Aisi Nafrat Toh Kaisa Ishq (episode-2)

Hello everyone..Eva here…..sorry for this late update….
Link of my previous episode….
Episode 1

The episode starts with…..
Its night……Laksh is seen sitting on his bed…..staring at the pendent…..
Laksh’s pov…
Who was she?Some angel or something? She helped me and went away…..she did not give me a chance to say thank u even….as this happened in our campus….i’m sure that its someone from our college….
POV ends…
Its another bright day……..at the college…..everyone is busy gossiping…and waiting for the bell to ring…so that they can leave for their classes…..
Sanskar is seen sitting with his friends…and cracking stupid jokes….just then Swara enters…..
Sahil:Sanky…see that Sw…a..ra….
Kavya;Today i’m going to teach her a lesson for sure…
Kavita;Yes….today..her dakubasanti is not there too……let’s see who saves her from us….
They go near her….
Kavita:Where is your dakubasanti?
Swara looks down….she is continuously touching her glasses…and seeing here and there….
Kavita stands behind Swara….
Kavita;Ewwww….such oily hairs…..disgusting….
Swara:Wohh…
Kavita:I think that she finishes 1 oil bottle each and every day…..
Kavya:Chiii…and see her glasses……1970s ke lagte hai…and your dress…this is college…and u r wearing this?Kisi puja mein ayi ho kya?
Sahil and Rajat giggle…….
Sanskar and Rishi r least interested in this….
Swara is about to go when Kavya puts her leg in between and she trips…….and falls down….
She gets some scratches on her chin…..and it starts bleeding…
Sanskar stand up…and goes near her…but sees Laksh and stops himself…..
Laksh comes there and makes her stand….
Laksh;Kavya….stop bullying everyone…
Kavya:Laksh…..she is a fresher…..and we thought to just…
Laksh:I’m a third year student….and u r my junior…did i bully u or anyone here?Then why do u do this?
Kavita:Laksh….just shut up..we were having fun..that’s all…..she is a behenji….and we were just talking…
Laksh:Yeah right….i didn’t knw that talking causes bleeding…
Kavya:Laksh..u r shouted at me for this girl?God knws…whats there in this girl……yesterday…it was that dakubasanti and now u…..what is she?
Laksh:Its very simple Kavya…yeh woh hai jot um kabhi nehi hosakti…..she is innocent Kavya…..unlike u….
Laksh takes Swara to the medical help room…
After sometime….Swara is seen sitting with Laksh,Arjun and Abeer in the canteen…
Sanskar’s group is also sitting there……they stare at them angrily…
Kavya actually likes Laksh……that’s why she was more irritated….
(This story doesn’t have Meher or Radhika)

Laksh is staring at Swara……Arjun and Abeer sees this….
Swara;I need to leave for my class….
Laksh;Huh?
Swara:My class…
Laksh:Oh yes….byee..
Swara is about to go when Ragini comes there….
Ragini:Hi Swara..
Swara:Hi Ragini…
Ragini:How did u hurt yourself?
Swara looks at Kavya and Kavita…
Ragini:Phir seh inhone kuch kiya hai..haina?Ruko beta….abhi batati hu…
Swara tells her everything
Swara;Ragini….always…forgive your enemies…nothing annoys them so much…
Ragini:Sweetheart..let me handle this….
Ragini thinks of something..and gives a evil smile…
Kavvita starts leaving……just then she slips….and falls down….and a chewing gum that was on the canteen floor….got stuck in her hair…
Ragini giggles…..she remembers how she spilled oil on the floor…and she has made a video of this incident to annoy Kavita..
Ragini talks to herself;God…..sonne peh suhaga….i did not plan this chewing gum thing…..seems like u r also with me…..in punishing this chudail…now uss dusri chudail ki badi hai…..
Kavita starts crying…..everyone starts laughing..including Kavya…..Kavita get more furious….
Kavya goes and helps her…Kavita leaves for home immediately……..
Ragini giggles….and Kavya,Sahil and Rajat stare at her angrily….
Ragini:Areh..y r u all staring at me?What did i do?Go and help your friend….
Laksh and his friends saw the entire incident..and controlled their laughter….they saw Ragini doing this….
Laksh:Ragini Mehra?I thought that she left the college…..but she again joined…and that too in the first year?God knws…kya horaha hai…i hope she changed…and won’t annoy me…
Ragini gets to knw that there is an assignment for the 2nd year students…and gets an idea……
After sometime…..Ragini grabs Swara’s hand and takes her to Kavya’s classroom’s window….she peeps into the room…
Swara:What happened Ragini?
Ragini:Nothing happened…but something will happen…
Swara:What?
Ragini:Dhamaka…
Swara;Hein?
Ragini:Chup re…and just enjoy sweet heart…
Just then the professor shouts……Kavya Malhota…
Ragini smiles…:Dekha….
Rags makes a video of this too…

