A TREAT OS~twinj

Hiii….all of u…
Thank u sooo soooo much..for ur cmnts on my last epi…thank u…
All d silent readers thank u….
Love u all…
As i told u dat i will post a os for u all who had cmntd my ff….
So here i m…
I had told u …i will b available to all of u till sunday night….
So lets move…
ADYA:SORRY YAAR..TERA FF ABHI PADHA LEKIN..MERE BHAI NE WIFI OFF KARDIYA SO CMNT NAHI KARPAAYI…BUT TERA EPI EKDUM DHAASU THA..AMAZING…BOLE TO PHAAADU…VALENTINES DAY PAR RAKHI BAANDH NE WAALI THI TWINKLE πŸ˜‰ ….
I LOVE ITβ™₯β™₯β™₯β™‘β™₯β™₯β™₯
OR AB NEW STD…I M VERY EXCITEF BUT TO MY BADLUCK NAHI PADH PAOUNGI…SORRY IN ADVANCE….BAHBYE…REA N CMNT….WILL MISSS U TOOO..β™₯β™‘β™₯

Its my bday..how i feel..n in my pov…i will giv as m jasmin hope u understand…
Thanku all o h…
β™₯β™‘A TREATβ™‘β™₯~TEINJ 》Aamu

Here v go…
(firt time m writing in pov….so bear it)
3 NOVEMBER 2016

JASMIN POV
as i stepped out of my car…wearing a pink n silver beaded gown..i was searching for dem…but no1 was seen..i took out my phone to check i haf reach right destination..bfore i could check…a colouring balloons reflects in my eyes…der was a chit on it…. on d ballooon JASMIN was written on it…i jump to take it 2 times n succeded…i take d note…it was a birthday wishes from my doll..ya..ya guessed right ADYA….i was shocked…a smile captured my lips…
I got to know dat its right destination…
I move further…a girl in red n white dress came towards me n gave me another chit…it was from BABY..wid so much wishes for her small sister dats me… i smiled..n move further..i saw a flower bouquet Kept on a table… i pick up “many many happyretyrns of d day..may u get all d happiness..enjoy ur day
-KRUTI
dat was enough..i took out my phone to call dem..dey were just sending me things n not coming out..as i opened my phone..a msg received from SAMEERA..wi soo much of cute wishes making me blush…
I saw around n saw a lights glittering at a side…i go der to get 1 more shock….flowers start to shower on me…n den a chit fall wid a dairy milk silk in my hand…i read…n got another wishes…from SIDMIN(SHRUTI)
i was like sooo happy…something come in my mind..making my eyes to shed tears..idk y i was crying…i ws crying in happiness??.or in remember my past….?
Before i could thinl more i saw many wishes written on wall….my 32 teeth came out..it was from LOVELY(u ha written on my wall na…! πŸ˜‰ )
‘Where r u all…come out or…’ i shouted…
‘Or’a voice came…
I turned to saw a curtain falling downn…wait something was written on it…it also contains wishes….from ZUHA….now i was crying..seeing so much of care n love…
“dont cry babydoll…” avoice came behind d curtain…

I was waiting for all of dem…but dey r not ready to come out..
‘Dont come out m going’i shouted n left towards d car…i turned n saw…but no1 was der…
I open d door n sat in..to c a tab in my car…
But from where it comes…??
I checked it..it was a os…on my favourite couple…TWINJ…n who ha written it..?
Guess…?
No..?
It was fro.TAMANNA….
I again stepled out of d Car to c my whole TU family standing…
SAMEERA…PURNIMA..SIDVEE…SIDHANSHI…ADYA..BABY..MANNAT..SAYEEDA..SHATAKSHI…RIA…SUSHMITA..AMI…SOHI…LASHIA…YASHAVI…VASIYA AAPI…NEHA/SHALINI…RANABULBUL….TAMANNA…ZUHA…SUNEHRI…MANASVI…DAMINI…CHIKU…LOVELY…N MANY MORE MORE……(sorry i cant describe all…my net is off..so i cant searcg who ha cmntd on my ff…so…sorry…hope u understand…but THANK U SOOO MUCH TOO ALLL OF UH)
I MOVEDt towards dem…dey all wished me..wid a cake cutting ceremony…as d party gets over…i thought to go back home as it already 10 at night…m not allowed to b out widout my dadpermission…
‘Should i leave now..its already 10’i sai closing my eyes coz i know dey all will look at me like…
I slowly ipen my eyes to c my familystanding der..den i looked at dem..(u all) dey r stanging folding der hands…
‘V WANT A TREAT….V WANT TREAT’ alll started to shout like a maniac..including my family like seriously..my family tooo
‘FΒ€r wat’i shouted to stop der shouting n also so dat dey can hear…
‘For ur bday…u know bday treat’ sameera said…
‘Okay wat u want’ i said giving up…as i know dey will take watever dey want
‘I think v should go to watch picture..which is released last week….’ adya said
‘Which?’ I said as i was not interested to c d movie now…
‘Twinj’$ movie…ur gavourite couple darling’she reply me…
Before dey could say..i jump n say’okay v shoul leave…lets go…’
V all went der
(SORRY I WASTED UR TIME IN NONSENSE TILL NOW…LETS GO)

