abhi na jao chor k ( edkw) season 2 ( shot 2)

Hi guys …. I m here wd the nxt part of this ff…. hope u guys hvnt forgot me………. I was bdly missing u all…… I was very sad as I cant post my ff from a long tym……. I m sry … hope u wlll all forgv me n were waitng fr this part…… I too was witing to get free to wrt this epi…………
Till now suman hv cm in the wedding of surbhi….. Her csn surbhi is gng to get marry wd adarsh……
The engagement of Adrbhi is planned… n adarbhi hv agreed theei csns to meet ………..
Now,
Suman—ok thn ,,, surbhi I will meet him….

Next day,
“Sumo … Sumo… where r u….. “ Surbhi’smom.. who is Suman’s chachi calls her…….(chachi is the wife of the brothr of dad)…
(name of chichi is Raima)
Sumo- ha chichi ayi……… bolo…. Kyu parshan h
R- wht to do beta. Everything got messed up…( she breathes hardly)
Sumo- Chachi …. Cm on sit here…… u wll get ill…… I m here na.. tell me wt hppnd…I wll sught every thng
R-the flowers for the decoration of engagement hall hv not reached now…. They are demanding for advance paymnt..no ne is free now… your chchu( Raima’s husband) is on the venue n all others r bz in other thngs…
Sumo- Chachi darling take a chill pill……. I told u na that I wll sought out every thng…….
Gve me car keys ….. I m gng… n text me d address as fast as u can… I was gng to bring the lehanga of surbhi frm taylor… it was thre for altering……..
Chachi kissed her on her forhead……
Chichi- god bless u … n u too get your love soon…….
Sumo smiles….
Sumo drives to the taylor frst n collects the lehanga…… thn she went to the flower market……it is a whole sale market of flowers… a huge market of flowers…………
Sumo- omg what a beauty ful market it is….. so beauttyful flowers…. Every where flower……
So many stalls of flowers… I m getting a lot of peace here…. I m loving this place… too don’t kn why………
She called on the number of the owner of the flowere shop … as send by the chachi…..
As she was waking ther were a litl bit crowdy…. The environment was ful of flowery fragnance……….
She walked while talking on the phn……
“ hello hello… I m not getting your voice clearly….. k I m getting away frm a this crwd………” Sumo talked on the phn.
She went to d godown area of market…. It was a big ground……everehere there was a flower kept in baskets… the workers wereputting n arranging the flower baskets there
“ hello r u getting my voice now…..” Sumo was talking……
There he sees a guy sittng on knees selecting flowers frm the baskets…….. he was talking louder….
Sumo- are yar kitna jor jor se bolta h ……. Chup ho ja………ufff chup…. Ab bolna hi padega ja kr k…. she cuts the call n went towrd him….
Suman- oyee mister…….. how can u talk soo louder, I cnt talk on the phn….. plz keep quiet……dammit…….
The guy turned… n get stand up….
Suman shocked………..
Silence………….

Suman- Shravan tumm???? Yaha????
( yeeas the guy is our hero Sharavan……)
Shrarvn stll in shock…….
Song plays in bg….
Hua h aj phli bar jo aisa muskuraya hu… tumhe dekha to jana ye ki kyu dunia m ayya hu……
Both hv teary eyes,,,,,, looking in each othr eyes forgetting the wrld….. both are emotional…….
Shravan ( wd teary eyes)- kaha thi tu itni dino se….. pura social media chan mara… tu ni mili…..
Suman- kyu call ni kr skte the kbhi…… I too searched fr your number bt invain……..
( tear rolls down her cheek)
Sharavan extend his hand to wipe her tear bt stops….
Shravan- If u don’t mnd can u touch your fngr here( sighning toward his palm…..) I want to hold it….
Suman eyes questiongly…….. n says… lekin kyu….
Sharavan –I want to cnfrm that I m not dreaming…….. n fr bhi kbhi hm d rho to teri yad …
Suman puts her fnger on his lips…… don’t say it plzzzzz
Bolna.. mahi bolna…..plays……..
She gives her hand on the hand of shravan…… n remembers hw chachi wshes herto get her love soon…………………
Both see in each others eyes…….. shravan hold he hand tghtly….