Professor:Do u think this assignment is a joke?What have u done here?It would be better if u wouldn’t have bought any assignment…..
Kavya;Sir..i did the assignment..but i donno..how these changed into these smileys….
Her file in filled with smiley pics..and cartoons…..and her info pages r missing…
Swara stares at Ragini…
Ragini:What?Maine hii kiya hai yeh….
Swara keeps her hand on her forehead…….
Swara;Anyone left now?
Ragini:Yes….that chinu minu’s Jodi…
Swara:Who r chinu Minu?
Ragini:Sahil and Rajat….they were giggling right?Now i’ll make them giggle…..
Ragini takes Swara to the 2nd floor…
Swara;What r u planning to do?
Ragini:Wait and watch sweetheart….
Ragini takes out a packet…it looks like white powder…..she throws that on Rajat and Sahil who r standing exactly below them..on the first floor…
Swara:Yeh kya tha?
Ragini: Itching powder..
Swara keeps her hand on her mouth…
Swara:Kya?
Ragini:Now we’ll see their dance……
Sahil:What’s this?
Rajat;I donno….who threw this?
They look up…but no use…swaragini r gone…..
Sahil:Bhai…..why is it itching?
Rajat;Yes…its itching..ahhh…
They starts itching their body..and shouts…D\Sanky comes there….
Sahil:Sanky bacha hameh….
Sanky:What happened?Why r u dancing like that?What kind of dance steps r those?
Rajat:We r not dancing idiot……someone threw itching powder on us…..and now….ahhh…
Sanky looks up and sees Ragini standing there…he smiles….
Sahil:Areh..why r u smiling?Help us…dumbo…
Sanky:U called dumbo right?Now bhukto……i’m not going to help u….
Rishi comes there…..and starts laughing…..
Ragini comes down…..
Sahil:Please someone help us….
Ragini:I have an idea…
Rajat:Jaldi bol meri ma…
Ragini:Oyee…don’t call me maa….warna idea nehi bataungi…
Rajat:Thik hai..plz batau Ragini devi…
Ragini:Cow dung…
Sahil:What?
Ragini:Umm..yeah…that;s the only way……to stop this….manna hai mano..nehi manna maat mano….
Sahil:Ok fine….where will we get this thing?
Ragini:Ummm…there is a cowshed nearby……u can bring some cow dung and……
Sahil:Rishi..plz…help us yaar…
Swara smiles seeing the entire incident…..
Ragini:U look good while smiling…..so keep smiling….
Swara hugs Ragini…

Laksh reaches home……
Ap:Laksh….beta….come…have your lunch….
Laksh;Yes ma….ma….woh…can i go to my….
Dp comes there…..
Dp:Laksh…today Mr Raichand is coming for dinner…i want u to be there…..u r going to be handling our business….so i want u to knw everyone…
Laksh:Yes dad….
Laksh goes to his room and calls Arjun…
Laksh:I’m sorry Arjun….i can;t come…..woh….
Arjun:Your dad has assigned some work?
Laksh;No..his guests r coming so…
Arjun:Ok….
Laksh sees his guitar……a drop of tear falls from his eye….

