AANKHON MEIN TERI – Episode 5th

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EPISODE 5th

Recap :- As ahil planned to visit Riya and find out about Naina , Luckily , He gets to know that Naina is Riya’s sister , He gave her proposal to be his friend , But she declined


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AHIL was standing at the temple and Abhay calls him

Abhay ” Ahil , I’m really sorry Yar ! What happened last day ”

Ahil : It’s okay , If friends will not fight then , Who’ll do that !

Abhay : Hahha ! Come ! We’ve a little surprise for you

Ahil : Wah ! my Abhay has a gift for me .

Abhay : You’ll love it , Come we’re waiting for you.

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Rahul hugs him ” Bro , I’m very sorry ”

Abhay : Really bro , we should have understood your feelings

Rahul : If you want Naina to be your friend than it’s okay

Ahil keeps his hands on their shoulders ” Thanks ! I’m really lucky to have companions like you ”
Abhay : This is for you

Ahil : what is this , In this envelope ?

Rahul : Open it , Hurry up

Ahil opens it and finds few tickets in it , ” What ! Tickets to IPL ” – He exclaimed with joy .

Rahul : Yes bro ! We’ll rock it , All our crazy friends are going to join us .

Abhay : We’ve Planned everything , A basket of snacks , Juice is all ready , Wow !!!

AHIL in his mind with a Joly mood ” Wow God , I just Prayed to you and you heard my prayers , Now , Somehow I’ve to make Naina ready for it ”

AHIL : How many tickets are there ?

Rahul : 5 , For us, three and Gaurav and Rishi .

Ahil : That Gaurav, if we took him along then He’ll just shout and every moment he’ll say ” Hey guys let’s have a selfie ” , We’re not going to take him along

Rahul : Okay We’ll see about Gaurav , Rishi is great !

AHIL : Great really , Remember , Last time Rishi accompanied us to Cricket stadium , When his team loose the game , He started crying loudly , Whole crowd was laughing on us .

Rahul : Shit ! it means my money went into vain .

Ahil : No not at all, We have two friends with us , They can accompany us .

Abhay : Who !!! Wait ! Are you thinking what I am !!!

AHIL : Yes ! You got it right !

Abhay : No , No , Please Riya , Please no .

Rahul : Ahil , You know how it’s like to go to a match with girls , Please

AHIL : Okay then all that pocket money which your mom gave , It would be useless .

Rahul : No no , Okay we’ll take her along .

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RAI’S HOUSE …

Riya was sitting at sofa , She had hidden her face with a scarf . Kamini is ordering Pinky to clean floor nicely .

RIYA : Mom , Should I call , AHIL .

Kamini : Pinky , See there’s dirt , What are you doing Ha !

Riya : Mama are you listening to me ?

Kamini : Yes , You can call him if you want to

Then AHIL and his friends reached their Home . Ahil ” No Aunty there’s no need , We’re here ”

Riya pops up ” Ahil , Abhay and Rahul you all ”

Kamini : welcome son , Welcome , Come , Come in .

Abhay : Hi Riya how’s you .

Riya : I’m fine , Sorry AHIL yesterday I couldn’t meet you , You came home and …

Ahil : It’s okay , Riya .

Rahul : Well we’ve a little surprise for you .

Kamini : Wait ! First you all sit down and wait ! pinky get some snacks and tea.

Abhay : Riya ! We’ve Planed to go for a Cricket match , IPL

Riya : what ! wow I’m really excited for this , Mom can I join them

Kamini in her mind ( If Riya goes with AHIL then maybe he likes her and then my daughter will get a rich husband )

Kamini : Yes ! yes ! Why not

Ahil whispers something into Abhay’s ears ” Tell her about our Plan ”

Abhay : Well, Riya , There’s a problem , Actually , We’ve got 5 tickets and we are 4 , One is still left .

Kamini : Can I go ?

Riya in her mind ( My mom is crazy , Whenever she has something for free , She gets insane , If she came with us , Then how’ll I enjoy with Ahil )

Riya : Mom , Think about Dad .

Kamini : Ya ! you’re right . Actually I’ve to go to meet my Friend today , Sorry

Rahul : It’s okay aunt , What should we do now .

Ahil : what about Naina , Riya’s sister .

Rahul : Yes , She can join us

Riya : But Guys , What’ll she do there , She can’t see anything .

Ahil got a little angry ” So what , If she can’t , Riya , Don’t you have feelings , She’s your sister ”

Kamini to herself ” Riya ! What ! Are you doing , The friendship will break before coming into effect , Show them you’re good girl ”

Kamini : Riya , Girl , Take her along ( Sweetly )

Pinky : But , Do I need to accompany you all .

