An Absurd Movie ~ OS

Hey Lovely ppl…..Kruti here with an Os for a special Girl who has made a special place for herself in my Heart❤

A VERY HAPPIEE BIRTHDAY SAYOO??…….May this Birthday be just the beginning of a year filled with happy memories….wonderful moments and shining dreams

Thank u for being a wonderful……supportive…… understanding……nd careing Friend cum Sister
U have always been there for me to share everything……nd thank u for always bearing my bak bak….vo bhi non stop wali……Love u sooooooooooo much❤?

So lets begin with d Os

Oh…wow!! Thanks ..That’s just great.. Sure, I’ll mail you my address, I’ll do it straight away..Twinkle squealed into the phone ,barely able to hold the phone properly in her excitement . Keeping the phone down ,she took a deep breath to calm herself and pinch herself to check if she wasn’t dreaming .Her dream to see her name in print had finally come true , her story was going to be published in one of the country’s best selling anthologies ..and she would give Kunj the best Valentine gift of his life!!

It had all begun four months ago.. When Twinkle came across an ad on the internet calling for short story submissions to a Book series. It invited stories on the theme of “Love”, for their next compilation of the Indian Romantic Soul .The entries needed to be non fictional in nature and based on true experiences .To top it all ,the first version of the book containing the winning entries was going to be unveiled on 14thFeb ,surely the best gift the authors could give their soul mates on V-day.

So armed with these twin motives ,Twinkle had decided to give it a try .Her own love life was full of twists and turns – beautiful moments ,the pain of long distance and the joy of togetherness, the sweet nothings of the first few dates . They had both come a long way and their love had gone stronger with each passing day .They had braved it when being a thousand miles apart from each other had almost threatened to tear apart their relationship .But interconnected as they were ,their longing and love for each other had always emerged a winner !

Twinkle had no clue what to write .The theme “Love” was like an endless ocean ,and could encompass a variety of topics – sacrifice ,the hands of Fate,beautiful romantic moments, longing and passion ,timeless love it could be anything . Twinkle supposed that for each couple in love , their own relationship would be the most special ,most amazing thing in the world. How could she make her’s and Kunj’s own love story seem special in the eyes of the Thousands of readers,who,like her had grown up reading ‘epics’ of everlasting love in stories like Pride and Prejudice, Romeo and Juliet ,Love Story etc…..?But she always believed that great things come in “small packages” .Therefore ,she was hoping that in some way through her small story she’ll be able to spread the message of Love .

So how had Twinkle and Kunj first met ? It was about two years ago ..Before this ,she had only half heartedly believed in the ideas of Fate and destiny .But after meeting Kunj ,she was almost convinced about the Mills and Boons theory of being “destined to meet your soulmate!” For their first meeting was so accidental ,so strange..its true,sometimes love comes knocking at your door when you least expect it ,she thought as she began to relive the memories of her roommate Mahi’s birthday two years back…

“Twinkle..get up .We’ll get late for the show .You can come and indulge in your beauty sleep later” Mahi yelled ,shaking the figure on the bed vigorously.

Twinkle rubbed her sleepy eyes and groaned. Mahi was busy applying the last touches to her makeup before they left for the movie. She had persuaded her two roommates Twinkle and Chinki to sacrifice their Saturday nap to accompany her to a movie she wanted to see and most importantly, in the company of a senior from college she had a crush on. Twinkle wasn’t too keen on seeing the particular movie in the first place and that too in the company of some random guys….urgghhh!!!

“I don’t know why you couldn’t have gone to the movie alone with him..Why did you have to drag us along Mahi? Twinkle mumbled as they sat in the auto rickshaw .

“Don’t” make a fuss Twinkle…Chinki has no problems. I promise I’ll give you guys a treat later” Mahi responded in a rather distracted manner.

They soon reached the place and were met by two guys, the spark in Mahi’s eyes as they approached the girls, left little doubt about their identities. Mahi’s hero, Uv was accompanied by a friend of his ,who clearly looked as if he had been bribed and dragged along for company too. After a quick round of Hi’s, the group proceeded towards the theatre .

