Ab Phirse jab baarish hogi… Teri yaad mujhko aayegi… Act-1 by Naina


Hello peeps!! I am here with the 1st episode of my ff “Ab phirse jab baarish hogi… Teri yaad mujhko aayegi…” I know right you all are loving the title more than the plot 😉 I guess so…. Whatever your liking a part of my ff that’s more than enough for me. If you like this part then please please comment your sweet words…

ACT 1::

The sun raises with his golden charm spreading all over the world. Some where in some corner of the vast world A boy in his mid 20s though with a light beard making his perfect face look even more perfect. He is one of the best examples to say that god is a perfect creator. Suddenly, the whiff of cool air passes to the room through a opened glass window. The shiver passes in his spines and thus he wake up from his long power nap. He took his goggles from the recliner table quite beside to his bed. He then set his hair and left the room as fast as he can.

In the other room, another boy of same age like in his mid 20s is sleeping like a maniac on his rectangular bed. His postures are quite like he is a moving clock all over the night. His looks are nothing less than the first guy’s. he gently wrapped himself in the wooly blanket.

The first guy rushed into the room and he speaks “Hey Shivam!! Wake up man…”.
Shivam:: Shivaay!! I still want to sleep for some more time…
Shivaay:: what?! You know right today we have to meet our new sponsors for our next event..
Shivam:: what!! No.. no.. I still want to sleep… just an hour more…
Shivaay:: Arey!! It’s already 10 am with in an half and hour we have to meet them…
Shivam’s eyes are now wide and he can see Shivaay clearly
Shivam:: we can meet them some other time right… I mean a day or 2 days later…
Shivaay:: Oh man!! Our concert is in not shorter than 5 days… we have to do much more arrangements..

Shivam:: But bhaiyaa!! As per my concern our next concert is in India… more over we gonna attend for it in next month…
Shivaay:: Yeah… but I thought we can do some other event in the mean time…
Shivam:: so, our next event isn’t in India but in some other paraya desh…
Shivaay:: good catch… It is in Milan…
Shivaay moves forward and places his warm hands on Shivam’s cheek. Shivam hold the hand and places his head over it and starts to sleep again.
Shivaay:: Oh god!! Can’t you get me? We have to meet them right now…
Shivam:: Shivaay bhaiyaa!! I may faint at any time if it happens in front of them then it will be very embarrassing for us.. so, it’s better if you meet them alone…
Shivaay:: Dramebaaz!! Trust me no such thing will happen.. I will be with you right
Shivaay gives some deathly glares to Shivam
Shivam gets up from bet and with out uttering a single word he leaves to rest room.
Shivaay smiles and says “he is impossible”. He too leaves from there..

Scene 2::

At Raizada Mansion…
Arundhathi and Avinash are sitting in the lawn and they are sipping their morning hot liquid very carefully. Arundhathi is lost in her thoughts while Avinash is constantly observing her with out a wink. He finds some thing fishy and tends to ask Arundhathi about her mood..

[Guys!! From now I will address Arundhathi as Aru and Avinash as Avi]

Avi:: Aru!! What happened? Why are you so dull?
Aru:: nah.. nothing.. it’s just like that
Avi holds her hand and caringly looks in to her eyes. Aru melts down
Avi:: we are there for each other.. and we promised that we will never hide anything from one another.
Aru:: I am tensed about Anika…
Avi:: what happened to Ani?
Aru:: I am tensed about her marriage.. Ani got many marriage proposals but none is perfect to her and none can match her attitude and I guess none can assure her future and walk along with her to fulfill her dreams..
Avi:: don’t you think… it’s all happening too fast…
Aru:: what do you mean?
Avi:: I mean Ani is still young and marriage is still just a word for her..
Aru:: it’s never too fast for a good thing… I just want a secured future for Ani and I want to assure all the happiness to my daughter…
Avi and Aru get emotional and they hold each others hand tightly..
Arnav comes there along with Anika
Arnav and Anika:: Good morning Mom and Good morning Dad..
Aru just nods in reply
Avi:: Good morning my champs..
Avi signs Aru to compose herself
Arnav:: mom is everything alright? You look so dull
Aru nods and:: can you fulfill my wish Ani?
Anika being in the spell that her mom is upset about something and Anika is ready to do anything..
Ani:: ofcourse mom… you just say me
Aru:: are you sure Anika that you will do what ever I ask for..
Anika thinks for a second or 2. She again nods as at that point of time nothing matters her other than a slight smile on her mothers face.
Arnav signs Avi about what’s the matter?. Avi nods negative as he has no idea about what Aru gonna ask Anika.
Aru:: you got a marriage proposal from Oberoi’s for their elder son Shivaay. He is very nice guy, well settled and more over he cares for his family a lot so it’s obvio that he will show the same concern towards you also…
Avi:: Aru! What is this? You can’t ask Ani something like this
Arnav:: Mom!! We can’t force Ani into something like this.. moreover she is so young for marriage…
Aru asks them to stop by showing her palm
Aru:: I wan’t answer from you Anika… Yes or No
Anika steps a foot back… this makes Aru get shocked
Aru:: I know that this would be your answer.. if you are sure about your answer then why did you say that you will fulfill my wish?
Anika feels bad as she hurted her mother. Anika places her hand on Aru’s shoulder and she speaks
Ani:: mom!! My answer isn’t a NO.. it’s yes I will fulfill your wish…
Aru gets overwhelmed and hugs Anika. Avi and Arnav are shocked at her answer
Aru:: Thank you so much Ani… you have no idea of how much happiness you gave me..
Anika smiles and gets relieved that her mother smiled atlast