At the mean tym a wrkr carrying heavy basket ful of rose petals collide wd suman……
Suman fell on shravan n shravan got unbalanced n fall on the baskets of roses ………n suman falls over him….
The rose petals in the basket of that man fell over thm as shower……
Both get very close faliing on each othr………
A beautifl romantic scn was created …….n song plays in bg….
Khin jo badal brse… mai dekhu tujhe ankhe bhrke …. Tu lge mujhe phl bearish ki tarah……….
Suman is upon shravan… her hair got over her face….
Shravan caresses her hair………. Roses were below thm…. N roses ere above thm…… everywhr roses…..
They get closer…….. suman closes her eyes n so did Shravan………
They were cmng closer n closer…. N were abt to kiss……
Suman opened her eye…….
Suman get shy,, n tried to stand up… thn the hair got stuck in the shirt of shravan n again they cm closer…. Suman tries to free her hair.. n so did shravan… their hnds tched ……. Suman tries to remove her hand frm his chest……..
Bt shravan holds her hand tghtly….. he whispers in her ears…. Cnt u feel my heart beats…. Cnt u under stand what they wnt to say………..
Suman—smiles naughtily…… no I cnt…..
She says n stand n move away……….
Shravan was left there smilng……..
“ cn we g fr coffe…..” Shravan asked……..
Sumo- are u asking fr the coffee date…..
Shravabn- u cn tnk so n smiles naughtily……
Sumo- frst of all let me cmplt my wrk here…
Shravan- plz do I fast……..
After half an hr……
(on the cffee table)
They exchanged phn numbers….
Sumo- I kn ishd not ask the old thngs bt I cnt stop my self frm asking all this now…..may I ask……….
Sharavn – u cn do any thng that u wnt…
sumo sees him anrily…..
Sharavan – are majak kr raha tha…..

Plz continue
Suman- I never admitted tha u wrre my frnd in whl school life.. bt the truth is that we were frns rt??
Sharavan- don’t u think tht u hv not admitted mny things ore…
Suman- leave all tht…. Frst tell me that why u started behaving weird in last six mnths…..
Shravan- ye puchna jaruri h?????
Suman – bahut jaruri h….. s qus ne mera itne salo se diag kharab kr diya h
Shravan- ok thn…. Actually mujhe realise hua ki tumhe pra school tease krte rhta tha…. Wd my name…… mujhe lgta tha ki tum us sab se bahut weird lgta hoga,… mer wajah se itna kuch jhelti thi tum….. I cant see the boys teasng u…….. mujhe jo sahi lgta thaw o maine kiya…….
Suman (wd tears rolling down)- why u cared soo mch fr me…. Mai to tumhari jst a smpl frnd thi na…..
Nothing spcl na….. to tumhe meri itni fikar kyu thi…….. n the guys als teases u thn why u don’t feel bad…………….
Shravan looks her shockingly………………
Shravan- thn u want to kn every thng……….
Suman- ya…..
Shravan (naughtily) beta exam times….. get ready……. Now uhv t gv the mst difficult exam of your life…… he stand up n get flat on the floor of coff shop n rts doing pushps…. ( as salman khan do in a scene in hm aapke h kaun)
Every one in the café looks him…. Suman starts laughing…… at the mean tym she gets a call f chachi who scolds her fr being late………….
Suman says him bye n says we wll talk later I hv so mny wrks now.

Shravan gets angry….. n says bye…
Sharvan says to himself- saala jb blne ko hua … itni himmat kri to madam ko kaam aa gya.
Guys kn ki bahut lmba ho gya… sry fr boring u all….. bt plz read n cmmnt……..

24 comments

    • LovelyLady

      |Author

      Thanx WS …. i was dying to wrt this epi….. epi of my another ff wll also get published afyer sn tyms…. plz chk n read ….??

  1. sona

    No..lovly..its not at all..boring..after all bahut dino baadh Teri ff pads rahetey tho..lambha hi achi lagi..☺☺
    Air..jab story itni romantic ho tho kaun mind karega..???
    Seriously..its so nice..and keeppost articles regularly

  2. LovelyLady

    |Author

    thnk u sona…. i toooo was dying to wrt ff…….
    i wll surely try to be regular.. ….
    plz,guys keep loving me like this…..
    love u a loottt

  3. maria

    Awww lovely Di wat to say!!! 🙂 i have no words! U r amazing ,wonderful as usual!! 😀
    it was a vryy romantic ep n u didnt bored us infact thank u fr writing such a beautiful n long ep!!!
    I m proud of u Di! 🙂
    Always be happy 🙂
    Luv u!! 🙂

  4. Angel_pari

    |Registered Member

    yayyyyy yipeeee sharman met cant tell u how much happy i,m after reading….. And i know in real life our sharman will also meet like this in rocking way………..
    Its my belief 🙂

    • LovelyLady

      |Author

      thnxx fr liking it yar….. i hv to shr u sm thng…. hope fully i wll send u pvt msg after sm tym….,keep chking…. 🙁
      plz yar keep cmmntng

    • Angel_pari

      |Registered Member

      heyyyy i saw ur msgs but same problem with my stupid cell not able to reply…..,
      so i,m replying here

      offcourse yar u can yeh phuchne ki bat h kya??? Feel free to talk to me pm me whenever u need a frnd 🙂

      so tell me here or pm me love u 🙂

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