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Ek Duje Ke Vaste Fan Fiction

abhi na jao chor ke(Intro)

administratorBy administratorMay 14, 201615 Comments1 Min Read
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i am new here. Hope u will like this. This is my frst ever story. Plz cmmnt on this and suggest moderatn needed. Every body’s cmmnt is very much valluable for me.

Let me start the intro.

It is a teenage love story.

The leads’ are suman and shravan. I will other charactrs in the rt tym. Shravan reads in a big school. Sumo is in small school rt now. Both are toppers in their respective school. Both belong well cultured family. Sumo’ s family are thinking to move her ina big school now. Both sumo n shravan are in seventh . After a long session of discussion the school of shravan was choosen for her. The city they live in was a small city so not much optns were available to her. The school was a big one but well known for bad boys. Sumo was very sad. She thought her life is going to be hell now. Being a simple grl she was much frustated to handle her new classmates.
Now in the next epi i will tell about her entry and intro wth her new class

plz rply guys abt this.

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15 Comments

  1. shweeto/angel on May 14, 2016 11:29 am

    wowww sounds intresting 🙂
    looking forward to read upcoming epi,s

    • lovely lady on May 14, 2016 6:34 pm

      thnx for readng dear
      i wll post next part very soon

  2. Dhara on May 14, 2016 12:37 pm

    Nice start

    • lovely lady on May 14, 2016 6:47 pm

      fhnx dear

  3. Abhi on May 14, 2016 3:39 pm

    Wow…it looks interesting..u r showing their school life..thats awesome..?

    • lovely lady on May 14, 2016 6:55 pm

      thnx dear for appreciatn my thoughts.
      i wnt to wrt smthn which wll be,diff n close to reality

  4. tani on May 14, 2016 4:47 pm

    Wow school life! interesting to read post soon

    • lovely lady on May 14, 2016 6:58 pm

      thnx dear
      plz cntnue readng my posts

  5. Tanya on May 14, 2016 10:25 pm

    School life in detail too interesting… Keep it up..

    • lovely lady on May 14, 2016 10:53 pm

      thnx yaar
      this story will be focussed on their school life.
      the teenagers can easily coorelate with it. i hope?!!!!!

  6. NATASHA luvs NAMIK on May 15, 2016 11:47 am

    wonderful start school life so it will be more interesting

    • lovely lady on May 18, 2016 7:16 am

      Ya dear
      Thanx a lot for readng….lol

  7. Karthik on May 23, 2016 4:06 pm

    School lifeeee???thats interestinggg

    • lovely lady on May 23, 2016 4:49 pm

      Thnx bro…….
      Wtng your cmmnts on othr parts also?

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