Sanskar’s group:Kavita Roy,Kavya Malhotra,Sahil Sengupta,Rishi Shah and Rajat Khanna
Just then…they see a girl entering the college…..she has wore an anarkali suit…..wears glasses and has made a ponytail…..
Kavya:Mil gayi bakri….
The girl sees them and gets scared..and is about to run…..when Kavita puts her leg in between and makes her fall…her chin starts bleeding….
Kavita:Oh o…sorry…..i did not see u…..
She stands and is about to leave….
Rishi:Beta…what’s your name?
The girl stammers;Sw…ar….a….(Yes that girl is Swara)
Kavita;What?Sw..ar…a?Aisa bhi koi naam hota hai bhala?
Everyone starts laughing…
Kavita:Accha….prove that u r uselful….i mean..dance or sing…..do something……………
Swara starts crying…..
Sahi;Ole le le….baby…don’t cry….
Kavita:Just see her hair….full of oil..champi…
She is about to touch Swara’s hair..but someone holds her hand……nope..if u r thinking that its Sanskar……then no..its not Sanskar….Laksh bhi nehi…..its a girl..and she is none other than our Ragini….
Ragini:Stay away……don’t u dare to do this thing again…
Kavita:Who the hell r u?
Ragini:Ummmm…yeah…i’m DAKUBASANTI…..
Sanky’s group is shocked….other than them everyone is laughing….
Ragini:Stay away from her….
Ragini is wearing a pink top and jeans….she grabs Swara’s hand and leaves….She makes her sit…..Sanky’s group follow them…..
Ragini:See…if anyone insults u..then u have to fight back..u have to answer them…. if u stay quite then they will insult u more…to stop them from doing this…u have to answer them…and everytime…this dakubasanti won’t be there to save u….u have to save yourself…
Sanky and his group hear this convo….
Kavya:We have to teach this dakubasanti and her Sw…ar..a,,,,,,a lesson…..
Laksh’s group:Arjun and Abeer…
Abeer:Pearl V Puri
Arjun:Aham Sharma
Laksh:This Sanskar and his group will never change…..
Arjun:Ha….
Their classes end…and everyone is leaving…..
Laksh is walking on the road….Sanky drives his car towards Laksh…
Sanky:Ajke baadh..he won’t be able to play basket ball…and anything…..
Laksh doesn’t see the car…the car is about to hit him when a veiled girl saves him..both of them fall down….
Sanky stops the car and looks from the looking glass…
Kavya;Sanky….start kar car…we need to leave…..or else….they will catch us…and police case na banjaye….
Sanskar drives away….Laksh gets some scratches….he looks back and sees that the girl is gone…
Laksh;Where is she??
He looks here and there….and his eyes fall on a silver chain….with a love shaped locket…..he keeps it with him…..
Precap:Nehi patah…
My first ff…where u’ll find the mystery later….please do tell me how it was….my first try….trying to change my writing style….. 😀 😀 :D.

132 comments

  1. Yashasvi

    |Registered Member

    hey eva loved it! oh wow! abeer is also there. plz tell pairs…………. swasan n raglak plzzzzzz n ya congo to ur 9th ff…………. luv u a lot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    • Eva

      |Author

      Thank u Yashasvi……i never declare the couples…so not even today….cholly for that….love u too..and i like Pearl V puri..so thought to bring him here…

  2. Halima

    |Registered Member

    Awesome Eva, loved it, Wah, can’t wait for the next episode, Kya tune Samjhota finish kar diya?? If yes then sorry, meine Nahi para. But Wah, this one is so good. Keep smiling ?

      • Halima

        |Registered Member

        I will miss it, but it’s good you started another one… Eva? Kya mein tumhe apne one shot mein cast karsakti hoon?? Bas yahi puchna that…?? ???

        How stupid of me, mein batana hi Bhool gayi Ki mera one shot a SwaSan one shot hoga…?

        So do you mind?? It’s okay if you say no. ?

      • Halima

        |Registered Member

        Bas Socha tha but if you have a problem then it’s okay, don’t worry. ?

        Anyways how have you been?

      • Eva

        |Author

        U said about being Sanky’s sis..so..nehi patah mujhe kich bhi..and I’m bored….and not at all fine..I’m going mad…?

  3. sanskriti ? die hard fan of swasan ?

    Awsm Bhabhi luved it soo much but why did u made our swara a chashmish jao katti

    • Mugdha

      |Registered Member

      Oyee damad..chup re.mmeri bahu Ko kuch na kehne….warna Teri biwi Ko complain kardungi…phir dekhio..kya haal hota hai apka..

    • sanskriti ? die hard fan of swasan ?

