Ae Dil Hai Mushkil- (A Twinj ff) (Episode 1 )

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Hi guys I am back….. But but i am a bit disappointed with the comments ….. I mean to say only 17 ….. I thought it deserves more …. well any ways maybe I am not such a good writer to expect 20+ comments 
Sidhant Khurana:  Played by Ravi Dubey ….
Thank you to all those who commented …. I feel so happy …..  that you guys liked it ….and Well my name you guys need to still guess it I won’t let you guys loose so easily 
Hint 7 : A North Indian ‘

Hint 8: Have lived in a foreign country for some time 
Hint 9 : Love watching TV 
Hint 10 : Love you all 
Hint 11: Get sad because of less comments 
Hint 12 : Had even decided to leave TU… due to low comments
Hint 13 : Have a huge crush on Ranbir Kapoor  
Now try guessing…. well some of you al close where as some had not even tried …… so I want all of you to guess and try finding my name ….. 
Link to prologue:  

Episode 1 : 
Twinkle’s POV: 
“Ma ka phone aaya Ma ka phone aaya………” my phone I questioned looking around embarrassed searching for it.”This Mahi …. I will see her once I reach home I thought mentally cursing Mahi for this awkward ringtone she keeps in my phone I finally found my Phone who called me had already cut the call ….. and the caller was none other than Sid (I call Sidhant….Sid ) I looked at him narrowing my eyes while he smiled sheepishly “Are you insane ?” I asked Sid as soon as we moved out of the conference room “What did I do ? ” he asked acting to be innocent “Don’t act Sid” I said while he continued acting “Why do you guys always do this ,you guys team up and then I have to have face the embarrassment, what would have sir thought of me ” I was about to complete my words when I heard him say “He might have thought that the brave CID officer Twinkle Taneja keeps such weird ringtones ” Sid said and bursted out laughing I smiled at him “Come let’s go Aunty must be waiting for me I have a date with her I need to get ready ” Sid said while literally running towards the car” he sat in the driver’s seat and I sat next to him “You and Mom are going on a date ?” I questioned him  “Yes, finally she said yes for a date”he  said  .”Sidhant don’t you think the age gap is a bit too much ,you should try some one younger

“I said while he frowned  “Age does not matter ” he said  while I tried pressing  my  lips to control  my laughter  “So what will you do in the date?” I asked. while he smiled and said”I  have a table booked for two in XYZ  restaurant  and  I  have also ordered  red roses today  I  would propose her “he said while I bursted out laughing  he looked at me blankly while I said “I am sorry …. ” but again I could not stop myself from laughing “You look good while laughing keep laughing “ He said and we reached our destination – My house

“Only three people have space in my life and control over it One is Ma the other is Mahi and obviously how can I forget My Sid … My life revolves around these 3 only “ I thought as I entered the house and a pair of hands closed my eyes …”Mahi “ I said and turned towards her “Di …. How do you always know its me “ she said and made a cute pout
“ I Know each and every prank and naughty thoughts of yours

“ I said and pulled her nose “Ma…” She cried and moved towards Ma complaining “Twinkle….” Ma faked anger just to pacify Mahi “Sorry “ I said while she gained at her victory I don’t mind loosing from her “But Ma ask Mahi not to put such ringtones in My phone “I complained “Mahi …….. what was the ringtone ? “ Ma asked … well I knew there was no point in complaining because Ma would always like the fact that Mahi had changed my ringtone “Ma I thought that Di’s ringtone had to be change so I changed it to Ma Ka Phone Aaya and it was the same for the past …” “24 hours “ I said completing her words while she blushed like an idiot “Why are you blushing ?”

I questioned her though I knew the answer “ Di you already know the answer it is that the GREAT MAHI TANEJA’S sister can never have the same ringtone for than 12 hours and after you had pt on so many locks I finally hacked your new password next time do make it a bit more tough “ She said handling my phone Gosh! When did she take it “Now whats the new ringtone ? “ I asked “You would come to know about it when it rings “ she said and Gave Sid a tight Hug who had just entered after parking the car even My gave him a tight Hug “ I missed you “ Ma said “Ma he was here yesterday night for dinner “ I said “You shut up Twinkle he was here yesterday but not today “ Ma said and Took Sid to the sofa “Sid Beta I wont be able to come today with you Why don’t you take Twinkle along “ Ma said while Sid suddenly acting like a scared child said “ I cant go with this lady she is the worlds biggest SIYAPPA QUEEN “

