abhi na jao chor ke ( epi- 11)

Me: I m exresmly sry guys fr posting so late….
This is the last epi… n as per prmsh i will start my new ff as soon as i can……
I wll infrm u all abt the new ff on this page only…..
I m thnkful to all of u guys for overwhlming spprt m record breakng cmmnts………

Till now shravan hv strted melting…. the eyes of shravan tells everythng…… bt he doesnt speals much…..
Now ,
Suman goes to her frnd Kia..
( kia is new frn of Suman … she is vry spportng. Kia was Suman’s classmate n vry goof frn of Ria n now vry good frn of Suman)
Suman n Kia r sitting in the room n talking…..
Kia- Suman …. yar kuch badal gya na tere aur shravan k beech
Suman – are ni yaar kuch tha hi ni to bdlega kya( Suman said sadly)
Kia- sb kuch Ria ki h…..
Suman – wht??? Kya ki wo???
Kia- i m vry much sry that i dont told u this bfr…
Suman – plz yar jldi bolo … i cnt wait more….
Kia- phle bolo mujhe maf to kr dogi na… maine ni bataya kyuki……
Suman – choro wo sb phle batao
Kia- actually Ria came to me one day n said” i m fed up of all this n i will end all this today only”
Thn i asked wht u r gng to do? ?
She said i wll tell u after doing…..
Suman – thn wat Ria did thn???
Kia- she called shravan n insulted him a lot…. n said……
( now ria pov)
Tum samajhte kya ho apne aap ko, tum ho kya jiske wajah se mujhe itna sunna prta h . Aur wo Suman whom u love, , you donno how cheap she is… she likes u since she came n increased frnship wth us to kn more abt u… tum dono ekdusre ko lyk krte ho n sunna mujhe prta h”
shravan was listening all this shokingly n asked Suman told u all abt this???
Ria- no wo kya bolegi.. koi majak me bhi puchta h to bhi kabhi ni bolti h… bt thr was a tym whn we were bestiee n i kn her vry wll.
U r so shmless that u hv a gf bt u never stopped any one who tie our names togethr…..
N that Suman …. she is actually more shameless n drpok than u…..
Pura class janta h tum dono k bare me .. every one ask her in class .. everyone teases Her .. itna kuch sun leti h pr kuch ni bolti h… kbhi cnfss ni ki tumko like krne ka bat….
Plz
i donno hw u wll manage bt i dont want to listen my name wd u any more…..
Ria left shravan statue there……

Suman was shocked listening all this.. she jst left kia’s house thnkinh her fr revealing the truth of that secret convo…
Suman came home n locked herself in her room n wept whole day……….
Now Suman pov
How mean frns i hd.. even swati lied to me. She also supported Ria.
The person bhnd all this was Ria n Swati told me that Ria was silent during whole convo.
Me: Kitni baar mai shravan k bare me kitna kuch galat soch leti thi … bt kabhi ni socha ki wo sahi bhi ho skta h…….
Bt ab sab samajh me aa gya h…….
Shravan is actually d bst…..
Mujhe kuch na sunna pre kusi se isliye sb k samne wo aisa bhv krta tha ki hmare beech kuch ni h…….
Mujhe taunts se protct krne k liye khud villain bn gya…….
Kyu shravan kyu itne ache the tum ….. i actulally dont deserve u………
I ht myself….. kash mai sahi tym pr sab samjh gyi hoti…….. ab samajh kr k kya fayada……
Suman is in flasback…….
1 month back………….
It was last day of their 10 th exam.
…… all were happy as well as emotional…
In whole class their was hooting of Suman n shravan…..
Actually in d last day of exam by chance the same sitting arrangemnt was there….–* *–
Lyk stars were shraman…….. Suman was feeling shy n so was shravan…..
Suman was praying … plz plz god aaj shravan mujhe apne dil ki bat bata de…. atleast kuch aisi momnts ho ki sari lyf mai use yad kr saku………..

Exam got overed……
Everyone standed n start gng out of d classs… suman was still praying ………
They got out…. n no no notng happnd……

They were on road ….. Suman was feeling helpless…….
Their vehicles were in opp side so they were walking towrd their respctv vhcl…..
They were walking towad each other…..
Both looking in each others eye…
Both helpless……
Suman – ( in mnd) plz kuch to bolo plz plz……
ShrVans,eyes were also telling somethng…….. nobody said anythng to each othrr….. shayad ek dusre k khne k intezar me dono nikal gye……. they jst crossed each other………..
N turned …
Again theiy saw each other………….
And left wd heavy hrt………
Suman came out of flash back……..
Crying wd hr hrt………..
Ab mai sab kuch samjh kr bhi kya karungi … kaun sa wo mere paas h ki mai usse bat kr sakungi…..
I jst wsh ki wo mere paas hota to mai khud jakar cnfss kr deti… ab intezar ni krti uske bolne k a ……
Ab kbhi bhi usse milungi to turant cnfss kr dungi…….

Bt Suman ye ni janti thi ki use ye mauka shyad ab ni milega……. ya milega bhi to pta ni kb……

Suman keep waiting bt didnt meet his shravan fr nxt 2 years 2,months n 25 days….
Suman still waitng fr his shravan bt hv list almost all hope……
Bye guys…… here ends my story ……… waiting fr your cmmnts on my last epi…………
Missing u my fens angel abhi ufaq n all of u…..
Angel u were the frst to cmmnt on my frst epi … i hope u will cmmnt on my last epi too…………..

