its all abt me part 11

Hey guys ridhima here….
Thank u alll of u for ur immense love and support…… nd read wat i want to say in end…..

Here we go

Part 11

A magnificant dark room is shown…. wid a king sized bed in the middle…. photographs of twinj hanged on the wallss…..this was only the things seen bcz of the dim light…present….
Suddenly the room lightenscz of the opening of curtains.. ahhh….we can see a hot guy standing their sipping her coffee….near the window…he might have opened the curtains…
( ab tak toh guess kr hi liya hoga….who is the man…toh ofcourse ur guess is right..😜😜…he is none other than mr.kunj taneja….looking hot as always only wid boxers on)……

Kunj’s pov….

I was standing again near the window like everyday…nd was again back to the most dreadful days… i never want to think of it… bt all this occupies my brain themselves….ehhhh…..i sighed in disbelief……
I was going to meet rohan….to thank him…bt
*******flashback*********

Kunj went away from the room nd was passing from the room wen he heard smething which shocked him…..
Rohan- thank u so much dr nnd no one shud know anything that tw is nt suffering from cancer….(😲😲)…. instead she is pregnant….(😱😱😱)…..
Dr nodes nd left the cabin…..
Rohan(to himself)- kunj bcz of u i never get my love…so i will nt let u to get urs…..i will kill tw nd ur baby….slowly nd she will think she died bcz of cancer nd u will only curse her forever…. ( laughs evilly)… tw will die soo(oon…)… before he can complete his sentence he felt a lot of heat arising from his cheeks along wid liquid near his lips…πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚…. ( ab tak toh tum log jaan hi chuke hoge kya hua..fir bhi…)…
He turned in the direction nd saw kunj standing their in full rage….his eyes were blood red… nd before letting a second pass he again strted beating him mercilessly….blue nd black…..
Kunj- wat u think haan…??? U will do watever u want nd no one will stop u…???huhhhh….u will kill my tw…..my baby…nd again punch…. smeone cme frm behind nd held him….rohan was now toh all unconciouss…..nd half dead…. kunj frees himself from the clutches of that people nd took a knife from side table nd was abt to stab in his heart wen smeone held his hand from behind….
Voice-mr.kunj u have nt any right to punish him…we will take him away…for doing this…
Kunj leaves the knife….
(Kunj only called police nd told them everything before entering the room…nd also recoreded the confession of rohan….Rohan was dragged away by police…nd also 1 doctor involved wid him….
Kunj let a sigh of relief……nd then he turned to tell this to tw….bt wen he turned he found himself bound between the arms….nd he very well know that it is none other than tw…. they keep standing their shedding tears from their eyes…nd they get back to india..nd told everything to tho their parents…they accepted thm after scolding tw…. tw’s parents get to know abt theire tw back after a lot of scoldings….nd even tw’s parents mistakes nd showered love on her….
***********flashback************

I came back to reality wen smeone wrapped arms around my waist nd nuzzled cheeks on my bare shoulder….i know who the person is who else then my tw….. i turned immediately….only to find her in my shirt …i must say even aftrr 7 yrs of our marriage…she looks hot nd s*xy….😍😍…..
she wrapped her arms around my neck nd mine automatically went to her waist…..seeing each other lovingly…..
“Happy anniversary kunj” she wished me pecking my lips….
I caressed hrr cheeks wid my thumb….nd mumbled ” happy anniversary jaan”……taking her lips into mine…kissing her lovingly…..
We parted apart as it was a short kiss…. 😜😜…..
” kunj u was again thinking of all that ” she questioned me…oh god ..!!! Hw can she always read wat is going on in my mind….πŸ˜•πŸ˜•….
Bt i ignored her question nd nuzzled my head in her neck…nd strrted sucking nd bitting it…while she wass letting out the moans….which make me go more crazy….
“Arav must be w8ing for us…” she said distracting me from my work nd she knows that arav is my weak point….. Arav my cutie….my kid….my champ..he is 6….. nd this last ngt dinner date was planned by him along wid his grandparents….. nd later on me nd tw made busy ourselves…in fulfulling the wish of my champ to play wid his lil sister….(blushing…)….
By this tym we made our selves ready nd left to home…..
It was a romantic journey ofcourse as tw was wid me…of abt 6 hrs ….😲😲….
We reached the home at nearly 6…..
I opened the gate nd was shocked to see all black…..no lights….i turned towards tw nd she was also as shocked as i was….we were thinking that they will wish us but no….all aree gone smewhere…. good for me….( i chuckled a lil at my own thought… nd found tw staring me as if i have gone mad….. we stepped inside….as soon as we stepped in…..