The movie began ,and as Twinkle had expected it was a typical Bollywood soppy romance story .The hero ,who in real life was in his late forties ,still believed in playing a college student and running around trees .The heroine ,was a newbie and had a slender figure which made the guys drool ,even though she could barely deliver her dialogues properly .The pair met in college ,fought and hated each other at first ,then a song came and the college gang was seen randomly taking a trip to exotic Thailand !!

At this point , Twinkle lost her patience and cursed Mahi in her mind. Mahi, however, unoblivious to Twinkle’s pain was blushing shyly as Uv whispered something in her ear. Chinki, sitting next to them was keenly looking at the screen ,the hero being her favourite actor .Disgusted, Twinkle took her eyes from the screen to her mobile (where she was playing a game for last 5 minutes) and looked around. Uv’s friend ,sitting four seats away from her caught her glance and smiled. Looking for a brief moment at the screen, he made a face and rolled his eyes. And that is how, Twinkle and Kunj’s eyes first met…

Love has it’s strange ways !! Twinkle always said to Kunj later- “What if the movie had not been so absurdly boring ? We would have all been absorbed in the movie ,said our goodbyes when it finished and probably would havenever met each other again ..”

An hour had passed and Twinkle was waiting impatiently for the interval to come soon .Her stomach was growling in hunger as she had left empty stomach in the morning .The seat next to her was empty. Kunj had left his seat and gone outside ,probably to attend a call. Wise decision!!! She was idly wondering if she could pretend to do it too and sneak outside ,when she realized the seat next to her was occupied .”Getting bored too ,I presume ?”Asked Kunj as he slid into the seat ..”Mind if I give you some company ?” He cheekily added ,taking Twinkle’s silence for consent .

The rest as they say is history ! Twinkle and Kunj were soon giggling and cracking jokes at the expense of the poor hero and the over dramatic but predictable scenes of the movie .It earned them a stern ,suspicious.”Shhhh” Mahi said , and poor Chinki who was trying hard to concentrate on the movie despite the distractions around her gave several disapproving glances. Kunj asked Twinkle to come with him outside as “he had seen enough of the crap anyway!!” and they decided to sneak out of the theater and go to Sunshine cafe across the road .

Over her favourite blueberry muffin with cold coffee ,Twinkle discovered that she and Kunj shared more than just disgust for the same kind of movies .They chatted as old friends ,laughed on the same jokes and the remaining two hours passed quickly .By the time they headed back to the theater, Twinkle had a wide smile across her face and feeling a聽 warm glow deep inside her .

After three more months of late night chats on the phone ,several “we are just friends” coffee meetings ,and a movie date (thankfully a fantastic movie this time ) ,Kunj and Twinkle discovered they were true soulmates .And incidentally Uv and Mahi , after two meetings itself decided they were not each other’s types!!

Thus ,Twinkle penned down her first meeting love story and appropriately named it…..An Absurd Movie…..!!!!


So guys……. How was d Os
Share ur views below in d comment box…..I am eagerly waiting to read them


Once Again A Very Happieee B’day Sayoo??…….Have lots of fun
Love u Loads?

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  1. Wow yaar .seemed to be a perfect & real love story without any dramas in it
    Rare to read these type of os .continue writing

  2. Ranabulbul

    Oh my god rudi…
    I was waiting for it so very badly….
    Finally Aapka intzar khatam hua …
    It was so cute and nice loved it to the core
    Love u loads…

    1. Kruti

      Hey Brownie
      I am so happy that u liked it….Thank u for such a lovely comment
      Love u too

  3. It was sooo nice……
    keep it up

  4. RANdomfANCreationz

    Hey ur one shot is awesome i loved it a lot wow ???

  5. Savanshi27

    I must say dear u r an awsm cum fantastic cum fabulous cum mind blowing writer……
    u nailed it…. it was above being marvellous…?????

    1. Kruti

      Thank u so much savanshi

  6. Aamu

    it was soooo damn good…kruti…i loved it to d core…
    seems real life story….
    just looved it…
    i was waiting for it…cos i know u willl surely post os…n u made me ur fan on ur a long lengthy os..that was d first shaayad i read urs….
    i had loved dat pagla n deewaana kunj..
    n dis kunj tooooooooo….
    dis was of no drama..
    loved it…
    keep writing

    1. Kruti

      Thank u for such a cute comment of urs aamu

  7. Rashiverma2199

    It was awesome….loved it…

    1. Kruti

      Thank u rashi

  8. Kritika14

    I loved it! Your writing was just fab. How can you write so well man? I mean, hats off to you. Love you ?

