#On air serials #Competition #Ishqbaaz #Entry 7

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Main Characters-

Rudra(Leenesh Mattoo)-25 yrs

Soumya(Neha Laxmi Iyer)-22 yrs

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Morning……

Oberoi Mansion is shown

A lady is shown coming towards Pooja room….Her face is shown blurred….She sees two ladies already there doing arrangements for the Aarti….Her face is shown and she is none other Dadi….

Dadi:Jhanvi and Pinky is everything done for the Aarti????….

The two ladies face gets revealed and they are Jhanvi and Pinky…….

Jhanvi+Pinky:Yes Mummiji!!!!!….
Dadi:Ok!!….Where are the others????…..

Just then Tej,Shakti,Om,Gauri comes….Dadi gets very happy to see them….

Dadi:Where is Rudy and Soumya???….They did’nt come for the Aarti???…..
Gauri:They would be coming soon….
Dadi:I wanted them to do the Aarti today as it’s their first Aarti after their marraige yesterday….
Gauri:Don’t worry Dadi I will call them….

Gauri goes from their to call them….Jhanvi and Pinky smiles looking at that….

RuMya’s room

Gauri comes their to call them….She knocks on the door….RuMya are shown sleeping…..

Gauri:Rudy bhaiyya…..Soumya!!!….

No response….

On Gauri’s repeated attempts they gets up…..Soumya comes out of the bed and walks towards door when Rudra holds her hand….She looks questionally at him….

Rudra:Wait….Remove the curtain first and then open the door….Otherwise what they will think….
Soumya:Ohh…Completely forgot about that….

RuMya together removes the curtain which was dividing their bed…..Soumya now opens the door…..

Soumya:Yes bhabhi!!!….
Gauri:U both are still sleeping and Dadii calling u two down for the Aarti…..Now come fast getting ready!!…
Rudra:Ok bhabhi we would come soon….
Gauri(Teasingly):Ohh I see still ur two’s hangover isn’t over yet….
Rudra:No bhabhi it isn;t like that….I….
Gauri:Hmm….

Gauri goes from there….

RuMya embraces….

They quickly gets ready and comes down…..Everyone gets very happy to see them together…..They takes elders blessings….

Dadi:I want u two to start ur married life by doing the Aarti together….

RuMya looks at each other….

RuMya:Ok Dadi!!…

They takes Aarti thali and does Aarti together….They gives the Aarti to everyone….

They all comes to hall….

Rudra:Where is Shivay bhaiyya and Anika bhabhi???….
Dadi:They have gone to Khandpur to handle the business from there early morning today….

Rudra makes an O face….

Rudra:What???….Without meeting me….How rude….
Om:Dramebazz!!!….

Everyone laughs….

Dadi:Soumya since it is ur first day after marraige I want u to prepare Shagun food today….
Soumya:Dadi!!!…..
Om:Gauri will help u with the food….She makes yummy food….
Gauri:Hmm…

Gauri blushes…..

Dadi:Yes Gauri can teach u but the food should be made by u…..
Soumya:Ok!!…

Tej,Shakti,Rudra goes to the office while Om goes to his room to make a painting…..Jhanvi,Pinky and Dadi talks while Gauri and Soumya are shown in kitchen…..

Pinky:Mummiji ur decision to make Soumya as Rudy’s wife really worked….
Jhanvi:Yes as Soumya is perfect for Rudy….
Dadi:I have seen love in both their eyes for each other…..I choose Soumya after seeing many girl’s….I immediately talked to her parents and they were more than happy for the match……
Pinky:Both were skeptical for the arrange marraige but eventually agreed…..And ur decision proved right….

They continues talking….

Soumya who heard that felt bad but didn’t showed it….Gauri is shown teaching her….Soumya does as she is told by Gauri…..

Night….

All are shown having dinner made by Soumya….Soumya is shown serving everyone…..

Tej:The food is really tasty…I loved it!!…

Soumya smiles….

Dadi:Yes!!!….

Rudra makes faces and eats….

In RuMya’s room

Rudra is shown talking to a girl over phone when Soumya enters the room….She ignores him,,,,Rudra sees Soumya ignoring him so he cuts the call….