PRECAP:: Dadi and Shivaay’s convo… Shivam teases Shivaay over ***** (That’s a surprise). Shivaay and Shivam’s concert at Milan….

How is this guys? If you like it please comment and if you don’t like then also please let me know where I am lacking. One word or atleast single emoticon is enough for me. Plz Plz Plz Plz Plz Plz drop your views guys. I wish I will not have any silent readers.

With Love

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  1. Sat_9492

    Awsm….. Waiting for next episode….. Update new episode ASAP……?????☺☺☺???

    1. Nainaa

      Thank you Dear…

  2. Nansshivika

    Shivay and shivam bond is so cool and waiting for shivika meet.its so good cutie pie??????

    1. Nainaa

      Thank you NandhuPie…

  3. Puvi

    Awesome nainaa

    1. Nainaa

      Thank you Dear…

  4. Pri_24

    Cutiepie I you write it so well and clean and wonderful and amazing…

    I like Shivay and Shivam’s bond and ArnIka (Arnav+ Anika) bond is also good good and actually parents scene are emotional and I am speech less with Anika’s willingness to do anything to bring smile on her mother’s face…☺☺☺

    Plz update next part soon my Cutiepie and love you a lot ….???????

    1. Nainaa

      Thank you ChocoPie…
      I am so glad that you liked it…
      Love you too…

    1. Nainaa

      Thank you Dear…

    2. Nainaa

      Thank you so much Dear….

  5. Akansha

    Its so cool… Loved it waiting fr d next episode… Naina a small request plz post a recap frm d next episode or at least given d links of d previous episodes… Its nyc n I don’t want to miss em.. So in case I miss em I can read it… Waiung fr d next update

    1. Nainaa

      Thank you Dear…
      I am so glad that you liked it…
      Actually this is the 1st episode of this ff… So, I didn’t give any recap…
      I will surely give a recap for next episodes…
      Incase if you miss promoshots here is the link..

  6. Awsm dear post soon…….. Nice job

    1. Nainaa

      Thank you so much Dear… I am glad that you liked it…

  7. Niana dear its very very awesome

    1. Nainaa

      Thanks alot Dear…

  8. nice one…..i like shivam and shivaay bond…..but who is that shivam…????

    1. Nainaa

      Thank you so much Dear…
      I think you missed promos and Some intro part here is the link

  9. Jayashree

    Cool update…

    1. Nainaa

      Thank you JayaShree…
      I am happy that you liked it…

  10. Lalitha

    Superb. Waiting fr shivika meet

    1. Nainaa

      Thanks alot Dear… Intezaar ka phal meetha hota hai 😉

  11. Sreeja

    wow naina the epi was awesome……..i think shivam is naughty guy like rudra right……….aww dear u r fantabulous ……update next epi fast dear………plzzzzzzz i am waiting for it

    1. Nainaa

      Thanks alot Sreeju….
      Yep.. Shivam is a naughty guy as Rudra took a serious attire so someone or the other is needed to add spice naa….
      I am so glad that you liked it…

  12. Akshaya

    Mom knows everything to make her child accept things. Great episode cutie.

