#on air serials #os competition #ek shringar swabhiman entry 2

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Hello friends…. So this OS is on our lovable couple AnRidh aka NaiRan….. This is just a thought about the on going track… I hope u all like it…

NaiRan : from friend tomy life..
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His pov…

This is the most happiest day …As well as the most sad day of my life ….. I’m happy because …Finally I got rid of my sin….I mean ..Now I’m perfectly fine … Without that allergy…. And now being me is not a sin….* His smile vanshied*… But…Today I’m going to lose her… She is going to go away from me….Forever…. Within few hours… She will be on her path of her life…And I’ll be on mine…. but I don’t want this to happen…. At some phase of my life I wanted her to go away from me…but during that time also I never hated her….It’s was just that I didn’t want her get into trouble because of me…..But now I need her every passing second…. She had become my addiction…. That I can’t live a fraction of second without her….Because I had fallen for her. ..Yes I love her…. .

I think I’m confusing u all….OK…Let me tell about myself… I’m KARAN SINGH CHAUHAN…. And she * looking at her* ….She is the reason for my smile ….She is my moon in the dark night…. She is the angel of my life…. She is the storm.. of my life. .But that storm which brings cool breeze and fresh flowers after drought…. She is the positivity….Who cancelled my negativity…She is the one who taught me to have faith in my self…In short ….She is MY LIFE….My WIFE ….NAINA KARAN SINGH CHAUHAN…..

Though our marriage was a forceful one.. but that was the most beautiful thing that happened to me….The circumstance in which our marriage took place … One can’t expect a girl to shower love instantly…But she did. …. She considered my family as hers … My home as hers …And even she considered me as her husband……
But I didn’t want that… I tried all possibilities to make her go out of this unwanted tie…Even I lied to her…That I love someone…… But she found out that it was a lie… And in a worried manner…I told her about my allergy….Thinking she was unconscious…But she was not…
After that I thought she will go from my life…But I was wrong….She is hard…Than I thought… later … she threw her hand for our friendship….And I accepted it… And it was the most beautiful moments …. ..

Whenever I was frustrated….I shouted at her… Whenever I was sad….I let my feeling in front of her….But Everytime…She encouraged me with her pretty smile ….
How she handled me …Is still a mystery… In short …She is a mystery herself….*he smiled remembering their moments*… She is so innocent…That she see goodness in everyone…. She is a nautanki ….That she never let a chance to play pranks with me…. She is so cute, bubbly, full of life …And what not….
Everything was going smoothly…..But that one day….Changed everything….Turned my life upside down… Put my life again into the dark world….

* He looked at naina… Who has fallen asleep in his shoulder… He put his one hand around her shoulder…And with the other hand he held her hand tightly….And joined his head with hers….. A long tear escapes from his eyes….* …
” I don’t want to lose u naina… I don’t want to leave u…. Never ever….”….

FB starts…

( Guys it from…When Meghna came to know about Karan’s allergy…And was questioning everyone…Why they hided it…From them before marriage…. And in this. … Dadaji …Has gone to some meeting for two weeks…And naina is not having any allergy Patches…)..

Meghna crying : y. ..Y….U all hided this… Kyun barbadh ki meri behan ki jindagi …
She goes to nirmala..
Meghna : maa….Aap hame apna beti maanthi ho na… Then y u didn’t tell anything…
Naina: di…Pls… Listen to me once..
Meghna : bas chiku … Ek aur shabth nahi… * Showing her hand *…

Meghna to NK: … U put condition on my marriage na… That if chiku marries Karan… Then only u will consider me as ur bahu… Kya aapne yeh sab jaan buchkar ki…
NK: bas …. Before questioning everyone…apni pyaar chiku se bhi ek baath pucho… Ki kisne hame roka ..??
Meghna looks at naina …
Naina : meine roka…
Meghna : Haan usne hi roka… Lekin mere liye… ( Holds Kunal collar ) Kunal…tumne toh kaha na…Ki sab Saath rahenge… Jo bhi ho raha sab tik ho raha… Lekin Tum pata nahi h Kya…Karan ke bhimari me bare…
Kunal: Meghna relax..I..I..
Meghna pushing Kunal…: Y…Y..Did u ruin my sister’s life..
Naina: pls…Di…I’ll explain u everything…
Meghna: chup…
Meanwhile NK is seen talking in phone with someone… after sometime he cuts the call…And..

