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adhuri kahani-pain of love episode 1

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Hi friends,I am so sorry that I couldn’tpost my 1stchapter of ff past 2 days. And always want to tell u a lots of thanks to gave me support and comments. Especiall dolly,sahima,kritika,janvi,kiran,rohi,devika,sam,aditi,amy,hayathi,crazy girl,meena,Kuttu,surbhi,vaishnavi&maya. Also thanks to my dear silent readers. Friends I was in a bit confusion about the pairs bcoz I got somany msgs for the pairs.finally I selected my pairs.but now I will not reveal it.sorry to say that. Wait for that.

Scene:1
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Scene starts from the balcony. A beautiful girl sitting in a chair.she is reading a book.on her other hand she hava a tea cup. She wore a white coloe kurtha&blue jean with hair open.she have long hair.breeze shaking her hair a little.she have shining eyes&have a cute smile in her lips.(in background we can see a big flowerwase,filled with red roses)she took one of them and smell it.her face become more beautiful. The girl is Ragini!

Scene:2
In a room. A cute girl sleeping in the bed. She is laying in the bed,facing the window. The sunlight made her face red. Her cute face have a smile.we can’t see her beautiful red lips fully,bcoz her hair made a cover up on it. The little cute girl is Swara!
Ragini entered the room(they two in same room)she saw swara. Her face become happy&smile a little.she goes near to bed&removed swara’s hair from her face. Ragini looked at swara and think that she is still like a kid.she kissed in her forehead.
Ragini is about to turn.but swara grabed her hand. Ragini look at her. Swara is still closed her eyes but have a wide smile in her face.

Ragini:swara,are u not sleeeping?then y u laying on the bed?come on get up. It is already late.
Swara:meri pyaari ladoo,don’t get angry& don’t even think about that swara is not going to get up now.
Then she dragged Ragini to the bed.
Swara: come we will sleep together some more time.
Then she hugged ragini tightly.but Ragini break the hug &said.
Ragini:no swara I don’t want,&I will not let u too.
she draged swara out of the bed.
Swara:no,don’t pls I ….
Ragini not allow Swara to speak,she pushed swara in to the washroom&closed the door
Ragini(to herself):swara is always in her childhood
Then she hear a voice called out her name.
Ragini:ma I am coming.
Scene 3
A big hall. All are sitting in the dining table to have break fast. A beautiful women serving food to all.she is sumi.
Ragini: maa,today what is special?
Sumi:nothing special but I made some carrot halwa for u.
Ragini:what?carrot halwa,I love u maa love u so much.
She kissed sumi .sumi smiled &kissed her back.
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Shekher: what is thi?I told ur mother to make it&now u gave ur love only for her
Ragini:sorry papa,how I know that?
She hugged shekher and gave him also a kiss.
Sumi:shekher u r become a kid day by day. How u can?u r a father of two young girls.don’t forget that.
Ragini(in a teasing tone): not only he.some times u also forgot that.
Sumi looked ragini with a question look.ragini made a naughty face.(I hope u all understand that).
sumi become blush& grabed her ears.
Ragini: maa,leave me,ouch..it is really painful.
Daadi:Ladoo,we r also here,sirf tum theenom nahi.
Only after that Ragini think that.she make a sorry face&go to daadi.
Ragini:sorry daadi,I didn’t forgot u .how I can forgot my beautiful roses.?
Then she gave kisses to 3 of them,daadi l,daadaji&dida.
Dida:laado,where is shona,?

Suddenly heared swara’s voice.
Swara:I am here. Are u all finished ur kissing competition,then pls look at me also
every one look at her&start burst out of laughing. Swara become angry.
Swara:will u pls stop it.
all become silent. But,Ragini can’t control her laugh,she started laughing again. Swara get super angry.

Precap:swaragini’s funny fight&entry of heroes!!

How was my ff’s first chapter?if u like it pls comment me that.I need ur support for my next step.so my dears I hope u all will gave me ur valid comments. Thank u

Credit to: Lakshmi

18 Comments
  1. very nice …..

  2. What are the pairs

  3. Very nice. Keep it up

  4. nice..
    pls can u make it lengthy. .
    reveal pair’s pls.

  5. Very nyc plzz continue i hope it would be raglak and swasan..

  6. very good starting keep it up

  7. Nice…

  8. Lovely…make it ragsan,swalak

  9. Nice make it swalak,ragsa plz

  10. Ha ha ha so fun yaar

  11. Nice start bt pls make it long nd waiting fr next

  12. Hope it swasan and raglak

  13. plz na swalak yaarrr

  14. Nice .. But make it swalak and ragsan ….plsss….

  15. It’s very nice and interestING. But plz swasan and raglak.

  16. Nice..bt hope its swasan

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