      Mummyji Mein toh majak rak raha tah I m not angry on Bhabhi

      • Abdul hafiz(uma).

        Patidev Ji, where are you? App ki darshan nehi milti Ji?app ki tabiyat kushal mangal hein na Ji? I miss you very much Ji.

    • sanskriti ? die hard fan of swasan ?

      I m fine wify hw r u lo agaya Mein meri tabiyaat thik hain what about u I m too missing u

  4. Eva

    |Author

    Telly updates please fix the cover photo…there r 4 leads..and Laksh’s face is cut..plz..fix it..??

  5. sss

    nice start Eva…
    new writteng style well I’m sure it will good like other ff and your ff always rocks..are you going to tell the pairs or not? hopefully it swalak/ragsan but it dosen’t matter if it swasan I’m going to read as your writing it ..looking forward the story

    • Eva

      |Author

      Awww..thank u..for being ready to read my ff without expectations of your fav couple…and I won’t reveal the couples…? thank u

  6. Mugdha

    |Registered Member

    9th ff??? Awesome ? job…first chapter of this ff…dakubasanti??? what a name..u r soo creative.

    Now..to all my family members.. Kese ho? Meri talented bahuyein, useless aur nalayak bete,mera gumshuda pati,meri bewakuv betiyan..aut meri pyarrii potio..oh..another one..jalkujri Riya..thik hona?

    • Riya Kapoor

      Shut up u stupid lady…i think this is going to be raglak..Eva got scared sewing the bashing comment of raglak fans…so she must have started this raglak ff…u call me jalkukri….and what r u?U r a donkey,your bahu Meher is chimpanzee,Anjali is an elephant and your ladki Eva is a chipkali..

      • Meher

        |Registered Member

        One more thing Eva aaj tu maan le this girl loves u most in Tu… Sunghte hue paunch jati hai tere ff m.. Itni baar beijjat ho chuki hai but sharm ni hai.. Har bar new email se apna bina dhula muh le ke aa jati hai… ????

      • Abdul hafiz(uma).

        Sahi kehte hein, kutte ki dum kabhi sidhe nehi hoti, you are the best example of it.Itne insult ke baad bhi agayi apna tangg arane.Shame on you!

    • Chaitali

      |Registered Member

      this is nit fair mummy ji..aap hamesha bete ko nalayek kehte ho!!Par aap toh bade mahan ho!Jalkujri ka bhi khabar le rahe ho!!
      Waise hum toh thik hai..aap kyse ho?

    • sanskriti ? die hard fan of swasan ?

      Oh Riya u see your face in mirror then u just speak up and don’t u dare to speak bad about our family members ok

    • Mugdha

      |Registered Member

      Beta sorry..patanehi tha ki Tu mentally unstable hai…btw UK so much about animals…well do u stay with animals???u seem to knw so much about animals..aur Tu bhootni hai…everyone is scared of u..meri Eva toh bacchi hai..daregi nehi toh kya karegi..and Maheshwari house is not a zoo…and hey..u called me stupid lady?chudail..apne app Ko dekh..khud Ko agar samajdar samajtu hai toh tere samne toh mein intelligence ki devi hu..mene toh baas tere haam chaak puchliye..aur Tu dog ki tarah bark karne kafi..ab yeh bhi koi baat huyi bhala?Beta..jakee..apne parents Ko bol ki 3 bahuyo ki SaaS be kaha hai tujhe psychiatric treatment chahiye….mujhe donkey bolti hai…tu usi donkey ki amma hai..bewakuv..bhau bhau bhau bhau..karna band kar..wese u called us donkey and all..but your characteristics t similar to dogs..barking without reason..

      • Anjali30

        |Registered Member

        Srsly mummyji!! hats off to you…..

        Pata nhi iss riya ki chakkar kya hai….

        Like meher said, she must really love us… Doesn’t leave us alone at all… :/ :/

      • Riya Kapoor

        U illiterate woman..shut up..who the hell r u to tell me what should I do..and where should I go?u called me a dog..u r a hippopotamus…bandar…chup rahoo..i hate u all..cuz u all r after raglak…your house is definitely a zoo…filled with these stupid and brainless creatures..so shut up.

      • Abdul hafiz(uma).

        Mummy, kamal kardi apne. Uss din ap mujpe proud feel karretena,today I am feeling proud to be your daughter.I like ROFL after reading it.Meher babhi ne toh peher pakad liya, mein apki haath pakad na chahti hu.Hip hip hurrey for our rocking mom!!!

      • Anjali30

        |Registered Member

        Finally riya… you told the truth!! You hate us…. and we hate you back!! We do NOT WANT TO associate ourselves with you…. you’re a very malicious and poisonous girl….