Kunj’s pov ends……
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Tw’s pov….
As soon as we entered the house….a lot of flower petals fell on us…..nd the house lights gets switched on…..revealing the beautiful decorations….we were awestruck to see all that… all strted coming nd greeting us one by one….. atlast cme my champ..oops…kunj’s champ…huhhhhh…otherwise this dad-son duo will irritate me to death……
He cme nd handed over a small gift….wid his small small hands…..before i take kunj snatched it from me….huhhhhhhhh….i m also his mother….i said to kunj irritatedly….
“Not also….bt u r only mother of him” kunj said wid a laugh…..
Nd he then opened it widout w8ing for me….bt he dont know me i m also mrs.tw kunj taneja…i snatched it back from his hands….nd saw a beautiful painting made by my arav of his mom-dad, nana nani, dada dadi nd him…..
I smiled at my baby nd kunj carrried him into his arms…nd kissed her cheeks being emotional…this was the best gift for me…..no for us….πŸ˜€πŸ˜€……..I was soo foolissh to think that IT WAS ALL ABT NE…. no never IT WAS ALWAYS ABT US…….
A voice brought me back from my thoughts saying to stand accordinly for family photo….
Mom dad….nd leela maa were sitting on the front chairs…..leela maa making arav to sit on her lap….kunj dragged me make me stand behind the chairs….wen photographer was abt to click the photo….kunj kissed me on my cheeks…making me alll red…..

———-THE END————–

I hope i have nt bored u guys too much…sry if it soo…??? So hw was the surprise….the end …..
I enjoyed writing the whole part nd even i think like u guys also enjoyed reading it…..
A path from me to us….ufff….it was always us for them…bt she misundrstood this…..
I m sry if it by chance i made u all sad wid the story nd if it had deficiences in it….i will try my best to improve myself…..
I jst want u all to tell me wat u ppl like from all the story…i think i have that right…is it…??? Nd also the thing which u didnt like….as it will help me a lot to improve myself…..
I had a good journey writing this….nd seriously i m feeling very bad to end ths…bt this was pre decided …πŸ˜”πŸ˜”πŸ˜”…..
Nd i jst want u to comment if u liked my work……
I request the silent readers(if any ) to plz comment…..as u all know in which state i have tried writing the story…so i jst expect a single word in response…..so that i can get to know abt hw many ppl read this….otherwise i will never know abt this …..😳😳…..
Ok enough of emotional blackmailing….πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚…ab direct dhamki doongiii😎😎…..
Agr regular comment karne walon ne yeh socha last epi hai so noo need to comment toh yaad rkhna abhi meri baki ff zinda hai…😜😜😜….
Acha sry sry….
Leave ur precious comments…nd guys i have written a 2 shot for compensation for being late ….bs yeh batao post karon ya na…????

Love u all…😘😘😘

36 comments

  1. Angita

    |Registered Member

    My dearrrrr….amazing yaar….no words to fantastic… There was such a wide smile on my face na …loved it and the twinj and kid part so sweetβ™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸŒΉπŸŒΉπŸŒΉπŸŒΉπŸŒΉπŸŒΉπŸŒΉπŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ‘ͺπŸ‘ͺπŸ‘ͺthis part was my fav

  2. Kruti

    |Registered Member

    Awwww……..ridhima u have given this story a very lovely end
    Right from d first epi of dis ff I was crazy abt it thank u for giving us such a beautiful love story of our twinj
    And pls post ur 2shots can’t wait to see what’s coming up nxt for us

  3. Chehak

    |Registered Member

    β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯ ill miss dis ff….. its amazing. ……
    plzz post the two shot also

  4. Twinj foreever always

    I love all ur ffs u i m a silent reader but i wanted to tell u that u r an awesome writer

