abhi na jao chor k ( edkw) season 2 ( shot 1)

Me: Me: Hi it is lovely lady inspired by many wrtrs
πŸ™‚ gng to wrt a few shots…
This wll be the ending of ff abhi na jao chor
k…… as sggested by mny of my frnds……..

There is a 6 year leap…….
Suman n shravan both r well placed in
MNCs……
Suman’s cousins marriage is fixed , so she
have went to her house… here her cousins name is Surbhi …
Suman – hi meri sisiii.kaisi h tu… ( hi my sister.. hw r u)
decided this
marriage n all…. i mst say sooo fast……..
Chat mngni pat byah…….
Surbhi – ab kya kru mai…. tujhe shadi krni hi( what shd i do…. u t not ready fr marriage)
to mai kb tk wait krti…( thn upto whn i wll wait)
Suman – u cary on… i m really not gng to get marry so soon….. are abhi to puri jawani baki h meri
… they both laugh…

Surbhi- besharam…….. tu ni sudherigi….( shameless u wll never change)
Suman – btw jiju ki pic to dikshoo yaaar…. ( btw show me the pic of my jiju)
kb tk chupaa kr rakhogi yaar….( till whn u wll keep him in disguise)
Surbhi – ha kahi tu ura na le jaye….
Suman – pgli bhnia meri..( my mad,sistr). n kisssd hr on cheeks….
Surbhi shows her pic
Suman – ha bas thik thak h… ( hmmmm he is jst okeyy~~)
nothng spcl….,she teases sur….
They have cute nok jhok……….
Surbhi – yar sumo i hv to buy some stuffs….
plz cm wd me na….
Suman – everythng fr u…. waise bhi mrne wale ki har iksha puri krni chahiye…..( btw all the wshsh of persn on d dth bead shd mst be fulfilled)
Surbhi – what?????
Suman – i mean after marriage all your freedoms wll be seized n sch life wll be like a death life…..
Surbhi – u think soo mch negative abt marriage…. chachi se kah kr tujhe bhi fix krati hu….( i wll tell chachi to fix u too) πŸ˜‰
( sry i frgt to tell the name of fiance of
Surbhi …. he is Adarsh)
Surbhi n Suman goes to market………
N after finishing their marketng on their way
bck to home…..

Surbhi – ek baat puchu… bura to ni manegi na…( may i ask u sm thng if u really dont mnd)
Suman – ni yar puch na….( no yaar ask it)….
Surbhi – thn tell me one thng…..
Tera koi boy frn h??? Sachi batana..( hv u any bf… plz tell truth)
Suman – (hesitetly) ni yar ni h…. kyu puch rhi h……. ( no yar i dont hv.. u r asking jst anythng)
Surbhi – i always observe that u r always waiting fr sm body… i mean hmesha teri
ankhe kisi ko khojti rhti h……(i mean always your eyes r searchng fr sm one)
Tum pure raste me , mall me kisiko dhundh rhi thi…. ( all through d way n also in d mall uwere searchng sm one)
i noticed ……..
Suman -( gets nervous)
Ni yar tujhe kuch cnfsn hua hoga….
nthng lyk that…. mai apne liye kurti dhundh rhi thi……..( no no dear u mst hv sm cnfsn … i was,searching a kurti fr me)
Surbhi get cnfsd by her answer……
In night…..
Surbhi is on cll wd her fiance Adarsh…..
Surbhi – pta h meri bhn.. meri bestiess…. meri sb kuch sumo aa gyi..( u kn my sister.. mybestie.. my every thng hv cm now)
Adarsh- ha ha teesri bar bta rhi ho…….( ha ha u r telling this thrd tym)
i kn meri sautan aA,gyi….( i kn tht my Sautan hv cm)
Both of thm laughs………
Surbhi – u kn i m vry mch tensed abt her……
uska jyada koi frn ni h…. sirf mujhse bate share krti h.( she dont hv mch frn .. she only shares her feelings wd me)
Aaj maine notice kiya market me … wo kahi
lost thi…( i noticed in market that she was lost sm whr).i jst wsh tht she also hv a boyfrnd..she also do hangout…..we hv done a lots of masti…. she also deaerves………

Adarsh- u kn d same situatn is wd my brthr also. … he also remaims lost.. apni shadi ki bat
sunte hi bharak jata h……( he gets fired whn ever listen the discssc abt his marriage)…
Uski bhi koi ni h.( she also doesnt hv any one)… i m also tensed fr him……
Surbhi – jst wsh that prblm of both get solved…
dono ko koi na koi mil jaye…..
Adarsh- hey Suri … whaif we make our csn meet each other.
Surbhi – are nyc idea yarr… dono borings ek dusre ko bore kre.( both d brngs wll bore each other πŸ˜‰ …. n thn we wll get free
….. kuch socho unke bare me….( plz thnk sm thng fr thm….
Adarsh- see kl engagemnt h hi….. to hm sab
milenge hi to unko aapas me mila denge…… .
N be ready engagemnt we r gng to do prty all frns…..
Surbhi– we wll take fhm too wd us.
nyc idea…….
Adrsh – suno na…..
Surbhi – bolo ge tb na sunugi….
Adrsh- i m missing u……….
Surbhi – mee toooo….
Btw Mr Adarsh tmrrw is our engagemnt dont u think we shd take rest…
Adarsh- i m not sleepy
Surbhi – plz yar get sleep….. :-[
Good night….. sweeettuuuu…….
I love u……..