        Raglak… Srsly?? Only in ur first comment in samjhota did you mention Raglak
        After that it has been a bl**dy PERAONAL ATTACK ON ALL OF US….

        I BET EVEN RAGLAK WILL BE ASHAMED TO CALL YOU THEIR FAN…

        LEAVE US ALONE!!
        YOU HAVE NO RIGHT TO INSULT US JUST BECAUSE YOU HATE US….

        WE HAVE NO NEED FOR PPL LIKE YOU… AND SRSLY… IF YIU THINK THIS WILL OR MIGHT BE RAGLAK, THATS YOUR OWN FAULT… LATER DONT COMPLAIN THAT EVA DECEIVED YOU BCOS SHE DIDNT MENTION A WORD ABOUT ANYTHING…..

    • Nita D

      |Registered Member

      Hawwww…..mummyji aap apne damad ko toh bhul hi gai….mana ke main thode din gayab thi, to aesa karneka???

      @Riya
      Riya if u cant say any nice words then stay mum. No need to speak or rather write n insult others. If u don’t like Eva’s ff then don’t read it n if u wanna critize there is a decent way of doing it. No point insulting others

    • sanskriti ? die hard fan of swasan ?

      Riya seriously I think u don’t know the meaning of illiterate pity on u first u wash your mouth with gangajal then u will be speaking good words if u don’t then it depends upon u
      Understand or u better understand

      • Riya

        |Registered Member

        hello family waalon.. SHANAYA here, using Riya’s id.. Woh jalkukri Riya nahi ho .. Bash mar kar dena galti se.. mummy Ji .. Tussi great ho Ji.. Arey Riya tujhe pata last time Kab tune yeh non sensical baatein ki thi to maine tujhe thoda Sa data aur mera sir ka dard chala gaya.. Tab maine yea baat Eva se bhi kahi thi.. Tujhse bhi kehtu hai.. Tu bata tu hai kaun .. Let’s do a personal meeting.. I’ll give u some slaps and all problems of my life will say tatta bye bye.. Kyu re family walon.. Aur if u hate Eva’s writing so much then why are u forcing her to write on raglak.. And haa we love u too so much tabhi na , dekho your pyar is so strong that even getting insulted like bhao bhao bhao ( samjh to gayi ho na ki seedhe se kahu ki kis ki tarah insult ho ti hai) you come back to talk to us.. Waah re aaj ke zamane ka pyaar.. Love you too again

    • Meher

      |Registered Member

      @riya

      With due respect I want to say that i know that u live in zoo but that does not mean our house is zoo…

      Yeah I need charan b u need psychiatric assistance.. Dude u r totally talking overboard…

      Yup m mummy ki chamchi but dear u r a dabba.. Khali dabba which is good for nothing… Bhai itta bura bolna kaha se seekha… N aap bachpan se ese harkatein karti hai ya koi special course kia tha?!

      • Sriya

        |Registered Member

        meher my first episode of a hate to love story has been published it is in 1st page plz read it and comment

  7. Nimisha

    Awesome start Eva…and honestly speaking..I’ll read anything u wrote..i don’t care about writing style or couples…writer is Eva…this thing is enough for me to read something…love uh???

  8. Chaitali

    |Registered Member

    Nice start bhabi….aap ko toh detective banna chahiye tha .. mystery,mystery, mystery!!

    Where is Samjhota 3??Post that soon!

    • Eva

      |Author

      Swaraginiti Ki kahani
      I hate u too
      Samjhota Swaragini ka
      Samjhota Swaragini ka intezaar
      Rishto Ki dastan
      Sanskar zingedi meri
      Ragini vs Manyata
      Samjhota swara aur sanskar ka.
      And now this one..thank u?

  9. Amna

    Si back with new ff. Hehe changed all Intially sketch of all pairs.
    Honestly saying l dislike swasan as much you dislike raglak. So if you will give extra importance to them . Then l wouldn’t be able to read it.??

    • Eva

      |Author

      Sweetheart no one can compete with me in hating raglak..no one hates someone as much as I hate Raglak…everyone reads my ff without any expectations..and u’ll soon get to know about the couples
      .

      • Crazygirl

        Even I hate Raglak very much so I made them Bro and sis in my story and whenever Raglak scenes came I would just forward them, cause I would feel sick

  10. Fairy

    Awesome one dear….loved rags charecter..dakubasanti lol :p ..watng for nxt update…

  11. Nita D

    |Registered Member

    Hello eva bhabhi …..nice start…..i m reading your first off, n i like the way it has began….waiting for the next episode…

    N one question, does samjota 3 have any connection with previous series?? Cause i m planning to read it as well…
    Plz do reply

  12. ♥priyu♥

    Hiiii eva , i know u from begining but didnt comment on ur stories because they swalak and ragsan …. first KAAN PAKADKE SORRY ….