Rudra:Let me guess u are feeling jealous right???…
Soumya:Nooooo!!!!…..I have lot better things to do…..
Rudra:Every girl’s desire is to marry me….i am so lucky….
Soumya:Not mine….I never wanted to marry u in the first place….Infact I didn’t wanted to marry anyone…..
Rudra:Even I too didn’t wanted to marry u…..Not only u but every girl who comes in my life….For marraige I am quite young…..
Soumya:For my parents and for Dadi’s sake I had too….Otherwise I am not interested in it….
Rudra:For Dadi only I did it….
Soumya:By the way u didn’t told me about the food..How was it???….
Rudra:I didn’t like it….It was not at all good….Gauri bhabhi makes lot better food than u….
Soumya:What??…Let it be u won’t understand!!!…
Rudra:Huh???….I can understand lot better than u….
Soumya:Noooo!!!!…
Rudra:Yes!!!….
Soumya:No!!!…
Rudra:Yes!!!…

Their Tom and Jerry fight continues!!!!….

Morning….

All are shown doing breakfast….

Dadi:How about a small girl or boy running around the house will be???….
Jhanvi:Wonderful Mummiji!!1….
Tej:Great!!!….
Shakti:Due to our busy shedule we didn;t watch much Shivay,Om,Rudra,Priyanka in their growing up years….It would be wonderful to play with their children now…..
Pinky:Yes!!…After doing marraige Priyanka hardly comes here now….I miss her a lot!!!…
Dadi:I too miss her….My par pota or par poti or both….

RiKara blushes…..Soumya coughs….Everyone gets concerned….RuMya sees at each other….

Pinky:Are u okay beta???…..
Soumya:Yes!!!!….

They all leaves for their respective places…..

Night….

In RuMya’;s room

Rudra:Now what???….
Soumya:I am too thinking the same….
Rudra:We would have to do something…..
Soumya:But what??….If we tell the truth it will break Dadi’s heart…..
Rudra:No we can’t take that risk….We would have to think something different…..
Soumya:Yes!!!!….

They thinks….

Soumya:I got it what to do….
Rudra:What???

Soumya tells him something which is muted….

Rudra:Great!!!…I am ready for it….

RuMya smiles….Soumya sets the curtain in the middle of the bed and sleeps on her side of the bed while Rudra sleeps on his side of the bed….

Morning….

Rudra before going to work blinks at Soumya….She too blinks at him…..

Evening….

Scene shifts to a Road

RuMya are shown returning home from a place in the car….Suddenly rain starts….

Soumya:Stop the car!!!!….
Rudra:Why???…
Soumya:Do naa!!…
Rudra:Ok!!…

Rudra stops the car…

Rudra:Now what???….
Soumya:Wait!!!….

Soumya comes out of the car….She starts dancing in the rain….Rudra on seeing her dancing in the rain comes out of the car and goes toward her her….He gets mesmerised to her dancing….He too starts dancing with her….

Chehre mein tere
Khud ko main dhundun
Aankhon ke darmiyan
Tu ab hai iss tarah
Khwabon ko bhi jagah na mile

They comes more near to each other….

Yeh mausam ki barish
Yeh baarish ka paani
Yeh paani ki boondein
Tujhe hi toh dhundein

Yeh milne ki khwaahish
Yeh khwaahish purani
Ho puri tujhi se meri ye kahani

They had an eyelock…..Both looks at each other deeply….

Kabhi tujhme uttru
Toh saanson se guzrun
Toh aaye dil ko raahat
Main hoon bethikana
Panaah mujhko paana
Hai tujhme de ijazat

Both realizes their position and quickly moves away…..

Soumya:I think we should l leave now….
Rudra:Yaa!!!….

They gets in the car and leaves from there….

Night….

Scene shifts to Oberoi Mansion

They comes home all wet….Just then RiKara too comes home all wet….Everyone laughs looking at them…..

In RuMya’s room

Soumya is shown sneezing heavily…..

Rudra:Enjoy more in rain now!!!…
Soumya:Shut up!!!…
Rudra:Hmm….