NK: Meghna… Tumhe lagta hai na ki hum tumahri behan ki jindagi barbadh ki…. OK…Then …I’ll get naina and Karan divorced….
All looked at him shocked…. Karan was not able to move an inch…
Nirmala: divorce….?? Dekhiye…Meghna wo sab gusse me ….
NK: bas….It’s my final decision….
Saying he goes from there….. Nirmala goes behind him…. Sandhya smirks…And..
Sandhya: I’m feeling so sorry for u..Naina… Pack ur things…. Afterwards u won’t get time na…
Saying she goes….

Meghna: chiku….I’m ….I’m…Sorry….I never thought that this will happen…
Naina looks at her…. with tears filled eyes ….And runs to her room…
Meghna : chiku…
She was about to go…Kunal holds her hand…
Kunal: leave her alone for sometime….

Meghna hugs Kunal…
Meghna: it’s all because of me… .. Kunal… Because of me ….She married Karan….And now.. what i did…I..I..
Kunal: shh….Relax Meghna…
He takes her to their room ..Leaving behind Karan all alone. …..

Tears were running down his eyes…. He was not able to digest the fact that his best and true friend is going to go away from him…But is he feeling all this just for a friend. …?? No… Something was piercing his heart…. Some new kind of feeling…. When he came to know that naina will not be with him…. His heart crushed into pieces…..It was a new kind of feeling. ..Which he was not able to name. …. He dropped to the floor …And cried his heart out …..

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After sometime…

NaiRan room..

Karan opens the door and finds…Naina sleeping sitting in the window …..( Guys do u all remember that scene…When Karan made naina laugh).. he goes near her and finds ….tear marks..In her face. …He looks for some cloth. … So that he could make her lie in bed.. ..But he didn’t find anything.. … At last…..He slowly removes her duppata and covers his hands. …And lifts her up….In bridal style * oh Piya plays* ….He makes her lie…Bed…. He remembers all his moments with her…. A long tear escapes from his eyes….And falls on naina’s cheek….. ” Karan…” Naina calls him in his sleep…..
Karan looks at her …..
* Oh Piya plays*…

Next morning…

All r standing in the living room….
Karan is seen signing the divorce papers… He gives the pen to naina without looking at her eyes…
Naina takes the pen…. Her hands were shivering…. She takes a glass of water … And brings it near her mouth… But stops in middle… And pours it on the divorce papers…
All looks shocked…
NK: what r u doing…. What did u think… We don’t have another paper…??
Naina looks on…
NK : Vikram ji ( NK lawyer ) …Get ready another paper…
Vikram : ji…

Naina: aap sab ko shayadh pata nahi hoga… I took some promises…During my marriage with Karan…
1. What ever may be the situation…Whether good or bad. …. I’ll never leave his hand…
2. I’ll consider his family as mine…And show my love and affection equally to everyone.
3. I’ll…
NK: stop… What ever u want to tell …I can understand….Par tumhe papers me sign karna hi hoga…
Naina : I’m sorry Papa… Untill Karan gets rid of his allergy …. I’ll not leave him… .
NK; ….Enough…
Naina goes to Karan : …Karan…Tumhe mujh par Barosa h na…

Karan nods…
Naina: Karan…Tum mere Saath ho na…
He nods again… Naina smiles…
Naina: Papa…Plss… I’ll take Karan to Mumbai..I know a famous skin specialist there…. After 3 months…He will be free from his disease….. And when he will be alright…I’ll leave this house…
After sometime….

NK: tike…. Lekin yaadh rakna. . U have to leave this house…
She nods…

FB ends…
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And this 3 months has passed….Now they r returning to their home in car….

Karan keeps on looking at her…..
Naina slowly rolls her eyes….Karan closes his eyes .. and pretends to be sleeping…… Naina wakes and looks at Karan and smiles…. She caress his hairs…

Her pov.
I don’t know y Karan….I started to feel something for u…And later I realized that it was love…. I have no idea…How …..when… Why…It happened…..But I know only one thing…That is I love u…But today is going to be a turn over day for me…. Everything lies in ur one word Karan… How u consider… I don’t know what u r thinking now…. But my heart is beating fast….. I’m waiting for your one word Karan….