Kamini in her mind ( See, Now a maid also is speaking , She also wants to go )

Riya : pinky if you’ll come then who’ll do the household chores , Stay here !

Abhay : Don’t worry Aunt , We all will take care of her , Ahil is there for Naina !!!

Everyone got shocked .

AHIL makes it clear ” He meant , Riya , And we all are there for her , Don’t worry ”

Riya : Okay fine , When’s the match .

Ahil : At 6 pm sharp we’ve to reach there

Rahul : So we’ll pick you up at 5

Abhay : Okay then , Let’s go now , Bye .

Ahil : So we’ll meet at 5 pm , Bye .

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AHIL : Come one guys , Hurry up , Everything is packed

Abhay : Ohh bhai ! We’re going for a cricket match not for a picnic

Rahul : Don’t try to make him understand , He has his friend , Accompanying him , Now he won’t care for us .

Ahil : Rahul are you mad , You’re my diamonds okay , My two best friends .

Abhay : Haha ! Come let’s have a 3 man hug .

They three hugs each other and Shouts ” WITH YOU MY EACH MOMENT OF LIFE IS LIKE HEAVEN , WE REMAIN FRIENDS TILL DEATH , THIS IS OUR WISH ”

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Naina : No I won’t go anywhere without you

Pinky : But now it’s decided you’ll have to go

Naina : No I won’t , I’ll say him no .

Then Kamini comes and hears that . Kamini enrages , She goes to Naina and Hold her chin and squeezed it .

Kamini : Listen girl , Ahil wants you to come , Don’t say no , I don’t want that he gets to know anything about our family matters , So you’re going okay .

Naina was quiet .

Kamini : Pinky see that she’s ready on time , Okay .

Pinky : But how’ll she handle everything

Kamini : Shut up , Just do what I say , Otherwise also if she got lost over there , We don’t care .

Kamini leaves .

AT 5 PM….

Abhay and Rahul reached RAI’S house .

Riya comes out holding a big bag , She’s wearing a dress , A lot of make up , And a hat .

Abhay and Rahul comes out and sees Riya .

Rahul giggles and murmurs to Abhay ” Are we gonna take a cartoon with today ”

Abhay : No actually she’s gonna entertain the people there when there would be a break in the match , So that they don’t get bored .

Riya : Hi guys , So how am I looking today .

Abhay : Very , Very …( confused )

Rahul : Hot ! Beautiful , Just like a princess

Riya :Thanks , Where’s AHIL

Abhay : At the last moment he’s to go somewhere urgently , But don’t worry he’ll reach there on time .

Naina and Pinky comes .

Rahul utters slowly to Abhay ” There comes Ahil’s Naina , She’s so pretty ”

Abhay: Ya ! Remember the Plan

Rahul : Yes !

Abhay : Actually Riya , We’ve come with driver , So in our car only 3 can come , And your bag also needs some space , So Ahil will pick up Naina later .

Riya : what ! no ! i can wait .

Rahul : Riya , Try to understand , We’ll reach there first and then you can book a good seat with Ahil .

Riya : Okay ! let’s go , You’re right !

Riya goes and Sits inside the car .

Abhay goes to Naina : AHIL will come to pick you up , Just in a few minutes , Hope you don’t mind .

Naina : It’s okay , Thanks .

Naina Goes to her room..

Rahul : Abhay you’ve to sit with Riya at back .

Abhay : Rahul , You’re 1000rs /- is left to return me , So you’ll sit with her .

Rahul : How bad are you ?

They both Sat and left .

After sometime , AHIL came ..
He goes and Nocks the door ” Naina come on let’s go ”

Naina opens the door ” Sorry , In don’t want to go anywhere with you ”

Ahil : Why ? Your mom ordered you , Isn’t it ?

Naina : I don’t want to go .

Ahil : wait let me call Kamini aunty .

Naina : Okay ! let’s go .

He helped her to get into the car .

Ahil was driving the car And Naina was sitting beside him .

Ahil : Naina you’re a silent girl isn’t it ?

Naina : I’m not silent , My mouth has been made shut

Ahil : Don’t worry , You can talk to me

Naina : I don’t talk to strangers

AHIL : Strangers ,But we’re friends isn’t it

Naina : But I said No

Ahil : But yesterday , It was Valentine’s day and you with your hands tied this Friend thread on my wrist .

Naina : I only want to say thanks

AHIL : Thanks , In friendship , No sorry no thanks .

Naina : Drive fast and don’t talk .

