The Abyss – Ishqbaaz FF by Aashi

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The Abyss-Ishqbaaz FF by Aashi

Prolouge

The sound of rain drops echoed around the mansion. It was the month of July so it was a common sight in Mumbai. In the stillness of late afternoon, a heart raged as the tears collected in his deep brown eyes.
Another day ,alone. His head rested on the so-familiar table looking outside watching the raindrops as they crashed against the window-sill of his own personal gallery. His brother was out with his hate-love partner; his lips smiled as he thought about them. His younger brother & sister were having a fest at their college so were preparing for it. On usual days, he welcomed this kind of solitude but today he felt lonely; something his therapist had advised him to avoid.

His only source of motherly affection- his dadi had taken ill all of a sudden that morning & was at the hospital; he was worried, scared. He was intimidated by the fact that the fragile lady can leave them any time. He shuddered at the mere thought of it, his fear almost overwhelmed him. Hastily, dazed, he picked up the bottle of his prescribed medicine kept near the table & swallowed one, taking a huge gulp of water. He walked restlessly through the length of the room trying to calm himself. Emotionally over-whelmed , he sat huddled by the window sill as his tears rolled down
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Hello This is Aashi. I’m a new member here & this is my first fan fiction, actually my only piece of writing other than my school essays. I’d be very grateful if u read this & comment your views.
Thank You everyone,
By Aashi.

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41 Comments
  1. Nikita_jai29

    It is awesome dear… Please continue

    1. Aashi9

      Thank u so very much Nikita di
      Plz continue to read and comment ??

  2. Fffan1234

    Superb start dear. Please continue soon.

    1. Aashi9

      Thanks Asmi di
      Hope u would the story
      Keep reading and commenting

  3. Aarti32

    It’s abt Omkara right?? But Ishkara or gaukara or just Omkara​??

    1. Aashi9

      Yes its about Om
      Read the nxt chapter to know more
      Thanx for commenting
      Keep reading & giving ur views on the story

  4. Alekhika20

    Nyc prologue

    1. Aashi9

      Thanks di
      Keep reading ?☺?

  5. Aashi26

    Aashi dear you are a incredible writer……the way you expressed your ideas and imaginations into words were just beautiful………looking forward to read more of your writings dear……

    1. Aashi9

      Thank u, Thank u
      Aap sab ki hi to kripa hai ?????

  6. Shraddha-DBO

    Beautiful style of writing…
    Really excited for upcoming parts…..
    Waiting dear?

    1. Aashi9

      Thank u di…. Will try updating soon

  7. Zaveesha

    Good start dear…
    All the best…

    1. Aashi9

      Thank you Zaveesha di
      Will try updating soon ???

  8. Niriha

    Awesome

    1. Aashi9

      Thank you ?

  9. Ruby_MarNy

    Amazing start, dear.. looking forward your upcoming chapters..

    1. Aashi9

      Thankx Ishu di?
      Will update soon ??

  10. Sagithya

    Awesome yaar… Pls continue ….

    1. Aashi9

      Thank you Sagithya di
      I’ll try not to be late
      Thanx for commenting

  11. AMkideewani

    Fantastic

    1. Aashi9

      Thank u… Di nd happy birthday again… ???

      1. AMkideewani

        Thanks a lot Aashi, love you and I’m waiting for your story?????

  12. Yashu

    I loved it….ur writing style is awsm…..loved it……eagerly waiting for nxt episode…..post it asap……

    1. Aashi9

      Thanx Yashu…. ????
      Will try updating soon… ???

  13. Superb start, Aashi. ??☺
    Intense and thoughful Om, just as I like him
    Plz update soon……

    1. Aashi9

      Thank u #di…. ???
      Hope u like d story…. I’ll try updating soon…

  14. VHM

    Awesome start Aashi…sorry for posting my opinion late…but i loved the prologue and i am looking forward to read the next episodes….way to go girl…all the best !!!

    1. Aashi9

      Thank u… VHM di…
      I’ll try updating soon
      Nd hope u like d story… Nd take care of urself… ???????

  15. Amazinggg prologue dr…. Waiting 4 nxt…

    1. Aashi9

      Thank you so very much Banita
      I’ll try updating tonight 😀

  16. Shivikajkmn

    Nice one dear

    1. Aashi9

      Thank you shivika di
      I’ve updated the 1st chapter; it’s in pg. 7
      keep reading & commenting

  17. Fenil

    Awesome
    loved it.
    Its Om.

    1. Aashi9

      thank you Fenil bhaiya
      nxt part is updated

  18. Samm

    i’m in love with your writing. please post chapter3 asap. waiting 🙂

    1. Aashi9

      thank you so very much Samm

  19. Ankita27

    Great start…

    1. Aashi9

      Thank you Ankita di

  20. Diyaa

    Ok found it ?You have the gift of heart-touching expression Aashi. The words you use to describe Om’s emotions and condition are so clear and vivid. Really nice!

    1. Aashi9

      I’m glad you found it as I am not able to provide the link
      hope you like the upcoming chapters

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