abhi na jao chor ke ( epi- 10)

Me: Frst of all u guys shd clap fr me…
Seriously!!!
I m wrtng this epi fr third tym..two tyms it had been deleted by mistake…… bt still i m wrtng….

Thnk u all of u fr cmmntng on my all epis… specially on d last one.. it had record cmmnts..
Thnk u all of u fr liking n apprecitng my story as well as my poem….. i wll surely wrt another ff jst to keep in tch wd u guys….

Suman is very much distrbd by d behaviour of shravan…. hr patience lvl was almost at an end….
Bt shravan didnt left any chance to taunt on Suman ……
One day Suman entrred the class vry hurrilly.. n suddenly dhapppppppp
Suman banged wd shravan……
They had a cute small eyelock…..
D
Shravan broke d eyelock on hooting of class….. he lft harshly…..
Suman heard him scoldng his frns after class……. she,was happy today…. after a very long tym she had sweet momnt wd his shravan…
After that day…. shravan’ behavioir started changing…….
Me: His taunts decreased….. n slowly get completely ended……
She was happy…
Bt the prblms get chnged……
Now shravan’ s frnds cmmnt on her. Suman was very shy typ. She nevr answrres thm… even her frnds smtym anserwed thm in anger. Bt Suman never……..
Suman jst look on shravan. He looked helplessly on his frnds….
Bt he nvr stop his frns… Suman was happy to see this ltl changes…
Shravan somtyms becm rude bt the strang thng was that his eyes n behaviour express two diff things… hus behaviour may be hard smtym bt his eyes were always in side of Suman .
One day ……..
Saket a boy who study in d same coachng wd Suman n Shravan cm to Suman —
” Suman i need your bio copy….cn u gv me??”
Suman was srprised to listen this.. saket had no interst in study. Thn why he was asking abt it??
Bt Suman was kindhearted. She said yes to him…..
Suman boght that copy nxt day bt saket didnt asked fr it……
Suman didnt gave….
She kept watchng saket behaviour… after four days again saket asked fr d copy. Thn Suman told him abt her reason fr not giving her copy. He agreed that hee will ask it tmrw.
She noticed that SharavaN was listng all cnvo.
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Next day after noticng thm she got to kn that the copy was actalyy asked by shravan …
She,was extramly happy…..
N the whole copy exchng process was ovr cute…..
She finally made shravan kn that she knew the secret betwren saket’ copy asking…..
Those days again made her dying fr him. His act was too cute…… n actually funmy too….
Now she was sure that not every thng hv ended berween thm. Their untold love for eachother was still alive( i hv said love for each other is a bit cnfsn bcoz shravan hv not cnfssed his feeling.)
Shayad next epi last ho…

plz guys cmmnt n spprt……..

Credit to: lovely lady

152 comments

  1. ufaq

    Guys angel cutey di abhi bhoomi anyone of u is angry with me have Isaid u anything abhi u feltbad after reading my comment i m really sorry yar iIdnt that it will hurt u and bhoomi to u also iI m sorry i ddidn’t mean that

    • lovely lady

      wt hppnd yaar????
      wt hv u said…???????
      i cnt understand any thng..
      plz ufaq clear it swettuuu

      • ufaq

        No actually I felt that bhoomi and abhi felt hurt by my comment sorry guys I didn’t mean to hurt u

  2. Bhoomi

    @ ufaq its all right .. no sorry in frends …. Happy Birthday dear .. may god bless u and all your wishes come true .. Many many happy returns of the day…

    • Yes yaar…iam getting mad with this 10th standard,…Always works n studies,..Sorry for not posting yesterday…saturday i will surely post…Pakka sure…?sorry again
      .

  3. Afa

    ohhh god such cute love story…I was just smiling by reading your ff….I can’t express how much I loved it…oh god in this ff family such a awesome storys are also posted…lovely lady what is your real name…and from were your…it’s your school story hahahaha…I am waiting for next epic post assap…Please babes

    • lovely lady

      Oo thnx dear fr liking my story sooo much ………..
      It is my real story so i cant tell my name…. sry dear hope u undrstan…. btw i m frm india n u?????
      I will post last epi vry soon………

    • lovely lady

      I m stuck in sm family fnctn……..
      So i m not gainig tym….
      N i dont want to wrt my last epi jst casually………
      So plz dear wait …. i m sryyyyy

  4. Afa

    Bhoomi…can you your ff’s name or link please….I like to read storys please…If you don’t mind

      • Afa

        hahahahaha. …
        yaar why your being sorry for that…I thought your writing ff…its okay…I love read stories so I asked…

  5. Bhoomi

    @lovy post soon.. Guys 2mrw is my result … plzzz pray for me … i need your prayers..??

  6. Afa

    lovy….did you posted last episode..its not getting…haaa bhoomi insha Allah I will pray for you….All the best…you will score heights maker. ..

    • lovely lady

      Sry yaar i cant post today also……
      I m stuck in sm family gt together….
      Although i tried to wrt n the part i hd wrtn in hurry was soooo bad… so i hv deleted it…..
      I m really sry guys……
      I too donno whn i can post bt not more than sunday…. i mean i wll surely try to post befr or on sunday……

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