Fb starts….
NK : tike….Lekin yaadh rakna…. U have to leave this house…
She nods…
Karan couldn’t see all this… So he goes to his room…
Naina: but…. When we return … If Karan considers me as his wife… I’ll not go..
NK smirks: OK…
FB ends…

After few hours… They reach home…
Karan gets happy seeing his family after a long time … He hugs his maa, khyathi… And takes blessings from dadaji… NK comes and sees…Karan happily holding his maa hands… And then he sees naina was is smiling looking at Karan…
NK: achha…U guys came back… Naina u remember ur promise na….. * Smirks*
Naina : ji Papa…
The happiness which Karan got after seeing his family… Vanshied…. He goes to his room….
Naina spends some time with family..And then goes to her room…
She opens the door…And finds the room fully covered with darkness…. She switch on the lights….And finds Karan standing near the window…

Naina: Karan….
Karan turns and looks at her…. Tears were running down his cheeks…His hairs was messed…
He runs to her and hugs her… She hugs him back… And tears make their way down her cheeks…
Naina: Karan…Kya hua..
Karan: naina..Pls…Don’t go …
Naina smiles a bit..
Naina: kyun Karan???
He brokers the hug and looks at her…

Karan : kyunki…Kyunki…Tum mere dosth ho na…Isliye…
Naina smile vanshied..
Karan in mind : y I’m not able to confess my love to her…??
Naina: u will get many more friends Karan…
Saying she goes and starts packing her things…
Karan goes outside the room and stands in front of the god…With folded hand…And tears running…
Karan : y…Y. ur doing this … Y ur taking her away from… Pls…Give her back to me…Pls…
Meghna: there’s only one way to stop chiku ..
Karan turns and looks at Meghna..
Karan: and what’s that bhabhi..
Meghna: it’s u Karan…

She tells him everything…
Karan runs to his room… And finds naina packing…Her things…
Karan: naina math Jao na…
Naina:….
He holds her hand…And pulls her closer… And snakes his hand around her waist..
Naina: kyun..
Karan rubbs his cheek with hers..Naina closes her eyes..
Karan: because I love u…
Naina looks at him shocked..

Naina: Sachi..
Karan : naina… I don’t know any cheesy lines…So..I..
Naina : Karan…I don’t want any cheesy lines.. ” I love u ” is enough… Just hold my hand..And tell me …U r there for me..
Karan: I’ll always be there ..For u…

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Karan is lying in naina lap..
Karan: naina…U know what… U played a lot of role in my life… First we were strangers…Then fighting like enemy..Then husband and wife…Then friends…Then.. Best Friends…
Actually…In short…From friend to my..
Naina: to ur lover …
Karan sits up..
Karan: no… My life…
Naina gets happy and hugs him….

The end.

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21 Comments
  1. Minerva

    Am absolutely stumped. This story was well beyond the horizons of mortal imagination. The emotional quotient and wordplay in this story was surely awesome. I am really enraptured by the magical aura created by the magical wand held by you. Its an absolutely miraculous piece of literal art.
    The thoughts of karan and naina portrayed through this story were seriously beautiful. It was like a wondrous compilation of a plethora of myriad glories and strifes. Beauteous descriptions and awesome flow of words throughout. Just cannot find words to praise you enough.

    1. Minerva

      A story such as this is greatly apt to be deemed as one with a 9.5/10 score…

    2. Minerva

      I vote for it.
      9.5/10

  2. Resh

    I vote for it!
    Rate : 9 on 10
    It’s a wonderful story…Loved it❤️️

  3. Devihaa

    I vote for it..
    Rate 10..

  4. Threemaimai

    nice one… this os show more emotions which actually reader can feel. thumbs up for this

    1. Threemaimai

      forgot to vote. 🙂
      i vote for it
      Rate: 6

  5. #nairanlover:-)

    I vote for it.It was awesome.
    Rate:9 on 10

  6. Titli

    I vote for it..
    rate 10/10

  7. I vote for it
    Rate:10/10

  8. Superb!!!!!
    I would give 10 out of 10

  9. Snehasat

    Awesome

    I vote for it
    9/10

  10. Hugely stupendous story. Very glad to give it a 9.5/10…

    1. I vote for it.
      9.5/10

  11. Loved it to the core. Great concept and lovely story. Proud to rate it 10/10.

    1. I vote for it
      10/10

  12. Lovely storyline. Emotions were depicted beautifully!❤️
    I vote for it
    Rating: 10/10

  13. Aadya

    I vote for it 9.5/10

  14. Snehasat

    I vote for it
    10/10

  15. Nila

    Super and touchy Os And my vote is 10/10

  16. Nila

    I vote for it :10/10

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