he said I froze for a moment the word SIYAPPA QUEEN …. The name he called …. HE used to call it …… I hare it the most Tears started forming in my eyes I could not take it anymore and I ran up to my room and locked it took the support if the door and sat down I could not stop the tears flowing down my eyes I tried controlling them the more they would come out “Shhh. Twinkle don’t cry , the word and the person who used to call you this does not matter to you any more “ I said to myself trying not to cry anymore
“Open the door “ I heard Ma , Mahi and Sid banging the door “ I cannot open it because neither Mahi nor Ma knew about that Hateful person only Sid does and I cannot cry infant of them “
I thought sipping my tears I slowly got up and reached the Knob of the door I slowly turned the lock to open it and then pushed the handle down to open the door Sid who was all set to break open the door and who had already taken a stance for running and was running fell down on the floor I laughed out loud as I saw him on the ground everyone looked at me in shock I knew it was because a minute ago I was crying and now I am laughing like an Idiot “God Sid … Hope you are not hurt much “ I said and gave him my hand to get up but I still could not stop laughing “ Why were you crying ?” Sid asked me standing up slowly rubbing his bum “Voh ….

I was crying ….. because …… because …. ha because tomorrow I am leaving and I will miss you all “ I said giving a false reason “My bachha don’t cry Twinkle Duty comes first and me and Mahi would be there in some time as Mahi has applied for an internship there” Ma said “ only 1 more month of college” Mahi said both of them trying to console me I hugged with of them I wish they knew the real reason but still the consolations made me feel a bit better Ma and Mahi waled out of the room while Sid stayed back as he was about to leave he stopped on his way and turned back and said “ Twinkle I know the reason why you were crying please don’t cry because of” HIM “ try forgetting “HIM “ I know its not easy bit still try “ he left the room “He knows and understands me so well “ I thought and moved towards the cupboard all my clothes had been packed accept for the dress I would were tomorrow and this old Night dress which has many memories attached to it

I thought taking it out if the cupboard “I could still feel “HIS” presence does HE still affect me so much ? “ I questioned myself knowing the fact that I could never answer the question or perhaps I knew the answer but feared of answering it because maybe the answer My heart gives contradicts the answer my brain does …. I could not sleep the whole night I don’t know why but some where I really feel my heart is in Pain its in deep trouble “AE DIL HAI MUSHKIL “……

TO BE CONTINUED ………………….

Sorry guys could not give you the entry of the hero I know you guys are waiting for it but trust me guys the next episode that would be after 12th will have the heroes entry …. I am sorry for the delay but guys actually I have an important job on 12th Feb after which I am a bit free and would try posting more frequently
till then keep guessing who I am …
Keep smiling Love you all 🙂

Silent readers please do comment varna Mata Rani papa lagayege …. Just joking I would be happy if you guys comment a small word of dissatisfaction or appreciation would also do 🙂 ‘
LOTS OF LOVE 🙂

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41 Comments
  1. Ria

    Is this crazy? And yeah, I’ll read the story soon. Haven’t yet caught up with it. Anyway, do let me know if the guess is right or no!!

    1. Avantika1309

      Thank you for commenting … and the guess is wrong …
      Keep guessing 🙂

      1. Ria

        Mili?

  2. loved it..

    1. Avantika1309

      Thank you 🙂

  3. Baby

    ohhk soooo i know my guess……..
    first u tell me wen will u post ur dat ff……..
    yaar m waiting for it since long bas name hi toh nahi yaad aarha uski itni badi punishment…..
    now dont ask wat punishment u gave coz u didnt gave any……….hahahahaa
    ohk sry ffor dis poor joke well srsly fabulous n maravelous episode
    ignore my spellings plsss coz m sleepy………..
    well really luvd it hahahaa ma ka phone aaya srsly hahahahaa………
    n sid jab tak sid bola or pada nhi naa mene siyappa queen run cry lock door n all i was still thinking ki sid hi kunj i mean sidhant hai fir dhyaan ayaa ki nhi voh toh ravi tha…..
    bt luvd it☺
    lods of love ♥♥
    post both ur ffs soon☺☺

    1. Avantika1309

      Baby My jaan I know you think that I am Zuha but I am not .. Sorry yaar .. but try again 🙂
      Thank you for liking my ff … and Ha Sid is not Kunj but I hope very soon the place Sid has in Twinkle’s life is once again taken back by Kunj 🙂
      Love you 🙂
      and yeah I write 2 ff’ will post that soon(Though posting the 2 ff’s is not meant for me but for Zuha 😉 ) 🙂

      1. Baby

        Wat u gave me a big hint rite bt m still nt getting….umm….well if u r nt zuha soo still m waiting for ur ff bdw who told u dat I guessed u to b zuha..?