Precap:Swara……………………………………………..

81 comments

  1. Fairy

    Evaaaaaa….i started fallng in love wid u yaaar?? :p :p …i mean d way u presented rags charecter ,it ws jst marvalous…loved ur ff to d core….it ws helariousssss…..story is jst awesome awesome awesome…..witng for nxt part eagerlyyy☺☺????..

  2. anonymous

    Hai samjotha queen……nice ff….I liked the way u portrayed ragini…..waiting for next part

  3. Mugdha

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    Bahu….r u planning to give more importance to Ragini?Jo bhi kar…I’m going to read this..meri bahu ne Jo likha hai….cavity aur kabutarni ke saath accha huya..
    Kavya-Kabutarni
    Kavita-Cavity
    Sahil-Chinu
    Rajat-Minu…
    Kya naam hai..dekhke mujhe hamare naam yaad ajate hai…chimpanzee,chipkali,elephant and donkey????
    Oooo family walo…kese ho? Aur Riya bhootnu…thik hona?Koi kharab jawab na Dena…kyuki mein toh baas gaal chaal puchrahi hu…sourheart(special name for u)..try to be a sweetheart…

    Eva..dhamaka kab karne wali hai? I’m sure ki yeh story jesi dikhrahi hai vesi hai nehi..??? zarur kuch golmal hai…mystery hai..kyuki Tu toh hahi mystery queen…love u….????

    • Anjali30

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      Mummyji… 😛 😛 😛
      What names… LOVE THEM!!!

      Sorry for not being active for so many days… Thodi silent thi… isiliye 🙂 🙂

      Aur let’s see ab yeh riya kya karegi…

      LOVE YOU MUMMYJI!!!! <3 <3 <3

      • Mugdha

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        Bohut sareh dino badh tum dikhi…please don’t stay silent….warna Meher bahu tera pati leke bhaag jayegi…???

  4. RUPA

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    Nice…..

    Swara ko itna innocent bana diya????

    Anyways it seems intresting and do it has some flashback???

    Love ya!

  5. Sree

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    Wah Ragini ko bohot accha dikaya hai tumne?.
    Nice pranks????
    Poor Swara??
    But why did sanky smile at Ragini??????
    And Why did ragini join clg again??
    So many questions but i know answers will come slowly?
    Anyways am Waiting for nxt?
    Love u wifey???

    • anonymous

      R u the one who is writing Raglak-Second Love ff……if u r the one…plz post next part….It had been a long time since u have updated…….
      If u r not the same person….kindly ignore..

  6. Anjali30

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    Evus… I know I didnt comment in the first epi… but this story is as rocking as all the others… Absolutely smashing!!!

    Love all the characters…

    Meri ek wish poori karegi?? Show more of Sanskaar in next chappie plssss…. I want to understand his character better <3 <3

  7. Halima

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    Awesome episode Eva, wow, you smashed it ??

    I love those Nicknames you have to them, they deserved it. Can’t wait I’ll the next episode, keep smiling, take care and love you ?

    I also wrote an FF on SwaLak, I hope you read it. I’ll gave a link.

    http://www.tellyupdates.com/samjhota-swalak-episode-1/

    Anyways Jeeju Kaise hai? Aj Toh Jeeju bhi kisi se kam Nahi the ??

    Lagta hai Teri FF Meri top 5 mein ghus gayi, it’s banging ???? Lekin Teri Samjhota wali FF will always be NO 1 for me ?