Credit to: lovely lady

63 comments

  1. sanjyoti

    Are tar wt was this ,y they both didn’t reunite n clrd thr misunderstanding, plz write some part that they shld get united.

  2. Shraman

    lovely lady! what is this? huhh…!! plsss unko mila do.. its a request.. pls mila do.. πŸ™‚ atleast ek second part bana do aur unko mila lo… plss?

  3. angel

    ohhhhhhhh ;( sad epi eyes gets teary for some tym

    ria she was the spoiler of whole thngs ahhhh how can any one can do lyk this to her frnd

    i really hope that sharman meet again and confess their love

  4. angel

    yuppp here i,m how can i miss to cmnt πŸ™‚
    i was waiting for epi but did not even get tym to ask u to post fast becoz of study and ramzan……………………

    But lovy y u dont try to contact sharvu yar????

    • Lovely lady

      Its ok dear….
      Btw hw is your studies gng??? N ramzan als?????????
      I hope u r praying fr me too……..
      Actually i m frm a ltl bt cnsrvatv family n i m not allowed on social media…… so d only way is also closed……

      • angel

        ramzan gng good vry nyc

        but studies lil trouble as weather so hot and due to fast not able to study well πŸ˜€

        sure i,ll pray πŸ™‚

        ohhhhhh not allow on social media but u can do that secretely na
        i mean thora risk chalega?????

      • lovely lady

        ya it may be……. bt i cnt do that……fr me my family is above everythng………….
        he can also contact me by any mean…….

  5. angel

    and lovly one advice as ur readers want u to give happy ending na so make last fiction epi with happy ending if u r ok wth this????????

  6. That’s really really awesome..its well written….?
    But ending is a sad one…..?I hope u will get ur Shravan back in ur life…????
    I was waiting for it for a long time…pls come back soon with another ff…?????

  7. Bhoomi

    ?? Emotional… But Superb yaar… Feeling very sad.. but still i cant understand your feelings… Start your ff soon….

    Guys i got 92% in 10 th board…

  8. Lovely lady

    Hi everyone……..
    I m thnkng to start season 2 of my ff…. shayad kuch hi shots k…….
    Fully fiction n wd a happy ending n full of fairy tch………
    Plz guys sggest some thing fr my season 2….. also tell whethr i shd start season 2 or not

    • Shraman

      lovely di, you can complete this in few eps then start a new one.. plus was this one a true story?

    • lovely lady

      Thnx dear…..
      Bt i wll wait fr u on my season 2 also………..
      Plz gt sm tym fr your frn…

  9. Karthik

    Yaar..so sad for you…swati n ria…hw cd they evn do dat…mean fns?… Abhi bhi u r waiting fr him…n he dnt knw abt it..so saad yaar

    • lovely lady

      Thnx fr undrstanding my feelings bro….
      Unfrtunately i hd got sm vry mean frns .. so i dont blv on frnship much now…..
      Ya ut is true that i wait fr him still…..

      N one more thng wld u like to suggest sm thng fr my season 2

  10. lovely lady

    hi guys……..
    wts gng on guys…… my frnds are missing on this chitchat page….. πŸ˜‰

  11. ufaq

    Di the sad story with beautiful writings and sad ending yar if I were u I would have murdered ria but u r kind Naand meeee my mom says me i m devil yar Iwish u meet him again at the right time just take care of uitselfand sorry for late comment bye sisi

    • LovelyLady

      |Registered Member

      Its ok fr late rply dear…….
      Thnx fr liking my wrtng…. i didnt murdred ria bt ended all relatns… it was hard fr me… i hd cried a lot fr her n praiyed that kash wo aisa kuch ni ki hoti… to abhi shayad sath hote hm sab………
      Plz dear pray that we meet again n vry soon… maine suna ramjan me jo mango sab milta h…. thn plz pray fr me… i m sure ki agar mera milna genuine hoga to tumhara pray jarur accept hoga

      • ufaq

        Wo actually Im an angry bird nNa gusa bbut ata h mjhe that’sy my mom call me devil and di iI will pray for u BT u should also pray aafter all it’s ramzan for all love u take care

  12. afa

    sorry yaar I am really sorry…For late…I was bzy in some works dea…I am sorry…I can’t imagine your situation that time….you know what true love never dies…I am sure there will happy ending to your story…god bless…study well take care…miss you…come next season asap…love you babes

    • LovelyLady

      |Registered Member

      Its ok dear……
      Thnx fr understandn me yaar…….
      Thnx a lot fr praying fr me……..
      N do u hv any suggestn fr my season 2

  13. afa

    its only my suggestion….leap suman joined in shravan as his PA…shravan totally changed he became very rude to everyone…
    and another one…They connected in social page in other identity….yaar it’s my suggestion don’t take it as serious….live it…whatever please continue ASAP…love you…Haa bhoomi congrats dea…and tight hug from me

  14. afa

    ufaq I missed you lot…Allah I never thought you will for ifthar party to kerala…pakka next time I will invite you both…ufaq if you don’t can you give your email Id…you can’t then it’s okay…lovy really you liked it…Thank you so much…

  15. Ufaq

    Hey guys actually my tablet fell from 2nd floor to ground floor and is broken completely and my father is saying that he will send it for repairing after my result on 26 July so till then no updates guys sorry di and api take care guys love u abhi bhomi angel api di I will miss u guys love u bye

  16. Ufaq

    I got sometime with my lappy to post my chappy so guys u can check it out and di where r u nowadays??

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