Ahil : I heard you singing , Your voice is so good .Sing something

Naina : I don’t want to , Why your car dosen’t have a radio .

Ahil : I’ve but my heart only wants to listen to your voice , Please once

Naina : No thanks , I won’t .

Ahil : Okay as your wish . Hey , The route forward is little disturbed , Fasten your seat belt .

Naina : I don’t know how to ?

AHIL : Okay let me help you

Ahil stops the car and brings his hands forward to her to hold the belt . He touched her shoulders .

Naina : Don’t touch me

AHIL : But , Belt .

Naina : I don’t need it .

Ahil : Okay , But later don’t blame me .

He again drove the car . Ahil ” you seem to be very innocent , But you’re very dangerous , Ha ! ”

Naina : what do you mean !

AHIL : Nothing I meant , you’re very amazing .

They both started arguing , Suddenly , A child comes in front of the Car , And Ahil turns the car and stopped it forcefully .

Naina got goosebumps , She started huffing .

Ahil holds her shoulders ” Naina are you okay , Are you fine ”

Naina : I’m okay , But what happened ?

AHIL : Just be in , I’ll come .

He goes out and saws a child crying , Thankfully nothing dangerous happened .

Ahil : Sorry, Please stop crying , Are you okay ?

Child was constantly crying . Ahil ” Where’s your mom , Dad , Are you alone ? ”

Child hardly spoke ” Mamaaaa !!!! ”

AHIL thought he might be lost and his parents must be searching for him , He decided to wait for sometime .

Ahil : Come , Come here .

He took him near his car .

Naina : what happened ?

AHIL : This child is lost , See how’s he crying .

Naina : Do something , Make him smile .

Ahil : wait ! , He sings a song in croaky voice ” Twinkle Twinkle little star , How I wonder what you are ”

The child became more hoarse . Naina ” If you’ll sing like this , Then even animals will start crying ”

Naina puts her hand forward and puts her soft palms on his face .

Naina sings in her melodious and smoothing tone ” Aa leke chalu tujhko
Ek aise desh mein
Aa leke chalu tujhko
Ek aise desh mein
Milti hai jaha khushiyan
Pariyon ke bhesh mein
Milti hai jaha kushiyan ”

The child becomes calm and hugs Naina .

Ahil in mind ” You don’t know Naina , Your pure heart , Beautiful eyes , Soothing voice , There are so many qualities in you that can leave even a little child spellbound ”
Then his mom came finding him , Thanks them and went away .

Ahil : Now shall we go

Naina : Drive careful now .

The car took to road again …

Ahil : You know this is for first time a girl is sitting next to me .

Naina : Really

AHIL : Yes ! And your voice , Wow , I think I should throw away the radio .

Naina : Why , I’m here for the first and last time , Now I won’t come in your car .

Ahil : Really , Let’s see .,,

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Please friends don’t leave without comments , And if you liked then plzzz👍👍👍👍

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12 Comments
  1. ImRagela

    Hey Kira ..As usual it was a superb and nice episode..So lovely..Specially Naina singing Aa leke chalo song ..So lovely 😍😍😍😍..love u yarr 😘😘

    1. Kira

      That dear love you too ,,, good night 💝💝💝💖💖💖

  2. Aryan Bhattacharya

    Beautiful episode di… The car moment was lovely… 😍 and di today my exam has finished… I am so happy….
    Good night and sweet dreams di and have a lovely day tomorrow..
    Bye bye.

    1. Kira

      Thanks a lot dear , I know how it’s like when exams are over , Enjoy a lot 😉😉😉and yes all the best for results 😀😀good night 😴😴

  3. Lucie

    Amazing episode dear. Todays scenes were very nice. In short loved it.

    1. Kira

      Thanks for comments ,, good night sweet dreams😁😁😀

  4. Aryan Bhattacharya

    Thanks di 😊

  5. Nice episode didi
    What and Rahul are amazing
    The Lori was amazing
    Have a sweet day today

    1. Kira

      Thanks a lot dear , enjoy your day 😄😄☺☺

  6. Good afternoon Kira…….such a beautiful update
    I really liked the way you combined Naamkaran song into this……SUPERB idea
    and both of Ahil’s friends are so nice….
    Hats off to your imagination skills dear
    Enjoy your day and Take care
    (Of course Plzzzz update soon)

    1. Kira

      An big thanks dear , Have a amazing day … And one thing which I want to say is that I don’t know if you read or not , That end of this ff is linked to my new ff on NAAMKARAN ……

      Bye 😀😀

      1. Yes I did read it and I am eagerly waiting for it

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