  8. Piyali

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    amazing episode………..i loved the way laksh saved swara……………laksh staring at swara………..something seems fishy……..love in the air type………now ragini rejoined the collage……………..means she is elder to swara……..???? did she fail……..??? well just joking………waiting to know raglak chapter because i know it would never be love………can it be…..???? sanskar smiling at ragini…………??? another question………don’t tell me ragini is something like his partner……..wait a second is sanskar friend of chinu minu?? right….?? or wrong……….i doubt……….you always leave me in a poool of question……first time ever i am realizing the desperation of waiting to read the next chapter………………..i never ever had any such desperation before and now coming to laksh……….DP seems too strict and laksh’s guitar passion………….well i am loving this story till now……….loved the swaragini scenes………waiting eagerly for the next chappy……..love you…………be happy……..

  9. Aris

    Dear a req to you
    Just 2 of your ffs are of swalak ragsan please make this one swalak ragsan please we die hard swalaksh fans want our Eva write a swalak ff for us….

  10. G

    f**k you b***c hate u n ur f**king ffs when u dun know how to write expredd emotionswhy do u write??ugly b***c ..none of ur ffs has got something so special in it..learn something from Azure,Saba,Anjali,vini, Lovely..whole hate to you just f**king stop writing! !!”

    • Sriya

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      go to hell u g how dare u to say like that just go to hell u don’t u have anyother work bashing eva we all love her ffs if u don’t then just don’t read him who the hell are u to bash her no one has right to bash her okay she is a wonderful writer like anjali meher nisha saba and many more and don’t u dare to say bad words her to like this okay who has given a write to say bad words about her she doesn’t give a damn to like u bashers cause u have no work than bashing
      please don’t say bad words about her she feels very bad when she sees like this comments okay eva dear ignore them u are wonderful writer keep writing don’t give a damn to these people

      • SwaSan

        U Priya who are you to bash her she said that because she is much more wonderful writer than this obsessed soul ok!!just go and check those wonderful Swasan ffs written by her..Eva has been copying ffs that’s why she said that.infact every ff except fr Sanskar Zindagi Meri is copied from wattpad and a few from Fantasy Dairies if u want i canprovide u link for those.how can this b***c cpy others brain n gain fame!!”””””

      • Candu

        SRIYA dont u even dare say a word against our Gime!Her ffs r the best ok?N moreover This b***c copied her ff then how could she possobly react?

      • SandS

        Dont say anything to my Gime Api ok?She never reacted like this before..Your Eva is the one who copied Samjhota from Gime d..excet for the title…All 3 seasons are copied wow Eva u became Samjhota queen by cppying Gime d,s ff ?

      • Mugdha

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        Deklo sab….Mugda…naam mein bhi ekhi mistake….hahahaha……ja..jakke kisi aur ko phasa..yaha koi tera vishwas karne nehi wala…other than your followers…jo tu khud hii hai….accha yaha kisine Gime ka naam suna hai?(Please koi registered member…answer karna…)

    • Mugdha

      Shut up !!!!R u illiterate or what?Your words r enough to prove what kind of family u belong to….just look at yourself….shame on u…people like u r dharti ka bojj…u know that?U just know how to hurt people….nothing else….u hate her then why do u even visit this page?Just see your words…chiiii….and the writers u r talking about…i’m sooo sure that u r one of them….and u r jealous of Eva…..and that’s why advertising for yourself….and boasting…and u r talking about what’s special…now let me tell u about Eva….she is someone who never gives harsh replies….she is one of the best personality of telly updates….she is a 15 years old girl who won everyone’s heart with her behavior…..she is an excellent writer..that’s why receives huge number of comments…..u people think that she is not replying…as she is weak..but u know what?She doesn’t reply because she doesn’t want to be harsh….and none of your ffs have got something special…really?She has written 9 ffs..and each of them were very successful…emotions ki toh baat hi chodo…..kyuki she is the best at this….we feel every emotion in her stories…..she changed so many bl**dy people’s mentality…not to read for couples but for the story..now tell me….the writers..whose name u have mentioned…..what special did they do?They just wrote stories which everyone does…..yes they r amazing….and i love Anjali’s works…..and Saba and Vini r extraordinary writers…but no one bought any change in this Telly updates world….but Eva did it…its hard to bring any change….tolerating bashing…and still writing…trying to do something unique…that’s Eva’s style….seriously….using such disgusting words for writers…u need mental treatment….as u understand nothing…….I know Anjali and Eva very well…..so better stay away from them…..don’t use their names against each other..and spoil their friendship…..i won’t let u do that….i’m repeating…STAY AWAY…..and go….do friendship with Riya Kapoor…..u don’t deserved to be answered by Eva…..and trust me..she won’t answer…..