Adrsh- i love u too( sadly)
N they cut the call……..
Suman – may i cm in madam….. ho gya aap dono romance….( did both of yours romance get over)
Surbhi – ha .. aa jao ab… sry tujhe wait karaya…( cmon now .. sry fr making u wait)
Suman – ha ab jiju k aaga meri kya value..( btw what is my value now bfr jiju)
Surbhi – tu to jaan h meri…….
May i say smthng if u dont mnd
Suman – bolo na yaar.. kitni formality krti ho…… sumo says setting the pillows on the
bed…….
Surbhi – Adarsh says that uska ek csn h … jst
like his frn……
Suman — thn what ( says carelessly)
Surbhi – Adards propsed that both of u shd meet…. Me: Suman – kyu wo salman khan h kya???( is he salman khan)
( actually i fall fr salman khan..) (.. i m.her great grear wali fan so i included him)
Surbhi – ni salman khan to ni h … bt kya pta tujhe salman khan jaisa hi lge…( no he is not salman khan .. bt it may be he looks lik SK to u).
Suman – dont want meet any one..
Surbhi – jst once yaar…..
Agr ni milogi to mujhe lgega ki tera koi boy frn h aur tu mujhe ni bta rhi ho…( thn i wll thnk u hv a bf n u r not telling me)
Suman – ok madam mil lungi mai..(,ok thn i wll meet)
. bt i m not
sure ki mai uspr phle hath chalungi ya
pair…….
Surbhi – oohhooo tujhe jo chlana hoga chala lena…. phle milo to..( do wht u want bt atleast meet him)..
Suman – ok….
On the other side…. Adarsh agrees his csn to
meet a grl..
After a long effrts he also gets ready……..

Precap- surprise h…… abhi ni bataungi… πŸ˜‰

Plz plz plz guys read n cmmnt……. n plz sggst
any chnges u thnk to mk it more
interestng………
love u guys……

26 comments

  1. Khushi

    |Registered Member

    Awesome…. M in love with u di…..kya baat hai…itna talent hai aapmein….just amazing and m desperately waiting for the surprise…. Post next part soon
    And han agar iss baar tu walon ne kuch gadbad ki toh main inki jhand kar dungi…mujhe aapki ff padhne se koi nhi rok sakta….love u di

    • LovelyLady

      |Author

      khushi thnk u soooo mch…. i really agree to one of d cmmnt on your ff that u set new prfctn limit…… the trith is i m nothng bfr u….. i kn being a kind frn u wll oppose ds to mk me happy bt u cnt chng ds truth love a looottttt
      ……. :$

  2. shraman

    Missed it..!! I hope this happens with you too.. In reality.. Back to. Know that anjck2 is here..:) post soon

  3. Angel_pari

    |Registered Member

    wowwww it was nyc start after a leap

    i,m imagining the suprise and i,m very excited for it…… Do post soon plzzzzz

  4. maria

    Lovely dii!!!!!! It ws awesome !! kya baat hai brilliant Ap boht axha likhti hoooo seriously !!! πŸ™‚ wat a start. ! muahhhhh πŸ˜€
    love u dii!!

      • maria

        No prob diiii ek baar dosra prt daal do phir dekhna kaise comment ka tufaaaan πŸ˜€
        Mera toh abhi tk prt 7 post hi nai kia TU walo nai πŸ™ πŸ™ πŸ™ 24 hours hone wale hain lgta hai Ap. or khushi ke baad ab meri turn hai πŸ™

  5. Lado_mishi

    |Registered Member

    Omg lovely…actually khushi is right u r so talented yr…seriously aap sab writers ko dekh ke lagta hai ki aap sab professional ho…amazing lovely keep it up…???

    • LovelyLady

      |Author

      thnk h soooo mch mishi….
      keep feadng mh ffs…… i want bahut sara spprt kyuki i m wrtng two ff …. i dont hv mch wrtng patience,……..

  6. Affaa

    |Registered Member

    Hahaha very good babes your started treatment…..yaar what is this haa…no words no words yaar lovy amazing yaar…love you love you soon much for giving super start

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