Aankhon mein teri tasveer (an os by preeti)

Hlo guys its me preeti here with an os on shraman.I had thought to post it after pprs but I did a big mistake by telling this story 2 my cousin she came here she knew about my tu journey .I narrated her this story and she was behind me that I have to post it today only .I want to study but she said that they will give u wishes which will make ur paper happen good and secondly ninth first term is quiet easy I have learnt whole syllabus so posting on my sis saying.She is here only.

Leave it let’s start my first os.
One girl and a boy was going .They both were lost somewhere. They were moving and they both crush in each other.
The girl in anger said:u stupid have u lost ur eyes.
They both look at each other.
Both were shocked seeing each other.
(The boy and the girl was shravo and sumo)
Tears falls from both’s eyes.
They both without saying a word starts moving again
Suman POV
Mai aaj usse phir mili.He again came into my life.How dare he .Aaj woh phirse mere sahmne tha .shravan malhotra I hate u.
Shravan POV
Suman aakir hm phir mil gye I m sorry u meant a lot for me I m really sorry I will now not lost u this time u will be mine now .Suman I love u
Flashbag
Suman and shravan studied in same college.
Shravan was a brad of the college he always runs behind girls .even girls were mad for him
Suman was simple and intelligent girl.she was a girl of beauti with brain .He knowz about shravan and not like him

One day she came to canteen
Shravan saw her.he was mesmerized with her beauty.
He liked her and now was behind her.
Shravan:suman I love u
Suman:u say these wording to every girl.U r a very bad boy
Shravan:sumo I have changed when I saw u my heart stopped really I have changed
He sits on his knees he really romantically propose suman
Suman was melted and agreed but took a promise that he will never ever watch any other girl .
Shravan agreed
Shraman loves each other a lot

But shravan se ek glti ho gyi
One day sumo was finding shravo he saw him with a girl and they both were sitting very close .
Sumo saw this.Tears starts falling from her eyes .Shravan saw her .She came and slapped him . She run away from there.
Shravan was feeling guilty
They both left the college.That was last meeting of them.
Present
Sumo ws in her room crying
Sumo:why u came again

Shravan ws also in his room
Shravo:suman this time u will become mine sorrryyyyy
From next morning shravo starts finding information bout sumo
He got her address and also got to know that she is unmarried
He sent flowers in sumo house.
Sorry was written on it.
Sumo was emotional but threw away the flowers.
Shravan tried everything but was fail .
He then thought to talk to sumo
He went to her house.he hold sumo from her arms and start taking her out
Sumo:leave me
Shravan didn’t listen and take her to a lonely place
Sumo hold his collar in anger

Sumo:why did u bring me here.u cheap meri zindagi kharab krdi .u broked ur promise u r liar cheater .
She starts crying
Shravo:mai tumko pichle 3 saal se paglo ki tarah doondh rha hoon.that WS my mistake I know I regret I really love u sumo
Sumo:mai kaise mano u said this last time too but u
Shravan:kaise btao tume that how much I love u kaise dikhao Teri tasveer meri aankon mei kaise btao tume u meant a lot for mee
He starts crying
Sumo too gets emotional
She says promise me u will never ever try to do anything which will break us again.
Shravan:promise
They both hug each other.
Os ends

Love u all

I don’t think I would able to reply ur comments.
Ok byee
Do comment plzz

28 comments

  1. Sriya

    |Registered Member

    Oyeee meri pretty preeti mujhe nahi pata tha tera Maine itna hidden talent bhi hai it was rapchik πŸ˜ͺ Tremendous fantabulous stupendous out of the world loved it to the core of my heart like seriously how u write so well yaar give me some tips..! Love shraman a lottt and you too di u r so sweet cute and beautiful like ur is it was written extremely beautiful but very short next os a long one okay when u pass ur exams with flying colours I am damn sure will top the exams akhir aap meri di jo haiπŸ˜‚ Kidding rofl love u loads πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•β€οΈβ€οΈ Take care byee keep smiling and stay blessed…! πŸ˜‹πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

    • Prettypreeti

      |Author

      Oh sriyo babu ur new name
      So obliged so obliged with ur comment
      Oh u need tips instead I need tips from u my darling
      Thnks for ur well wishes
      Love u
      Next one bada hoga pakka
      Love love uu

  2. Nikita

    |Registered Member

    Awwhh..
    Meri pretttyy preettii..
    It was beautiful..
    Don’t worry, you will pass baba..,!
    Not only pass, but you would top! Okay?
    It was beautiful.. ‘Aankhon mei teri tasveer’ I so love this title…. Loved it..
    And love youh!
    Love uh meri pretty preeti..
    Koi nai if you can’t reply, but do read as our TU fam’s kuch zyada hi sweet..
    Love ya,
    Nikita

