#On air serials #Competition #Jana na Dil se door #Entry 4

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MERA PYAAR HAI MERA ZINDAGI
(MY LOVE IS MY LIFE)

TRUE LOVE IS HARD TO BREAK BECAUSE IT NEVER ENDS
THIS STORY STARTS IN A COLLAGE .
ITS FIRST DAY AFTER THE PROTESTS ON A STUDENT’S DEATH.
A girl; Vividha ,
A YOUNG GIRL TURNS . WIND BLOWS. THE GIRL REMOVES HAIR FROM HER FACE . IT IS OUR HEROINE VIVIDHA
Viv: Tia, its been one month since we met and u haven’t changed yet.
BOTH LAUGHS .VIVDHA’S ANOTHER FRIENDS CALLS HER .
FRND: Vivi, look who is coming .
VIVIDHA LOOKS AT THE GATE .A DUST WIND BLOWS . OUR HERO ATHARV ENTERS .
Viv: isn’t he that guy ? our Tara’s ….
Tia: yes our tara”s lover. It was when we last saw tara on the day when their marriage, poor guy . I heard that he is still in that shock … once he was our topper but now he is back in studies ..
EVERYONE GETS SAD FOR MOMENT .
Viv:Tara was our friend so… it is our duty to cheer him up . are u there with me ? this is the best thing we can do for our Tara.. Tia , Eli, Shweta r u there ?
Frnds: yes .u r right .

AT INTERVEL
VIVIDHA SEE ATHARV SITITNG ALONE ON A BENCH
Viv: yes it the right time , guys wait here let me go
VIVIDHA GOES TO ATHARV AND SITS NEAR HIM
Vivi: Atharv , I want to talk to u
ATHARV LOOKS AT HER
Ath; vividha , yes why r u here ? if u r here to talk about the past , Iam not interested
ATHARV GETS UP TO GO . VIVIDHA HOLDS HIS HAND
Viv: iam here to say tou that forget the past . don’t spoil ur future for what happened in the past . she would be happy if u live a good lif e, that what we can do for her .
ATHARV SITS ON THE BENCH .
Ath; yes, iam trying to forget it all… but how can I forget it so easily . whenever I try to forget it that day it comes to my mind ….
VIVDHA HOLDS ATHARV’S HAND .
Vivi: maybe u can use our help whenever u need , we rthere for u ,with u ….
AHTARV THANKS HER AND GOES .

DAYS PASSED . THEY GREW CLOSER . ATHARV STARTED TO BE NORMAL .THEY BOTH STARTED TO LOVE EACH OTHER BUT THEY DIDN’T SAY EACH OTHER .VIVIDHA’S FRIENDS KNEW THAT THEY LOVE EACH OTHER BUT THEY WAITED FOR THEM TO SAY IT. EVERTHIME THEY THOUGHT TO SAY IT SOMETHING INTERUPTS THEM .
ON VALENTINE’S DAY .
Ath: today I will surely tell her . I dont care whatever she replies but I will open my mind.
Vivi: maybe this is the perfect day . today I will tell him .
ATHARV AND VIVIDHA MEET .
Ath: vividha ….
ATHARV TAKES A BREATH
Ath; ivivdha can we go for a ride?
Vivi: sure
THEY GO TO A HILL TOP .
Vivi in mind : this is the most romantic time to say .
Viv: atharv,this is so beautiful
Ath: yes , vividha. I knew u would love this . vividha , I have been waiting for this moment to tell u ..
ATHARV HOLDS VIVIDHA AND BRING HER TO THE EDGE AND HOLD HER HANDS LIKE IN TITANIC
Ath: I love u vividha ….
ATHARV’S VOICE ECHOES .VIVIVDHA GETS SHOCKED .SHE GETS HAPPY
Vivi: I LOVE U TOO …
THEY BOTH HUG . THEY KISS
Ath: I was waiting for this reply . u brought me back to life . I thought I would never love someone else but u changed me .
Viv: IDON’T NEED CHEESY ‘I LOVE YOUS’ JUST HOLD MY HAND AND TELL ME “I’M HERE FOR YOU.
A VAN PARKS THERE . SOME GOONS COME THERE AND KIDNAPS ATHARV.
Viv; atharv…