      • Sanskar

        Mugda who the hell r u to bash our Gime??? who gave ypu the right?? For whom you all term Samjhota queen that’s exactly you r bashing right nowok!!!! thats her ff which your so called sweety Eva copied….Just by changing the character names..n Mugda do u even know Gime..She is the one with whom fate had played bitterly ..when u know particularly nothing about anyone u particularlh haven’t got any right to say anything about them ok!! Sorry Gime d , ee found out your ff in wattpad very late.almost after a year..hosake to maf kardena di..n I promise those who have been bashing you will plead for forgiveness.n u have a golden heart d even after all these you didn’t even let us provide link of your ffs just because you don’t want to prove yourself to people who’ll never understand d take care..just ignore these mean comments we r there d..have medicines in time ok

      • Dany

        Mugda are u really Mugda or Eva who is praising herself for publicity don’t u f**king utter a word to our Gimu from ur f**king mouths

      • Mugdha

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        i’m everything sweetheart….neh…sourheart…and pleading for forgiveness….my foot…just stop commenting as swasan and sanskar..stop insulting them by using their name….

      • Anjali30

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        lol… Sanskar…

        We should not tell anything about gime.. .And i agree.. I cant tell anything about her because I dont know her…

        But what right do you all have to speak like this to Eva..

        DO YOU KNOW HER?

        Then y so much gussa?? And is G gime?

        She has suffered so much… I am sorry about that.. But when you can feel humanity for her, Why not for Eva.. What the hell is her crime?

        Gime, If you are G… Pls tell me… These ppl are telling that Eva copied ur stories.. But they are not ready to show the proofs… from what I’ve learnt, You;ve also been bashed.. So you understand how that feels..

        So you give me the proof… Show me that Eva supposedly copied ur stories.. otherwise this will be just an attention ploy for you…

        It’s not right to insult others… No one has that right… So show me the so called proofs..

      • Mugdha

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        And yes….if your Gime has a heart of gold then why she commenting and abusing another writer?She didn’t give u the links….becuz she doesn’t want to hurt anyone..lol..seriously….then why is she here now???

  11. sss

    EVA U b***c I WONDER U DONT HAVE BOYFRN OR NY BEST FRNDS BECUZ WHORE EVEN INUR STORIES U SHIP PAIRS LIKE ANYTHING OMG IN REAL LIFE WHAT WOULD U DO GOD I CANY EVEN IMAGINE WHO WLDLIKE HAVING FRN LIKE YOU DO U MAKE BFFS FPR MONEY???I FEEL DEGRADED SWASANIANS LIKE U ALSO DO EXIST.HOW R U EVEN SSWASAN HOLIC..JUST FR NAME TO SPOIL NAMES OG OTHER SWSSAN FANS LIKE US

    • Shona/Laado

      HEY U IDIOT ZABAAN KO LAGAAM DO TUMHARE DIRTY DIMAAG YE BAATE ISLIYE AAYI BCOZ MAY U HAV DON THIS ACTUALLY SURELY HAV DONE THIS AGR TUM SAAMNE MILE DOBARA TO WO HAAL KRUGI KI BASHING KYA TYPING BHI BHOOL JAOGE.