  3. Marie

    |Registered Member

    Oooyyyy preetooooo that was awesome blossom my love here kitna sweet tha ye…..!!! Zabardast do post like this always
    Love u so much yrrrrr
    All the best fr ur exams
    Muahhhh
    Take care

  4. Ariana

    |Registered Member

    Awwwww. My cupcake is today all red velvet romantic flavoured. The os is soooo cute……Ekdam jhakkas…..Wonderful. Sweet nd cute like u. Tmrw is ur exam? Or whenever it is, best of luck!!! Make the exam paper all sweet n sugary like urself nd the teacher who is checking it will melt. All the best my cuppie. Keep rocking nd make more os.
    Love u alooooooooooooooootttttttttttttt beyond words.
    Take care
    nd do inform md how was the exam
    bade di’s blessings r with u :p
    take some warm huggies too

    • Prettypreeti

      |Author

      Oh ho aru cupcakes
      Itne sweet words
      Ur vocabulary is wonderful my luv
      Its on 16 first xams and then 5 more
      Love u sooooo much
      Thnko thnko
      Teacher will definitely melt as u have said
      Love u so much se bhi zyada
      Tc

  5. sona

    Preeti..it was so nice..keep it up..ad aisey hiliktet rehna..
    All the very best for ur papers😊😊😊

  6. Fatimagulesarfraz

    |Registered Member

    Oyyyy preeti !!!
    This one was awwwwdorable one yar 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘
    Cutest OS 😊😊😊😘😘😍
    very simple nd nice story 😊😊
    Lotzzzz of love 😘😘
    Take care ..

  7. kittu

    DUNIYA ME PYAARA HO KOI…
    DUNIYA SE NYARA HO KOI…
    PYAARA SA CHEHRA HO KOI…
    CHAHAT KA DARIYA HO KOI…
    “OS” KA SHOR HO KOI…
    PYARA SA CHOR HO KOI…
    PREETY KA ROLE HO KOI…
    ON THIS Pg OF OS…..
    PREETY KI BAAT HAI KOI..
    PYARA SA KHAVAAB HAI KOI…
    YOUNGER DI KA SAATH HAI KOI…
    ELDER DI KA PYAAR HAI KOI…
    PPPP..U R THE BEST…
    ISME DORAAI NA KOI…
    U R THE “OS” QUEEN…
    NA KAHE YA KAHE KOI…
    U R THE BEST…
    N ONE DAY ALL WILL SAY…
    KAHIN YE WAHI TO NAHI…
    JISKE OS HUM PADTE THE…
    PADKE CMMT HUM KARTE THE…
    SAPNO ME OS JISKE AATE THE…
    USSE Pg PE PREETYPRITI KEHTE THE…
    😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

    KOI KAHE NA KAHE…
    HUM KEHTE RAHENGE…
    OS TUMHARA PADHTE RAHENGE..
    CMMT DENA HAMARA FARZ HAI…
    AUR YE HAQ HUM PURA KARTE RAHENGE..
    ………………………………………………………………..
    NAZAR JO TERI LAAGI MAI DEEVAANI HO GAYI…
    EMOTIONS KI DARIYAA ME BEHTI CHALI GAYI…
    AB JALDI BAJIRAO BANKE AA…
    WARNA DUNIYA KI NAZAR ME…
    MASTAANI TO NAHI…
    PAR KASHI BAAI JAROOR BAN GAYI..
    πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜‹….
    Byeeeeeeeee

    • Prettypreeti

      |Author

      Kittu meri elder di tune bar di jholi meri khushiyun se
      Likhi itni aachi shyari ki dil mera baag baag ho gya
      Tu itni aachi hai tune diya itna pyaar
      Ki man tere liye pagal ho gya
      Bn gyi mai teri bajirao o meri mastani
      Tere samne sare hai kam pani
      U r shyari master my sis
      U r the beautiful miss
      Love u sooooo much
      And it is pure sach
      😊😊😊☺☺☺
      Thnko my elder di pta hai tere jaisi ton nhi thi but I tried
      Love u

  8. Ufaaq

    |Registered Member

    helooo
    oho someone wrote ammmmmmaaazzzziiiinnng one shot
    it was too gud preety
    love u my jan
    awesome
    fantastic
    loved it
    and ya best of luck
    love u

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