The Abyss – Ishqbaaz FF by Aashi

The Abyss-Ishqbaaz FF by Aashi

Prolouge

The sound of rain drops echoed around the mansion. It was the month of July so it was a common sight in Mumbai. In the stillness of late afternoon, a heart raged as the tears collected in his deep brown eyes.
Another day ,alone. His head rested on the so-familiar table looking outside watching the raindrops as they crashed against the window-sill of his own personal gallery. His brother was out with his hate-love partner; his lips smiled as he thought about them. His younger brother & sister were having a fest at their college so were preparing for it. On usual days, he welcomed this kind of solitude but today he felt lonely; something his therapist had advised him to avoid.

His only source of motherly affection- his dadi had taken ill all of a sudden that morning & was at the hospital; he was worried, scared. He was intimidated by the fact that the fragile lady can leave them any time. He shuddered at the mere thought of it, his fear almost overwhelmed him. Hastily, dazed, he picked up the bottle of his prescribed medicine kept near the table & swallowed one, taking a huge gulp of water. He walked restlessly through the length of the room trying to calm himself. Emotionally over-whelmed , he sat huddled by the window sill as his tears rolled down
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Hello This is Aashi. I’m a new member here & this is my first fan fiction, actually my only piece of writing other than my school essays. I’d be very grateful if u read this & comment your views.
Thank You everyone,
By Aashi.

41 comments

    • Aashi9

      Aashi9

      |Author

      Yes its about Om
      Read the nxt chapter to know more
      Thanx for commenting
      Keep reading & giving ur views on the story

  1. Aashi26

    Aashi26

    |Registered Member

    Aashi dear you are a incredible writer……the way you expressed your ideas and imaginations into words were just beautiful………looking forward to read more of your writings dear……

  2. Yashu

    Yashu

    |Registered Member

    I loved it….ur writing style is awsm…..loved it……eagerly waiting for nxt episode…..post it asap……

  3. Shona

    Superb start, Aashi. 😘😘☺
    Intense and thoughful Om, just as I like him
    Plz update soon……

  4. VHM

    VHM

    |Registered Member

    Awesome start Aashi…sorry for posting my opinion late…but i loved the prologue and i am looking forward to read the next episodes….way to go girl…all the best !!!

    • Aashi9

      Aashi9

      |Author

      Thank u… VHM di…
      I’ll try updating soon
      Nd hope u like d story… Nd take care of urself… πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜

  5. Diyaa

    Diyaa

    |Registered Member

    Ok found it πŸ˜€You have the gift of heart-touching expression Aashi. The words you use to describe Om’s emotions and condition are so clear and vivid. Really nice!

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