Agar tu hota (1)


Hi Guys I am Meenakshi.I am 13 yrs old . I am new here. This is an ff. This is not of your expectation because i am really inexperienced in this field.


A lady is seen trying hard to wake up her little daughter.

Lady – baby pls. Mamma has work. Pls wake up
Girl – I don’t wanna go to school mamma.
Lady – baby, good girls doesn’t say like this. If you wake up now, Mumma will give u chocolate.
Girl – really. If then, I am gonna go to school. U take out my Uniform
Lady – Swakriti, go slowly.. be careful baby
(Yes most of u may have guessed it right. The lady is Swara and the girl is her little daughter Swakriti)

Sw – What to do with this girl

Then swara does her daily chores and sends her daughter to school. .


A man is seen getting ready for office. After after combing his hair, he says Perfect, Just like she likes me.

Just then a Girl enters.

Gi – Sanskar Bhaiya, Come for BF.
Sa – Coming Ragu
(Yes the man was our handsome Sanskar and the girl was our cute Ragini)

Sa – Ragu, where’s Lucky? Today he has an important meeting.

Ra – He is on his way bhaiya.
Lu – I am here Sanky.

Sa – Gud, chale. Bye Ragu
Ra – Ur BF
Sa – in office. Bye.
Ra – bye laksh. Bye bhaiya

Then she goes to her room and takes a photo and hugs it.

Ragini’s pov

Di, where are u? I miss you. I know you and angel is alone in Mumbai. I wish I could come there. But u promised me that u would come on Maa Papa’s anniversary. Come soon di. I miss you.

Pov ends.
Epi ends

Sorry for all typos and grammatical errors.
Swakriti’s role is played by ruhi of yhm.
I hope u like it. Pls do comment. And sorry for short chappy ?

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    1. Meenakshi03

      Thank you tani?

    1. Meenakshi03

      Thank you Shan

  1. Samaira

    Nice name and story too. I can’t give u advise coz m too new. But reads ff’s . which will help u.

  2. Awesome……. Continue soon……

  3. Mica

    waa….. it’s good one Meen! you are so talented writer.. continue soon, luv it ty

  4. U r 13 Meenakshi ,, but ur writing skills are good…. thnxx for ur chappy… loved it…waiting for d next…

  5. Sanjanaagrawal

    Awesome …. and plz continue … and loved ur tittle … my fav song …

  6. Nice one dear ????

  7. Bhavana

    woah meenakshi itz wonderful epi n nice start waiting 4 next update

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