  12. AAngel

    Y u ppl begging this men*** to write ff on swalak dont u know she does it for comments lol do u expect this obsesed salt to write ff on swalak ragsan actualky ts attention seeker isnot even swasan fan shez acting to be one becuz der r mny swasan gv gained fame n not to forget she is second Rashmi Sharma lol Eva’s hateers do u all even know that her name is that we call her A die hard fan of comments a f**king shipper a b***c a drama queen rofl i rememberef this psucho’s Samjhota’s end so tell me was this ragsan swasan swalak huh!!!!phewwww shez got haters more than admirers n to be honest somr people who admire her just in front of her backbite about her with us *Obsessed soul’s haters rock’

    • Anjali30

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      how can you be proud??

      You think insulting someone is fun?? You think HURTING their feelings and laughing is nice?

      Comment seeker… Very nice.. .If she really is a comment seeker, Why are you increasing them?? Leave her alone..

      And this type of hater’s club that you have shows exactly what sort of person you are..

      • Sriya

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        anji dear u are absolutely write these bashers have no work other than bashing in others ffs bashers just stay away from this ff and go do friendship with riya kapoor eva doesn’t need support of haters like u she have many more works and u don’t deserved to be answered by eva
        don’t u dare to bash me anyone if u do i will show what i am b***** haters

  13. Mugdha

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    Dear G/swasan/sss/Shreaya/AAngel/Candu…
    I know u all r one person….so stop this….talk directly…and u all r talking about Eva right?What r u doing?Khudki tarif khud hii kar rahe ho…Sriya….dekho..achanak Eva ke kitne sareh haters bangaye..and Eva has more admirers and more friends…haters r not important…atleast haters like u r not…and Rashimi Sharma is very famous…if u r comparing her to Eva..then that’s a compliment u dumbo…sab ek hii gali jante hai b***c…..that’s another prove..ki app sab ekhi ho….and the smart one who said about links..please give me the links….i want them..now if u say that u don’t have it..then see what i do to u…u stupid lady…and yes….if someone has copied her work….then date is enough to prove that…woh zara dekh liyo…..and u r so smart na….she wrote 9 ffs…abhitak kisine yeh wattpad wali baat nehi kahi..aur tumne achanak akke kehdali…and your Gime…….lol..Eva is more famus that her….who knows her other than herself…who is faking names and writing for herself….

    • Anu

      lol agreed I mean seriously sp much of jealous ppl here..let Eva alone ok we are there to love her and more than you all G Candu and blah blah keep going dear ignore these people

  14. Mugdha

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    And yes..i find u all obsessed….and not her…..warna itne names seh kon comment karta hai….psycho ki spelling bhi galat likhti hai..tujhe parna likhna nehi aata?Ayi badi..bewakoof gadhi,monkey neh..actually they r even better than u crazy head….

  15. Blo

    Oe I got ff on wattpad written by Gime or somethinh exactly like that of Eva
    even the dates are the same
    Eva have u been writing in wattpad by using Gimme’s name

  16. Anjali30

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    Haww…. What the hell is going on here….

    Just tell me one thing…

    First someone told that she can’t write.. Her emotions are not expressed well…
    Then someone else says she copied from wattpad…. And the author’s name is Gime??

    And everyone seems to love Gime… she’s an excellent writer I guess… That’s why you all love her?
    But if Eva did copy the stories, then how can her emotions not be good….

    It’s really hard to understand…

    Why exactly are you mad??

    and y comment now? she has finished her samjhotas… IF the stories were copied, why not tell it in the beginning itself? Why now?
    Because you all don’t like her, You want to insult her, you’ll tell anything that comes into ur mind??

    I don’t know what’s ur problem with Eva… If you don’t like the way she writes.. Why on Earth even bother reading it? Do you think it’s nice to hurt her feelings??

    I’m sure she didnt copy the stories… So called proofs? What proofs?

    But I have complete faith in Eva…

  17. Mugdha

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    Accha…jo yaha sab bhok rahe ho…ab link bhi dedo..mujhe samjhota 4 padhna hai…..Gime pehle likhti hai right?Isiliye toh kehrahe ho ki Eva ne copy ki…..