  4. Sohi

    Awesome

    1. Avantika1309

      Thank you 🙂

  5. Purnima.agrawal30

    Awesome emotional epi

    1. Avantika1309

      Thank you 🙂

  6. SidMin

    Awesome episode loved it …. Too good the first part was funny and then the last part was emotional ….
    Post soon
    Love you -My Avanti ?

    1. Avantika1309

      Thank you 🙂 Glad you liked it 🙂
      Love you 🙂

  7. Presha

    amazing loved it

    1. Avantika1309

      Thank you 🙂

  8. Chiku

    Awesome!! Lovely ????
    I really dont know who u are??????????plZz khud bata de

    1. Avantika1309

      Thank you 🙂 Try karna guess karne ke please yaar you know me …

      1. Chiku

        Tu bulbul hai???

  9. RUTU.....

    Awesome episode ever…….
    Love you so much do continue soon and about guessing you I really don’t know yaar who are you as I recently mins a month ago joined tu so I don’t able to recognize you but by your writing you made me to love you and your ff you are an amazing writer do continue soon and disclose your identity I impatiently waiting to know you by your real name,
    Bye shona hope you understand me
    ???????
    ???????
    ???????
    ???????
    ???????
    ???????
    ???????
    ???❤☺??
    This is for you

    1. Avantika1309

      Thank you 🙂
      And I guess you have to wait for a few more episodes to know who I am …
      And Ha 1 hint for you … you comment on my ff’s 🙂

      1. RUTU.....

        Are You Amna if yes plz do tell me soon

      2. RUTU.....

        Are you Ayu, I think you are Ayu as you told me that I comment on your FFS so I have strong feeling that you are Ayu

  10. Amaya Bhardwaj

    Hey avantika darling, it Awsm fabulous……. loved it……I loved Sid ND twi conversation it WS cute….. Who is HE mentioned in ur FF….. Post next episode soon….
    Luv u

    1. Avantika1309

      Thank you 🙂 And He is Kunj 🙂

  11. SidMin23

    It was nice do post soon ?

    1. Avantika1309

      Thank you 🙂

  12. Simiyy

    Hey Dear
    it was awesome
    i really enjoyed it
    Are you Paavu?
    anyway let me know soon

    1. Avantika1309

      Thank you 🙂 and its not Paavu 🙂

  13. Sara28

    Hey,
    I got the time to read it and it was great! There’s so many mysteries that need to be revealed and its just full of suspense. And Ravi Dubey! Yes! It’s really interesting and continue soon!

    1. Avantika1309

      Thank you 🙂 for reading my ff and commenting 🙂

  14. Aanya_pandey

    Ranabulbul??? Crazy??? Confused…
    N about update… It was fab..

    1. Avantika1309

      Thank you 🙂
      and Its not Bulbul or Crazy 🙂
      Keep guessing 🙂

  15. Purvi128

    Hey dear,
    I think you are Crazy, don’t know. Just a guess.. please reveal your identity soon ..
    Cominng to the episode. It was really amazing. Loved it. Last part was so emotional. Who is HE? Full of suspense.
    Or ye kya .. you will post next episode on 12th. Seriously .. yaar I can’t wait. I am very much eager for the next episode. Can not wait till 12th. Or phir your identity. Pata nahi when will u reveal.
    Please try to post before 12th if possible.
    With lots of love ???????❤❤

    1. Avantika1309

      Thank you for commenting 🙂
      Well I am not Crazy 🙂
      and He is Kunj Twinj have a bad past 🙂
      12 th Feb ke baad he possible hai yaar sorry 🙂
      Love you 🙂

  16. Maggi

    This was awsm….but I’m still not getting ur original name.
    More clues plz?
    ???
    But speaking of epi, it was too good…sids role is gr8..CNT soon

    1. Avantika1309

      Thank you 🙂 for commenting 🙂
      Glad you liked it 🙂
      Though I am not even a bit of what you are in writing ff’s … You still read mine its an honour 🙂

  17. Ramya

    Heyyy avantika
    Awesome amazing Superb episode
    Loved it to core
    Though u have said me before to read but I cant bcoz of lack of time
    So sry
    But dear I’m not getting who u r
    Well do I know u???
    I think u r sidmin 23 finger crossed
    Love u keep smiling

    1. Avantika1309

      Thank you
      And yaar not Sidmin23 ….
      Keep guessing Love you ❤❤

  18. Shalini15

    Hi Avantu my chupirustam sorry for late comment????well episode was awesome mind blowing fabulous superb. sid’s character is too good. it’s lots of suspense nd mistry. loved it ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? Pls try to post next asap.

    Love you ? ? ? ? ? ? ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤

    1. Avantika1309

      Thank you so much Di 🙂
      And friendship meh no sorry ….
      Will try posting soon 🙂
      Love you Infinity 🙂

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