d movie starts…
A girl is seen weafing a red n white salwar suit..n sweeping her house..
A ladycomes just den…
‘Twinkle beta…u r here till now..den who will go to d store’she said…combing her hair…
‘Maa…i was doing house works…now m goin only…’ twinkle said wid a smile..
She lefy d house..d house was small…but clean n tidy..twinkle:she lives wid her family..mother..sister who is deaf n grandma..she dont hav father…she has to work n earn for her family…she runs a small store..of ration things n some snacks …
As her daily routinue she left to store..n happily got into work…
Next scene
A big haveli is seen..wid manh rooms der..it is decorated like some1 marriage is gonna take place..
‘Kunj beta…kunj where r u..’a lady shouts
‘Yes maa…m here’ khnj comes in a sleepy mood…while yawning
‘See dis guy…his marriage is going to take place in 2 days but he is still sleeping’ his mom said annoyingly..
‘Mom..i had said dat i m not gonna marry now..’kunj said upset..
‘M not gonna listen…evrytime dis only haplens..u both fight…n den u both only start ur drana’her mother said
‘Go n make her feel good..dis time it was ur mistake…go she will b sad..’her mothr added…
‘No..u know mom..i dont said sorry to anyonr den who is she..’he said angrily..
‘U love her kunj…u n alisha lovr eo…’his mother tries to convience…
‘No..no means no’ he said leaving d house…
kunj: he is a son of a succesful business man..he is going to marry her childhood frnd alisha..dey love eo..dey think like dis…but dey also donno d reason..dey r going to marry in 2 days but yesterday again dey fight..but dis fight was diff from all other fights…kunj slapped her in anger so she said no..
He came home in evening…his mother forcefully take him to d mehndi..at alisha place..
But der alisha was enjoying her mehndi changi d groom…she was now goin to marry rahul…as she had rejected kunj…kunn family was insulted by dem….n dey leave…
At kunj place…his mother was soo much angry on dem…but kunj.
Kunj was depressed…he thought lkke evrytime…she willll let go his mistake..but she is going to marry rahul
He leave his house in anger…
He was driving his car in drunk state..he had drink too much…he was crying…n driving just dem some1 comes infront…n a small accident take place…he came out of d car…n saw a girl in a pool of blood…
‘U…u rich men always drink n drive…c dis girl bcame d victim..’a men said
‘V will gake u to d police station’another said…
‘Noo…she is my fiance only..i will take her’kunj said as he was seeing alisha in evry girl..
He take her to d hospital..
D doctor said dat sheis fine…he goes in ..in drunk state…n saw a girl sleeping…he was shocked..as he thoughg its alisha but she was twinkle…he holds his head…n den fall on her…getting unconcious…
At night only…
Twinkle’$ family came..n saw kunj sleeping on twinkle…he was hugging her..
‘Oh my God wat is dis’her grandma shouted in anger
Kunj wakes up…but dey start der drama…twinkle also wakes up..n got shocked…dey try to handle d situation buy its of no use…
Kunjs family also comes der..n got shock..
Dey tries to handle d situation but tw family was not listening…
‘He took our daughters respect…now how wil she face d situation’her mom said
‘Kunj will marry her’kunj father said calmly…
Kunj eyes him angrily
Now twinkle family calm down..but twinkle n kunj were shocked…
At kunj place:
‘Wats dis papa…i will not marry dat girl..she just came in front of my car..n den i took her to d hospital..i will not marry her’kunj said angrily
‘C kunj u hav to marry her…coz alisha had rejected u..our relations people had came..if marriage will not take place den our respect will b vanish..u can leave her after d marriage’his father said

Next scene
Tw place
‘No maa i will not marry him..u know i dont like rich peoples…i will not marry..!’tw said…
‘Noo twinkle marry him..u will b richn hav a good future…wid him…till wen u will run a shop’ her mother said..
Aftrr lot of discussion tw agrreed

2 days later:
Kunj n tw is seen taking pheras in mandap…kunj made her wear mangalsutra…den he applies sindhoor..dey were succesfully married…
In room..
Tw was waiting for him…
She was remembering her life turn..n smiling..she had finally fallen for him…she was waiting for him desparately ..kunj enters..
‘Twinkle…i wanna clear evrything wid…u also know Know how v were married…i want to say dat…i dont love u…i lovr some1 else..i was going to maried to alisha only but………(he tells evrything)’ kunj said in 1 go leaving tw disheartened….
Shr stands up.n holds his hand…
‘I promise i will unite u both’ tw just said dat…as she cant say anything more..😞😭😒
Like dis day passes…kunj take care of her…but she always make distance from him…he fall for her..tw tries to make alisha n kunj buf alisha was awell setteled wid rahul..kunj :tw dont do dis …tw:wat
Kunj:tw u know wat m talking..
I dont want alisha now..
Tw looks on shock
Kunj:tw…i LOVE U
BOTH KISS EO…N D PICTURE END…
V left d theatre having a million dollar smile…i β™₯ dis picture…how sweet d story was…
Dis bday became a special memory…dis TREAT of mine..was amazing…
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Finally ended…hope u liked it..
Thank u for ur cmnt…
I will miss u all…bahbye…
Will meet u all after 3 months…
Dont forget me or….
Ta..ta ..
Love u all..n will miss u all…soo much…
Pls haa bhul na jana…
β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯

27 comments

  1. Ramya

    |Registered Member

    Hey aamu cute n lovely os n I think dis is ur bday treat dat to so late very bad ha bt I’ll miss u
    Tc n all d best fr ur exams dear
    Loved it n love u

  2. Sameera

    |Registered Member

    Ufff yaar aamu hayeee amazing
    Jasmine friends 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
    Just loved the os sooo much ….
    Well I was completing my note then saw this os and started reading now I am going back to write notes πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
    Thanks for this cute treat yaar …
    Love u sooo much …
    Do come soon
    Will miss u 😘😘😘

    • Aamu

      |Author

      Omg…y katti..kya kiya mene…
      Sorry if I had done anything wrongπŸ˜“πŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ˜­
      N I dont hate u..
      Love uπŸ’—πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ’—

      • Paavu

        |Registered Member

        U hate me u proved I m crying now mujhe toh uss treat me invite bhi nahi kiya I m crying and love u byee…ll w8fr u in march

    • Aamu

      |Author

      oops sooo sorry…I totally forget….
      Solo soooorry…
      But I love u…😘😘😘😘
      Sorry…
      Or kya invite nahi kiya tu TU family she kab alag ho gayi mene puri TU family ko invite kiya that..
      Personally nahi diya…solllly…plsh..
      Is chori so ladki ko maaaf kardo…….
      Ab rulake Vida karegi muje 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
      πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–
      πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—
      Love u

  3. Sohi

    |Registered Member

    Hmmm so you got time to post one btw the os was fab as I had not wished you so iam wishing you now happy birthday aamu

  4. Zuha Fatima

    |Registered Member

    Hey Aamu di,
    Thanks for this treat πŸ˜‰ It was the best glld bye gift (Till 3 months πŸ˜› ) Well I will definitely miss you and I wish that these 3 months pass like 3 seconds πŸ˜‰

    Anyways please rock over your exam and I am quite sure you will πŸ™‚ All the best…..

    Loads of love β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘

    Keep smiling … Million dollars wali … Always πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

    -Aapki Zuha…………

  5. Baby

    |Registered Member

    hey aami sooooo sweet loved i 2 core
    beautiful os ohhhh goodness my role was also dere soooooo sweet
    loved it n kisne kaha voh phele ka part nonsesnese tha
    it was fabulousβ™₯β™₯
    loved it sis will miss u AAMIβ™₯
    i guess m getting to say it for d last ym till 3 months i hv to w8
    bt promise me u ll cm bck for sure☻β™₯
    love u wil misss u β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯

    • Aamu

      |Author

      Are dammu aapi..is me tension ni lene ka..
      Dekho aap 1 half months she nahi the….Lenin time kitna jldi nikal gaya..yeah b chala jaayega..or me jkdi se waapis aauungi…
      Love u…
      N miss u DAMMU AAPI(last time πŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ˜“πŸ˜“πŸ˜“)

  6. SidVee

    Hey Aamu!! The treat was fabulous.. loved.. 😍😍😍.. and soo cute yaar.. just loved your way of giving a treat like this😍😍.. hope to see you soon again πŸ™‚ will miss you and best of luck for ur future πŸ™‚

  7. Sidhanshi

    OMG!!! Awsome treat aamu… Just loved it yaar… Nd srsly v’ll miss u a lot… Love u meri chudeil… Best of luck tere exams ke liye… Baabyeee….

  8. Jisha

    |Registered Member

    Cute n lovely Os…all the best dear for exams…by the time u will be back, I would have left tu…so all the best for your future n have a great life ahead….

  9. TwinjSidMin

    |Registered Member

    Hey aamu the OS is awesome…loved it to the core…
    Will miss you…
    Come back soon…
    All the best for exams…

    Love you ❀❀😘😘

  10. Twinjfan.tamanna

    |Registered Member

    firstly I m so happy seriously aaj tak. no one took my name like that… I m so so happy… the movie idea was awesome… its amazingly written… I loved the story…

    love you infinity to the square infinity

  11. twinj

    Hey aamu,
    Treat toh sweet laga par thoda bitter bhi laga kyu ki tum jarahe hona.Aur woh nonsense nai tha mujhe bahat acha laga.Tumne humsab ko treat diya jab tum wapas aauge may tume ek treat dungi…pakka par treat may thodi dheri ho sakti hai.Miss u aur jaldi wapas aana.

    Lots of luv,
    twinj

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