Suddenly Soumya feels pain in her toes….Rudra gets concerned for her….

Rudra:What happened Sumo???….
Soumya:Nothing Rudy I am fine….
Rudra:I can see how much fine u are….
Soumya:No Rudy nothing like that….I…
Rudra:Keep quite!!….Let me bring first aid for u…
Soumya:Rudy!!!…

Rudra brings first aid….He removes a cream from that and applies to Soumya’s toes….Soumya looks at him doing this….

Tu jo nazron ke saamne kal hoga nahi
Tujhko dekhe bin main marna jaun kahi (x2)

Rudra while appliying the cream looks at her…..

Tujhko bhool jaun kaise
Maane na manaun kaise
Tu bata..

They had an eyelock for a while….

Soumya:Now I think we should sleep….
Rudra:Yaa!!….It’s done…U will feel relief….
Soumya:Yes!!….

They bothy goes to sleep….Rudra feels wierd looking at Soumya…..

Rudra(In his mind):I can’t understand why am I feeling weird looking at her…What is it??…

Roke na ruke naina
Teri aor hai inhe toh rehna
Roke na ruke naina..

Morning….

Scene shifts to Oberoi Industries

Rudra is shown in his cabin…..He is shown checking some files….His minds suddenly gets diverted to yesterday’s incident….He recalls dancing with Soumya and applying cream to her toes….He smile comes on his face recalling all this….

Rudra:What is happening with me??..Why am I having this feeling??Why???…..Am I in love with her??…Is it???….Should I??….No what will she think of me….I guess I should….What if she too have the same feeling….Yes I should….

He gets very happy….He decides to tell her today only about his feelings….

Evening…..

Scene shifts to a Road

Rudra stops his car opposite a flower shop….He croses the road and goes inside the shop….He buys a beautiful flower for her….He comes out with the flower in his hand….He happily croses the road ignoring the fact that a speeding car is coming towards his direction…..The car is shown very near to him when he notices it but it’s too late…..He tries to move but couldn’t……The car hits him….Rudra is shown in the air…..

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A girl wakes up and screams!!!!!….

Girl:Rudraaaaaaaaa!!!!!!…..

Her face is shown and she is none other than Soumya….She comes towards a photo and puts her hand on it….She cries….

Soumya:Rudy it’s been 8 years but still I have not come to terms with it….

Rudra’s garlanded photo is shown….

Soumya:When u left me I realized how much I loved u…..Please come back to me….

She cries!!!!….

Soumya:I DON’T NEED CHEESY ‘I LOVE YOU’ JUST HOLD MY HAND AND TELL ME “I’M HERE FOR YOU.”

Just then a voice comes-I’m always here for u….

Soumya turns around and finds Rudra in front of her….

Soumya:Rudy!!!…
Rudra:Yes!!!….I am happy with the fact u too love me….
Soumya:Yes!!!….Come to me!!!!….
Rudra:I am here only with u….
Soumya:Means??….I didn’t get u….
Rudra:See behind….

Soumya looks behind and finds a boy of 8 yrs coming to her….

Boy:Mamma!!!….

Soumya looks at Rudra and breaks down crying….

Rudra:Through him I am here with u….

Soumya calls the boy as Rudra and hugs him….

Soumya(In her mind):I am very happy Rudra that u agreed with me that day….Our baby through IVF…..Till date nor Dadi nor anyone from the family knows it….As we wanted it…..

Rudra(In his mind):Yes our baby….We did it….I wish u both always stay happy…..

Soumya looks towards Rudra….Rudra gestures her to smile….She wipes her tears and smiles…..Rudra smiles looking at them…..

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25 Comments
  1. Anchal tiwari

    What a rumya story I loved it ???

  2. Riana

    I vote for it (9/10)

  3. Sanjanagarg

    I vote for it…9/10. .

  4. Mansi

    I vote for it 8.5/10

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  6. Painful ending???But I am happy that soumya finally realized her love for rudra???? n got a son too through IVF n named him rudra??Very beautifully written??Loved it completely ?????I vote for it 10/10

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    It is nice… I vote for this

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    I vote for it. 8.5/10

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