    But please make this one swasan and raglak , otherwise i cant read it please please …. *widest ppy dog eyes i can make* ….

    • Eva

      |Author

      See sweetheart..my story never had 2 couples..its always like anything can happen…so u can’t say that this wer swalak and swasan..my other ff is purely swasan…samjhota’s last season..still anything can happen there as well…I can’t give any surety about the couples…

  13. Sree

    |Registered Member

    Dundhiliya maine???
    Wah eva mujhe itnaaaaa accha banadiya???
    Tumne 8 ffs likke hai?? Great wifey
    Yeh bhi bohot accha hai.
    Love u wifey????

  14. Riya

    |Registered Member

    Hello Eva.. SHANAYA here.. I am using Riya’s id.. How’s u .. I am too late .. Many reasons.. Chaddo use.. I came na.. You are awesome . Awesome .. Awesome .. Yeh Riya kapoor ne Meri behena ka naam ekdum kharab kar diya .. True jalkukari.. Mujhe pehle lagta tha ki uske nuts loose hai par an pata chala hai ki uska dimag Khali hai to use intact rakhne ke liye koi nuts hi nahi.. And yaar she loves us so much.. Itna insult karane ke baad bhi baar baar waapas aa jati hai.. So selfless love .. Hai ki nahi

      • Shanaya

        Riya ka discharge date abhi tak confirm nahi hua hai.. 12th ko uska ek final test hoga.. If results clear honge then discharge kar diya jaayega.. Idk why but I don’t want to login so I am using my id

  15. ♥priyu♥

    Hiiiiiiii eva , tu didnt posted my earlier comment , eva i know ur a just fab writer ….

    I will surely read ur ff if its swasan and raglak …. please please do it for me *widest puppy dog eyes i can make* ….

    And ya i didnt red ur earlier ffs because they have swalak and ragsan …. so kaan pakad ke sorry ….

    • Eva

      |Author

      Plzz dear don’t read my ff with expectation of your fav couple….i donno..what I’ll do next…so no surety..

  16. Sree

    |Registered Member

    Meine peile bhi comment kiya tha par post nahi hua i think so phirse comment kar raha hun?
    Very nice start wifey???
    Tumne 8 ffs likhe hai?? u r great wifey
    Vaise uss pagal Riya kapoor ko dhyaan mat dena. U know mujhe yeh dundne me itnaa waqt laga lekin uss Riya ne toh bohot jaldi dundliya tumhe. Lagta hai ki wo tumhari fan hai . Jahan tum hotiho wahan wo dhodi chali aati hai???
    Love u wifey????
    Baki sab garwale kaise hai?????
    Love u all??

  17. Piyali

    wow…….eva…………..wonderful chappy……………………i loved it…..but sanskar seems to be a big villian here…………please, please ,please don’t make him a very big villian……………..actually please don’t make anyone villian……….i well the veiled girl seems to be swara to me…………..i wish it is swara only…………because then it will be fun seeing different shades of swara………………loved swaragini scenes and i literely need more of it……..please………………..and yup not to forget DakuBasanti…………………..waiting eagerly for next chapter………….love you……….be happy……

    • Eva

      |Author

      Hey Piya…good to see u here…i’m a regular reader of your ff…and u r an awesome writer..plz post your ff..dil ki dor…and i donno about negative and positive characters…keep guessing..love u too…

      • Piyali

        |Registered Member

        oh , ok dear…………well i will post it soon………………….school restarted so not at all getting time but i will post soon…………………….and yup i’ll have to keep guessing……..what else can this masuum the bacha do…………………post soon………love you………be happy……..

      • Eva

        |Author

        Lol…massum sa baccha? And do u knw what happened to Shloka?I haven’t seen her from a long time….

      • Piyali

        |Registered Member

        hey eva…….well shloka is attending her cousin’s wedding and out of town so she isn’t able to come on tu……………..well am here checking this page daily for your updates………..i know 9th is a difficult class so no problem but please if possible try to upload soon…………..

  18. Bisha

    |Registered Member

    Teri starting bohot achhi hai..kamaal kar di tune!! Mystery haan??!! Waiting… Isse age muh seal hai. Bad me. Tata!!

    • Eva

      |Author

      Thank u papaji….guess karte raho..i’m sure kabhi guess nehi kar paoge….mera dimaag sabse hatke hai.. 😀

  19. Sriya

    |Registered Member

    hi eva dear it was awesome can you plz read a hate to love story ( a SWASAN fanfic) it is my story its first episode has been published it is in 1st page please read it and comment

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