Ae zindagi (prologue & CS) raglak, swasan, meghnal & twinj


Hii friends its me shivu here with another story of mine but before starting I tell u this story is mainly based on laksh & raglak r main couple but all characters & couples also have important roles so guys if u like it & want me to continue so plzz tell & if comments r less I don’t write it further


In A big mansion a room is shown in which lots of pics of a kid are hanging in each wall in that room a lady of 40’s is sitting in a bed with a pic of the same kid & weeping silently creasing the pic

Lady(weeping):all r saying that u r died but I know & I feel that nothing is happen to u till(wiping her tears) till my last breath I’ll wait for u my son

At that time two boys of 20’s enters & watch lady crying

Boy2:badi mom
(The lady is Ap)

Ap immediately hide the pic & wipe her tears

Ap:sanskar kunal u here (hiding his tears)wo I came here to clean the room
San(hold her by shoulder):y r u hiding ur tears mom
Ap(avoiding eye contact) y I’m crying
Kun:badi mom don’t hide ur tears we know u r missing laksh
San(cupping her face):we will find him soon
@ that tym a voice come from back yes annu sanskar is right they turn back & found Dp there Dp come near them
Kun:yes badi mom once masi get conscious then we find our lakshu soon

Then all hugs each other

Scene change

A flat is  shown inside the house a boy of 20’s is shown standing with his head down a couple of 40’scolding that boy & another boy of late 20’s sitting in the sofa with evil smile & a lady of 60’s standing little far away from them with tears

Lady(shouting @ the boy):what the hell lucky ha how dare u to split coffee on my son
Luc:but Chachi rajat is not walking properly
Man(angrily):Bhaiyaaa… don’t forget he is elder from u
Lady:say sorry to him
Luc:no I can’t
Lady(angrily):say sorry otherwise u & ur dadi doesn’t get food for two day

Lucky looks toward her dadi who is standing with tears he unwillingly say sorry to rajat & leave to his room & sit on bed @ that tym dadi come from there put her hand on his head he look @ her with tears & hugs her

Luc:dadi y don’t we leave this house
Dadi:no beta I can’t this house is the last sign of ur dadaji I can’t leave u can leave y u bear this much insult for me
Luc:no dadi after mom dad u r only one left in my life
Dadi:plzz sleep beta

After sometimes

Lucky is sleeping dadi is creasing his hair @ that tym maid come with food & give it to dadi
Mai:dadi plzz eat & make lucky Bhaiya eat
Dadi:no nirmala let him sleep
Nir:dadi if u don’t mind can I ask y don’t u leave this house they torture u so much & is lucky Bhaiya is not real son of bade saab
Dadi:no nirmala lucky is adopted son of my elder son vikram & the orphanage manager inform us that when he is 2 year someone left him there & when he is 3 year we adopted him but his bad destiny after 2 year my son & daughter in law died in car accident from that day my poor lucky is suffering like this
Nir:but dadi y don’t u leave this house
Dadi:no nirmala I can’t coz they have all the property papers of my elder son if we went from here they prove us die & shift all his property in rajat name then my lucky doesn’t have anything we have to live here till my lucky become 22 years
Nir:ok dadi may god fulfill all the dream of lucky bhaiya
Dadi smiles & kiss lucky forehead & went to sleep

Character sketch

Lucky(19):a sweet,silent & handsome boy who loves his dadi a lot he is 2nd year student studies in scholar he doesn’t have any friends he hates his Chacha Chachi he doesn’t have parents he is total mystery for all the students coz he doesn’t talk anyone do part time job in cafe as waiter

Ragini gadodia(19):total modern girl younger daughter of MLA loves her parents & friends alot rude for outer world but very nice to the people who know her she is also in 2nd year

Sanskar maheshwari(23): handsome dashing boy study in last year son of big businesses Dp & Ap he is also rude for outer world & sweet for friends & family

Swara gadodia(23):sweet,bubbly girl friend of sanskar & his classmate also elder sis of ragini

Kunal maheshwari(23): handsome dashing boy of college sanskar’s cousin & classmate his parents Rp&suj died when he was 12 he lives with his bade papa & badi maa little flirty boy

Meghna Singhania(23):simple but bold girl never scared from any best friend of swasan &
kunal daughter of well known owner of NGOs

Kunj sarna(20):cute,innocent boy ragini’s classmate & friend son of businessman of punjab live alone right now in Mumbai for study helpful in nature

Twinkle kapoor(19):cute,bubbly & naughty girl total chatterbox her parents r also very rich ragkunj’s classmate

Swasan, meghnal r in same classes & elder from twinj & rag but they hangout together they all r best friends & other students give their  group a name dangerous group because they all belongs to rich family & doesn’t give other students more importance

So guys plzz tell I continue this story or not

We recommend
  1. TeitokUn1718

    Continue dear…

  2. Presha

    Loved it

  3. Meghnal

    Dear it’s enteresting
    Keep writing

  4. Amazing ??

  5. Harita7

    Awesome dr. ? ?

  6. Awesome dr

  7. Asra

    awesome dear…loved it….plz continue…waiting for ur update…tkcr dear

    1. Shivu213

      Thank uu sis & I’ll post soon tc

  8. Very Nice


  10. Elizebathlovely


  11. Amazing nd can’t wait for next

    1. Shivu213

      Thanks & I’ll post soon

  12. Loved it, keep going

    1. Shivu213

      Thanks dear

  13. Jiyani

    Awesome dear….Loved it

  14. Awesome
    Post soon

  15. Interesting
    Post soon
    Keep smiling
    Take care

    1. Shivu213

      Thanks & take care u too??

  16. Superb part continue plz

  17. Awesome

    1. Shivu213

      Thanks dear

  18. Fantastic dear

  19. Interesting

  20. Welcome back dear and I just loved this prologue. It’s really interesting dear and feeling bad for lucky. Eagerly waiting for Raglak scenes. Please post next part ASAP. Love you dear and take care

    1. Shivu213

      Thanks dear for this lovely comment & I’ll post soon tc

  21. Nice part

  22. Superb start

  23. Nishuu

    Interesting plot
    Loved it

    1. Shivu213

      Thanks dear

  24. Laashya

    Awesome intro and can’t wait for next episode

    1. Shivu213

      Thanks dear& I’ll post soon

  25. Superb dear

  26. Superb di…post next soon

    1. Shivu213

      Thanks siso

  27. Ramya

    Awesome one

Comments are closed.

Yes No