abhi na jao chor ke ( epi- 10)

Me: Frst of all u guys shd clap fr me…
Seriously!!!
I m wrtng this epi fr third tym..two tyms it had been deleted by mistake…… bt still i m wrtng….

Thnk u all of u fr cmmntng on my all epis… specially on d last one.. it had record cmmnts..
Thnk u all of u fr liking n apprecitng my story as well as my poem….. i wll surely wrt another ff jst to keep in tch wd u guys….

Suman is very much distrbd by d behaviour of shravan…. hr patience lvl was almost at an end….
Bt shravan didnt left any chance to taunt on Suman ……
One day Suman entrred the class vry hurrilly.. n suddenly dhapppppppp
Suman banged wd shravan……
They had a cute small eyelock…..
D
Shravan broke d eyelock on hooting of class….. he lft harshly…..
Suman heard him scoldng his frns after class……. she,was happy today…. after a very long tym she had sweet momnt wd his shravan…
After that day…. shravan’ behavioir started changing…….
Me: His taunts decreased….. n slowly get completely ended……
She was happy…
Bt the prblms get chnged……
Now shravan’ s frnds cmmnt on her. Suman was very shy typ. She nevr answrres thm… even her frnds smtym anserwed thm in anger. Bt Suman never……..
Suman jst look on shravan. He looked helplessly on his frnds….
Bt he nvr stop his frns… Suman was happy to see this ltl changes…
Shravan somtyms becm rude bt the strang thng was that his eyes n behaviour express two diff things… hus behaviour may be hard smtym bt his eyes were always in side of Suman .
One day ……..
Saket a boy who study in d same coachng wd Suman n Shravan cm to Suman —
” Suman i need your bio copy….cn u gv me??”
Suman was srprised to listen this.. saket had no interst in study. Thn why he was asking abt it??
Bt Suman was kindhearted. She said yes to him…..
Suman boght that copy nxt day bt saket didnt asked fr it……
Suman didnt gave….
She kept watchng saket behaviour… after four days again saket asked fr d copy. Thn Suman told him abt her reason fr not giving her copy. He agreed that hee will ask it tmrw.
She noticed that SharavaN was listng all cnvo.
A
Next day after noticng thm she got to kn that the copy was actalyy asked by shravan …
She,was extramly happy…..
N the whole copy exchng process was ovr cute…..
She finally made shravan kn that she knew the secret betwren saket’ copy asking…..
Those days again made her dying fr him. His act was too cute…… n actually funmy too….
Now she was sure that not every thng hv ended berween thm. Their untold love for eachother was still alive( i hv said love for each other is a bit cnfsn bcoz shravan hv not cnfssed his feeling.)
Shayad next epi last ho…

plz guys cmmnt n spprt……..

Credit to: lovely lady

152 comments

  1. ufaq

    Without reading clapping for u this has also happened with me 3 times anyways let me read

  2. ufaq

    Awesome inspite of being out of station u wrote and plzz don’t end I love it and u also anyways shravan is also good and biooooo copy haha love u di

    • lovely lady

      thnx ufaq a lot……..
      btw hw cn u cll my shravan good… i can only call him….
      jst joking…. πŸ˜‰
      love u too yaar

  3. angel

    ohhhhh next epi will be last πŸ™ will miss it alot

    but today epi was nyc finally sharvan melted πŸ™‚
    and plz reveal the truth of that convo

  4. Oh…I appreciate you for writing it again n again,….Good that you will come back with another ff….But next episode the last one??Oh,so something really bad is gonna happen..because now everything is almost fine na…Sometimes he might leave from the school forever…Just a wild guess…Anyway iam eagerly waiting for the next episode…?
    Shravu was cute…Hope he will not hurt her again..

    • lovely lady

      thnx yaar……
      i was really trd wrtng yesrerday……….
      bt readers happiness give me strenghth

  5. Bhoomi

    superb… awesome… your story touched my heart…. (L) (l) shravan was cute πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ .. really what say u r superb… next episode is last πŸ™ πŸ™ .. but i m happy that u r coming with new ff .. yee πŸ™‚ πŸ˜€

  6. Bhoomi

    @ Abhi.. i m waiting for your ff (edkv) .. when r u posting it ?? plz post it soon…

  7. When is your birthday [email protected],lovy,Bhoomi,ufaq…

    • lovely lady

      thnx gravita……..
      actually it is a true story. n the story this much matter yaar…….

  8. Ufaq

    Bhomi plz don’t call her di she is my di only tell her na cutey di sorry yr I am little bit possessive about my sibling sorry bhomi

  9. ufaq

    ahhhhhnnnn this telly upddates i am feeling like to murder them who the hell has suggested them the phenomena of moderation hell with that person they r seriously getting on my nevers idiots fools

  10. angel

    hahahahahaha yeah @abhi and lovy

    and u knw thn every one wishes me happy new year instead of birthday to tease me πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€

    • lovely lady

      ha u r r8 angel…..
      bt i m sry i will post d nxt epi on 2 june….
      i hv my entrnc on 1 june…. n i wll be whole day in train tmrw…….

      one thng in last epi i will wrt wd point of view of Suman. that is every whr i will use ‘i’ in plce of ‘ Suman ‘ ….. it will perfectly explain separatn of shraman… m i rt??