  5. Shreya098

    |Registered Member

    loved the way it went from “me” to “us”…..
    fabulous story….
    the ending was superb…..really loved it😍😍😍

  6. Maggi

    Awsmmmm yaaaar…. luvd ol episπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œ
    Gr8 wrk by uπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

  7. Monica

    |Registered Member

    Oh my! Your ff never fails to bring a smile on my face. It was so well written. So glad twinkle and kunj are together now. It was a great end. A happy one! Eagerly waiting for the two shots you wrote 😊

  8. chandra

    wow . the story was amazing . but ended . no pblm . bcs i know ridhima is here than why to fear !

    • Ridhima

      |Author

      Thanks dr…..
      hehe…..ridhima is here tht is why toh fear…πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚……
      will eat up ur all brains…😜😜😜

  9. panchi

    Superb epi ridhi …….. it was nt at all boring …… rather it was awesome,superb ………. loved it so so much …… lovely ending dear …….. will miss this ff vry much …….😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

  10. Sayeeda

    |Registered Member

    U ended this ff….why Riddhi ….
    It was my fab ff nd u end it so soon ….no yrr this is not done….I’m gonna miss this ff very much …

    Accha ab jab dhamki mil gayi hai ke comment nai kiya toh baki ke ff zinda hai …ye padhe ke main dar gayi…maine socha kardun….lollzz..

    So nice episode… nd soooooo amazing ending…. loved it..
    love u

    • Ridhima

      |Author

      Thank u soo much dr….nd sry for ending this soon…..πŸ˜”πŸ˜”….. this was a short story …..wid predecided end…. really sry…

      Haha…darna is good for health…😜😜…vaise meri dhamki mast hai na..???😎😎…hehehe

      Love u took so much dr

  11. Fan

    |Registered Member

    Awesome ending yaar..but this my fav ff y did u end it??😟😟..i will miss this ff very muchπŸ˜”πŸ˜”..

    • Ridhima

      |Author

      Thank u sooo much dr….
      I end this kyunki…………..iska tym khatam ho gya tha….😜😜…..
      nd even i will miss writing this ff…😢😢

  12. twinjfan (tamanna)

    awesome yaar…im srry maine tumhare pichle kuch episodes pe cmmnt nahi kiya…u know na this projects n all…aaahh…hate it…abhi bhi mai cmmnt nahi kar ne wali thi lekin tumhari dhamki se dar ke cmmnt kiya…just kidding….tumhara ff jo mera mera fav hai uska last epi hai tho cmmnt kaise na karu…will miss this yaar…lekin jaldi tumhare baki do ff ke epi post karna….yeh punishment hai itni jaldi end karne ke liye…

    • Ridhima

      |Author

      Thank u sooo much…nd i really missed reading ur comments….
      sukr hai meri dhamki kaam ayiπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚….
      okkk madam apki punishmrnt toh man ni hi padegi….will try to post soon

  13. Baby

    |Registered Member

    nonnnoooooooooooo ridhima di it ws amazing i mean yah u ended it bt d end ws soooooooo osm dt i m nt feeling d pain dt u ended it di ur amazing luv u di kya khun speeechless haha di luvd it d twist omg i didnt evr thot soo n of course kbhi soch bhi nhi skti apke trah master mind thodi naa hun di srsly luvd it

    • Ridhima

      |Author

      Hehe….thanks baby…
      zyada ho gya…main aur master mind…πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ nd dekho keh kaun rha hai…the one who have the best ideas..

  14. SidMinTwinj

    |Registered Member

    Hey ridhima I’m a silent reader of all your ffs…I’m very disappointed with you for ending this ff…I dint expect that you will end this ff so soon…the end was very lovely…

    • Ridhima

      |Author

      Thanks dr….for the comment….nd i m glad to know that my ff too have silent readers..πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚….
      sry for the dissappointment…πŸ˜”πŸ˜”… btt this was a ss so dont want to stretch it…bt will be back soon….wid smething new

  15. Queen

    Oh god loved it such a good end but I am sad as it is the end but it was really good reading your ff it was such a fabulous time I had a great time and the ending was so awesome

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