    1. Nainaa

      Yep Akki… I know right what more a mom wants if her daughter can stay happy with a man?
      Kuch bhi karke mana leti hai na…
      Thanks alot Dear…

  13. Pooja26

    hey!!!!!!!! baby 😉 😉
    shollyy for late comments….. 😉 😉
    finally u r back with d name which i fell in love…….. 😉 😉 😉
    lovely chappy….. dear……. 🙂 🙂
    really superb,awsm……one…….

    post nxt asap…….
    tc……. 🙂 🙂

    1. Nainaa

      Hay!! Cutie… apologies accepted….
      Thanks alot for such a lovely comment….
      I am so glad that you liked it…

  14. Prateekh

    OMG Shona!! you rocked it Baby…
    I know many moments in your ff’s are your real life experiences like that Shivaay and Shivam’s convo and Shivam holding Shivaay’s hand and placing his head over his hand It happens when someone comes to wake anyone of our cousins and we act really cute at that time…
    It reminded me of my best moments with our cousins gang…Love you so much Shona…

    1. Nainaa

      Thanks alot Puchu…
      I am so glad that you liked it…
      and yeah I got many cute moments for my ff from our cousin gang moments…
      When I will be typing my ffs which includes our cousin gang moments there is always a constant smile on my face…
      Love you too Puchu….

  15. Aadhya

    Hai Naina!! I am Nishi your cousin…. check my post on your wall…
    I really like your ff… it’s my first comment on your ff not only on yours but in whole TU it’s my first comment…. Love you Nainuu….

    1. Nainaa

      Aww!! My Nishi is in TU now….
      I will check it Dear…
      Thanks alot for such a lovely comment Dear..
      I am so blessed that my cutie’s first comment in TU is for me…
      Love you too Dear…

  16. SamSun

    aaaahhh! u r killing me with suspense!!! this was such a good one and anika and her mom bonding was awesome. shivam and shivaay bonding was also good just like shivomru’s. all together it was awesome

    1. Nainaa

      Thanks alot Sam Dear….
      I am so glad that you liked this…

  17. Soha

    Sorry not to comment in your pervious episode dear because my exams are on my head that’s why and about your ff it’s awesome naina keep writting shivam is naughty 😀

    1. Nainaa

      I know Dear many will be reading but they will nit be able to comment because there will be a ghost on their heads named exams.
      Thanks alot for commenting Dear…
      And BTW you name is so cute…

  18. Nishi33

    OKK..i’ll tell you my fav. points *just like we write in exam short and precise 😛 *
    Shivaye’s description…I love nakuul just bcoz he’s he damn classy and hot :*
    Shivam is soo cute…he loves to sleep…haha *ye to mera bhai nikala*
    Shivaye’s proposal for anika …I think it’s a good start …much different concept.
    and I love the way you write..<3 <3
    love you sweetie..<3

    1. Nainaa

      OMG!!! Nishu Baby liked it….
      I totally agree with your description…
      Love you too Dear..
      and BTW I think I told you about my cousin Nishi right even she is on TU now….
      I am so blessed that two cuties are there with me….

      1. Nishi33

        Yea..i got to know about her…let’s see how our “N” factor works <3 <3

    2. Nainaa

      Trust me ‘N’ factor works 😉
      after all my two ‘Ns’ are so cute and sweet..

      1. Nishi33

        Even nakuul has ‘N’ ..<3 *life goals*

  19. Ayath

    hi naina dear am really sorry for the late comment and nw only I read ur ff bcz I was out of town and somany ffs are there,,,,so plese next time send me the link bcz I really want to read ur ff………………….I loved todays epi but I had a doubt where is om and rudra? anika’s family is awesome….I loved their conversation plz update next part soon 😛 😛 ;P

    1. Nainaa

      Thanks for commenting Dear…
      I will bring Rudy and Omie in further episodes…

  20. Shivika22kapoor

    Hi ? dear sorry for super late comment.
    The epi is superb, I like your way of writing things alot dear.
    So keep it up and you are an amazing writer with a wonderful story.? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?????????????????

    1. Nainaa

      Thanks alot for commenting Dear…
      Thanks alot for such sweet compliments…

  21. Hey cutieeepieee……. luvd d act 1….. i m waitng for evryones luv track…… i m suprr excited for shivikas n arshi s meet ❤❤❤❤❤❤??? luv u

    1. Nainaa

      Thank you Lassy..
      Love you too ??

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