GOONS PUSH VIVIDHA .GOONS BEAT ATHARV . BOTH GO UNCONSCIOUS . VIVIDHA WAKES UP AT HOSPITAL. SHE SEE HER PARENTS . LATER,VIVIDHA GETS A CALL .
Viv: hello, who is this
Voice, iam tara, vividha I hope u didn’t forget me .
Vivi: tara (shocked)
Tara; yes I didn’t die .
Fb shows ATHARV ‘S WEDDING . EVERYONE WAITS FOR TARA . SOMEONE COMES AND SAYS TARA DIED IN AN ACCIDENT. ATHARV SHOCKED FALLS UNCONSCIOUS. TARA IS SHOWN AT HOSPITAL IN ICU .SHE RECOVERS AFTER MONTHS . SHE GETS TO KNOW ATHARV AND VIVIDHA’S RELATION.
Tara: u stole my atharv . I wont let u live with my atharv . tell me what do u want ? money?
Vivi: money? I don’t need ur money ? where is atharv ?
Tara : oh my atharv vividha needs to talk to u .
Ath: vividha , vividha , r u fine .
Viv: iam all right . didi she hurt u ? r u fine
Tara: oh I hit him on his head . oh sorry it was because he said he hated me . oh no atharv r u hurt ?
Vivi; no….
Tara: say how myuch dou need to replace atharv
Viiv; a true love cant be replaced by anything .u don’t know what is true love . if u knew hoe could u hurt him.
TARA LAUGHS .
VIVIDHA MESSAGES SOMETHING.DAYS PASSED
ON ATHARV’S AND VIVIDHA’S WEDDING
ATH: if u weren’t there , I would have died
Vivi: pls atharv don’t say it . form today onwards we r one . so saving u means saving me . we r two body and one soul
Fb shows vividha talking to tara and texts to cyber cell to locate tara’s number and calls police . police takes tara and releases Atharv
fb ends
VIVIDHA AND ATHARVHOLD HANDS AND SAY ‘” A TRUE LOVE IS PRICELESS , A TRUE LOVE IS HARD TO BREAK BECAUSE IT NEVER ENDS.”
THEY KISS AND HUGS . EVERYONE CLAPS.

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18 Comments
  1. Aliza111

    Nice is . I vote for it . 9 /10

  2. Vigneswari

    suberb ya…
    I vote for it
    I would give 10/10

  3. Aliza111

    Tara scenes could have been longer . short os . But nice

  4. Pooja12

    Nice. I vote for it. 10/10

  5. Superb yarrr ???
    8 /10

  6. Diya30

    superb dear I vote for it 9/10

  7. Sandy17

    Wonderful os 9/10 ?

  8. simple 9/10.

  9. wow it was just amazing I really liked it just touched my heart I give it 10 marks but I want to give you 11/10

  10. superb i rate it 10

  11. super i give 10/10. vitharv cute but vitharv propose interuption could hav been explained

  12. good os . i loved it . i dont biase any so 10

  13. Pnap

    superb
    i vote for it
    10/10

  14. Sreelekshmi

    I will give 10\10

  15. RAOne

    I GREAT…
    I VOTE FOR IT.
    MARKS 9.5/10

  16. shivik forever

    Iam a silent readerbut liked sry loved this os a lot . I read it again an dagain do i couldnt sit silent . 100/10 i would give but 10/10 .

  17. shivik forever

    Very ifbeautifulul os. U wonder who wrote it. It is osso i cant kbow thewriter ri8? If the writer is reading this i have to say u that iam ur fan now

    1. shivik forever

      I wonder*

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