    Aur jo mujhe Eva kehrahi hai…..sunn kaan kholke..tu yaha achanak tapak padhi….mein yaha bhut pehle seh hu..teri Gime jis Anjali ki baat kar rahi hai..useh puch jaake…..mein ek registered member hu..aur tum sab lafandar ki toli….samjhee…..yaha mujhe bhut sareh loog jante hai….mujhe toh yehi samaj nehi araha hai ki Gime..ap itne namo seh comment kyu kar rahi ho?Wattpad mein bohot sareh loog hai…mein khud hu…so jhut bolna maat….Eva mahino seh likh rahi hai…aj achanak tumhe yad aya ki Gime naam ki koi insan hai…..

    • Esha

      stop acting Eva
      yes Mugda all who commented here are our friends..We decided to comment today itself about Eva..isliye tujhe jor ka jhatka jor se laga haina Eva tu ffs copy karke thak nhigaye?

      • Shona/Laado

        KYU NO WORDS FOR THAT SUFFRERING DRAMA. MERI CHOTIMOM KO ITNA SUNAKR BOL RAHI HAI NO WORDS. WELL WHO R U CAN U TELL ME ABOUT YOURSELF BCOZ I GUESS U R D ESHA WHOM I KNOW MAYB AND BY YR COMMS I THINK U R THAT JEALOUS ESHA ONLY .

  18. Esha

    plz stop bashing Gime di
    plz let me clear out
    Gime isn’t here on Tu I made her acc
    she has suffered alot so she doesn’t want to hurt anyone
    she can tolerate but not every one
    hence her admirers are the ones who commented we decided to do so
    for Gimme di! so plz no words for her

    • Anjali30

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      Wow… we can’t tell anything about Gime di… But you can bash our eva??

      She suffered and I’m really sorry for that… It’s not nice to know that someone’s hurt…

      but when you can feel sorry for her and all.. Why cant you that same amount of humanity for eva?

      hypocritical much???

      Anyways, I haven’t personally told anything against gime.. But you people too understand… we love Eva as much as you love Gime.. So give us the proofs…

      This is not right of you…

      • Ragini

        Ha..ja tu apni Gime ko leke…we r happy with Eva’s writings only and trust me……Eva is mote famous then Gime…? ? ? ? Eva is our Eva….and our trust is not so easy to break…shr has so many friends here..better leave from here…or else…u’ll get insulted more…and I’m sure that u all r the same people….so just shut up…we r true supporters..and u…i don’t know what…so go to hell and take your Gime with you too..

      • Sriya

        |Registered Member

        u are the ones who will be going to hell and what u say don’t bash gime if u can bash eva we can’t bash eva b***** attention seekers and ya show us the proofs then we wil believe until unless u don’t show the proofs we can prove that u all are lying u know eva will feel after reading this comments u all b****c f*** of you guys and don’t u dare bash me I am telling the truth guys show us the proofs till now she has written 9 ffs but no one said if she has copied why can’t u guys tell before why now and where the hell you proofs are u know eva is not replying u because she doesn’t like to give harsh replies to anyone because of u guys she feels very much bad she is just 15 guys have some shame saying bad words to her u know she has been bashed by each and every ff but still she is writing that’s the spirit if she is copying show the proofs u attention seekers and don’t dare to bash me and i am not bashing gime i am bashing u other guys who are not showing proofs if u are right show the priofs where did the hell proofs go??
        dont u bash me guys its the truth

  19. Meher

    |Registered Member

    Ohh wow so u people search this ff just to bash Eva…

    according to you Eva has copied this ( which is impossible) then u just need to send those links here.. We all can read n decide…

    Or u can report to telly updates but no… U choose to show ur vacab knowledge in cheap abuses here…

    If u all are so bl**dy true then u won’t need such words… Using these words for a person whom u don’t know is disgusting…

    U could chose normal Way but no u all guys came here to write f*cking shit…

    If ur gime has written all those stories then why don’t she report to TU OR rather than why don’t the noble souls like u report this.. TU will simply remove her ff just like bushra’s bt u didn’t do anything like this u know why… Cz its mere ur jealousy…

    Come with proof (if exists) then type such f*cking shit here… Atleast have courage to put ur name here…

    Okay n u got thing same like Eva that too on same date.. Then my dear noble soul.. Can’t ur super talented gime copy Eva’s stories.. Or u hv blind faith in her …?