      • angel

        ohhhhh 2 ok will wait for it πŸ™‚

        yeah that,s good idea u should use i

        sharman seperation nhhhhhhhh πŸ™

      • lovely lady

        in my last epi shraman wll get separated………
        in real story they r seperate fr 2 years, 2 months.n 15 days……………….

  11. Yes,…will wait for it…feeling sad that someone else also got a sad ending wala story,…but will they(u) reunite after 2yr 2mnth 15days..??

  12. I told you guys na i wrote a story n got deleted…Actually that story is about my another best friend…whom i got after loosing sanskar(name nahi bata sakti)…
    This newbestie was so caring…but there also some problem occured…But thankfully we are not separated..but this situation is worse than that…what can i say for this situation??ahhh”Apna hokar bhi apna nahi keha sakta”That’s the situation..?
    Will post it soon..?

    • lovely lady

      ooo yaar….
      its ok sab thik ho jayega…..
      tum apne sare crsh ko best frn kyu khti ho… jst joking dear…….. πŸ˜‰

      • ufaq

        Yuup di is ri8 that’s why sweety its better to stay away from boys seriously they r headache my friend is suffering from the same headache so don’t worry whatever this feeling is u name it urself because I don’t have experienced it and remember stay away from boys…… Joking yar

      • @lovy,…Most of the boys to whom i hav a crush are my bestiees…Not all,only two 2,one sanskar…n other,about whom iam gonna write….
        @ufaq…not all the boys are headache…some are there..who is caring,irritating (cutely)…?

      • Karthik

        Haha
        .nice qstn drr…crush ko bestie banana acha hai.koi puche tho besti par dil mein crush..nice idea @abhi

  13. angel

    abhiiii post that soon na excited to knw

    but tell me who will u chose btwn sanskr and other πŸ˜‰

  14. Bhoomi

    @ ufaq ok i will call lovy not di .. ok ?? No need to say sry its all right πŸ™‚

    @Lovy All the very best for your entrance (y)

  15. @angel…most difficult question…But I will choose the other one..not as a boy friend or lover ,i will choose him as a best friend?…..Not sanskar,Maybe because now me n sanskar are not in contact…

  16. @karthik…i had a crush …but not now…Now I consider sanskar as a good friend n The other one as a best friend…?

  17. Meera

    First of all thanks 4 the update . I’m commenting on this ff 4 the first time. Nice episode lovely lady.
    Really loved the bio copy incident.Hope that shravan will confess soon .pls reveal the convo btw shravan & his frnds.
    Waiting 4 the next episode….

  18. lovely lady

    and guys cngrats to all of u my frns……..
    tosay cmmnts crossed 100
    party… party….. partyy……. party….party………

  19. ufaq

    Guys angel cutey di abhi bhoomi anyone of u is angry with me have Isaid u anything abhi u feltbad after reading my comment i m really sorry yar iIdnt that it will hurt u and bhoomi to u also iI m sorry i ddidn’t mean that

    • lovely lady

      wt hppnd yaar????
      wt hv u said…???????
      i cnt understand any thng..
      plz ufaq clear it swettuuu

      • ufaq

        No actually I felt that bhoomi and abhi felt hurt by my comment sorry guys I didn’t mean to hurt u

  20. Bhoomi

    @ ufaq its all right .. no sorry in frends …. Happy Birthday dear .. may god bless u and all your wishes come true .. Many many happy returns of the day…

    • Yes yaar…iam getting mad with this 10th standard,…Always works n studies,..Sorry for not posting yesterday…saturday i will surely post…Pakka sure…?sorry again
      .

  21. Afa

    ohhh god such cute love story…I was just smiling by reading your ff….I can’t express how much I loved it…oh god in this ff family such a awesome storys are also posted…lovely lady what is your real name…and from were your…it’s your school story hahahaha…I am waiting for next epic post assap…Please babes

    • lovely lady

      Oo thnx dear fr liking my story sooo much ………..
      It is my real story so i cant tell my name…. sry dear hope u undrstan…. btw i m frm india n u?????
      I will post last epi vry soon………

    • lovely lady

      I m stuck in sm family fnctn……..
      So i m not gainig tym….
      N i dont want to wrt my last epi jst casually………
      So plz dear wait …. i m sryyyyy

  22. Afa

    Bhoomi…can you your ff’s name or link please….I like to read storys please…If you don’t mind

      • Afa

        hahahahaha. …
        yaar why your being sorry for that…I thought your writing ff…its okay…I love read stories so I asked…

  23. Bhoomi

    @lovy post soon.. Guys 2mrw is my result … plzzz pray for me … i need your prayers..??

  24. Afa

    lovy….did you posted last episode..its not getting…haaa bhoomi insha Allah I will pray for you….All the best…you will score heights maker. ..

    • lovely lady

      Sry yaar i cant post today also……
      I m stuck in sm family gt together….
      Although i tried to wrt n the part i hd wrtn in hurry was soooo bad… so i hv deleted it…..
      I m really sry guys……
      I too donno whn i can post bt not more than sunday…. i mean i wll surely try to post befr or on sunday……

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