    1. Kruti

      Ur way too good writer than me
      Thank u for such a lovely comment
      Love u too

  9. Maggi

    Now that was beautifully penned by u….
    It was amazing… The concept..words..scenes..marvelous…
    I live the title and their first meet….???
    Total it was a complete WOW!!!?

    1. Kruti

      Thanks Maggi….glad that u liked it

  10. Wowwwww!!! Someone pinch me… Kruti yaar it was just awesome… Loved it very much… Write more like this… Nd sayu api happy b’day… May Allah bless u… Nd u’ll get all the happiness u deserve…

  11. Kruti di!!!!!
    It was jus soooooooo ammmmaazzzzinggg!!!
    I loved it to the moon and back×10!
    Hehe…..keep on posting OS’s like this…love u?

  12. dreamer...arundhati

    Kruti… ? Speechless… Luved thiz

  13. Purnima.agrawal30

    awesome amazing fabulous cute marvelous lovely os

    1. Kruti

      Thanks purnima

  14. Chiku

    Awesome ❤️❤️

    1. Kruti

      Thanks chiku

  15. Awesome.. loved it ❤❤

  16. Affaa

    Fathi……what was this… Such a beautiful os… Mind blowing… I loved from frist to last… Superb yaar…love you Dea keep writing…

    1. Kruti

      Thank u soooo much affa di…..seriously ur comment means a lot to me
      Love u too

  17. Adya

    Wooowwww kruti di……. fabuloussss os…..loved each nd every part of it…….love u diii…..keep writing

    1. Kruti

      Thanks adya

  18. Loveleen

    aww…tht was nyc…n sweet too

    1. Kruti

      thank u loveleen

  19. Ria

    Hey Kruti,
    The OS was midblowing. I loved it sooo much.

    Loads of love.?

    1. Kruti

      Thank ria

  20. Zuha Fatima

    Kruti di it was a nice concept and I liked it a lot 🙂 Sayeeda Api once again Happy Birthday 🙂 Love u di!! Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂

    P.S Have u read my FF dedicated to Sayooo Api?? Please read it as I have not found ur comment 🙁 anyways…

    keep smiling!

    1. Kruti

      Thank u Zuha

  21. Sayeeda

    OMG…. Kruti….yrrr this OS is extremely amazing…..the way u peened it down is so different nd the story is so unique… looks as if I’m watching a movie…an absurd one…..

    Hat’s off to you yrr….. right now I’m running out of word’s to tell u how much I loved it ……???….

    Thank you sooooooooooo much yrrrr ….mujhe pata hai bahut sunane wali hai aap hume kyuki hmne aapko thank you Jo bola hai …par koi nai suna le aap kyuki mai thank you bolungi….

    Sacchi bataun kal se mai tumhe thanks kitni baar bola hoga mujhe yad hi nai hai …..but how much times I thanked u is less …. whatever u did for me yesterday is more than what I deserved…..ur each surprises r still driving me nuts for them…..

    U told that I bear ur bak …bak ….aree nai yrr yeh toh mujhe kahna chahaiye that u r the one who is always ready to listen my stupid talks ….
    U r the one who is always ready to support me like a frnd….. scold me like a sis …. love me like my close one’s….. give me ideas like a genius….

    Love you yrr for coming in my life….. Allah always plan the things which r best for us …so he has planned to send the best in form of u in my life…..
    Love you?????????????????????

    1. Kruti

      Awwww Sayoo ur comment always makes me blush
      And I seriously dont believe u liked my gifts so much…..I thought u wouldnt nd I have told u this too
      And Allah ko jitna bhi thank u bolun vo kam hai…..coz I have got a precious gift in d form of u


  22. SidMin

    Loved it awesome 🙂
    sorry for the late comment 🙂 I had my exams today had a break so decided to read and comment 🙂 Love you 🙂

    1. Kruti

      Its ok mili ur comment is what matters to me not its time
      Thank u so much….I am glad u liked it

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