    • Anjali30

      |Registered Member

      Ikr…

      Their Gime has a heart of gold.. They’re so pure and sweet-hearted… 😛 😛 😛

      what bull…
      like meher said… HOW ON EARTH ARE YOU GONNA PROVE THIS LIE??

      All you ppl wanted to do was be sadistic…

      If you truly understood pain and suffering… And if ur gime has truly suffered.. Then you’ll know what it feels like to hear such things or see … Whatever…

      You think by insulting someone else and making ur friend happy is nice of you? Your good deed of the day?

      You’re just proving that you’re a person who can’t speak civilly.

      If your gime was so super noble and the best person ever she will know that this was not right.. Then again, she is UR friend.. so GOd knows…

      • Shona/Laado

        WOW CHOTIMOM KHUSH KR DIYA AAPNE WAISE TITLE STORY SE KESE JUDEGA. SAMAJ NAHI AARA KOI TWIST HAI KYA. WELL MUJE LAGA THA KI SWARA RAGINI HOGI AUR RAG SWARS KUCH TO HAI WTING FOR NXT CH KEEP WRITING.

  20. Mugdha

    |Registered Member

    Oyeeee…pagalo ki fauj…..its Mugdha…not Mugda…sab ekhi ho..isiliye yeh mistake kar rahe ho….aur ek bar Mugda kaha na….toh dekhliyo…

  21. Aahna

    |Registered Member

    who is gime, all fighting to not bash her BT who is she and one more thing many are saying saying Eva is copying then give us link of original work then we will believe u.till then don’t bash her.

  22. Amna

    I hate you Eva
    I had so much hope but thanks to my wattpad friends for opening my eyes my blind faith on you!!

  23. Simran

    its so confusing geme n eva!
    why do u people want to make eva controversal queen god always happens in Eva’s ff she hasn’t got a single ff where she hasn’t been bashed fr one thing or the other don’t know who’s correct !

    • Ragini

      Ha..nehi huyi ese koi ff jismein controversy nehi huyi..par tujhe itni khilibili machi q hai?tujhe badi gudgudi horahi hai…ja…jakke maar…bewakoof…

  24. Meghs

    |Registered Member

    Whats wrong with u all..
    If u guys think eva copied where is the proof give us link of whatpad u can’t say like that before proving. ..
    We all know eva more than gime or whoever if u guys saying she copying then first proff before saying. ..

    N who ever bashing her first give proof then speak

  25. Shona/Laado

    AMNA YOUR COMM IS LIKE A TYPICAL SERIAL WALA DIALOGUE AND SUCH A STUPIDITY THESE BASHERS ARE DOING GAYSB HO GYE WIDOUT PROOF AISE TO HUM B KEH SKTE HAI KI THAT GG.. WATEVER HAD COPIED FROM EVA.

  26. Shona/Laado

    FAMILY K BAARE ME KISINE KUCH BURA TO KAHA THA HUMARI FAMILY K BAARE ME. I M NOT GOING TO LEAVE THESE IDIOTS AAYE BADE GIMI G GIMI DII BLA BLA BLA AND THAT OVER ACTOR SHIT GIMI KO PTA CHL GYA SHE WILL NOT TALK BLA BLA GLTI KISKI THI EK TO DOOSRO KA JHOOTA PROFILE BNAKR US INSAAN KO BHI BEIJJAT KRNA AUR KHUD BHI HONA HUH. SHAMELESS PPL.

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